darkSpyro

to bad my sttory isnt as populer as the others

Great story!

thanks

NP
*post is too short*

Spyros head was spinning. all the wird things so soon. Even when malafor was around it havent been so soon that spyro had to save the univers again. But now evrything happened to go so fast. The Volteer standing in frount of a glasher, knowing something was in it, the dream, the voice in the wind, and now the real dragon. He could feel the ice meal on his back as they head higher and higher, and they get ferther and ferther from the icy wastland. spyro fely hevyer then befor, but tried to stay up. In the corner of his eye, he saw a purple and black wing. befor he could see the whole wing to see if his sight could relly be true, they arived at the temple. He got the dragon off of him and layed it down in the grass. He didnt bother to look at the dragon, dreading of what he might see. He ran inside alone with sparx.
"whats worng spyro?" cynder asked.
spyro stoped and walked over to Cynder and huged her with his neak.
"cant talk now, have to fing Ignitus."
" Why?" cynder asked
" im relly worried about another dragon."
"awwww. why thank you spyro! I -"
spyro cut her off " another dragon that is not you" he says and runs off to Ignitus.
Cynder stays glued to the floor, dumstruck.
" who is the dragon!?" She says in a dark tone, but had a slit hint of fear that if it was another female, then she would probally take spyro away. Her stumic droped at the thout of that happining. She felt like she had been punched in the stumic.
Spyro charged into the chamber, panting.
"what is wrong young dragon?" Ignitus ask
" we-" he stopes to pant "-found-" he stopes again "- another-"
"another what?" Ignitus says egerly
" DRAGON!" spyro yells." another purple dragon!!!!"
"thats not possible spyro!" Ignitus says " there is only two "
" but-"spyro starts
"no spyro! you are the second and Malafor was the first! I think the sun has you-" Ignitus starts
"NO!!! there relly is another dragon!! i can show you!!!"spyro says.
" fine, lead me to the dragon." Ignitus says in a huf.
'GRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!where is that stupid dragon spyro!!!tell me!!' Cynder says in her head as she waches them from a dark corner, where she blends in perfically.
" its at the blacany!!" spyro yells at ignitus.
" fine, fine ,fine. im coming."Ignitus says
A evil smile spread across her face as she sneeks out of the room and head to the blacony. To get rid of the dragon, once and for all.
*************to be contenued******************

MUA HA HA HA!!! i need another character:/ enyone got one i could use?

Ah...cynder is jealous. I'm not surprised...

cynder is alwas a evil little dragon
MUA HA HA!!!
but cynder dosnt know what shes going to see sooooo......
Deanna: WE NEED MORE CARACTERS!!!
WHO!?!?!
Deanna: i dont know!!!

Gridion: Ooh, ooh! Pick me! i haven't been written about in awhile, since my master was not able to be on.
It's not my fault!

why!!!!!!????*sniffles* i have a bad gut felling....
Deanna:*sighes* is that the suasid sadness of gust sadness
gust sadness
Deanna: YOUR HIERED GRIDION!!!
XP

Gridion: Sweet! I'm gonna be famous...again!
So, when does he start?

*shruggs* im trying to fing your story so i can get the detales on what he lookes like
Deanna: i dont think hes going to be famouse..
why?
Deanna: barly enyone comes and reads it.
.........aaaaaaaaa.............
Angules: stupid humman
you know i do have most of your anger and fighter in me.
Angules:aaaaa...........

Gridion: I'm pretending i didn't hear that...exchange of information.
MUHAHAHA!! I luv big words...*is smacked by big word* AH! It burns...

lol, nice chapt.

Quote: SpyroKing

Gridion: I'm pretending i didn't hear that...exchange of information.
MUHAHAHA!! I luv big words...*is smacked by big word* AH! It burns...

Quote: IamCynder

lol, nice chapt.

thanks

Cynder gose outside and lookes around, looking for the dragon. She sees a figure in the shadows. 'now is my chance!' Cynder said to herself. She creaps forword intill she can see the dragons breath in the cold shadows. The dragon moves and Cynder stands up strat. The mystary dragon mons and Cynder tryes to see it. The purple dagon comes out into the light and streches. 'another purple dragon!' Cynder stares in suprise at the dragon. Cynder finally got over the shock.
" had a nice nap you worthless dragon!" she spats at the dragon
" aaaaaaa.........well.......aaaaaaaaaaa" the dragon starts
" ok.here are the rules of the temple. And you MUST obey them!" Cynder says
" You know what!? i have no time for this!" the dragon spats
Cynder was outraged. She spred her claws and sliced the dragon acrous the face. The purple dragon slid across the ground, and whent over the ege of the Temples balcany. The dragon hangs on with both paws, claws digging into the ege.Cynder aproches the hanging dragon. Her claws out, redy to strick the helpless chrecher hanging. She brings down her paw and scraches the other dragons paw deeply. The dragon rores in pain as the paw falls helplessly to the side, blood driping down its side and down into the forest below. Cynder rises her paw again to diliver the final blow.
****************to be continued**************

*screams* Don't do it Cynder!

MUA HA HA!!!!
this is the part where Ignitus thinks spyro should go in a mentall hospitle jk, jk

wow cynder has a short temper.
Awsome though!!!

dosent cynder take evry chance she gets?
but thanks!

