darkSpyro

Sorry for lack of updates, I have had minor writer's block.

Cyril's head clashed with the stone and the only thing he could hear was his heart beat. His ears roared as he landed on the ground with a thud. He shook his head, but the blurreiness from his eyes wouldn't fade away. He tried to stand up, but his paws failed him. Soon the bluriness in his eyes turned to blackness and the roaring in his ears turned to nothingness. When Cyril woke up, he looked at his wing and choked in horror. He could see right through it.Iam I, Iam I dead? Cyril thought.

wow! please write more!

MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEE PLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAZZZZZZZZZZZZZ

He was in a dark room. The only source of light was from a crack in the roof. A dim light came through the crack and Cyril could see another hole out of the crack. THrough that hole was sky.
Were still in the cave! Cyril thought in horror. Cyril heard a groan and turned around. Cindy woke up and stood beside him.
"What happened?" Cindy moaned. She was see through too. Before Cyril could reply a bright light shined through the room.A ghostly, strange looking blue dragon stood at the end of the room.
"Who are you?" Cyril questioned.
"Iam the Chroniclar. And I summoned you to this crevice, where the lava can't reach us. Well, NOTHING can reach us, to warn you." The Chronicalar said calmly. Cyril felt alarmed. WHta did he mean nothing could reach us?
"Whoa, whoa, whoa How can nothing reach us?" Cindy said.
"Well, you see,when I dragon dies in these caves, they are stuck here in this crevice untill the night of The Phoniex Eclipse is here." The Chroniclar said.
"You mean, were DEAD?" Cyril asked in disbelif.
"Iam afraid so.Now, Every one millon years, volcanos all around the world erupt and fires are summoned from the Phoniex. The world is clouded with ash and haunted by fire. This night is called The Phoniex Eclipse. Tonight, IS that night. Now is not your time to die." The Chroniclar dissapeared and a eagle like call echoed through the crevice. The roof cloapssed!
"Look out!" Cyril said and pushed Cindy out of the way of a falling chunk of rock. They flew through the open crevice and looked at the forest. The entire forest was on fire and the flames roared their rage.
Cyril looked first at his wing then at Cindy. They weren't see through! Cyril coughed from the smoke.

Wait, if the smoke affects me, Then were alive again! Cyril relized.

OH NO! THAT'S WHY THIS UPDATE DIDN'T SHOW UP! Well, I edit these updateds so they fit eachother.

Terrador was more angry than he ever been in his life. Ralph had no right to put him here! After he had yelled at Cyril and Cyril had gone missing, Terrador had gone to give Ralph a peice of his mind.
"HE DID THE RIGHT THING!" Terrador screamed as he doged to avoid Ralph throwing a plate at him.
"DON'T YOU JUDGE ME! HE WAS A LITTLE BRAT FOR WHAT HE DONE!" Ralph had shouted back.
"YOU WOULD HAVE DONE THE SAME! YOUR THE ONE THATS A STUCK UP SNOB IF YOU THINK YOUR THE ONE THAT'S RIGHT YOU LITTLE-" Then Ralph had pounced on him and dragged him outside. He chained Terrador to one of the posts and the horrid green chain activated.
"You will stay here untill oyu come to your senses." Ralph whispere in fury and walked away. Terrador had screamed and struggled to get free untill the chain almost choked him to death. Terrador collapsed onto the sand and gasped for air.
No wonder almost nobody comes to this camp, Ralph is a maniac! Terrador thought in rage. But rage took over Terrador once more and he strained to get free. He twisted into the sand and tugged onto the chain, but it didn't come loose. Using his last bit of energy, he pulled as hard as he could. The chain snapped and Terrador was sent flying ito the air. Terrador brathed deeply and stood up as his legs shook. He looked back at the chain nd looked at it, torn to pecices.
Okay, Iam free. now I have to find Ralph. Terrador thought. The way he was behaving made Terrador suspicous of what he was really like. He went to his cabin and spotted a hole in the side. He crept in and noticed the bookselves were carved into the stone walls. Lots of books filled the shelves. Most of them were black, blue or green. Terrador walked to the back of the room and saw a trap door that was open. Terrador crept inside. Raplh was in there, writing in a book on what looked like a very old table. Terrador his behind a bookshelf untill Ralph left. He crept up to the open book and read it.
Dear journal, Iam afraid Terrador is starting to get suspicous. I chained him up so he can't stick his muzzle in where it doesn't belong. With those little weaklings off gaurd and tonight being the Pheonix Eclipse, I can take them to my brother to corrupt them to get them to take over the world! In fact, tonight will be this night no one will forget!
Best wishes to my brother,Malefor, the best dragon a brother could ask for.
Ralph.
Terrador couldn't belive it.
I have to warn the others! He thought and ran back to the etrance. Then Terrador stopped dead in his tracks.
"Hello young dragon, where are you heading off to?" Ralph said coldly.

