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#51 Posted: 21:45:05 09/12/2008 | Topic Creator
it's a pichu? oooohhhh ok didn't know that.....
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#52 Posted: 22:24:20 09/12/2008 | Topic Creator
the doors closed behind them. storm said" so it comes down to me....... luna i was trying to get you for a while...you have caused so many problems for me...i've sent everything at oyu....nothing works. i a dragon of nighhtmares the world you were born into you shall die in!" rosada attacked Constelation and sunny. while luna began to pounce on Storm.
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#53 Posted: 22:43:30 09/12/2008
write more! yeah, its called a pichu, its the pre-evolved form of pikachu
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#54 Posted: 23:40:24 12/12/2008 | Topic Creator
anoucment time! this weekend i will finish this and the next chapter!
second....i will realse the chapter names! starting from next chaper 2: story of Arrow 3: rescue 4: Blizzard 5: back to the begining 6: spyro and cynder's story 7: Rosada's revenge 8: wars 9: Arrow's power 10: hero and villain 11: lost 12: savoir and the last one will give something away so spoiler tags! immortal
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#55 Posted: 00:12:27 13/12/2008
ok, cool
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#56 Posted: 00:22:28 13/12/2008 | Topic Creator
Storm was ready" may we fight in in cold desires!" he said. luna found herself in that horrible dream world she died in before." you think this will scare me? stop me!" said luna. she glowed pink and sent a flurry of power outward." many have been trying to prevent your birth! have your parents evr told you of the circumstances? if you don't you might be shocked!" he bit her on the leg. no poisen this time. luna knew she must control this world and fast! she dreamt of a place once in a far off memeory. it was a tower covered in clouds. there were there. storm thenwent to attack then he had a stunned look on his face and he smiled." another day luna!" he dispeared." are you ok!!" said arrow looking down. " he put quite a bit of sonar dust in you!!! what? never mind!" and soon they where out of the dream.
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#57 Posted: 00:23:58 13/12/2008
keep writing!
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#58 Posted: 00:29:04 13/12/2008 | Topic Creator
Luna heard rosada say" i'll be back! you will regret what you did to my master!!" she left as well. constleation ran over to luna" you ok? yes i am!" luna just wanted to go back to her sweet nighta! when they got back nighta siad" i have a cousin now!!!" they rushed inside and there was the first dragon protecter to be born...fireflight...
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#59 Posted: 00:42:42 13/12/2008
i love it! write more!
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#60 Posted: 00:43:27 13/12/2008 | Topic Creator
Quote: Cynder09
of coarse you do!!!!!!!!!!!! fireflight made her grand appearence!
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#61 Posted: 00:44:37 13/12/2008
Fireflight: its the best part so far! keep writing!
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#62 Posted: 00:45:09 13/12/2008 | Topic Creator
luna: well you are just a baby!!!!!!!!
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#63 Posted: 00:48:00 13/12/2008
F: i don't care! its still the best part so far! i'll eventually grow up and be.............well no spoilers!
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#64 Posted: 00:48:57 13/12/2008 | Topic Creator
Luna: we all know what happens! well i know what happens in the next part! no spoilers!
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#65 Posted: 00:51:25 13/12/2008
F: well i know what happedns kinda because of my story, or at least i know everything about..........well.......myself, idk what will happen in the story
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#66 Posted: 00:53:27 13/12/2008 | Topic Creator
you'll see
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#67 Posted: 00:59:05 13/12/2008 | Topic Creator
look new avatar!
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#68 Posted: 01:00:12 13/12/2008
pikachu! he looks like hes walking to me! come here pikachu! come to me!
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#69 Posted: 01:13:51 13/12/2008 | Topic Creator
fireflight was sleeping and nighta siad" the baby is sooo cute mommy!" luna knew this is the protector of the realms. that defeating her will be a difficuly no more almost immpossible. luna walked up to fireflight smiled and fireflight glowed white" what are you doing!" shouted drake and saphira.Luna smiled and then said" for me to know and her to find out."luna gave her one of the most powerful things ever...invinceiblity...but she also gave her something else....gift of angels.
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#70 Posted: 01:20:28 13/12/2008 | Topic Creator
gift of angels: limitless power and protection from the angels
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#71 Posted: 01:23:14 13/12/2008
cool! write more!
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#72 Posted: 01:24:33 13/12/2008 | Topic Creator
and who are the angels? next chapter! will begin tommorrow!
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#73 Posted: 01:25:27 13/12/2008
ok, i'll wait for more! this is great!
Fireflight: i love it!
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#74 Posted: 01:27:38 13/12/2008 | Topic Creator
yeah yeah! i can't wait to tell about the angels....that might be my fav... well fireflight you are young and kicking in here!
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#75 Posted: 01:35:38 13/12/2008
F: yep! thats how i do things! i kick but! no one can beat me!
not this again! Fireflight your strong, but your not invincible! F: yes i am!
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#76 Posted: 15:28:47 13/12/2008 | Topic Creator
luna: actualy she is.....well thanks to me!
