darkSpyro

Please Continue = PC

o..... alright as soon as i think of somthing

ok, now i talk about the "gems" alote in this chapter, so ill explane them and rate them for rarety. Scale is from 1- 20 20 being the rarest.

Long ago(of cource) a group of dragons and dragonessses, rarer then the origanlals where made. They had diffrent kinds of Dragons. There scales where made of pure gem, the gem that they held.They called themselfs the Gems. Some where rarer then others, ut only if they where well less known or the most powerfull out of the Gems, thought most dosnt like to battle.

Rarety: 20
Amysist- Has a purple fire, but can master most elements like the purple dragon. This dragon has a glow to its scales, making it appert from the origanal purple dragon since there made from pure Amysist. most are peracfull enless they fell threatened, when threatened it ether fights or runs(if it chooses to fight run for your life!). There also where most of the Gems came from. Most are attractd to Sapphire dragons, but will mate with enyother dragon.
Characters: Deanna

Rarety: 20
Aquamaren-Has a lighter blue fire then the sapphire dragon. They can also master waterfire as well. Has a light glow to there scales since there scales are made of pure Aquamaren. There not concidered a Gem as much as the others, as well as the Onix and is rarely known. They are as peacfull as the Amysist and will fight if needed. Most are attracted to normale dragons, Topaz, and Emaralds.
Characters: Tear

Rarety: 19
Ruby- Has a darker red fire then the orignals and can master the elements fear and lava. Only way to tell apart the fires is to put them side-by-side. Has a darker glow to there scales but they shine bright in the light and there scales, of cource, is made from pure Ruby. There hard to tell apart from the normale dragons so they blend in perfictally. Some are peacfull but most are fighters. There attracted to Topaz and Emaralds.
Characters: Blood and Fear

Rarety: 19
Sapphire- Has a dark blue fire. They may also master waterfire and have a blue and black fire. Has a dark blue shine to there scales and there scales are made of pure Sapphire. They arnt rare for how well there know( quit the oppesit, there to well known ), but for how powerfull they are.They are peacmakers like the Amysist but whount hesatate to fight. Attracted to normals, Dimonds, Topaz, and Emaralds.
Characters: Sapphiren(sapphire's character), Saphira and Shinx

Rarety: 18
Emarald- Has a whounderfull green fire. If the dragon wishes, it could burn or it chould be harmless. There scales are a dark green and under light has a sparkle to there scales. There known a little more then the Ruby. There pure fighters but can run and/or can be peacfull at times.
There attracted to Rubys, Topaz and Amysist
Characters: Numi

Rarety: 18
Topaz- Has a gold fire. Scales are made of pure Topaz and are also the most shiny( Ooooo). They sparxl and glow under light(almost like a lightbulb). They are mistaken for Gold dragons most of the time, there pure shine gives it way, but only if you put the two dragons side by side. They are the biggest flirts(they almost alswas gets away with it) and in fights will fight only if they flityness fales. There attracted to Sapphire and Aquamarean.
Characters: Topaz

Rarety: 16
Dimond- Has a pure white fire. Scales are made of pure Dimond and has a faint glow to them. When under light they shine brightly and sparkle. There scales arnt as hard as most dragons think they are and can esaly be cut with eather there own scales(or claws) or with the claws of a Sapphire dragon. They are mistaen for Albino dragons most of the time but has the most dragon population. They are rarely fighters but will if they truly needed to. there attracted to Rubys, Emaralds, and Amysist.
Characters: Rain

Rarety: 16
Onix- has a pure black, purplish fire. can also master shadowfire. There scales are made of pure Onix. There scales dont shine but they do sparkl a bit. There often mistaen for black dragons. There fighters mostly but often get in to much trouble and die of infected whounds. Attracted to Eny of the Gems exept for the Topaz.
Characters: Death, Malinda

PC!!!

Chapter (i forgot): The last fight.