As Cynders claws were lifted, the blood of the purple dragon standed her claws. The blood driped onto the face of her victom below. Cynder bings down her claws and sliced the paw that held the dragon. The dragon fell and a evil smile spred across her face as she walked away, knowing she had saved evrything she loved.
as the dragon fell, it tryed to fly. Its wings spread and tryed to flap but couldnt. The dragon fainted since it lost to much blood. Out of nowere, a red dragon folowed the falling purple dragon. The red dragon took the fanted dragon and flew to its cave. the red dragon gentally put the other dragon in its bed and flew away. later, the dragon returned and to its suprise, the other dragon was laying up.
" you need your rest" the red dragon wispered
" who......who are you?" the other dragon asked
" I am Gridion. But that dosnt matter, you need some rest." he said
the purple dragon nodded and layed back down. Gridion put a cloth on the dragons wounds and flew out again. This time, he returned with food. He made a small fire by the purple dragon, but far enof to not set fire to the leaves. He put the food in the fire. Gridion sat there, looking at the sleepng dragon on the other side of the fire. how calmly it sleep. The dragon awok with a grown. Gridion wakled over and put his paw on the dragon's shoulder.
" go back to sleep....."he said
" why?"the dragon asked
" you need it"
" but i feel fine" the dragon said
" fine. I made diner." he said as he walked over to the food.
" hope you have a nice diner Gridion. Ill go now."
" no. the food is for you."
"i can hunt on my own. But thank you."
" no. Stay here and eat."he said " what is your name?" he asked as he took the food from the fire.
" my name is Deanna" she said
" nice to meet you" Gridion said with a smile as he put the food by Deannas head.
She got sat up but Gridion gentally put her down again.
" youll get a infechon if you eat with your paws" he said
" why did you rescue me?"Deanna asked
"i couldnt let a dragon die" he said.
Deanna ate most of the food and pushed the rest to Gridion with her nuzzle.
" you must eat to" she said
Gridion nodded and took the rest.
" why dont you stay with thouse other dragons?" she asked
"hmmm....i never tout of that"he said
"i need to go back." she said.
" tomorrow at dawn i will take you." he said as he finished.
Deanna nodded and layed back down. She evenchally whent to sleep.

Gridion: Awwww...she used me. Thanx!!!
Yes, thanx for using him. I love that one, that was good!

its longer than the last one
Deanna: your going to be in the story for a wile gridion
*noddes* your not just some side character in the story youll have the same inportance as deanna....
Deanna: i smell a love square

Gridion: Woohoo! Now im a star in TWO stories! Which reminds me, master u didn't write my story in awhile. Why?
Weeeell...u see it's like this. I need to finish Mole-Yair, which i may today, then i'll continue yours. Ok?
Gridion: *grumbles* I guess so...

Deanna: its ok*huggs Gridion*
*sighes* wha!!* screms* THE STORY WILL FINISH!!!??*whaits*

Yes. It should today...the beginning of the end.
Gridion: Ooh. I like that name!

Deanna: OOOOOOOOOO i CANT wait!!!
NETHER CAN I!!

A battle. An epilogue. What could possibly go wrong?
Gridion: You get writer's block again?
Thanx Gridion. That really helps...
Gridion: Always here to serve!

Deanna: you never do get wrighters block do you?
sometimes
Deanna: MUA hA HA ! think of the next chapter!!!
i cant
Deanna: why?
i have wrighters block...

Oh dang it.

what???i have some of the story.....i need some coke*gose to get coke*

Alright. Hurry back!

*comes back* I GOT COKE!

I got cream soda! (i wish)
Gridion: *laps water*

Deanna: meh*drinks CSF*

Leafwind: *drinks sprite* I don't like writers block
*Also drinks sprite and starts to leave room*
Leafwind: Hey, were are you going?
To get a hammer
Leafwind:Why?
To break the writers block.

Deanna: YOU CANT DO THAT!!! you have to use a jack hammer

you're right, hammers too small. But i know what might work.
*Leaves and comes back with a wrecking ball*
Leafwind: Is that necessary?
Yep

Deanna: its alwas necessary
gust for wighters block
Deanna: do you have it to DK565?

I got ideas for my story, but sometimes i get stumped on how to string the ideas.

i know i had truble with how to fit Gridion in the story...

Awesome!

thanks

please make more. this one sent shivers down my spine.

was that in a good way or a bad way

chapter 2 got me on the edge of my chair egar to read what happens

ok this is giving me the creeps

wow i never thoue it would be that grat
but you relly whant me to right the next chapter?

DONT DO IT CYNDER!!! do not engage a mystery foe unless you have a reason! its done nothing wrong... yet

keep reding the last on was confusing

The next morning Deanna got up and walked to a small puddle by the entrence of the cave. She looked at herself. She heard a voice.It was Gridions.
"good morning" he said as he streched
" time to take me back to the temple thing" deanna said
Gridion looked at Deanna with suprise
" you WHANT to go back there!?" Grindion asked
"well.."Denna begain
" nevermind...ill take you back now...wail its still dark"he said as he spread his wings.he looked over and deanna and saw that she wasnt trying.
"whats wrong?" he asked
" i cant fly!" Deanna yelled
" fine....get on my back" he said.
Deanna climed onto his back and he took of into the sky, back to the temple. And waiting, is Cynder.

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it was short i know