EVIL TANGO!
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#51 Posted: 22:18:52 21/02/2009 | Topic Creator
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#52 Posted: 22:21:24 21/02/2009
YAY!!
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#53 Posted: 22:26:52 21/02/2009 | Topic Creator
Now, the three walked out of the tunnel, it had been a very long journey and it was now night time.
“SUNLIGHT! No, MOONLIGHT! Argh! I wanted to see some sun!” Tango complained. “Where do we go now?” “No idea” “Great, I’m stuck out here with a mute shadow and a idiot!” “No need to take that tone, I got the ticket thingy” “Sorry, I’m just tired” Tango yawned. “Tired, going to find sleeping place” She said, climbing up the side of a house. Cynder sighed. “Come on Shadow, we can get some rest also” Shadow looked amused. “Well, I can” Cynder said, looking a little embarrassed. Cynder awoke, Shadow was lying next to her, deep in thought. “Morning Shadow” Cynder yawned. “Argh! Sunlight burns!” Tango complained, yet again, climbing down the building. “Morning Tango” Cynder said, rolling her eyes. Shadow looked up, Cynder looked at what he was staring at. It was Thoran, standing on top of a building. He climbed down to meet them. “What are you doing here?” Cynder asked. “The guardians sent me” Cynder felt Shadow stiffen beside her. “But I’m on your side” Both Cynder and Shadow relaxed. ------------------------------------- Yay! Thoran! |
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#54 Posted: 22:31:06 21/02/2009
Thoran!
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#55 Posted: 22:33:17 21/02/2009 | Topic Creator
Go Thoran!
*Continues to write more* |
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#56 Posted: 22:33:45 21/02/2009
Cool! More! Yay!
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#57 Posted: 22:43:09 21/02/2009 | Topic Creator
“So, what’s all this I hear about the two lost dragons?” Thoran asked, washing his paw.
Cynder explained. “Ah, makes sense now” “How did you find us?” “NEVER underestimate a cat’s sense of smell, ever” “Ok…” “What now?” Tango asked. “The guardians find you” (Thoran) “No they won’t , their not even here!” (Cynder) “Well, that’s where you wrong” *Explanation* “you mean, the guardians are HERE?!” (Cynder) Thoran nodded. “Oh ****!” (Tango) “TANGO!” Tango pointed to the sky, where Cyril was flying, and watching them. “Oh ****!” (Cynder) “Cynder!” “Shut up!” Cynder shouted, and started running from Cyril. Shadow followed. Cyril flew after them. Tango looked a Thoran. Thoran shrugged. And the chase began. ---------------------------- VERY short chapter, next one is pretty long...I think... |
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#58 Posted: 22:48:26 21/02/2009
R$un Cynder run!
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#59 Posted: 23:02:05 21/02/2009 | Topic Creator
“COME BACK HERE YOU TWO YOUN-”
Cyril’s voice was droned out by the wind rushing past Cynder’s face. She couldn’t let them get Shadow now, not after all she’d done. “YOU’LL NEVER TAKE US ALIVE!” She shouted into the wind, not sure if Cyril could hear her. Shadow flew silently beside her. The chase continued through the dragon city. Many other Dragon stopped to watch. Tango was running and jumping from building to building, trying to keep up with them. Thoran was no where to be seen. “COME BACK!” “Leave us alone!” Cynder, Shadow and Cyril passed Terrador, who joined in the chase. Which was getting faster by the minute. “you’ll never catch us you slowcoaches!” Cynder shouted again, starting to enjoy the feel of the wind of her face. The chase continued for some time, occasionally Cyril and Terrador would gain on them, but soon after Cynder and Shadow would rush forward. Going faster than ever. But one time, Terrador got extremely close, to close for comfort. “SHADOW! HURRY!” But it was to late, Shadow was caught by the tail. “Ha! I’ve got you now!” Terrador said. Then Shadow disappeared. Completely. “Eh?” Terrador said, confused. Cynder saw a building up ahead. She flew upwards, Cyril swerved around it but Terrador wasn’t fast enough. Bam. Dragon face meets wall. Terrador fell onto the road below. Shadow materialised beside Cynder. Cynder would have asked him how he had done that, but now was not the time for chatter, as Cyril was close behind. |
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#60 Posted: 23:06:25 21/02/2009
Fly fly fly!!
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#61 Posted: 23:16:21 21/02/2009 | Topic Creator
“This is getting tiring…” Cynder groaned, they had now been flying at full speed for more than 20 minutes.