The two dragons circle eachother.
"Finally i get to tear you to shreads!!" Zor'ran snaped
The gold dragon looked at him with hate and anger in his eyes.
"You come to my clan and kill us all, and you expeact to get away without punushment!?" He growled
"Achally, i came and kill the clan, take the female, kill her after she has my hachling, and get away with it all!" Zor'ran laghed
The gold dragon grolwled. Salfera layed in the bushes, eyes widened. The gold dragon leaped at him and Zor,ran lowered him head once more to impale the dragon on his horn. But instead of the dragon impaling on his horn, the dragon let out a burst of flame. Zor'rans eyes widened as the hot fire came over him......
The black dragoness was looking around. She spotted Salfera and leaped at her. Salfera turned around and snaped at her neck with her jaws filled with sharp teeth. The dragoness keep her distanse and she let out a jet of flame. Salfera jumped back, but she couldnt excape the heat of the flames. Salfrea looked at her as the flames died away from her mouth and She jumoped at her. She takled the black dragoness and growled. The black dragoness snaped at her and got her hnd legs under Salferas stomech and kicked her off. Safera growled and bit her in the shoulder, right next to the wing. The dragoness ywlped with pain and the two dragoness tumbled, scraching and bighting.
Zor'ran felt that the back of his neck was burnt. He hissed and he finally felt the pain. The pain of the scraches that the others gave him.
"Its amazing what one dragon can do.." Zor'ran chuckled darkly
The gold dragon growled and jumped once more. Zor'ran jupmed out of his way and when the gold dragon came down Zor'ran jupmed and bit him on his side. The gold dragon roared in pain. Zor'ran bit harder and harder. Blood gused from his mouth as he bit. The gold dragon scrached at his neck. Zor'ran released and stood on his hind legs as he roared in pain from the claw that scrached his burn.
The small sapphire dragon was climing down.
"NO!! dont go!!!" Deanna said to the little one
The smale dragon just began to climb down, not listanig to her sister.
Zor'ran gorlwed and a jet of flame excaped his mouth. The gold dragon was baithed in the flames. He roared and tried to shak the flames off of him. The flames died and he was burnt on his wings and his legs. The gold dragon ran at Zor'ran and finally got his neck in his jaws. Zor'ran roared in pain and scrashed the gold dragon on his chest. The gold dragon clamped down even more and Zor'ran dug his claws into his cheast. The gold dragon tried to bit down harder, but couldnt. He felt the light excape him. He felt the blood gush out. His grip lossened and Zor'ran got out. Zor'ran smiled, knowing only one more blow whould diffeat him.....
The two dragonesses rusled intill Salfers threw the black dragoness onto the ground. She jupmed up and flew off, hopping her unborn child whould still be alive. Salfers cheacked to make she she was gone and turned around to see the battle. But what she saw was...
Zor'ran stood on his hind legs , mouth open. Flames shot out at the sky and the gold dragon layed on the ground, blood porring out of his stabed heart. Zor'ran came down to all fours and bit the gold dragon on his neck. He jeered his head back and threw him on the ground. Rock flew everywhere. Zor'ran stood on the dead body, proud. A cold smile was on his face. Salfera gasped and Zor'ran took off. Salfera heard him leave as his wingbeats died. She ran out to the dead body and weep. The smal sapphire dragon hachling wabbled over to her mother and they both sat there, weeping. Deanna was already weeping thought, threw the whole thing. Everyone she loved died. She was losing everything in only a matter of minites. A roar could be heard and Zor'ran dived out of the sky. A jet of flam came out and it shot out at Salfera and the hachling. Salfera jumped out of the way, orgeting that her hachling wsa there with her. She cried out as she saw her newborn hachling burn in the fire. Cries of pain excaped it as it burned. Zor'ran was hovering, laghing.
"Come with me, have my hachling." He said
"NEVER!!! I RATHER LET A BEAR EAT MY HEART OUT!!!" She roared, tears streaming down.
"THEY YOU SHALL DIE AS WELL!!!" He roared in anger and he dived down and flew threw her. He landed a few fet away, covered in blood. Salfera stood there, eyes widened. A wicked smile was on his face as he relised what he done. Salfera colasped, a hole where Zor'ran flew threw her. blood gushed out of the hole. Deanna felt the log get wet and soft as her tears dreanched her face and the log she hid in, knowing she was now alone in this cersied world.

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PC!!! Awsome the Sapphire Dragon Died! Woohoo!

sapphire: *throws brick at fireball's head* stupid kid.

me: so sad... 8'C

ro'zan: WHY? WHY FATHER? WHY?! >8O 8'C

more to come of your fathers madness:3 and near the part where you come in Ro'zan ;3 im gaoing to call this one the 7th chapter

Chapter 7: Friends, Love, Betrail.