you should realy make an RP about this

yikes, poor terrador. more please.

nice story line,it would have been cool if someone made a kind of summerlair RP with the same rules:lose a contest and you get chained up all nigth,win and you get a feast

these are awesome comics about +

Who hoo! A new reader! And what's an RP?

Terrador couldn't breathe.
"You little brat! I knew you were up to something!" Ralph growled.
"Iam not afraid of you." Terrador snarled.
"You should be!" Ralph scrreched and lunged. Then a giant rock hit Ralph in the back of the head and split into two. Ralph cloappsed on the floor, the back of his head bleeding. Behind him stood Jade.
"Jade! What are you doing here!?" Terrador hissed, in case another hostile dragon was still around.
"I heard you two argueing and saw Ralph chain you to the posts. I knew he was up to something, so I followed you here." Jade explained briefly.
"Good enough for me. Now lets get out of here." Terrador said and walked to the door. After they crawled out of the hole they were greeted by clouds of smoke. The whole camp was on fire and the trees bordering it. Shadow ran outide the cabin in circles. Terrador and Jade ran over to him.
"Shadow! What happened!?" Jade asked.
"The-fi-fire swoo-o-ped in and des-stroye-d e-e-e-everything! Ignitus and Volteer and Amber are still in the cabin!" Shadow stammered. Terrador turned into a earth boulder and smashed the cabin wall. Massive piles of dirt suffocated the fire. Ignitus, Amber and Volteer scrambled out of the ruined cabin, soot covering their faces.
"Thanks." Volteer panted. Two dragons landed beside the group. It was Cyril and Cindy!
"Thank goodness were not to late." Cindy said.
"Where were you!? You could have gotten captured, or-or killed!" Terrador roared, even though he was actullay reived to see his friends.
"What are you talking about?" Cyril said.
"I'll explian later. Follow me!" Terrador said and led the frightened dragons to the Ralph's secret lair.
Hopefully he's still knocked out, that lair is the only shelter avaible! Terrador thought. He led them through the hole and the trap door.
"Ralph!" Amber cried when she saw his uncouncious form.
"Don't go anywhere near him!" Terrador barked. Amber looked confused, but obeyed. Jade looked at him worriedly. Sooner or later, Ralph would wake up, then what would they do? But Terrador found a crevice that led even deeper, not big enough for Ralph to fit in.
"In here!" Terrador commanded. Just when everybody got close to the hole, Ralph woke up.
"What do you think you are doing?" Ralph said furoiusly. The young dragons whipped around.
"Perfect, you are all here for recruitment." He said icily.
"What is he talking about?" Amber wondered.
"You will know soon enough!" Ralph said and stomped his paw, relasing vines lashing out at the dragons.
"Get in the hole! Quick!" Terrador barked and activated an earth shelid. The vines hit the sheid and shriveled into dust. Once everyone was i, Terrador deactivated the shelid and slipped into the hole just as Ralph lunged . He slamed into the wall and roared in rage. He Stomped away, and soon he was gone.
"Will someone please tell me what is going on!?" Ignitus said, sounding annoyed and frightened at the same time.
"Well, the Chroniclar, dragon who suppsidly records events in history, warned us that tonight was the Phoenix Eclpise, when volcanoes everywhere erupt and fires are summoned by the Phoenix." cyril explained.
"And it turns out Ralph isn't a summer camp counciller, he is Malefor's brother tryint to help him take over the world tonight and corupt all of his campers to do Malefor's dirty work." Terrador expained.
All the drgaons looked shocked, then the wall above the hole started to crack.
"I know you are in there! I'll get in there one way or another!" Ralph yelled as the wall collapsed.

