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Osiris face turned to white, he doesn’t say anything.
“Crysdell…..I am sorry….I didn’t know…..” Aurora said quietly
“He lies, he lies….” Pearl shouted
“PEARL!” Aurora roars, Pearl scared her strong voice.
“Don’t blame him, if you are not sure” She said and gnashes one's teeth
“But….” Pearl started but Aurora rise one nail as warning
“What…what happened, Crys?” Osiris found her voice again and his face was returned to normal
“It is..” Crysdell said but before he said anything else. Dagan sneak behind of Crys and hit him to head, Crysdell fainted in seconds
“Just in time” Dagan said and roars to trophy of victory
Aurora Run towards of him
“What you think you do?”
“I saved all of you” He said back,
“He is dangerous and we going back right now….I want ask few questions after we are home”
Aurora looks at Dagan and Then Crysdell
“You don’t harm him, OK?”
Dagan turns his head away and grins
“I do what I have to”

--OK, people. I add more but now i want opinions...
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