Deanna felt the log soften under her paws as she weep. She climed down and slowly walked over to her mother. Tears rolled down as she walked. Her leggs felt like the soft, decaying log she hid in, but she keep walking. She saw the last of the flames die away,and the body of her dead, burnt sister. She relized she didnt get a name and felt sad and lucky at the same time. Sad for the loss of everything dear to her, the loss of the only one who achally loved her or so she thought. But lucky that she made it past her haching date, but now the question was, how long will she servive now that she was unprotected? She took her couded eyes away from the hachling. Her eyes where clouded with her tears but where somewhat clear now that they poor out. She just wished it was a dream, a horrable, sad dream. Another bad dream. She finally got to her dead mother, now drained of blood. A few drops whould drip down form the hole him her cheast. Daylight shone threw it as if it wished to yell out the tarable truth.She looked at the sun. It was now, that she turned 3. After a night right next to her dead mother she was hungry, cold, and lonly. Blood staned her scaled and tears drenched her face. She heard someone coming. There claws scraped agensed the stone gorund as they walked to her. Her heart was pounding hard and she quickly urned around. The dragon juped and pinned her down. Deanna screamed, but nothing could help her now.
"Shhhhhh, its ok my lovely." A male voice cooed.
Deanna slowly opened her eyes and saw it was Shinx! She was glad to see him. He looked around and looked at Deannas sad eyes.
"Deanna, what happened here?" He asked
"Some dragon came and killed everyone." Deanna wispered.
Shinx walked over to her and held her chin up with one of his claws.
"It'll be ok, your with me now." He smiled at her
She smiled back and he released her. She felt so safe...so.....loved....
He hugged her and looked at her once more.
"Come with me, we'll live together forever." he said with a smile.
"how old are you?" Deanna asked, since she clearly seen that he didnt talk lie a 3 year old
"4."He said "But i know your 3." He quickly added.
Deanna nodded. He playfully nuged her and she looked back up at him. She smiled and giggled a little.
"Come.." he said as he was walking away.
Deanna waited till he leaft compleatly. She didnt relly whant to follow him, she whanted to stay with her dead mother, the one who she thought loved her. Shinx didnt relize she wasnt following him, and just keep walking. Deanna walked the other way. She keep walking till she came to a dragon. He was red and had a burnt mark on his neck. No blood was found on him. He looked fimilier.... He smiled at her, warmly.
"Come little one." he cooded. "Its ok."
Deanna took a step back.
"no, its ok. Im here to take care of you." He said "Im a friend. Ill be your dad, your family."
Deanna shyfully took a step forword
"yes, yes, come." he said
She was acting like a shy cat. One step at a time, teasting the ground as if that one step could be the end or if it was the right chose. He just stared at her, that warm smile. Deanna looked up once more and ran to him. She hugged him like she meet her mother after the battle. He smiled and put a paw on her back, as if to incerage her to keep hugging him. He pouled her back to look at her. She was in tears, they streamed out of her eyes, and some where on him. A smile was on her face. The tears where tears of joy. Finally someone. He pushed her back. This startled her so much. Her eyes where wide, her ters where now of pain.
"GET HER NOW SON!!!!" He roared.
another red dragon was next to him. He looked around Deannas age.
"But dad..." he started
"NO BUTS, KILL HER NOW!!!" He roared again
"yes father.." The dragon nodded and looked at Deanna with such hate. Deanna chould tell that his eyes not only contaned hate, but a little bit of compashion. The smale dragon leaped at her and she put up a arm to shild herself. He scarached at her. His claws dug into her arm, leaving cuts that blead. He hit her in the stomeach with his tail and she whent flying into a tree. Blood came out of the cuts, and some came out her mouth. He Leaped again and got him in the eye. Deanna roared in pain and jupmed up, one eye open, the scrached one close. Her tail wiped around. The little dragon scrashed again and got the back of her neck. He was biteing and scrashing. Enything he could do to kill the dragoness before him. She pushed him off with her hind legs and he flew off. Before she could jump up and run away, he was on her once more. Soon, Deanna layed in a pool of blood. some was the red hachlings the rest was her own. She seemed dead and the big red dragon walked up to her body. He smiled coldy
"Father.." the hachlings started
"go back to the cave." He said
"Zor'ran."The black dragoness said as she calasped on the ground. Dead. Her wounds where infected and to deep. To much blood was lost.
"Father.." The hachling said again, worried this time
"GO BACK RO'ZAN!!!" Zor'ran roared.
Rozan hung his head and headed back. Zor'ran followed, leaving the two dragonesses without a care. Deanna opened the one eye that wasnt scrached and jumped up. it worked.
Ro'zan...... that name will haunt her forever...
She wabbled to a tree and leaned on it for suport. Shinx jumped form the tree and held her up.
"Ill help you.." he cooded in her ear as he licked her wounds. "its ok....im here...."