an RP is a RolePlay

great story

There is no way I can make an RP. I don't even know how to make a slideshow!

i didnt mean an RPG,i meant a topic where you do RP with text

I don't know,, sounds kind of boring. But I guess there is something I can do, A CONTEST! YAY! In the next chapter, there will be 4 new characters, a counciller and 3 more campers. (Remember, it can't be a purple dragon because that will mess with the storyline!!) And it it is up to you to create a dragon for the stories.(You can only submit to a maximum of two characters.) All entries must be submitted before May 13. The winner will have his/her character in the next adventure!! Good luck!

ill get on thinkin of one that isnt goin to be in my story

Volteer's head spun. First he was trapped in a fire and then he got this shocking news and now Ralph was on a bloodthirsty rampage. Without thinking he shot a thunderbolt at Ralph.
"AHH!" He screamed and he stood there, paralyzed.
"Good thinking Volteer!" Cyril said.
"Wuh?" Volteer was very confused.
I didn't think anything! He thought.
"Don't just stand there,FLY!" Terrador barked and smaked him.
"OW! Ok, ok!" Volteer said angrliy. Terrador led the way with Cyril at the back. Terrador led them into a narrow crevice and out the other side. Wingflaps were heard behind them and Ralph crashed through the crevice, leaving nothing left but rubble.
"Cyril! Slow him down!" Amber ordered. Cyril breathed blue,icy mist at Ralph and it blinded him. Ralph growled in annoyance and flew through the mist.
We may be faster,more agile, smaller and more elements availble, but he's very strong and smarter then us. If we don't get out of these caves soon he'll catch us. Volteer relized.

Terrador led them through a tunnel that the wind whistled through. Heat blasted their faces.
"We must be getting close to the surface." Cindy confirmed.
Volteer was relived to get out of the deep caves where they had a high chance of getting caught, but he didn't want to go back to the scorching surface either. A light flowed from the end of the tunnel.

cool!

*Sigh* Isn't ANYBODY going to try the contest?

They burst through the tunnel and found themsleves at the Forbidden Lake. The lake held the fire at bay, but the fire roared it's rage. Ralph exploded from the tunnel and blew an earth bomb at them. The dragons tunbled on the ground and imedately got back up. They all pounced on Ralph at the same time. Ignitus and Amber clung to his neck and bit hard. Jade and Terrador scracthed his wings. Shadow raked his long claw into his side and left deep scars. Volteer and Cindy clung to his tail and bit hard untill a bone snapped.
Ralph growled meancingly and rolled over, crushing Jade,Terrador and Shadow. He waved his tail voliently untill Volteer and Cindy fell off and Ralph wacked then with his tail tip. He shook his neck untill Ignitus and Amber fell off. Ralph scrreched and preapered to whack them with his tail. Ignitus and Amber barrel rolled to avoid his tail attack. The smaller dragons formed a circle around Ralph and breathed all of their elements at once. Ignitus's fire, Amber's firewind, Shadow's shadowfire, Cindy and Cyril's ice, Volteer's electricity and Jade and Terrador's earth all formed a purple element and burned Ralph. He scrreched in pain and flopped onto the ground.
"Is he dead?" Jade wondered.
"Good ridance." Terrador growled.
"Don't let your gaurd down. He's still breathing," Shadow warned just as Ralph shot into the air! Green light shone around him and his eyes were full of fury.
"He's in fury mode!" Amber screeched s the green light expanded as he prepared to activate fury.
It's all over, Volteer thought miserbly. Then a eagle screech filled the clearing. A figure appeared and seemed to be getting closer. Then it got close enough that Volteer could see what it was. Itb was a giant bird that was on fire.
"It's the phoenix! Take cover! Quick!" Volteer screamed. All the dragons ducked into some bushes, except Ignitus and Amber.
"What are you doing! Get in here!" Cyril shouted.The Phoenix landed beside Ignitus and Amber, setting the grass on fire. The Phoenix screeched at the two dragons. All the sudden the two dragons scales became brighter and brighter, untill it exploded and the two dragons were on fire! There eyes were blazing and there claws had doubled their size. Ignitus and Amber screeched an eagle scrreched and charged at Ralph along with the phoenix. The Phoenix grabed Ralph in his talons. Ralph clawed at The Phoenix and he bled fire and burned Ralph's face. Ignitus and Amber bit his head very hard. Ralph screamed and tried to shake them off, but they wouldn't let go. Once they did, they scratched him on his wings, leaving deep scars that bled, Ralph was panting now and he cloapsed on the burned ground. The Phoenix screeched and all the sudden the fire stopped. The fire shrunk at the Phoenix's command, leaving nothing but a blackened forest. The Pheonix circled Ralph with Ignitus and Amber close behind. They had the same anger and feirceness in their eyes just like the Pheonix.
They weren't Ignitus and Amber anymore, they were possesed by the Pheonix.

