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#51 Posted: 21:29:38 05/01/2009
ok. i'll wait.
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#52 Posted: 20:15:23 06/01/2009 | Topic Creator
Crysdell dodges first and second but last fireball hit his leg, pants fuse with muscle.
Pain was killing, hot pants still bubbles when Crysdell get up. “Hope that hurts” Pearl says sarcastically Crysdell watch Pearl and his eyes chance black, he raise his left hand and sling lightning Pearl chest. “Graazz” Pearl roared when it hit her “Hope that hurts” Crysdell say back and his eyes returned normal Blad and pearl stare at Crysdell “How you….” Blad ask “Like I said, this “lunch” fights back” “Pearl be carefully, he is tricky” “I can handle him” Pearl roars Crysdell take knife his pocket and was ready fight, burned leg was nothing. “Come then” Crysdell yells
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#53 Posted: 21:07:41 06/01/2009
keep writing
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#54 Posted: 21:16:52 06/01/2009 | Topic Creator
“You wish for it”
Pearl hit air her wings and wind blows sand Crysdell eyes “Where she goes” he mumbled and tries seeing Pearl, Crysdell get bad feeling “DIE” Crysdell dodges Pearl Tail, it was shape of trident. Pearl landed over Crysdell and stabs again, Crysdell dodges again but slower, leg pain burn on his head. Pearl try scratch Crysdell head but miss, Crysdell was too slow when Pearl punch her head and he flies a little and fall ground, second later Pearl looked at Crysdell “You lost “lunch”, now I eat you” “Not bee too hasty” Crysdell say and stab Pearl leg Pearl roars and stabs her tail again; Crysdell rolled ground and stab other leg. Crysdell knife was covered black blood and Blad beg them to stop Pearl rage was unseen but Crysdell keep rolling and avoiding her tail and fangs. Pearl playing Crysdell, when he rolls again pearl stomp her leg and Crysdell get struggled under it, Pearl rise her tail for last strike
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#55 Posted: 00:51:22 07/01/2009
great! keep writing!
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep. Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land. |
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#56 Posted: 20:33:26 07/01/2009 | Topic Creator
“Any last words” Pearl asks and snigger
“I am not done, yet” Crysdell say and stab his knife again, Pearl doesn’t even notice. “Yes you are” Pearl sling her tail, Crysdell move head a little and trident miss. Before Pearl rise tail again Crysdell crab tail and hit Pearl leg for electric shock. Pearl rise tail and Crysdell hang on it, moment later Pearl rise tail over her head and open mouth, same time she shakes tail. “Come on “lunch” it’s not hurt, I will swallow you one bite” “My life depends on it, so no thanks” “Then I eat you piece by piece” Pearl lowers her tail and was ready bite Crysdell legs, before it happens, Crysdell drop to Pearls mouth and block it. “At last” Pearl shut her mouth
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#57 Posted: 21:19:38 07/01/2009
write more!
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep. Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land. |
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#58 Posted: 21:55:25 07/01/2009 | Topic Creator
Crysdell poke his knife
“Listen Pearl, did you feel that?” Crysdell was jammed “Yes, what you do? Its hurts” She whine “What did you do to her” Blad ask and sit next to Pearl “If you even think killing or eat me, I poke my knife in your brains and we both going to die for sure” “D-dad……………help?” Pearl look at her father “Human, don’t kill my child, please I beg you don’t do it.” Blad moans Crysdell clothes was fester for Pearls spit “If you and your daughter promise…..” “Promise what? Please tell us” “Promise me you leave me alone or…..” He poked knife and make Pearl whine again “We, promise. You have my word” “Is Pearl same line?” “Pearl……..” Blad stare Pearl red eyes “I-i…………….I promise” “Well then, what you waiting for? Spit me out” Pearl spit Crysdell out and Crysdell shake spit out his face. He watches 2 dragons at moment and limp where medical kit was.
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#59 Posted: 22:07:00 07/01/2009
keep writing!
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#60 Posted: 22:12:02 07/01/2009 | Topic Creator
i will, but tomorrow. I go sleep soon.
Clock is 00.11am here and thursday
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#61 Posted: 22:14:25 07/01/2009
ok. i'll wait for more.
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#62 Posted: 13:59:28 08/01/2009 | Topic Creator
Crysdell sit and unpack medical kit. Blad come watch him, Crysdell don’t mind dragon stare and he found bottle painkillers and take 5 pills.