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PC!!! Wait.... doesn't Deana have other siblings besides the Sapphire one?

ro'zan: i'm awesome!

sapphire: 8O

sapphiren: *eats turkey leg*

me: 8O

@ Fireball : yes, but they also got murdered. the Sapphire was the only one with Deanna in the prosses. She climed down and she was burnt to dead, her mother got a huge hole in her chest where Zor'ran whent threw her.

Deanna: *growles at Ro'zan* at least these two have a little simthany *huggs Spphire and...um...sapphire ( you both have the same name/username )*

please continue these reading passages are ever so entertaining

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If i do haven enything wrong with them please dont heasatate to tell me, i relly whant the become a good wrighter:3 *excuse the spelling the keys arent right )

ro'zan: well...it was sad to see your mother die...and your sister... 8C

Deanna: you where the one who attacked me 3=


Chapter 8

They both sat in the trees. They where both bord. Shinx layed there, blowing out his red fire(only his scales are Sahhpire). Deanna whached. Most of her whounds where cleaned off at the river.
"You know....." he began
"what?" Deanna asked
"The cuts, most will scare. Are you shure youll be ok with them? I could heal them now if you wish so they dont scare."
Deanna shook her head
"no thanks."
"alright.." he said as she began blowing the red fire once more.
"Shinx, do you know what a Amysist dragon is?" Deanna asked
He shook his head. The fire followed his movement. His back was on the branch, his paws on his stomec. Deanna looked at the trees. The light was just about gone.
"Shinx, where do we sleep?" She asked
He shrugged
"I thought you had a clan we chould go to.." She said
He shook his head once more. Her stared at the laeves.
"well....i did. But i ran away." He said quietly
"oh. Why did you leave?" she asked
"After i saw that you where alone, i chouldnt leave you there so i choose to run away and be with you." He repiled
Deanna asked no more. She thought it was sweet, yet somewhat....stupid. They now dont have a home, Deannas woundes where bleeding everytimed she moved. The pain killed her. SHe already thought she was dead enofe inside, but now the outside as well? What keep her alive? Is this the punishment of the gods?
'What did i do?'
She thought , maby, just maby, some other dragon was having a worst time. A tear rolled down as she thought of this.
"Well at least let me heal your eye or you might loss it." Shinx said.
Deanna shook her head. She didnt whant eyes. She didnt what to hear of see the horable things of life enymore. She didnt whant to cry enymore. Shinx jumped on her and puned her down to the branch. Deanna struggled to get free but he held her there. He put his fangs by her neck.
"move and ill bite!" he hissed
Deanna was stuck with fear. Her eyes where wide. Could she trust enyone? He let go of her, his fangs still by hir neck. A white light came from his paws.
'he must be one of the healers...' she thought as he healed her whounded eye.
"i cant get rid of the scares now, but youll be able to use the eye." He said as he took his fangs away from her neck. Deanna was still struck with fear.
"im sorry i did that, but i didnt whant you to loss an eye becaouse i didnt care enofe."
Somehow, his words sothened her. She rolled back onto her stomec and layed her head down. Shinx pulled up a branch and layed right by here, keeping her warm threwout the cold, dark night.
The morning came. The sun shined threw the leaves. Deanna chould hear a river near and looked around. She was suddenly hit by what all happened. It want a dream. She yawned. Maby is was a dream but it was a longer dream. Deanna sliped and was clinging onto the branch. She remembered Shinx and looked around. He was nowhere to be seen. She tried to climed back up, but there was nothing to put her hind legs on. Her was clawing for dear life. She remebered how her life wasnt so dear so she let go. She fell......only a few inches. She looked down and chuckled. She whould be embaressed if Shinx was around, but now she laghed over her stupidity. She looked around, whanting to yell to Shinx but she chouldnt. She whent over to the river. She found him, staring into the river.
"hey Shi-"
"NO!!!dont come closer!" He yelled as he cut her off.
"Why?" Deanna asked
Shinx diped his head.
"look into the river..." he wispered
Deanna was confused. What did he mean. She walked over and saw the whole river flowed the blood of her clan. Some of the tiny bits and peaces of bone floted alone with it, some sank. Deanna felt the tears. No. Only one tear. The tear came down her face, blood red as the river.

