darkSpyro

i am not stopping this fanfic because the only person who does not like it is you spyro2008.

Quote: jimmy dragon

i am not stopping this fanfic because the only person who does not like it is you spyro2008.

I don't care. ;/
lolinternetseriousnessfrompeoplewhocan'treallysaywhattheysayishilaruous.

what happend what i miss and jimmy err in the middle story

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what do you mean by that deaver88.

Not need words, its enow. When you write more?

=good, need more.

hey, spyro2008, leave jimmy dragon be!!!!
you are being mean to him and jimmy does not deserve it!
his stories are cute and very imaginative....

jimmy, ignore him!!! keep writing!!!

Quote: Spyro2008

Quote: jimmy dragon

i am not stopping this fanfic because the only person who does not like it is you spyro2008.

I don't care. ;/
lolinternetseriousnessfrompeoplewhocan'treallysaywhattheysayishilaruous.

If you honestly hate it that much you don't have to read it! However, the story does need some struture! I could write a really good fanfic if I didn't hate typing so d*mn much!

Quote: dragonkina

hey, spyro2008, leave jimmy dragon be!!!!
you are being mean to him and jimmy does not deserve it!
his stories are cute and very imaginative....

jimmy, ignore him!!! keep writing!!!

lolwut.

there is loads of people who like this story so i am not closing the topic.

reading this topic it's not compulsory..so, if you don't like it....push off!!!
i like jimmy's stories...

Quote: dragonkina

reading this topic it's not compulsory..so, if you don't like it....push off!!!
i like jimmy's stories...

and i liek mudkipz

Quote: Spyro2008

Quote: jimmy dragon

i am not stopping this fanfic because the only person who does not like it is you spyro2008.

I don't care. ;/
lolinternetseriousnessfrompeoplewhocan'treallysaywhattheysayishilaruous.

How mature. [/sarcasm]

chapter 5
jimmy landed in a cave and saw cynder trying to save spyro.then some rocks started to fall on spyro.then one of the dragons who teamed up with maja attacked jimmy with fireballs.her name was jennifer.jimmy dodged her fireballs.the fireballs hit the rocks.the rocks smashed and spyro was free.then jimmy found a group of armadillos.he lead them to the gemstone cave.then jimmy went back to the dragon temple.spyro attacked jennifer.then jennifer flew off.maja flew into the dragon temple.then another dragon that teamed up with maja flew into the dragon temple.her name was jess.cynder attacked jess.then jess flew off.then jimmy found ember and bandit and led them to the gemstone cave.then luna ran into the gemstone cave.the last of the three dragons that teamed up with maja ran after luna.this dragon's name was crystal.she attacked luna with fireballs.luna dodged the fireballs and hit crystal with her claw.then crystal flew off.jimmy ran back into the dragon temple.jimmy attacked maja with his claw.maja dodged and flew off.

chapter 6 coming soon.

The storyline is a good idea, but I think that you need to put in more description, you have a good sense of imagination though, it is okay. By the way forget what Spyro2008 says, he is an ass.

Yeehaa, what samuel says

the dragon temple is the dragon temple from ANB and TEN.
the ice mountains are the mountains you see on spyro's lair.
the shadow realm is the same shadow realm from shadow legacy.
the gemstone cave looks like spyro's lair.

great chapters!
your story is great.write more plz!

well done jimmy!!! i really do enjoy your stories...
waiting for chapter 6 !!!

Quote: Samuel

The storyline is a good idea, but I think that you need to put in more description, you have a good sense of imagination though, it is okay. By the way forget what Spyro2008 says, he is an ass.

Oh that's nice.
Reported.

to Spyro2008: haven't you got anything better to do???

now, let us enjoy the topic!

chapter 6
spyro,cynder,jimmy and luna chased maja into a forest.but maja escaped.a volcano erupted.the forest was filled with lava.the four dragons flew up into the sky to escape the lava.almost getting burned in the process.maja attacked the four dragons.jimmy attacked maja with alot of fireballs.maja dodged the fireballs and attacked cynder.cynder dodged the attack.cynder used shadow fire to attack maja but maja dodged.maja hit spyro with an electric claw.luna attacked maja with her claw and it hit maja.maja flew into the ice mountain.the four dragons followed maja into the ice mountain.the ice mountain was maja's base.it was very cold inside the ice mountain.then the four dragons went to find maja.

chapter 7 coming soon.

Quote: Samuel

Your story is cool! Forget about Spyro2008, he is a d**k.

Reported again.