“What are those?” Blad ask and sniff a bottle “These? Painkillers” “What?” “These are medicines, stop pain but don’t heal wound, so I don’t feel pain” “Can I have some?” Pearl sit next to Crysdell “Why, did my knife hurt you bad?” “Not bad, but walking hurts” “I am sorry for that” Crysdell pour painkillers to Pearls mouth, She gulps them down “It’s not working” she complained “Medicine need little time” Crysdell take knife and cut hem out, Pearl and Blad watch closely. “I sorry for that” Pearl whine “What is done is done” “How you can talk with us? Where are you from? Who are you? How you can use electric and what you do here?” Blad ask fast
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#63 Posted: 14:13:52 08/01/2009 | Topic Creator
“Many questions you have, Blad” Crysdell rise knife
“Heat this bit and I tell you” Blad breath fire and knife bit chance red “Thanks” Crysdell say and begin cut his wound, hot knife cut flesh easily. “And?” Pearl ask “My name is Crysdell but you can call me Crys, I don’t have home, I don’t have idea how I can talk to you or how use lightning.” “How that is possible” “Don’t ask me, I don’t even believe that dragons exist before I met you and Pearl” “So, what is your story” Pearl say and lay down
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#64 Posted: 22:00:52 08/01/2009
cool. keep writing.
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep. Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land. |
deaver88 Platinum Sparx Gems: 6132 |
#65 Posted: 22:03:09 08/01/2009 | Topic Creator
“………. I am not going to tell you”
Crysdell removed burned skin “Can I eat that?” Pearl says and watches Crysdell hopefully Crysdell thrown skin and Pearl catch it “Crys, you taste yummy” Pearl lick lips “Don’t get any ideas” “Why you can’t tell us?” Blad interrupt Crysdell don’t even notice and swathe wounded leg. “Crysdell” “My past is only for me, and I don’t trust anybody anymore, so that’s why” “You don’t trust us?” Pearl ask “Last men that cheat me take my arm and more, so yeah I don’t” Crysdell pack medical kit and get up
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#66 Posted: 22:05:23 08/01/2009
great. write more.
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep. Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land. |
deaver88 Platinum Sparx Gems: 6132 |
#67 Posted: 22:10:34 08/01/2009 | Topic Creator
“Where are you going?”
Crysdell don’t answered and Blad blocked Crysdell way his tail “You not answered for my question” “You promise leave me alone, if you don’t it only proofs that I can’t trust anybody” “You can go after you answer my question” “I escape” “For who?” “Someone that wants kill me, can I go now?” Blad rise tail and let Crysdell go.
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#68 Posted: 22:22:01 08/01/2009 | Topic Creator
“We should follow him” Pearl looks at her father
“Why? He wants to be alone” “Yeah but he is wounded badly because of me, I can’t just left him like that” “You was one who tried eat him” “Yes……….but situation chanced. Dad, I go after him” Pearl runs after limping Crysdell “Wait I come too” Blad runs after Pearl
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#69 Posted: 00:04:13 09/01/2009
awsome. keep writing.
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep. Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land. |
deaver88 Platinum Sparx Gems: 6132 |
#70 Posted: 20:07:02 09/01/2009 | Topic Creator
Crysdell stop rest, Painkillers take pain away but he swat badly
“What’s wrong?” Pearl walk near Crysdell “I haven’t sleep 2 days, so I am little tired” “Then you should rest” Blad say Crysdell snigger and continue walking “What was that?” Blad ask to Pearl “I think he laughs” “Did I say something funny, Crys?” “Maybe” “What’s that?” “I fear if I fall asleep, I never wake up anymore” “You don’t still trust us” Pearl stare at Crys and he stop and look back “Yep” Crysdell continue and dragons followed him
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#71 Posted: 21:35:07 09/01/2009 | Topic Creator
Crysdell arrived to smaller cave, middle of cave was pedestal. Above pedestal was Purple crystal and it glows lightly
Crysdell sit down, sign and watch crystal. “Beautifully, isn’t it? Pearl lay down next to him and Blad other side. “Yes, it is” “Do you know what it is?” “Nope, no idea” Crysdell yawns, Dragons warm bodies make him feel drowsy, he take knife left hand but falls sleep second later. “He is kind of cute” Pearl lick Crysdell dirty hair “Pearl, he is human” “I know but still” Pearl cover Crysdell her wing “Pearl we soon return our world, we have to leave him.” “Why? He could like it! Its seems this world make him only bad memories” Dragons talking whole night same time Crysdell see nightmare under Pearl wing
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#72 Posted: 20:37:51 10/01/2009 | Topic Creator
Crysdell was nowhere, darkness surround him, them Uray popped middle of darkness