PC!!!
o-0-o

hehe. this is fun

so dat ONE mysteries dragon came outta nowhere and killed Numerus dragons that deanna loved? wow thats got to obe one skiled dragon =) or horrible combat units

ro'zan: i didn't attack you on purpose. life was hard for me at that time and i was confused.

sapphire: SHINX! 8P

NO, he had the help of the preagnat(now dead) dragoness, althought i didnt put it in there>.< should have. They where unprepared to begin with cuz there woriers where out fighting another battle, but they all died as well.
Quote: sapphire

ro'zan: i didn't attack you on purpose. life was hard for me at that time and i was confused.

sapphire: SHINX! 8P

Deanna: Your dad was relly dark, i understand8P Sapphiren remindes me so much about him*sighes a loveful sigh and lickes Ro'zan*

Chapter 9

She found herself raped in Shinx's wings. He cooed to her words she didnt reconise. Her tears streamed down, yet she didnt fell sad. She didnt cry out like how she longed to the day before. But now,now she didnt feal enything, nothing at all. She was emty. Dead. Dead inside, o so dead and lonly, and a lonsom dragon only a year older they she was keeping her compony. Did he know how she felt? She didnt whant to say a word. Her tail dug into the ground. Her talons dug into the soft ground. But, she didnt fell angry. Her crimson wings layed by her sides. Shinx's heat warmed her. Was this some torcherish nightmer that she couldnt wake from? Was this the eternal sleep? The eternal sleep. It sounded better then the he** that was going on. Shinx licked one of her scares. He spat something out. I was red. What was that? Before Deanna could ask he said:
"You are stil covered in blood..." he cooed in her ear.
She was a little maddened. How could he wisper in her ear in such a soft tone, like it whould be alright. Deanna wiggled free from his grasp and laded in the blood river. Deanna ran away from him. She ran away from all this pain and suffering. No more. No more sarrow, no more pain, no more misery. Her legs acked. She opened some whounds as she ran. The blood leaked out. She colaped as soon as she couldnt bare the pain. She wimpered and looked around. She saw her tears wheret as red as the river eny more, but a nice sparkiling blue. She closed her eyes and let the tears seep out.
"o, young dragon. What are you doing far from your clan?" A elderly voice came.
Deanna keep her eyes cosed. She didnt bother to answer. She felt a larg paw on her sholder.
"why the tears young one?" he asked
She shook her head. She got up but as soon as she did she fell.
"o dear, young one your wounded. Why dont you come with me and heal a little?" he asked.
Deanna dug her head into the ground. she just wish they whould all go away. The fellings she now had, the she didn't fell seconds ago, the noises, he collored, the light, everything.
He picked her up and walked away. Deannas eyes where still shut. she felt him put her down.
"grandfather?" she headr a voice. so vary familier.
"shinx!!!You have come back!!" The elder said.
Deannas eyes snaped open. She dug hersel into the elder.
"now now little one, dont go and start hearting everyone." He said to her.
"Deanna?" Sheinx said, looking closer
"you know this dragon?" He asked
"Yes, i know the dragoness grandfather." Shinx said
The elder chuckled.
"the elderly make misstakes all the time. Why dont you stay here, the leader of the clan will come back soon."
Deanna looked at both of them. Who was the leader? Where they nice?
"hu?' shinx said confused
"He said he had a buysness he had to take care of, finish his past. Remember that he was turned away from the clan he wished to join.."
"so he created his own." Shinx finished "Please, i heard the story a million times."
The elder chuckled again. All three heard a noise of wing flapes. Deanna heard the clan outside go quiet. Shinx come in all the way.
"looks like hes here.." the elder said
Deanna eyes widned. What was his name. She must have said this outloud becaouse her eyes widened when the Elder told her. non other then...........................
Zor'ran.

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ro'zan: d**nit father!

zor'ran: i iz sexy! 8P

bloodpaw: oh...****...father...

sapphire: 8O LE GASP!