Shadow nodded. “We need a place to hide, somewhere the guardians can’t get to…” Cynder said, looking around. “There!” Cynder shouted, pointing at a clock tower with a small gap between the roof and the platform. They both flew towards it, and jumped inside, running back so Cyril could reach them with his claws. Cyril hovered outside. “Come out Cynder…we don’t wan to harm you” “You want to hard Shadow!” “No we don’t!” “Liar! I heard you last night” Cyril didn’t respond, then he said something “We won’t do it if you come out” “Another lie” Cynder said, rolling her eyes at Shadow. “Don’t make me use my ice breath” “Dare ya!” So he did, which Cynder wasn’t expecting. “RUN!” She shouted, flying out of the gap on the other side. “GOTCHA!” Volteer shouted, grabbing Cynder, but he missed Shadow, whi flew on. “Darn, wrong one, oh well” Volteer said, starting to fly off. “SHADOW! HELP!” Shadow turned back and started flying towards Volteer. Volteer gave a evil smile. “So be it…” He cackled, flying faster in the direction if home. Cynder realised what he was doing. “SHADOW! DON’T! IT’S A TR-” Her words where cut off when Volteer put a claw over her mouth. Cynder burned with anger. I’ll get you for this! Mark my words! --------------------------------- Going bed now,bye. |
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#62 Posted: 23:18:37 21/02/2009
Cynder goes against the eldars! I love your storis Tango!
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#63 Posted: 10:40:31 22/02/2009
^ Me too! I wish my storys were as great as this one!
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#64 Posted: 14:23:37 22/02/2009
You writin more? I can wait if you are.
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#65 Posted: 14:24:31 22/02/2009 | Topic Creator
Writing more.
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#66 Posted: 14:26:21 22/02/2009
cool, i'll be playing Lethal enforcers while i wait. (I can't acidently kill one incocent person!!)
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#67 Posted: 14:39:47 22/02/2009 | Topic Creator
Volteer was flying over the forests of Avalar, still carrying Cynder. Who was deciding when to make her escape. They flew over a large clearing.
Now! Thought Cynder. She pushed her head back hard, before Volteer knew what was happening, she had bitten his finder, hard! “OWEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!” Volteer screamed, holding his bleeding finger up, dropping Cynder. Cynder flew down to the ground. “Shadow! Follow me!” Shadow landed beside her, but he had been to slow, now al the guardians had surrounded them. “STAY BACK OR I’LL BITE YOUR TAILS OFF!” None of the guardian’s moved. “Cynder you don’t understand!” “I understand everything!” Cynder turned her back of Cyril, she saw Spyro and Elixir flying over head. “SPYRO! Down here!” She yelled, Spyro saw them and landed beside Volteer. “What’s going on?” He asked. “Their going to kill Shadow!” “And…?” Cynder was gob smacked. “Don’t you care!!??” “Well he’s just a Shadow, he can’t sleep or talk or eat, No one can understand him!” “I can!” Cynder growled. Everything was silent for a few moments. “Go on then!” Spyro challenged. Cynder remained strong, she turned to Shadow. “Say something!” Shadow stared deep into her eyes, Cynder stared back without second thought. For some time they stared into each others eyes, Cynder felt as if two invisible beams connected them, letters flooded into Cynder’s brain and started rearranging themselves. When they had done so, sorrow flowed into Cynder’s face. She turned to face Spyro. “He said “I don’t want to die”” She said quietly. |
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#68 Posted: 14:46:16 22/02/2009
Wow... This is good
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#69 Posted: 14:48:39 22/02/2009
i bet the guardians were a little suprised there
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#70 Posted: 14:52:01 22/02/2009 | Topic Creator
Poor poor gaurdian's....
Still writing. |
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#71 Posted: 14:53:31 22/02/2009
Cool. Tango, make sure you PM me if you make a new story!
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#72 Posted: 15:10:02 22/02/2009 | Topic Creator
I will, think my next one will be about Thoran.
(Thoran is my favourite fan charactor, even if I don't use him much) |
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#73 Posted: 15:12:53 22/02/2009
Cool
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#74 Posted: 15:20:46 22/02/2009 | Topic Creator
Spyro turned to Elixir.