wow! 8D this is sooo cool!

my competition entery:

name: Haku
age: 14
gender: female
colour: white
element: eletric/lightning
personality: quiet nature, but has a strong sence in what's right, a strong an skilled fighter, but is kind and can flounder over desisions.
description: has white scales and has two long thin grey horns on her head, has a blade on her tail the same colour as the horns, has a yellowish orange shine to her scales, and the same to the skin in her wings.

sound good?

Ralph seemed to wither and breath slower and slower under the Pheonix's glare.
"NOO!" A dragon cried and tackled the Pheonix.
It was Malefor. The Pheonix screamed as Malefor bit the Pheonix's wing. Ignitus fought hard to control the fire that raged inside him. The Pheonix had control over him, and no matter how hard he tried, he couldn't break free. The Pheonix screeched in pain as Malefor shed The Pheonix feathers and they fell to the ground, scorching the forest. The fire raised higher than ever before. A tall pine tree fell and crushed Ralph.
"NOO!" Malefor shouted and flewto his broher's side.
"Avenge me." Ralph whispered and he sighed and his life was gone.
A new fury blazed in Malefor's eyes now as he fired an Ice bomb at The Pheonix. Oh no, Malefor knows that ice will kill him! Ignitus thought and his rage exploded as he blocked the ice bomb attack. The ice shards broke into his skin and it bled. Ignitus charged at Malefor. Ignitus raked his huge claws into Malefor's side and bit his face. Malefor simply opned his mouth and swallowed Ignitus, only to spit him back out when his throat burned. Amber charged at Malefor so hard it knocked him over and she tore one of his teeth out. Malefor refused to give up and activated ice fury. The ice froze the area around them and hit the Pheonix. The Pheonix screeched and hit the ground, his feather's growing colder and colder. Amber also seemed to weaken and she turned back to normal, her eyes closed. Ignitus was still possased, and The Pheonix spoke to him in his mind.
Kill him, avenge us, Then Ignitus coundn't control hiself anymore. He lunged at Malefor and broke his paw. Ignitus ignored his crys of pain and breathed fire on Malefor. the fire burned him untill he was black and then he breathed ice on himself. Malefor was covered in scars and bites. He grimaced in pain everytime he breathed and looked at Ignitus.
Put me out of my misery, He seemed to be saying. Ignitus preapred to kill him, but then he thought of Ralph's last words.
avenge me, Igntius's mind flowed with thoughts. Flowing blood, blazing fire, and rage.
Rage is a very voilent feeling. It can tear familes and dragons hearts to pecices, and when a dragon does kill, his heart fills with guilt forever, Ignitus's father had told him once. Even though Malefor and his brother, Ralph, were evil, they still had fellings. Malefor was overwhelmed with grief when Ralph had died, and tried to kill us out of rage. Then Ignitus's mind filled with other memories, that wasn't his.
Mother! Don't go!
I can't son, it is my time,,
Then his mind filled with the thoughts of pure fury as a purple hatchling murdered a adult dragon. The dragon was covred with blood. The dragon's murderer wept,
Goodbye, father. His mind back into the present, Ignitus relized those were Malefor's memories. His father had killed his mother out of rage, then Malefor killed his father, for revnge and out of fury. but he regreted it, and Ralph was the only dragon he had left. And now he was dead.
Rage destroyed his life, and look what he become. I don't have the right to kill him, and I can't find it in my heart to kill anybody. Ignitus relized slowly and he turned back to normal. Malefor stood up and looked at him in confusion.
I cannot kill you. Go.Ignitus seemed to say. Malefor flew away, his head hanging low. Amber woke up and stood beside him.
"Why did you let him go?" Amber said.
"Rage can tear us apart, Amber, and killing will give no satisaction." Ignitus said. Their friends came out of cover and ran toward them.
"Are you okay?" Jade asked.
"Were fine." Amber said. the Pheonix had gotton up, he had recovered from the ice attack. He limped toward Ignitus and Amber. He lowered his beakonto Ignitus's paw, them Amber's paw. The scals glowed untill a mark appeared, in the shape of a Pheonix.
If you ever need me, just call. Iam in your gratitude forever. the Pheonix thought. Ignitus and Amber heard his thought inside their head and relized the mark was a connection so they could hear eachother's thoughts. The Pheonix flew away and screeched. A massive amount of rain put the fire out and soaked the land.
"How can he summon rain?" Cyril wondered.
" Well, he set the entire world on fire, and now he summons rain to balance it out and grow new forests and crops. It's like a new begging." Amber said.
How did she know that? Ignitus thought. Amber nodded her head in the deraction of the Pheonix.
Oh, he must have gien her the answer threw his thoughts. Ignitus concluded.
That's right. A new voice popped into his head and Ignitus jumped. He turned to look into the rain cloud and see a giant red bird, except his feathers weren't on fire now. The bird winked at him, and Ignitus winked back.

