Shes not a mary sue anymore I'm pleased to say!
Good work.
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#51 Posted: 11:44:16 11/01/2009
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#52 Posted: 12:20:43 11/01/2009 | Topic Creator
^ Glad to here it Tango. =^ _ ^=
Ebony: So, can I learn the "secondary attack" now? Not yet, you need to master Ice first. Ebony: I don't have to pratice it for 4 days again do I? No you don't. That was only for shadow. You need to be quick with that attack. With this one, you take your time. Well, of course you still have to use it quickly.... Ebony: Okay. Attack me. And don't use that shadow breath. Its cheating and it will get you knowere Ebony: Okay.... Midnight: COME ON EBONY! YOU CAN DO IT!!! Ebony: *she shot Midnight a greatful glance. She turned to Spyro and breathed ice on him. Spyro doge really easily and head bashed Ebony. She felt alot of pain in her leg. She pushed herself up and faced Spyro. Spyro flew up into the air and breathed out ice. Ebony breath out ice too but Spyro's was much stronger. His ice cristles broke Ebony's and she almost got hit by them. Spyro landed on top of her. You need to do better then that if you to become master of ice. The heigher you go, the colder it gets so if you breath ice from above, it will be alot stronger. Keep this in mind and use it well. *he jumped of Ebony and gently breath ice on her* Ebony: *she began to shiver, but she wouldn't let her father win. She started to claw vainly at Spyro despret to get a grip on his wings. When she manige to have a ferm grip on Spyro's wing, she bit down hard on it. She was gonna frezze his wing so he will have problems flying but he did an amazing acrobatic leap into the air and Ebony lost her grip on her father. As soon as she landed, she blindly breathed out ice into the sky to slow down her dad, but it was too late. Same as last time, he landed on top of her. Ebony rolled over onto her stomic, like last time, she kicked with her back legs until Spyro fell rolling in the dirt. He stod up imideantly. I see, you are a dragon that has rare courige and quick thinking. You did well. Ebony: *she turn to a chearful Midnight* Midnight: *whitles* Now for the secondary attack. |
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#53 Posted: 12:27:45 11/01/2009
Good story, write more
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#54 Posted: 12:29:29 11/01/2009
Yay! Spyro isn't so mean now.
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#55 Posted: 16:58:35 11/01/2009
That story was brilliant! You have a good imagination! Very clever, you had my imagination running wild for a second. It's really cool.
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#56 Posted: 22:51:02 11/01/2009 | Topic Creator
^ Well they do say that left handed people have got a great imagination.
For the secondary attack, you need to spin around and around until the ice in you body flows out of you. Ebony: Okay. *she spins around but nothing happend* D: *sighs* You need to stand up on two legs. Now use your wings to keep yourself well balence. Spin around in the air, and of course you need to flap your wings to help you spin . Ebony: *she stands up on two legs, she flaps her wings and spins* I'm getting dizzy.... Keep on going. Now, relise the ice enegy within you. Flow it out of your body. Ebony: To late... *she stops spinning. She bumps into Midnight* I feel dizzy...... Midnight: >=[ Ebony..... When you stop feeling dizzy, do exatly what I told you. Ebony: Okay........... Still dizzy............. Okay it has stoped now. The trick is to spin slowly so you don't get dizzy really quickly. Ebony: Why didn't you say so? *spins around slowly* As soon as you start spinning, relise the ice enegy inside of you. Let it flow out of you body....... Away from the darkness.... Ebony: DAD!!! Just relise the ice enegy!!1 Ebony: Fine *she relises the ice enegy. Ice, snowflakes and cristles started moving around her body* Thats it, thats it! Ebony: *using her wings, she started to move around, suddently, the ice stopped moving around her* You need to pratice that move. Ebony: I need to pratice it for another 4 days? D: I don't have time for this! I need to train my swiftness and strength too! This will have to come later! Fine. Just show me if you can master it. Ebony: Okay. *she leaped at Spyro. Spyro stod his ground and did the "ice