Deanna: hehe, are ya freach now little blue one>=3? Yesh, behold, the one who i like is...once....still is....apart of the clan of the evil Zor'rans, MUAHAHAHAHA beware>=3 hehe.....
Blood: ._. i thought she was already crazy to start with...
Deanna:
Me: HEADS UP!!!Im makeing a story of Wen cynder and spyro meets none oyher then....
DUDUDU

OMG THIS IS THE 13th chapter!!! i counted

Chapter 13
Deanna squrmed a little. The name. Why dose it follow her? Where ever she whent she had to hear the name Zor'ran. Why? What have she done the diserve this? She sqealed and the Elder covered her mouth.
"SHHHHHHH girl!Enless you whant to be killed!!!" He hissed.
Shinx ran over the them and jumped behind the big Elder. All three could hear a draogns claws scrap the ground as they drag them across the stone ground. Deanna was scared. Her heart was beating faster and faster and the shadow of the dragon came closer and closer. The elder got up and looked around. He nooded as he saw Shinx and ran out the cave. As soon as he got out a voice snaped at him.
"Where have you been!? Ive been expeacting you when i got back!!! I need news and i need it now!!!" The voice of the dragon snaped
The elder bowed and nodded.
"yes Zor'ran-"
"DONT YES ME YOU A** HOLE!!!TELL ME NEWS!!!!" The voice demanded
"The sapphire dragon was born.......word of it is getting around to only a few, but i have my was of geting the infomation. The father of the little one is a silver dragon, mother is unknown to me." The elder told him
"Better be your grandchild..." Zor'ran growled
"Shinx isnt a sapphire dragon, he isnt a true sapphire dragon. He isnt the kind your looking for. The one with the father of silver and the mother unknown is who your seeking." The elder said, a little growl could be heard along in his words.
"Then get the information i need!!! All i need now is the Sapphire and my hunt shall be compleat-" He got cut off by the Elder
"But the clan?"
" The clan had a few of the Gems, but i look for all! NOW DONT INTEERUPT ME!!!" He snaped as he slashed his claws across the Elders face.
The Elder roared in agony as the blood leaked out of the wounds. Zor'ran turned around and walked off.
"Comone ladies." He pured to some of the dragonesses talking to eachother near one of there 'huts'.
The dragoneeses looked at eachother and backed down. There stomec touched the floor, tailed between there legs.
"O comon, Zor'ran whants a little fun with the lovely ladies. Noones in trouble...Enless.....you dont come." He pured more
They keep there tails between there legs and follwed him to his 'hut'.
(o my gawd, that was so gross, but kinda fun to wright Looks like darkuess isnt the only ladies man I rewned the moment where i know your all like ' o my gawd thats sick and perverted' )
The elder came back inside and looked at Deanna and Shinx.
"I see the little one is one of the Gems..." The elder said, nodding at Deanna.
Shinx nodded as well.
"But dont give her to Zor'ran, he'll kill her for once and for all!"Shinx pleaded
The elder looked at him in suprised
"You mean she encountered him before?" He asked
"Yes, twice. He killed her clan and later almost killed her." He said.
"It was Ro'zan...." Deanna wispered. The tast of him name on her touge felt so evil, dark, cold......so........right......
They both looked at her.
"So the son of-" Shinx began
"But Zor'ran didnt return with him...." THe elder said.
"What about his other-"SHinx began again
"gone." THe elder said.
SHinx shook his head.
"A croule and evil dragon he is, hope he chokes on a rabit bone or gets peaced with a horn by a mear deer." Shinx spat.
"Shinx...." Deanna wispered.
Hes name had a tast to it as well. Sweet, kind, gental......but also right.
Shinx looked at Deanna. SHe caought his look and rised her head and put on a fake smile
"I lost it, im sorry." She said.
Shinx nodded and continued talking to his grandfather. Deanna walked outside and looked at the emty clan. The rode was bare. There was stones, sticks, hay, dried graas and newly cut crass, shaped into larg cave like huts. Zor'rans was hard to miss. It was the biggest hut in the whole clan grounds. Deanna was being pulled back in by her tail. She draged and got lifted up, face to face with the elder, when he draged her to the back.
"Dont go and get yourself killed!!" The elder snaped
Deanna flinched at his voice. He put her down and che curled up in the corner of the cave, the darkest. The dark. It felt so right. She loved the dark. It made her feel so protected and peacfull, yet somewhat wild. She liked the feel the cold of the cave agenst her back, knowing nothing can grab her from the dark and pull her in compleatly, never to see the stars and moon again. The moonlight also made her fell so protected and peacfull, but it never gave her stregnth. She looked outside. Still daylight. Nowhere near the dark night she longed to forever be embraced in. Death. Why dose the word keep coming to her? Or maby it was the name. The name. It had a evil tast to it, eviler then the tast of Ro'rans name. She closed her eyes for a little nap.
SHe tossed and turned. She was sweeting. Shinx only stared and curled up in the other corner, far from her. SHe felt so cold, even if he heated himslef up with fire. He even blew a few flames at her and still she was cold. Nothing was right about her. She was so wired, but yet he liked her. He whould do enything to help her, enything to help someone get a life that was better then his as his 2 year life. He felt dead. So dead. But he was warm. He was warm and breathing, but Deanna, she looked dead as well, but she was cold, and hardly breathed. Deanna wolk up in a quick jump. Shinx let out a yelp and jupmed as well. Deanna ignored him and breathed heavily at the ground. She knew it! SHe knew it was to easaly won! THe war between the clane and the two draogns! It was to easy! And she had her uncle to forgive. She growled at his name. Death. He helped killed the clan, as he weaked them. He alwas whent hunting for the food, he must have poisened it!!! Deanna growled and layed back down. She looked over at Shinx and saw he was pressinginto the corner as if he wished it to eat him, the take him away from her forever. She ignore him and looked back down at the cave floor. The name of the one dragon. SHe saw him in her dream as well. What was him name? He reminded her of Shinx. O that was right. She smiled and wispered the name. Sweet, inocent, nice, dreamy, right. She loved it. It gave her hope, just like Shinx. She loved the name. The name that belonges the the dragon she didnt even know. Why dose she even know his name? Why all these names? She didnt care. SHe loved to save the names. She liked the tast of them. No matter what they tasted like. Shinx. Ro'zan. Zor'ran. Death. Salfera. And now the new one to add to her short list, Sapphiren.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~End of chapter~~~~~~~~~~~~~