It sounds good! Now that adventure two is over, I'll have to wait for more entries to come in!

im afraid you would think my character is overpowered

name: cyclone
age: 16
male
element: wind
personality: helpful, short-temper, secretive, good fighter, talkitive(maybe he'll make friends with volteer, lol), and a great flyer

That one is good to, but what is his colour? And it doesn't matter if the character is overpowered,(what does that mean anyway?) send me the entry anyway! And Iam going to change the contest deadline. This contest will end May 9th, this saturday.

grey
not silver
grey

Since almost nobody has entered in this contest, Iam ending it early. So here it is, Adventure 3!

The sun shined brightly and the birds sang. Volteer woke and looked out the window. New trees and flowers grew rapidly that replaced the burned forest. Burned bark still lay scatered on the ground, but lots of it was removed and placed in rivers. Nobody wanted to risk another forest fire. The trees were already taller than a adult dragon. Volteer smiled.
With this weather, the hike won't be cancelled. Volteer thought. Their new counclier, Sun, had palnned every day with activites. Yesterday they had gone bird watching in the meodow. Today they were hiking through the forest and stopping at many beautiful checkstops. Then they were camping in the woods for the night. And the bonus was that the hike would take more than one day. They wouldn't see the camp again for days.
"Volteer!" A voice called. Haku opened the door to Volteer's room.
"It's not going to be a while till we go on the hike. Lets do some battle training." Haku said. Volteer followed Haku to the battle training area. Even though Haku was Volteer's age, she was a little smaller than him. But she had a really long tail.
This is going to be easy. Volteer thought and lunged at Haku. Haku easliy doged out of the way and usd her tail to unblance Volteer. Volteer tumbled through the sand and Haku pinned him down. Volteer broke free of the pin and hit her head. Haku fell and immedieatly got back up. Volteer lunged again and flew right over her. He gently bit her shoulder and dragged her through the sand. Haku kicked with her back feet and Volteer lanede on the sand roughly. Volteer lunged once more and Haku stood on her back feet. Volteer landed too early and Haku crushed him into the dust. Volteer twisted free and tried to whack her with his tail. Haku blocked with her wing and swung her tail at Volteer. She wrapped her tail around his neck and tossed him across the clearing. Volteer got up and panted.
She's really good! Volteer thought. This time Haku pounced,but Volteer was ready, at least he thought he was ready. She landed right beside him and Volteer snapped around, ready to bite her leg. But Haku was quicker.She lunged at Volteer and they rolled through the sand, carefully scracthing and biting eachother. Haku broke free and charged. She hit him with her horns and threw up her head so Volteer was flying through the air. Volteer landed hard. Volteer lay in the side, panting rapidly.
"Oh Volteer! Did I hurt you? Iam so sorry!" Haku said and ran over to Volteer.
"Iam fine." He gasped.
"Were going on the hike now." A voice said behind them. It was Sun. Volteer felt embarssed that Sun was watching the whole time.
"Haku, you did a very good job. Volteer, you have to plan your charges more carefully. Never underestimate a opponet smaller than you." Sun said. Volteer hung his head in embarssement as they followed Sun to the firepit.