“Crys, save me!” she begging “I can’t” “Why? Crys save me, please” “You…..are…..already……..DEAD” Crysdell yells, wake up and rise knife. His yelling awakens Pearl and Blad, so Pearl rise her wing and see Crysdell red face and swat over his body. “Nightmare” Pearl asks and licks Crysdell face “Cut that out” Crysdell yells and push tongue away “Okay, Honey” Crysdell can’t believe his ears, Did Pearl call him Honey? Crysdell turn his head to watching Pearls face “What did you call me?” “Honey” Pearl smile “Pearl we already talk about this, no way” Blad interrupt Crysdell just stared Pearl and his mouth was still open when he says “Pearl, don’t understand me wrong. You are nice bu………” Pearl jump up and start to dance “Did you hear that dad, he likes me”
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#73 Posted: 21:53:28 10/01/2009 | Topic Creator
Pearl keep dancing and singing
“I have boyfriend, I have boyfriend…….” “What is her problem” Crysdell scratch head while asking “She is love in you” Blad sigh and shake his head “Love…..Me? But how?” “When you fight against her, she realise how skilled you are and when you wasn’t mad at her after battle” Blad whispered to Crysdell something “And she likes mysteries and you are one” “What you two talking about” Pearl comes back still hymning and lick Crysdell face again “I say stop that” “Honey, don’t be so mad” “Listen Pearl we have to talk about……” “Us, right?” “Yeah, This…..” “Oh, great I know you accept” “PEARL” “Honey?” “Don’t call me that, Listen, You are a dragon, I am human. Relation ships between us will not newer work. We are too different and I am not ready things like this. Pearl, I like you but with now we are just friends. You will later found dragon that feel same way like you now, you love each others and get child or two. Pearl, I am sorry but you have to accept this.” “H-ho-ne-y?” Pearl voice was weak and her eyes start gathering tears “Like, I told you. Even Crys seems to understand it” Blad covered crying Pearl his wings “Crys, thanks you for your help but we have to go now our world and you have to yours” “Yes, it’s my time to leave, is she okay?” “Yeah, he will recover, she need just time” “Good, bye then” Crysdell get up take knife and Medical kit his shoulder and leave “I-is he gone?” Pearl asks and cries a little “Yes, he leaves min ago” “I-I hoped that he would……..” Pearls tears growing bigger and her voice whine while talking. “Yes, but this is better for everyone, Pearl lets go home” “Yes, a home” Pearl drop tears but she get up and climb on pedestal, she inhale and touch Crystal her head, Crystal start shine Lightly and Pearl sucked Inside it and vanished nowhere, Crystal shines little time after Pearl vanished and returned back to Purple. Blad follow her, he climb pedestal when big bang shakes the cave. After big one Blad hears many smaller bangs and they coming closer, he quickly watch tunnel entrance, Crysdell runs back carrying metal staff with him and he was covered by blood but he wasn’t injured. “Escape, they coming” Crysdell yells and Blad hears smaller bangs again.
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#74 Posted: 22:08:47 10/01/2009
awsome! write more!
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#75 Posted: 22:14:10 10/01/2009 | Topic Creator
I wanna know what you think my writing.
Do you understant it? , is there something what you wanna know? Is there bad mistakes? E.T.C? Please tell.
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#76 Posted: 20:51:01 11/01/2009 | Topic Creator
“What is going on?”
“Just leave, now!” Blad touch crystal and he disappears too. Crysdell runs the pedestal when White dragon runs after him and bite his leg off. Crysdell screams for pain and he rise gun but dragon slaps it away. Dragon doesn’t stop that, it swipes Crys face and throw him up, he falls near Crystal. Crys take knife on his arm and was ready to hit, Soldiers coming in cave and aims Crysdell head. “I have better birthdays than this” He mumbled Dragon attack again, when it was near enough, Crys stab knife dragon skull but it broken by dragons’ hard skin. It presses white horns trough Crysdell chest and heart. Crys hears how hearts stops and blood stirring out. Before he faints he touch Purple crystal, its shines so hard at Soldiers start fire him, Dragon and Crystal. Crystal takes many damages and start crack, Dragon body takes worst damage, Soldiers try shooting Crysdell but missed him. Crysdell last memory was how Dragon falls to floor and how his and dragon body disappears. Soldiers looking at Pedestal, Crystal shines and begin pulsate faster and faster,……………..
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#77 Posted: 21:09:20 11/01/2009 | Topic Creator
Okay, Now my story really begins this was just intro. I know it isnt very good but i needed dramatic history.
And if i have any readers "Dont see anyone" Pleas tell me if you dont like this.
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