Quote: Spyro2008

Quote: jimmy dragon

if you have something mean to say about my fanfic keep it to yourself don't post it here now i can start the fanfic.

chapter 1
there were six eggs one of the six eggs was red with black spots. the thieves stole the six eggs. the master thief took the red egg with the black spots on it. the red egg with the black spots started hatching then a big powerful wave of energy came out of the egg. the thieves ran away leaving the eggs behind. spyro found the dragon eggs and the orange dragon "the aura dragon"said spyro then spyro took the dragon eggs and the orange dragon to dragon shores. they named the orange dragon jimmy the dragon all the dragons prepared for the sorcerer's next attack but he did not attack. jimmy met a dragon called maja she attacked jimmy and flew off. later jimmy found maja again and he attacked her until she flew off again. then she teamed up with four dragons to attack jimmy. after that jimmy never saw her again but if he ever saw her jimmy would get his revenge.

that is the end of chapter 1.

Dude... You suck at making story's, learn some story book lessons if you want to write... Oh gawd, please, no more. This story SUCKS.

Do you get a kick out of saying hurtful things! If you don't like it, keep it to yourself! If I see your name on one of jimmy's fanfics then I know you are just going to be insulting him! Try encoraging him for once!

well said SpyroCrazy....and Jimmy...I loved chapter 6!!!!
Roll on chapter 7 !!!!

chapter 7
Jimmy,spyro,cynder and luna went different ways. Cynder went up the middle path in the cave, there were lots of machines and pipes. Spyro went into the cave by flying. There was a big empty room. Luna went to the cave on the right and she found a teleporter. Jimmy went into the cave on the left. Suddenly cynder was attacked by jess. Cynder used shadow fire to defeat jess.Spyro gets attacked by jennifer and he uses fire fury to defeat her. At the same time luna was being attacked by crystal and she used fire breath to defeat crystal.Jimmy attacked maja using dark fury and defeated her. Maja,jess,crystal and jennifer escaped into the teleporter and jimmy,spyro,cynder and luna chased them.

Quote: SpyroCrazy

Quote: Spyro2008

Quote: jimmy dragon

if you have something mean to say about my fanfic keep it to yourself don't post it here now i can start the fanfic.

chapter 1
there were six eggs one of the six eggs was red with black spots. the thieves stole the six eggs. the master thief took the red egg with the black spots on it. the red egg with the black spots started hatching then a big powerful wave of energy came out of the egg. the thieves ran away leaving the eggs behind. spyro found the dragon eggs and the orange dragon "the aura dragon"said spyro then spyro took the dragon eggs and the orange dragon to dragon shores. they named the orange dragon jimmy the dragon all the dragons prepared for the sorcerer's next attack but he did not attack. jimmy met a dragon called maja she attacked jimmy and flew off. later jimmy found maja again and he attacked her until she flew off again. then she teamed up with four dragons to attack jimmy. after that jimmy never saw her again but if he ever saw her jimmy would get his revenge.

that is the end of chapter 1.

Dude... You suck at making story's, learn some story book lessons if you want to write... Oh gawd, please, no more. This story SUCKS.

Do you get a kick out of saying hurtful things! If you don't like it, keep it to yourself! If I see your name on one of jimmy's fanfics then I know you are just going to be insulting him! Try encoraging him for once!

Try staying out of my business.

That was pretty good jimmy dragon.

well done, jimmy....i loved this chapter!!
let' s see what's going to happen in chapter 8 !!!

Quote: Spyro2008

Quote: SpyroCrazy

Quote: Spyro2008

Dude... You suck at making story's, learn some story book lessons if you want to write... Oh gawd, please, no more. This story SUCKS.

Do you get a kick out of saying hurtful things! If you don't like it, keep it to yourself! If I see your name on one of jimmy's fanfics then I know you are just going to be insulting him! Try encoraging him for once!

Try staying out of my business.

Only if you stay out of jimmy's

chapter 8
Jimmy,spyro,cynder and luna found a machine called the calamity machine being powered by a crystal called the catastrophe crystal.The crystal that luna took from the cave was the second part of the catastrophe crystal.The flood in dragon shores was caused by the calamity machine.The volcano eruption was also caused by the calamity machine.Maja attacked luna with her claw and took luna's half of the crystal.Maja put the crystal in the calmity machine and put it on full power and lots of disasters happened all at once.Spyro used some combo powers on the calamity machine which smashed a bit of the calamity machine.Cynder used some more combo powers which smashed the calamity machine.Jimmy smashed the crystal with his tail and luna smashed what was left of the calamity machine.The calamity machine was destroyed but the disasters kept happening.

This is kind of interesting, I wonder how they are going to stop these disasters? Jimmy Dragon, you should have some conversation. Looking good

Yep, what he said

Mind taking your signature of me away Jimmy? ;P

great chapter!!! well done...

Quote: Spyro2008

Mind taking your signature of me away Jimmy? ;P

if you stop being mean to people i will take it out of my signature.

Quote: jimmy dragon

Quote: Spyro2008

Mind taking your signature of me away Jimmy? ;P

if you stop being mean to people i will take it out of my signature.

I'm not being mean, I'm only saying my opinion. ---Alright then, time to get dark52 to get that out of your signature.