wow, you aced haku's personality perfectly! good job, lets see how this adventure affects her. 8D

i lose

You are in for a suprise,,

Everyone was already gathered by the firepit.
Ignitus, Amber,Berry, Shadow, Haku and Volteer from the Red Team.
Cyril, Terrador, Jade, Cindy and Cyclone from the Blue Team.

YAYZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i win

Cyclone,Haku and Berry had joined the summer camp quite recently. Cyclone was grey and a little bit bigger than the other campers. He had white horns simalar to Volteer and a black tail tip shaped like a blade of a knife. He had golden eyes and yellow underbelly and gray wings. Berry was strawberry red with blue underbelly. She had yellow horns shaped like Ignitus. Her tailtip was shaped like Ignitus's also and had blue eyes.
"Okay campers, were going to start on the Breeze trail." Sun said and led the way out of camp.

exiting
read me story?

Okay,I'll read your story. What is is called?

Volteer noticed that Shadow hung at the back of the line. Volteer walked over to Shadow.
"What's wrong, Shadow?" Volteer said.
"It's the forest fire. You still rember My clan,right?" Shadow said.
"Of course,how could I ever forget?" Volteer said.
"I don't know what happened to them in the forest fire. Iam sure they'll send me a letter soon, but i can't help not to worry. Maybe I should have stayed with them." Shadow sighed.
"Are you kidding? You have good friends right here. We all care about you, were like our own little clan." Volteer reassured.
"Maybe your right." Shadow said cautiously.
As the dragons travlled deeper and deeper into the forest the sun rose higher and higher. It was noon by the time they reached their first checkstop. A skinny river streched before them as the water gurgled as it travelled downstream. A huge branch hung from one of the trees that streched over top of the river. The overgrown branch had no leaves or bark. Lots of rocks dotted the river. Lots of trees grew by the shore and their leaves fell into the river. Volteer was so distracted by the sight he didn't notice Cyclone sneaking up on him.
"SUPRISE!" He screeched and tackled Volteer. The two dragons tumbled into the river.

lol
i like it
u got his personality good

he he, cyclone is the practical joker.
more please!

Volteer gasped with suprise and lashed out at Cyclone.
Cyclone let go once he saw the terror in Volteer's eyes.
"Whoa, calm down man." Cyclone said as he and Volteer climbed onto the branch.
"Calm down! You almost scared me to death!" Volteer snapped.
"Sorry." Cyclone muttered and hung his head.
"Don't be harsh, Volteer. He was just playing." Cindy said as she lay on one of the rocks in the middle of the river.
"Your right. Iam sorry Cyclone." Volteer muttered. Then the branch started to shake up and down. Volteer had to dig his claws in to keep his blance. Berry was at the end of the branch, bouncing up and down to make the branch shake.
"Nice try." Volteer said playfully and pushed Berry into the river.
"EEK!" She shrieked and leaped from the water. She grabbed Volteer's tail.
"You won't get rid of me that easy!" Berry said as she succeded in dragging Volteer into the river.
"Okay campers. Time to continue on te hike." Sun said. So they hiked beside the river and the more they travlelled the more narrow the river became.
"Umm, Sun, where are we g-" Before Ignitus could fininsh his question something took his breath away. Right before themwas a vast sea. the sunset made the aqua blue water sparkle and a chain of Islands glowed in the orange sunset light.
"Welcome to The Sapphire sea." Sun annouced.

wow, that sounds like such a beautiful place, I wanna go!