spin". Ebony stod in mid air. She aimed for his tail. If she would grab his tail, Spyro would do that cool leap again and she would takle him in the air. When she saw his tail, sticking out of the ice spin, she flew down and grabed it with her teath. But instead of leaping into the air, Spyro turned around and breathed out ice on her. She tried to hold on but the pain was too much for her. She let go of Spyro's tail. Spyro flew into the air, his great wings flaped hard, making Ebony nearly lossing her balence. Blindly, she leap into the air with her paws sticking out. She lashed them down Spyro's back. Spyro easily flew away from her, his wings making Ebony blind for a moment. She flew up towards Spyro and breathed out ice at him. He flew to the side and the ice was just behind him. Suddently, she thought of somthing, or maby the ansistors gave her an idea. She flew back to the ground an crouched low to the ground, she looked like she had surended. Spyro flew to the ground. Don't give up Ebony. You always have to stay strong. *Ebony just stod there, with a scared look on her face. Spyro gently sprang. When he was about 5cm away from her, she put all of her enegy into her legs and sprang. Her body hit Spyro's and she took him too the ground. She then whisperd* Ebony: Who said I was gonna give up? You need to do better then that if you want to make me surender. Ebony: D: |
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#57 Posted: 18:46:58 12/01/2009
That's awesome, kind of clever, Ebony and Spyro sort of have a love/hate relationship don't they? They're cool characters, but I think you should include Cynder and Darkness a little bit more. Still cool.
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#58 Posted: 18:55:34 12/01/2009
Cool.
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#59 Posted: 22:11:57 12/01/2009 | Topic Creator
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Its Midnight. There will be in it. But not at the moment.... *Spyro turned around onto his back and stod up. Ebony lost her grip on him and fell. She scrambled up to her feet but she wasn't quick enough. Spyro breathed out ice onto her and she frozed. She was too cold to move. Spyro wiped her with his tail. She fell to the ground* Ebony, thats enough now. You need to pratice your ice skills. You need to use it more, don't reliy on your claws and strength. Ebony: Oh I will do more then that! *she did the ice spin and moved towards Spyro. She bit him on the shoulder at the same time* *Spyro moved away, blood was gashing out from a wound on his leg. The one of the ice cristles must of went deep into his leg. Ebony stopped, a shoked look on her face* Ebony: Are you okay? Not only you need to pratice it, but you need to control it to! What did I tell you? You are nothing back darkness. Ebony: I'm sorry, I didn't mean too. Wait a minet, thats not so deep! Shorly and big strong dragon like you can handle it? Your right. Also, *he sprang at Ebony* it was a trick. Just like what you did to me. *Ebony breathed out ice on him. She wanted to end this quick. Her blood sparted on the ground. She new she was weakening. Spyro wasn't going soft on her at all. For a moment, she thought he was going to kill her. But she trusted Ignitus. Ebony bashed into him and bit down on his throat. She let go of it and she scraped her back legs on his stomic* Okay, thats enough, you have difeated me. Ebony: I'm not fulling for a trick like that! Its no trick. Ebony: ...... She got off of him, her muscles still tensted. She relaxed when Spyro didn't spring. You did well with your ice breath. Pratice it for one day then you will move on. Ebony: *She turned around, waiting for Midnight to whistle like he always does, but he wasn't there* Um...... dad.... He has gone to learn Shadow and his other element from Cynder. Ebony: Later on, when he is finished, can me and Midnight train together? Well.... Alright..... But I will be watching you.... If you so much as bite down on his throat, then I will want to know why. Ebony: *sighs* Alright.... You need to work on using it. You don't just use ice every now and then with your enemys. Its different to shadow breath and light breath, and *gulp* dark breath. You only use it at the right time. Ebony: Okay. :3 |
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#60 Posted: 08:43:37 14/01/2009 | Topic Creator
CHAPTER 9