ello?

Sapphiren: 8P Sweet!

Ro'zan: FATHER! YOU PERVERT!

Zor'ran: What? :/

Darkuss: I had more ladies then you in your mere clan. *growls*

Me: 8O

PC!!!

the perv strickes again!!!!Whach what ya say Darkuss, theres alote of ladies in his caln, just 2 of his childrien lived

Chapter 14:

She awoke the next morning. The bright light shone. Who was the name that came to her? Sapphiren......Who? She shook her head and got up on all four paws. Her crimson wings streached. They where from one side of the cave to the other. She folded them back to her side and her tail flickered in anoyence as she saw a mouse start to come up to her. SHe smelled its fear, but not enofe. She growled at it and the mouse just stood up, looking at her with its little black eyes. She stoped growleding and looked int its eyes. So dark.....It looked as if it had no soul....
"Deanna? What are you doing?" the Elder asked
"I....erm....im..." She studered, looking back at the green dragon
"looking into a foods soul?" He said for her
She tilted her head to the side. He chuckled, seeing her confusion.
"They say looking into ones eyes, they can see there soul. The more alie there eyes are, the brighter, and more soul they have." The elder explaned
Deanna nodded, understanding. She looked back at the mouse. She was begining to get hungry so she growled at it, hoping for more of its fear before she killes it. She smiled darkly, smelling its fear. Her holy blue mark hurt. She growled, ignoring it. Tempting not to roar out in pain. She crouched low and jupmed at the mouse. She sored over it and landed behind it. It ran around wile Deanna chased and hit it around, like a cat playing with its prey before it killes it. She took it by the tail with her talons and droped it in her mouth. The mouse split in half as she clamped down on it with her razor sharp teeth. Deanna chuckled darkly again. The Elder shook his head
"Deanna, make shure you dont get to obseesed with killing, and striking fear in others." The elder growled
Deanna sat down and at the rest of her dead prey. She already had a tast of it and wished for more. Longed for it. Shinx walked up to her and taped her on the shoulder.
"Malady." He said
"Hu?" Deanna turned around
Shinx shrugged "I heard the word so i thought i'd use it." He chuckled
Shinx and Deanna laghed. The elder chuckled
" The word is used for rolyty." The elder explaned
Shinx nodded. Deanna giggled in her paws, resting on her hind legs, her tail just swishing, her back agenst the wall. The light shone all over the cave. It shone on her scales, making a purple light shine threwout the cave(almost like a disco ball ). Shinx and the Elder looked around in whounder. Deanna looked around as well and knowticed it was her who was making the light. It looked almost like it was snowing purple. She held her purple and black wings up into the light and een the light shone threw the black as if it was clear. The trew of them, just sat in the cave. Smiles on all of them, waching the lovely lights dance all around them.

(Sorry if this one was shortX3)

PC!!!