Ignitus saw some huge hills covered by trees in the distance. On one side there was a small cliff and the sandy shore. Badlands lay behind the coastline and some trees grew from the rock hills. A canyon was carved about 4 miles from the coast.
"Millons of years ago, this was nothing but a huge Glacier, too cold for anyone to live.Then the Glaicer melted and the sea was formed and a jungle lay in the west. Dinosaurs and other creaturs lived here. Then there was a massive flood, destroying everything in it's path. Now that jungle is the badlands, where lots of fossils wait to be uncovered." Sun said.
"Now, were going to camp in that canyon. But there is a challenge." Sun said.
Everybody listned at once.
"Tonight, you must gather your own food. You can work toghether to catch an elk or rabbit or try to catch a fish. When the sun is gone and it is dark, you must return t the canyon. Whoever has the most food will get to eat it and the losing team has to hand over all of their food except the smallest morsel. Go." Sun said. The campers raced away.

Ignitus proudly added his catch to the food pile.
That's the third rabbit I caught. Ignitus thought. Haku was standing nearby at the cliff, waiting for a fish to jump up. Sudnnely a fish flew threw the air and Haku tried to catch it. Haku's claws caught it but she coudn't hold on to it. The fish was huge and squirmed to get away. Haku inced closer and closer to the edge untill she fell over the cliff! Ignitus rushed to the cliff, but only found bubbles where Haku had fallen.
"HAKU!" Ignitus screamed. There was no response. Shadow, Volteer,Berry and Amber just got back from catching a elk and rushed to the scene.
"What's going on?" Amber asked.
"It's Haku. She fell into the water!" Ignitus scrreched. Just then the tide came in and huge waves crashed against the cliff. Then the cliff cloppsed and the dragons fell into the water! Ignitus saw Haku's limp body and he garbbed her neck. Ignitus tried to stay afloat but the waves washed over his head. Stregth drained out of Ignitus and he fainted.

Well, Actullay the secnery is based on a place I went on hoidays once. Here's the link of what this place is based on:Lake Pend Orille.
http://images.google.ca/images...start=0&ndsp=21

wow, who thought that ignitus would jump in water? I mean isn't he fire? cool!

He didn't jump in. The cliff colapsed so he FELL in the water.

I know, I just couldn't think of the word... sorry...

That's okay.

cool
i like it

Ignitus woke to hear the sound of crashing waves. He got up to find that he still held Haku's neck in his teeth. Half of Haku's long tail was still in the water. Ignitus dragged Haku away from the shore and climbed a largeslope. All around him he could see pine trees and small rocky cliffs. A boulder lay in a smalll clearing hiding the entrance to a cave. The trees seemed to be everywhere. Beyond the trees was a huge sea of sapphire coulored water.
Oh no, we must have landed on the Island! Ignitus thought. Just then Ignitus remembered last night. Ignitus ran along the shoreline, looking for his friends. Then he found them. Shadow was awake, dragging his still unconsous friends away from the shore.
Then he noticed Ignitus.
"Ignitus! I thought you were dead! Is Haku okay?" Shadow exclaimed.
"She's fine." Ignitus said as the other's woke up.
"Where are we?" Amber groaned. Shadow sunndenly looked thoughtful, as if the question just crossed his mind.
"When we fell in the sea, the current brought us to this chain of Islands." Ignitus explained.
"Well, we better find Haku and then find shelter." Berry said.
"I know where to find both of those. Follow me." Ignitus said.

me story called Icera: Part 1, Blaze
pease read
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