*3 days had past since Ebony learned ice breath* You dragons are doing well! Ebony: . I just need to learn Light breath and then I will have alot off days to train. Bloodshadow will be gone berfore he can say "Dragons"!! Glad to hear it..... *he could hear the beating of wings and feet scraping across sand* Wait here. *he turned around and went outside to see whats going on* Who are you? *he snarled* .....?: You mean you don't know? Ebony: please don't be Flare or Bloodshadow!! Who is it Spyro? Dunno. But I bet there here to do somthing evil... *his lips went up in a snarl* Have you lost your tonge? Arn't you going to tell me who you are? *gives the evil but angry stare at the visitors* .....?: I am Flame. And this is Amber. Amber? Flame: Yes..... Havn't you heard? The ansistors gave Ember another chance so she went back to the living world. She is lucky that she still has her memory. Who is it? Ember-Amber- is back *turns his angry stare towards Amber* So, she is back is she? What do you want this time? Are you here to take me away from Spyro again? Amber: *bowls her head* Cynder, Spyro and Sparx, you have the right to be mad at me, but I have change. Thats why I have change my name to Amber. Every time I here the word "Ember" it makes me get reminded of what I have done. But Amber is no different.... Amber: I just wanted a slight change thats all. I'm with Flame now, I'm not going to try to kill Cynder and marry Spyro ever again. Why should we belive you? Cynder. Give her a chance. So Amber, and Flame, why are you here? Flame: We came to tell you what we have told you now. Also *steps aside to revile a small red dragon* His name is Firefrost Firefrost? That name is familer..... Flash and Nina, are perants, told as about it Sparx. I knew that. I was just testing ya brain.... So you named your son or daughter Flame: Son Son after the great red dragon who along time ago, used up all of his strength to look Malefor away? Amber: Yep. Flame: Can we see yours? Of cause. Right this way. *she points her tail towards Ebony and Midnight* Amber: There pritty dragons. Not to menton cute. But why is one of them purple? *Spyro and Cynder both exchange unsertent glances* Come over to the training room. We will talk about it there. Ebony, pratice your training with Midnight. Ebony: Okay. Sparx, look after them. ..... fine.... but if they get to bloodthristy, I'm not going to go inbetween there fight and stop them. They will claw me to shreads! D: *gives Ebony and uneasy glance. Then he walks away* BTW. Cynder, Spyro and Sparx are now 32 years old. |
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#61 Posted: 22:31:47 14/01/2009 | Topic Creator
Ebony: Come on Midnight. Lets show Dad how great we are!
Midnight: Okay! But i'm not going easy on you! Ebony: Same here. *Ebony leaped and started clawing softly on Midnight's face. Midnight rolled towards her, tengerling his paws with hers and throwing her of balence. Ebony breathed out ice before she fell, making Midnight halt for a few senconds. He stod on top of her, one paw on her neck and the other one on her chest. Ebony thrashed vainly, trying to fre herself, but Midnight still pinned her down* Midnight: Ever since dad tought me how to fight, I've become alot stronger. Ebony: I can see that. Now get off of me! Midnight: *he jumped off her* Ebony: *she stod up imideantly and leaped on Midnight* Midnight: *he was ready for it. He flew up into the air* *Ebony skided on the sand. Trying to carm herself, she stayed were she was. Midnight flew down to land ontop of her, but she used shadow to sink into the earth. Ebony stayed down there for a couple of seconds. Then she leaped out and pounced on Midnight. At the last minet, Midnight did the same trick he did before, tengerling his paws with hers to make her full over. He stod over her again* Midnight: Addmit it, I'm too strong for you. Ebony: *she breathed out dark breath on him* This is getting good. BTW, this is Firefrost |
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#62 Posted: 17:44:40 15/01/2009
It's good, but I don't like what you did with Ember. She never did anything wrong in my opinion.
(But then I havn't read your other story) |
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#63 Posted: 22:11:35 15/01/2009 | Topic Creator
^ She has done alot of bad things. I could tell you what happend in the other story. Or you can read it if you want.