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#77 Posted: 15:32:38 13/12/2008 | Topic Creator
Chapter 2: story of arrow
*one year later* little nighta ran around the temple trying not to blow things up. after all she will learn about eclipse powers soon. Fireflight was crying again. wanting entertainment. arrow was watching them." arrow! arrow! tell us a story!" nighta holding fireflight walked over to arrow.luna walked in. nothing has happened in the last year...she wanted to learn more about arrow." yes how about a story.....about you arrow." arrow mist went away a little and hse looked like a white dragon." this is my story...listen closly." fireflight stopped crying.
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#78 Posted: 15:59:01 13/12/2008 | Topic Creator
yeah chapter two!!! party!
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#79 Posted: 21:09:01 13/12/2008 | Topic Creator
" i was born with a special mark on my head....many centries ago. i was special..i could read minds and transport. i was named arrow but many called angel. for my horns were like glass and my wings feathery. Angel means 'special one' in the old language."what does arrow mean then?" asked nighta" ohh arrow means fighter but anyway i had a a half black and half white moon on my head and back.it was the mark of the angel. you luna gave that to fireflight but it can't be seen." luna looked confused with that. half white half black..that means eclipse." oh luna in the old language mean' forever angel' or in what i think it is' daughter of angels and eclipse'
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#80 Posted: 21:11:55 13/12/2008
cool! write more!
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#81 Posted: 21:19:12 13/12/2008 | Topic Creator
" when i was young everyone was mystefied by my powers. all of this was new to them. sometimes i disappeared, or could move objects without touching them. i couldn't master an element however so many hated me so i had no friends. soon i had dreams that told me to leave me and send myself into a dream state so everything could be explained to me. when i sent myslef into dreams someone named the chronicular explained to me that i was an angel, an unstoppalble force, he said he was the first angel and i was the second one. he said angels could not die, our minds controled everything, and nothing could stop us.
promise the good part will come soon!
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#82 Posted: 21:36:15 13/12/2008
write more!
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#83 Posted: 21:41:17 13/12/2008 | Topic Creator
" well i learned everything i could. the power of the cloud palace. where only angels could attack. soon many angels came. they were formed by elements. i was formed by mist. soon i left the others for good and was and is the queen of angels." arrow looked at the rest." luna you are special indeed, being the elclipse and born on the moon la angel or ' the moon of the great angles' has gifted you with most powerful abiltities than other angels...did you wonder why you are so strong? maybe cynder and spyro had to do with it. but you are an angel luna...it is time you learned your powers."
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#84 Posted: 21:47:41 13/12/2008 | Topic Creator
there is only one more section left of this chapter!
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#85 Posted: 21:58:43 13/12/2008
ok, its still good though, write more!
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#86 Posted: 22:54:57 13/12/2008 | Topic Creator
Luna was confused. an angel...no way" i can't be...i can't read minds or...." arrow looked at her" you were able to go into dream state and transport yourself. and didn't you read that apes mind before? you just need to practice." luna was thrilled" however you are not immortal yet..... some angels never live forever." luna looked down but practice sounds good. she might be able to reveal her true form soon.
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#87 Posted: 23:10:25 13/12/2008
cool! write more!
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#88 Posted: 23:14:47 13/12/2008 | Topic Creator
Luna: whoo i am an angel!!!
not really
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#89 Posted: 23:20:14 13/12/2008 | Topic Creator
instead of "rescue" it will be "lessons"
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#90 Posted: 23:33:26 13/12/2008 | Topic Creator
Chapter 3: lessons
Arrow was sitting down on the castle walkway as luna stood ready for her first lesson. mind reading." well you first need to well let your mind go blank almost.luna made her mind go blank though she thought about nighta. Then she heard nighta's thoughts." i hope mommy get home soon! ahhh fireflight is eating my lunch!" luna laughed but then said suddenly" i have to go"! and rushed back home.
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#91 Posted: 23:38:09 13/12/2008 | Topic Creator
no more tonight!
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#92 Posted: 23:46:46 13/12/2008
awwwwwww!!! oh well, write more tomorrow!
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#93 Posted: 23:48:03 13/12/2008 | Topic Creator
yeah tommorrow i will write more!
Luna:i am an angel!!! Again no you are not!!
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#94 Posted: 23:50:17 13/12/2008 | Topic Creator
yeah almost 3 pages! and sooo soon!
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#95 Posted: 23:54:42 13/12/2008
great story sis!
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#96 Posted: 23:55:36 13/12/2008
yep.
Fireflight: you better write more tomorrow! or i'll come to your house and make you write more! shes only joking! F: am i?!
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#97 Posted: 23:58:03 13/12/2008 | Topic Creator
Luna: well i have much more"school " to go threw.......maybe i will feel like you guys soon
*groan* school
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#98 Posted: 00:28:37 14/12/2008
F: well as long as you write more i'll be happy
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#99 Posted: 00:32:24 14/12/2008 | Topic Creator
my danceing pika is happy! man that is never boring!!!!
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#100 Posted: 00:35:01 14/12/2008 | Topic Creator
almost 3 pages.....
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