darkSpyro

is that a 'cool' cool or a 'jk' cool cuz its not that good.............


later on it will be though when sillver comes in.

ok............chapter 2 is better......


chapter 2: the desert.

scarlet finds a desert and goes through it to find silver...


she starts to fly and sees a grublin attacking the desert villiage.


she hits the grublin and he leaves..

villiager:why cant you breath fire.... you are a dragon arent you?
scarlet:i dont know... i lost the ability to breath fire long ago when i was young.
villiagerne of the dragon elders called volt [volteers brother] can teach you lighnitng you can find him at the floating islands.
scarlet:but they are back together as an island now right?
villager:not since ripto returned. now they are seperated.
scarlet:how can i get there?
villiager:the way there is blocked so go through the sky path... have the dragon elder, wing open it for you...........good luck.


scarlet goes to wing's castle and approches the door...


ok......at least its longer!!!

I'm back every one! so hi, any way i can tell this story is going to be mint!

mint?


anyway.......................

chapter 3 is coming and silver will come in whenever i get 5 fans i have 3 right now.

yeah, mint here in newcastle means really cool.
sorry if you don't under stand jordie slang.

...k?

can't wait for chapter 3!!!

chapter 3:wings castle.


she goes inside and she finds a door with 3 key holes and she guesses this is wings door...

but he comes and sys

[scarlet.....this is the portal to avalar. unfortunentley the other dragon elders have keys and i dont know where they have gone.]

[but do you have a key? the dragon villiagers said you could open up the sky path for me.]

[i have one key...you need 5 to go to ripto..... travel through avalar to find some keys if you get them all then you can fight ripto.]

[what about silver?]

[he is away in the island. go through avalar to find him]


she askes him about the elements and he gives her wind and fire.





she goes to volts castle...and it dissapers


scarlet: what was that?

cool, wright anotherone soon please.

click on the spoiler!

ok a new vote :appluad:


should i keep like this...or make it like wanderists....

read her new one its pretty good..


im not using her story im just thinking a bout makinga more chapters but shorter....note:story will not change ittl just have shorter chapters but more chapters.........its also like the 1st chapter i made with all the words put together...note again:im going to space them a little more if the fans vote yes.


im doing this cuz its kinda like a cooler way to write it.

i don't think it should change, it's yorse and i prefer talking to you than wanerist, coz your my friend and i havent talked to wanderist.
(is wanderist a nice guy?)

i meant to say hers........ and if i do this than [the talking will have this] instead of
example:like this.


it will be the same but shorter here is an example..


chapter 4: the vanishing castle 1/2


she finds it and finnaly gets to go inside.[volt?] a dragon comes out[you must be scarlet. are you here for the key?] [yes.] then he takes her into a room with a window. outside the window is a key hanging from a pole. [scarlet,to get the key you need to the key you need to hang onto the pole and get the key.] [why dont you just reach out and grab it?] [you need to learn this alone if your going to fight ripto.] [ cant i at least have some gems first? i cant fly right now.] [hurry before the castle moves again.] she goes out, reaches and right when the castle moves over a volcano.....she falls.


thats what it will be like if you and the other fans vote yes.......


and you and your other friends can read the alternative chapter remember if 5 people different ppl post on this than silver comes and we have 4 [including me] i already have a good idea of what ittl be like........

i vote yes X5

ok thanks.

no problem!

now we need 1 more person so tell ur friends.

im special number 5!!!!!!!!!!!

you already posted we need someone different. we have 4 different ppl we need 5.

70 POSTS =D

stop being off topic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


ok tell someone else to read this and post so i can have silver come in.

=P lol noobs like me

if ur gonna post then make it on topic so u dont get banned.


people who need to do this who post here:
[spyro fan 9] thats all


ok now we need one more post from someone who hasnt already posted here before saturday so i can make silver th dragon come if someone else doesnt then every one will have to wait longer for the story to get rlly good.

i'll go find bronze dragon he might like this story.

ok cool.........

ok, I've asked him. I hope he comes for you.

yea.....

no matter how much i beg him he doesn't seem to coment.

o well ill find someone to post...


lets just keep trying..

HE'S READING IT NOW!!!

well Silver i have read it i must say its an ok i understand it fine i think i'll enjoy it but i have one thing to say.

DO NOT KILL YOUR MAIN CHARACTER!!

cos from what i've learned from writing a story is if you kill your main character you'll get bad reviews.

just warning you.

I wont be killing him....


im not giving out any spoilers for this..


if someone didnt post before saturday i might of,..................................


but then silver dragon told u to read this and now the next chapter will have silver the dragon in it...

well then i'll have to read it then

ok...

well hope so cos i've got a feeling it will be good

I told you he would come!

yea...

can't wait for the next part of chater 4!

ittl come wen my pc stops being slow.....


I HATE VIRUSES!!!!!!

yeah, my friend at school, at his old school he had this guy he hated so he loged on his computer and made his own virus and it was english next so the virus was that every time he pressed a voule on his key board (a,e,i,o,u) his computer loged him off.

wow......


i couldnt live with that....

that must have been anoying though...

yea...


once my pc is fixed ill make pt 2

ok.

the computer makes me make this message longer.

Quote: Ice Dragon

ok.

the computer makes me make this message longer.

thats y i put dots like this.........

wow.......... its been so long since ive wrote a chapter....................
u guess ill make it now....


chapter 4:the vanishing castle 2/2

scarlet continues falling...volt tries to get out but the window is too small...
then silver comes and catches scarlet and takes her back through the window with the key. volt walks over to silver...[silver?] [yes...] [how did u get here?] [i bought a lockpick from money bags and when a gnorc was leaving i went through the door...] [what do you need them for...?] [i found another chest that looked like a gem case so i used the lockpicks and it had these...] he hold up some keys... scarlet sees them...and counts them altogether [thats 4 keys...........where is the last one.....?]
[we have 3... enough to search avalar.....] [volt?.......] volt looks at her...[i know what your going to ask so let me do this before you go to avalar with silver..]

cool! i wonder what is going to happen next...

u will see................................... soon ............. someday.............probably..................................

don't keep going after that "probably" coz i don't want to know what happens after that.

i want chapter 5.

k


YAY MY FANDOM HAS 100 POSTS...................................................


even though only 1 fan has commented recently........................... its still enough.............


and i told another friend i know to read this.................................


i better go to his house with this too... *pulls out another bat*