//forum.darkspyro.net/spyro/viewposts.php?topic=10212 1# She almost killed Cynder by clawing at her throat because..... Cynder is Spyro's girlfriend (latter married).... Yep, its another one of those Cynder and Ember fights..... 2# Spyro wanted to attack Ember and teach her a lesson, not to attack Cynder again. He went out and fought Ember and manige to win by throwing her of a cliff. 3# Ember flew up imediently (sp?). She new a shortcut to the temple. When Spyro and the others were not looking after Cynder while she was ingerd, Ember flew in and said that she was going to kill her (somthing like that...) 4# Spyro and the others could hear somthing going on were Cynder was. They came just in time to see Ember and Cynder fighting. Ember beats Cynder by picking her up, gets gum powder and blows it up infront of her. (like a TMT) 5# Spyro wanted to kill Ember because of what she did. He drew in the light but Volteer was in the way. He was infront of the light so Spyro couldn't absorve it. 6# After telling Volteer to get out of the light, Spyro turns into light Spyro. But for some reason Ember was powerfuler and almost killed him. 7# The gurdiens then fought Ember. She new she couldn't beat for powerful dragons. Sudently, her mother came to her and gave her strength. She difeated the gurdiens. 8# Cynder woked up and transformed into . When she was just about to kill Ember, Spyro woked up and he was shoked to see Cynder like that. 9# Cynder flew away and Spyro followed her. Spyro manige to fine her and said all the positives about her. 10# When they came back, Ember was kicking Volteer. Spyro fought Ember again. When he was going to do a powerful blow to her chest, she grabed Cynder and put a nife towards her neck. 11# She said that if you come with her to her castle, she will free Cynder. But if Spyro dosn't, then she will kill her. Off course, Spyro said that she can take him away. Now Cynder and Sparx must go on an adventure to save Spyro Ember may be a marry-sue, but you soon find out why she was so powerful. Must I go on? |
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#64 Posted: 23:41:51 15/01/2009
these r really cool
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#65 Posted: 06:43:08 16/01/2009 | Topic Creator
Midnight: *he scrambled away* Ebony.... You could of killed me.... *he whisperd under his breath*
Ebony: Sorry. I just got mad when you were showing off. Midnight: I will show you whos showing off! I will show you who is powerfuler! Ebony: Do it. Midnight: *he leaped into the air. He aimed for Ebony's head* *Ebony doged it by jumping to the right. But Midnight turned around and his claw got court in her wing. He swang around and jumped on Ebony's back. Ebony rolled over onto her back to get Midnight of balence. She thought of doing the cool leap that Spyro did. She leaped into the air and twisted and turned. But Midnight still held on. He tangled his tail with her wings so she couldn't fly. She fell to the ground. She stod up to see Midnight towering over her* Ebony: How did you get that strong? *growls* Midnight: Spyro tought me alot of technics. That tengerling one always works. I praticed them for a long time and now I'm a master of them! Ebony: But what about your elements? Midnight: Oh... er.... I've forgot about them.... Ebony: Its alright. Can you tell dad to teach me thoughs moves. Midnight: *he scraped his paws uneasily on the ground* He said that he is never going to teach you how to fight because.... You know what.... Ebony: UGH!!! I HATE HIM!!! Midnight: Why don't you train with mother? She might not have the same technics. But have you seen her fight? Her moves are great! Ebony: I guess so.... then after that, I'm learning light breath! Then, I'm gonna have one more fight with you. Then, I'm going to fight Bloodshadow. Then Flare! Then I will get dad to trust me. Spyro gets really anoying sometimes..... |
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#66 Posted: 07:08:11 16/01/2009
Cool and Spyro can get Annoying
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#67 Posted: 09:37:17 16/01/2009 | Topic Creator
Ebony: *picks up the "how to breath Light breath" book and reads it* To learn how to do Light breath, you need to be 100% good. There should be no darkness in your heart. Other whys, if you try this out, you will die. ....... Well thats just great.... *chucks book away* I guess the only thing I can do is let mum teach me how to fight... *walkes over to Cynder*