X3 as soon as it think of somthing

Writer's blog!

no i have wrighters block i dont have a blog


Chapter 15:
Deanna and Shinx walked outside, far away from the clan, but far away from Deanna's old clan as well. They wached as the leaves on the trees cange color. Shinx looked back, then looked at Deanna. Deanna looked at him.
"What is it?" She asked
Shinx just looked at the ground. He shook his head and started to walk back. Deanna follwed him. The whole way there, they where both quiet. Shinx and Deanna whent to the back of the cave and layed down. Deanna stayed in the darkest corner, so the light whouldnt get to her. Shinx got up as soon as she layed down and walked out of the cave.
"There you are........" A dark, cold voice said as she saw the strangers shadow pick Shinx up by the tail.
"Let me go!!!" Sinx roared
"Who else is in the cave!?" The familier voice hissed
"Noone!!" Shinx replied
Deanna wached as the dragons shadow throw Shinx's at and saw as a red, big, male dragon come into the cave. Deanna's eyes widened then closed so she whouldnt give herself away. She hurd him get closer and closer to her.
"I can smell you...." The dragon chuckled. "And i thought i got ride of you!" He added in a hissed
"Father...?" a hachling, about a year older then herself said. "Zor'ran." he corected
Zor'ran turned around and growled
"Get the prision ready!" He snaped "We got ourselfs a new 'friend'." Zor'ran chuckled
"Yes father." he said as he took off.
Zor'ran reaching into the shadowes and took Deanna by her tail and lifted her up to the light. Deanna strugled to get out of his grasp.
"Theres no use." He hissed
"Let me go!!!" Deanna cried.
Zor'ran cuckled and shook his head. He gave her a cold smile and Deanna climed her tail and bit his paw. Her fangs sank into is scales. Blood squrited out and Zor'ran roared in pain.
"Why you litte bi**!" He hissed as he threw her into the cave wall.
Deanna could feel the pain as she hit the wall. She feel to the ground. The pain was unbarable and the last thing she could see before her eyes closed, was Zor'rans bleeding paw and him giving her his cold smile. She could feel herself being drenchied in blood as she whent cold, no sound could be hurd, all pain gone, and the world black.

i kill you all with my epic wrighting>=3

So much blood and violence. xD

WARNING: CRITICISM AHEAD
not for the faint at heart

I do enjoy this story a lot but could you read over it and get all the misspellings out of the way. That' s basically all of it I had no put the warning because it seems some people don't know how to take criticism.

lolz, id love a hunest opinion

Just work on the spelling and that's all it needs. If this site would let us indent I would say that and separate paragraphs but it doesn't so that's all. xD

will do thanks :3 im a bad speller to bigine(<SEE!!!Begine?gawd my brain DIED!) Start with

xD You know there's spelling checks on the internet you can use. Do you not have any kind of writing program on your Pc? Those have spelling checks.

no, my pc is relllllllllllllllllllllly old, one of the first labtops made, not to menchion(?) that its messed up

I would say use Open Office but that spell checks horrible I use Microsoft works and it works wonderful. But if you want you can use Open Office you find the download thing on the fanfiction.net homepage.

coolz:3
*takles* and where are your stories!?>=3

Why is everyone tackling me today? I don't have any up on here and the two I have are gonna be took down due to crapiness. xD I'm working on one to put up here but I haven't started on it yet.

idk bout the tackaling thing but MUAaaaFWAhhHHHHHHHH don ask

X3 well i hope you get it up soon im looking foword to it

I'm about to put up a topic for people to draw my character since I can't. xD Poppy drew her and I want to see what other people will do with her. It'll be here sometime I just have to figure out how to start it.

lolz. I whould but im to shy to

Draw her or put up a topic like that for Deanna? If you want I could include her in my topic and see what people do for her.

X3 thanks X3

Give me a description of her that you would like to put in the topic. I'm making it up right now.

I had a pic of her tat i drew but its not working>.<
See:


But anywhay......


Shes a dark purple dragoness, she had talons insted of claws, Her eyes are a sappire color.....Her wing membrean is black.....erm....
She had a marking on her right shoulder that looks like this:

But they could just ignore that inless they whant a hard chalange (dosnt make sence )
erm....what else....she was scares all over herself.
Three on her eye, three on each wing(where it begins) three on her tail.
erm.......hehe what else.......i havent drew her in a long time so erm.......
i think her tailblade i forgot erm.....*whent to go look at pic*
pretty weird looking