“Yeah, that’s exactly what he said…” “Well…” “The decision is not for Cynder to make!” (Terrador) “Nor is it yours!” (Cynder) “Who’s is it then?” (Volteer) “Mine!” (Elixir) “Well…?” Elixir was silent. “Shadow is my friend, I didn’t care that no other dragons would take me in because I had Shadow to talk to…” Cyril sighed. “I guess that settles it, Shadow stays” “WHOO HOO!” Cynder yelled jumping up and down. “YEAH! We win Shadow!” Shadow looked very happy. “Lets forget this ever happened” Cyril said, flying in the direction of the temple. “Deal!” Spyro sighed. On the way home, Cynder thought of something. “What happened to Tango and Thoran?” Everyone was silent. “Opps….” *In the dragon city* “Well this is boring” Tango said, sitting under a tree sheltering from the rain. ---------------------- It's not finished yet! |
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#75 Posted: 15:26:14 22/02/2009
Continue!
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#76 Posted: 15:26:36 22/02/2009 | Topic Creator
Ok. *Writes*
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#77 Posted: 15:37:51 22/02/2009 | Topic Creator
Cynder sighed, things where better at the temple. She had forgiven Spyro, but now she was upset, fore Shadow and Elixir were leaving.
“Well, bye…I guess” Elixir said. “Do you have to go? It’s more fun around here having dragons around that aren’t boring!” Spyro grumbled. “Couldn’t you stay a bit longer? Say…forever?” Elixir looked surprised. “Can I…?” “Of course you can!” “Well then that’s great! We’ve got a home Shadow! After all these years wandering about on our own…” “YIPPIE!” “Hey, bet I can beat you at a race!” Spyro said, flying off. “NO WAY!” Elixir laughed, flying after him. Cynder gave a laugh, flapping her wings and following her friends. *********************************** It was evening, Cynder was watching the pink clouds race across the sky. He was happy now, her two newest friends where going to stay forever but there was one thing she didn’t get… “What did Shadow mean!?” Cynder growled, trying to look fierce. “Huh? I don’t understand!” Elixir stammered, Cynder had cornered him by the wall of the temple. “When he said I was doomed!” “He didn’t say you where doomed, he said HE was doomed” “Why!?” Elixir said nothing. “WHY!?” “Well…because….he’s a shadow and…” “And….?” “He…..loves…you” “WHAT!?” Cynder ran up the slope, Spyro was teaching Shadow how to do a loop the loop. Elixir crept away, Cynder didn’t notice, she was lost in her thoughts. “He…loves me….” Cynder smiled. Maybe she thought the same about him… THE END! ---------------------------------- Everyone, 1, 2, 3, DAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWW! ^^ |
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#78 Posted: 15:41:36 22/02/2009
A cliffhanger! NOO!! MY WORST ENEMY!!
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#79 Posted: 15:43:06 22/02/2009 | Topic Creator
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What cliffhanger? I see no cliffhanger! XD! :D |
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#80 Posted: 15:45:05 22/02/2009
Oh... well, i thought i did......
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#81 Posted: 15:45:58 22/02/2009 | Topic Creator
There will be more about them. Promise! XD
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#82 Posted: 15:46:41 22/02/2009
Yay!!
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#83 Posted: 15:50:14 22/02/2009 | Topic Creator
But after my next story! Ahahahaha!
But it's about Thoran, or maybe somthing else... ARGH! To many story ideas, what do you want one about? |
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#84 Posted: 15:50:42 22/02/2009
Up to you, your the writer
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#85 Posted: 15:53:04 22/02/2009 | Topic Creator
But a story about..
1.Tango 2. Thoran 3. Spyro 4. Cynder 5. Shadow Or any two mixed together... OR 6. The story of Ember an Flame |
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#86 Posted: 16:05:52 22/02/2009
Well.... I liked this one about Cynder and shadow
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#87 Posted: 09:54:32 23/02/2009
Great story Tango! But that was a big cliff hanger....
And I liked the one about Cynder and Shadow too. Maby a one that comes after this one? But you should be the one that will diside. After all, you are the one that is making the story. |
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#88 Posted: 14:17:07 23/02/2009 | Topic Creator
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Ok. I will do a Cynder and Shadow one AFTER my newest story. |
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#89 Posted: 12:43:05 26/03/2009
I loved this story! Brilliant!
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#90 Posted: 17:29:03 07/07/2009
YEAH! Go TANGO! Loving the story
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#91 Posted: 22:24:17 07/07/2009
I just read this today and I say it is one of the best i've seen
GREAT STORY! P.S NOOO, Don't end it here, PLEASE CONTINUE ON!
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#92 Posted: 16:29:16 08/07/2009 | Topic Creator
I'm continueing it after my next fanfic.
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