Ebony? What is it? Ebony: Sorry to interrupt. But can you teach me how to fight? Don't you go thinking that Cynder is going to do everything you tell her too. Ebony: *she nips Spyro on the leg. She ignord his yell and looked up at Cynder* *looks at Spyro angryly* Of course Ebony Who knows what she will do? Cynder, just ignore her. Bloodshadow is comming to take her soon. She needs to be ready. Don't give me that look. I know you hate her but your just gotta live with it. Ebony, right this way. *walks over to the trainning room* Ebony: *Follows* Amber & Flame: ....... Now, attack me. Ebony: Just like that? Yep. Ebony: Okay. *she crawled around her for a couple of seconds. Then she sprang* *she jumped into the air. Ebony landed with a big thud and Cynder stod on top of her. She whisperd in her ear* Try again. This time, try somthing I wouldn't expect. *she walked off of her and padded to the other side of the training room* Attack me! Ebony: *she sprang imideantly. This time, her front legs were her. She aimed for a blow on the shoulder. She ended up only clawing at her chest. Cynder pushed her away easily* Your eyes are pretraying were you want to strike. Don't use your eyes for this. Use your claws. Thats all you need. Ebony: *she leaped again. This time, she moved her paws and aimed them at her shoulder. But Cynder flapped her wings, making her lose her balence and she fell onto the soft earth* Don't just concentrate on pinning me down. Have your front claws ready for the blow, but have your back legs concentrate on what the enemy is doing. Do the same thing to your brain! Ebony: *she spat dust out of her mouth and replide "Okay". She scrambled to the other side. She leaped again at her. This time her back legs were not so far behind her* *she stod up on two legs* *Ebony stoped in mid air and then she droped. She ran towards her, her claws were ready to slash at her shoulder and pinn her down. Cynder was ready too. She liffted her tail and span it around. Ebony jumped over it and jumped on her. She pinned her down* That was great. Now its time for me to attack you. |
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#68 Posted: 04:01:56 17/01/2009 | Topic Creator
Ebony: *she padded away until she was on the other side of the temle*
*she leaped at Ebony* *Ebony stack her claws into the ground. Ebony tried to stay up when Cynder bashed into her, but she couldn't carry the weight and she fell to her side* Don't try and suprise me by standing up when I'm on top of you. It will only make your feet tired. Do somthing better this time. * Ebony *she stick her claws into the ground again. She was going to "out strength her. And then attack her. But Cynder stilled bolwed her over easily* Don't try to out do my strength. Also, don't rely on your strength. If you are swift enough to avoide me, then avoide me! Also, if you do want to stand still, don't try to out do my strength. Look at my size. Think were my legs are going to go! *she sprang at Ebony again* Ebony: *she stod up on two legs and pushed her away with her front paw* That was good. Now lets see how you can deal with this one. |
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#69 Posted: 23:43:02 17/01/2009 | Topic Creator
CHAPTER 10
*they fought until Midnight. Cynder couldn't teach Ebony anymore fighting moves. Ebony was tired. She couldn't even lift up her own head. Sorry. That one was short because I'm running out of ideas... |
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#70 Posted: 14:00:48 18/01/2009
Quote: Cynder_543
Ummmm....Midnight goes missing! |
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#71 Posted: 14:02:50 18/01/2009
Quote: Tango
UMMMM NO! |
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#72 Posted: 14:05:31 18/01/2009
Quote: DARK CINDER
Why not? |
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#73 Posted: 22:06:30 18/01/2009 | Topic Creator
Quote: Tango
Good idea. Then Ebony spends the rest of her time looking for him. Bloodshadow takes her away to fight. |
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#74 Posted: 01:25:24 19/01/2009
Yeah Good One
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#75 Posted: 04:03:56 19/01/2009 | Topic Creator
^ Thanks Tango for the idea! And thank you DarkCynder_27, or were you talking to Tango?
Ebony: Mum, I'm tired..... Thanks for teaching me how to fight.... No prob Ebony. You did well. Ebony: Glad to hear it. *he bages into the room. His eyes wide with horror* Spyro, what is it? Its Midnight, I can't find him anywere! WHAT!?!? MIDNIGHT IS MISSING! Its all my fult! As soon as Flame and Amber left, I tought Midnight how to use his tail to attack. I turned around for a few seconds, and when I turned back around, he was missing! Its all my fult! I shouldn't of late my eyes go off of him! *bangs head to floor* Spyro, its not your fult. Maby he went out to the nearby lake to get a drink. We should go and looks for him, just in case. Ebony: *she was already outside* What are you waiting for? It will be sunrise by the time you get out here! Lets go already! Spyro, you know that Ebony likes her brother. She would rather die then kill him. Lets go. *she walks out of the temple* *Follows* Come on Sparx! I'm comming! |
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#76 Posted: 04:05:09 19/01/2009
Mah talking 2 j00
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#77 Posted: 04:34:30 19/01/2009 | Topic Creator
^ O RLY? Lol, it sounded like you were talking to Tango.... Oh well, thanks.
*they flew to a near by lake, but Midnight wasn't there* Were could he be? Its not like him to wounder of on his own! *takes a quick glance at Ebony* I don't know were he is.... Ebony: This is all your fult! *she blurted the words at Spyro* If you would of kepted your lazy eyes on him, he wouldn't of disiperd and we wouldn't be out here right now looking for him! *she growled at Spyro* *his tail twich. But his voice was carm and there was no sign of a challenge in it* I know, I have done my best, you gotta belive me.... Ebony, don't blame your farther. He did his best. Yelling at him will not do anything. Ebony: *sigh* Alright. *her front claws twiched to show Spyro that she is still mad at him. All of the anger she had inside of her, all the time when she wanted to claw at his throat, came out in those words. They were really harsh, but she has been waiting to do that for a long time* *he was smiling, trying to show her that he wasn't angry at all, but his face still looked irritated and angry* |
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#78 Posted: 16:07:34 19/01/2009
Very good! You could become a writer!
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#79 Posted: 21:20:12 19/01/2009 | Topic Creator
^ Thanks! And um.... I want to work with animals...
Were havn't we checked? We havn't checked alot of places. Theres Dragon city, it would be good to see Terrador, Cyril and Volteer again. There is also Ignitus's place. He could tell you were Midnight is. Ebony: Lets go to Ignitus then! The faster we get there, the quicker we get to see Midnight! Look, why don't you guys go, while I wait here! Fine, stay here by yourself. Who knows, some ape might jump at you any second and there will be no one to save you. Er..... I take that back, I'm comming with you.... *A couple of apes came out of the bushes* *he turned around. He pinned one of the apes down. He hit the other one with his tail* Don't you ever come here again! You got that? *the ape gave a tinny nod and ran away. The other ape was about to pin Spyro down when he rearlised it is 3 agains 1. He slowly backed away into the bushes* Well that was easy.... |
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#80 Posted: 11:54:43 22/01/2009 | Topic Creator
CHAPTER 11
I think we should go and see the elders first, we havn't seen them in a long time. Ebony: We havn't enough time for that! We got to look for Midnight! It would be nice to pay a short viset... Ebony: But what about Midnight? We should go to Ignitus! He is the Chronicler so he should know were he is! She does have a point you know. Taking a viset to the elders will wast our time. It is best if we go to Ignitus first. *sigh* Fine..... But Ebony...... Do you even CARE about the elders? Ebony: DAD!!! Spyro! Thats enough! Stop yelling at Ebony! She cares for Midnight and she wants him home! She dosn't hate the elders! She hasn't even seen them yet, but she hates them. I guess thats too bad.... Ebony: OKAY, THATS IT! *she breathed dark breath at Spyro* Say another word and the next one will be at your throat! Okay Ebony, thats enough now. Come on Spyro, were going. ...... Comming..... *giggles* |
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#81 Posted: 22:16:21 22/01/2009 | Topic Creator
*they arive at Ignitus's place*
Ebony: Are you there? Ignitus? Tell me were Midnight has gone! EBONY! Don't say things like that! Ebony: Sorry..... You want to know were Midnight is? Ebony: YES! Very well, right this way. *walks slowly* Ebony: Ignitus! Is great to see you again! Its great to see YOU my young friend. Ebony: Okay, Ignitus, please tell me were Midnight is. Okay, *grabs Midnight's book* He has gone somewere far away to train. But why? He wanted to be a little be more powerful. Also, he was afraid off what Bloodshadow will do to Ebony. Ebony: Well this is making it all worst! I'm wasting my training time doing this! If you want to find him, you have to go past Malefor's lair, keep on flying. You should see this smalll cave, go inside and Midnight should be there. Oh, wait, there is another reason why Midnight went there, he had a nightmare last night, he thought that was Bloodshadow, comming to kill him. Thats also why he left. Ebony: Then lets get going already! Ebony, doing this will take up the rest of your "training days". Are you sure you want to do this? Ebony: I don't care anymore. I just want Midnight here. Okay then, lets go. Come on Sparx. ....... |
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#82 Posted: 02:41:28 23/01/2009 | Topic Creator
Yep, looks like this story has now died..... *puts finger on the "Close topic" button*
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#83 Posted: 03:00:16 23/01/2009
NNNNNNNNNNNNNNNUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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#84 Posted: 03:18:33 23/01/2009 | Topic Creator
^ I was about to do it, but looks like you have saved the story! DarkCynder_27, you are a HERO! *gives medal and cookie*
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#85 Posted: 03:42:57 23/01/2009
look at my avi YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYA I LOVE COOKIE *eats cookie*
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#86 Posted: 03:59:55 23/01/2009 | Topic Creator
You avatar is funny. YAY!
Were was Malefor's lair again? I think it was this way..... Or maby it was over there..... Ebony: Great, were lost. Just great. *something was whispering in her ear* ....?: Ebony, I know the way. Follow my voice. Ebony?: Do I no you? ....?: Just follow my voice if you want to know were Midnight is! Ebony: Okay.... ....?: I will just call out your name until you get on the right track. Then your perants will lead the rest of the way. Ebony: Yep. Mum, dad, I know were Malefor's lair is! I will get you to the right path, then you can take over! Okay, I hope you do know were it is. Ebony: Follow me! .....?: Ebony, Ebony, Ebony. Ebony: *Follows voice* |
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#87 Posted: 16:36:39 23/01/2009
Iwould have saved it, but I was in bed at the time.
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#88 Posted: 18:06:29 23/01/2009
Cool story please continue
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#89 Posted: 23:40:39 23/01/2009
glad you didn't press the 'close' button. It's cool!!!
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#90 Posted: 00:35:32 24/01/2009 | Topic Creator
...?: Okay, your perants will to the rest.
Ebony: I hope so.... Hey, wait! Don't go! What if they don't know were it is!? ....?: Then you will have to lead the way don't you. Ebony: What? I don't know were this place is! ....?: Don't worry, Spyro and Cynder know were the place is. *dispeares* Ebony: *sigh* Wait, I think I know this place! I know were Malefor's lair is! You do? Well looks like your gonna have to lead then. I've got know clue were it is.... I knew were it is. I just didn't wan't to be at the front.... SPARX!!! ........ Its over there *points paw to a place filled with flowers and rainbows* Er..... Why over there? Malefor dosn't like rainbows..... Or does he? *horror music comes on* ????? Ebony: Sorry, I couldn't resist. I HAD to put on horror music.... Lets go to that place then. *they fly to the place were the flowers and rainbows are* This is "floating islands" right? It is alot more beautiful then it was before..... Isn't that good? Yep. Come on. |
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#91 Posted: 02:47:24 24/01/2009
Awesome story, its getting better every post
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#92 Posted: 10:31:18 24/01/2009
*singing to Madagascar* I like to yay, this storys cool
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#93 Posted: 11:23:47 24/01/2009 | Topic Creator
We just need need to get past that place. It seems miles away....
Ebony: Lets go faster then! Ebony, Ignitus said that it will take up the rest of your "Trainning days" to get there and back. You said you didn't care. Ebony: I know. But surely I should have ONE day left if we fly faster! I'm going as fast as I can! Ebony: Sorry. Ebon- Ebony: AND DON'T SAY ANYTHING ABOUT ME!!! Okay okay okay. Yeash, I only said your name and you are at me already.... Ebony: Oh shut up. Don't fight please. We need to find Midnight. No offence but Cynder, you seem to act like you are the boss. You want to say that again? *lifts up tail blade* Er.... I think I'd rather past...... |
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#94 Posted: 11:32:13 24/01/2009
LOL
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#95 Posted: 06:53:50 25/01/2009 | Topic Creator
CHAPTER 11
*5 and a half days has past and Ebony and the others are finerly at Malefor's lair* That longer then I expected..... Ebony: Lets keep going! Okay, keep a look out for a hole okay? It should be around here somewere. I need a drink, I'm going over to that lake over there. I'm comming too. *follows Spyro* Ebony: Mother, your not going with them now arn't you? Off course not. We have to look for a small whole. It might take us a long time to find it..... Ebony: |
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#96 Posted: 22:27:26 25/01/2009 | Topic Creator
I might rush it a little bit.... Sorry peoples, its just that I want to get up to the bit when Ebony fights Bloodshadow.....
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#97 Posted: 22:59:15 25/01/2009
Thats ok, i want to see the fighting part too.
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#98 Posted: 23:33:26 25/01/2009 | Topic Creator
*5 more days has past and Ebony. Spyro, Sparx and Cynder finerly found the small hole that lead to Midnight*
Midnight: I have to get away from everything...... That dream..... I can't take it! Midnight! We have finerly found you! *licks* Midnight: *looks away* Why have you come? To take you back. You idiot! Why did you ran away!? We spent 11 days finding you! And Ebony has now waisted her 22 days to train! Its all because of- Midnight: I'm sorry. Its just that..... I felt like I HAD to run away. I couldn't stay at the Temple.... I'm really sorry. No training for you Midnight. You waisted Ebony's time, made us worrried sick, and now we have to spend 11 days flying back to the Temple! Midnight: I have trained a little bit here..... Well your not trainning anymore. For the past 32 days.... Midnight: Okay..... Ebony: L-lets go, before all of my time is waisted.... *flys away* You better says sorry to Ebony when we get back to the temple. Your lucky I didn't change your name to "Stupidnose". Come on, and don't to this again. Midnight: WELL YELLING AT ME AND CALLING ME NAMES IS NOT GOING TO DO ANYTHING IS IT!?!?! Just get out! *flys away* Tsk tsk. Don't get ****y Midnight and Spyro. Midnight & BE QUIET SPARX! Er....I'm going to go over there.... *flys towards Ebony* |
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#99 Posted: 08:30:58 26/01/2009
Sparx is a dufous I LIKE better than
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#100 Posted: 09:03:40 26/01/2009 | Topic Creator
*12 days has past since Cynder and the others found Midnight*
It took 22 days to get there and back..... Now thats just- *faints* *turns to look at Midnight. He opens his mouth to say somthing, but Cynder covers his mouth with her tail* Leave it to me. Midnight, say sorry to Ebony. Midnight: Sorry..... Ebony: Yeah well, please don't do it again. You have just waisted the rest of my trainning time! Midnight: Don't yell at me anymore other whys I will just leave again! Yelling at me is only going to cause more strest! I said I'm sorry! I can't do more then that!!!!!! Carm down Midnight. Sorry about the yelling. Midnight: *sigh* Its alright I guess... Go to bed now Midnight. Ebony, you should go to bed too. Your going to fight Bloodshadow in the morning. You need all the strength you can get. Ebony: Thanks mum *licks* *Ebony can't sleep. She bounced out of bed and walked over till she was standing on the ege of the temple. She looked at the hills. She woundered if she can beat Bloodshadow. He looked tough too beat. But Ebony was ready* Ebony: "If you can hear me Bloodshadow, I have somthing to say. Get ready for tomarow. I'm not going to go easy on you. I might even kill you. So just get ready!" She yelled. ....?: Is that so? Then why don't we fight now? *grabs Ebony and takes her away* Ebony: LET GO OF ME!!! HELP!!! MUM!! DAD!!! |
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