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OMG!! it sould have been cynder turns into a dragonfly

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OMG!! it sould have been cynder turns into a dragonfly

Lol

Ember: Ha You SUCK Cynder!
Spyer: You'll pay for that! *uses earth breath and blasts Ember 7653875617843569784365745796478567483653788888784678956487567896578463578649875687465478567845684658746587-ish miles into the ground, right through the earths core and out through China and into the orbit*

lOl

this story is too funny

GO SPYER!!!!!! BTW, I'm on Cynder, Sparx and Spyer's side.

LOL LOL LOL LOL more LOLs cool got idea *BING* but its your story SpyroCrazy

Thankies

YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!!!DISTROY EMBER AND HER CHILD!!!!

Ah About the child...

lol!!! sparx looks good!!

Not great! It's good, though weird.

Human Cynder: You IDIOT Spyro!
Dragon Sparx: Ahh, I don't wanna be a lump!
Spyer: You'll pay for that Spyro! *uses Electric on Ember*
Ember: *Gets paralyzed*
O.O
Spyer: *flies off with Ember*
Get off her! Get off her you BRAT!
Spyer: *holds claws to Ember's neck*
Dragon Sparx: *Flies up to Spyer* Er how do I breathe fire?
Human Cynder: HEY! Don't leave me here! I can't fly!
You wouldn't kill Ember...
Spyer: I wouldn't. *looks down at a herd of Death Hounds* But they would...*drops Ember*
NO! *flies down to try and catch Ember*
Human Cynder: Hey I was meant to do that!
Spyer: Suppose we need to stay on foot
Dragon Sparx: Foot? I don't have feet!
Spyer: *Sighs* You do now!
*they fly down onto the ice*
Dragon Sparx: I can't help thinking that Ember had that spell book...
Spyer: O.O Sh-She did!
Human Cynder: DAMN! Am I gonna stay like this forever!
Spyer: Wait. *flies over the forest* They aren't there, they've probably been demolished, but there isn't any blood!
Dragon Sparx: SPYER!!! LOOK OUT!!!
and Ember: *fly fastly and grab Spyer round the neck and start wresteling Spyer down to the forest*
Spyer:*from down in the forest* YOU RATBAGS! *screams*
Human Cynder: O.O *looks on the ice, there is some left over black dust that made Cynder evil* There's only one option...
Dragon Sparx: What?
Human Cynder: I turn evil, forget everything about me, I'll go down and kill Spyro and Ember...hopefully Spyer will get away.....
Dragon Sparx: But...
Human Cynder: Farewell...Sparx.......

O.e
Deanna: CYNDER!!!DONT LET SPYER KILL EMBER AND HER 2ND CHILD!!!!
CYNDER YOU MUST SO YOU CAN!!!!

Thank you to everyone who has liked my story!

np
im still working on mine

(spacefiller)

what????

POST MORE darn it very good story line.

Ok Ok!

brill!


love it!


fantasticated


three words that describe your story.

carry on please!

nooo cynder!!! don't turn evil!!!

TURN EVIL AND DISTROY THAT ***!

TURN EVIL BUT DON'T KILL SPYRO CYNDER DON'T KILL SPYRO!!!!!

Cynder and Spyro have been through so much together. Cynder wouldn't kill Spyro. Shes not like that.

if i was cynder i would kill them both! i mean, he left HER to go to a pink *** that has nothing better to do then to stalk spyro!

*pants* Whew. I just caught up. I love it! I don't know who i want to win...i'm torn between liking spyro, and loving cynder (no offense cynder1)

?????????
non tooken
i happen to like a gamecharacter myslef

Yes, i know.

XP i hope you dont think im cheting

no, of course not!

Very Good! I really like it! Plz Continue!

GO SPYER!!! WHOOOOOOO!!!!!

Plz c-o-n-t-i-n-u-e-!-!-!

Spyer: LET ME GO!!! PLEASE
Ember: Oh we won't kill you...but they would *looks at DeathHounds*
Spyer: You're missing one point...If they kill me, they'll kill you too...
I can fight them
Spyer: So can I
Ember: Not if we hold you down
Spyer: O.O
..............................................

Human Cynder: Good bye *sprinkles dust on her face*
Dragon Sparx: NO CYNDER!!!
Cynder: *starts to grow longer and bigger and slimmer, six horns grow on top of her long and thin face, she gets paws with three claws on them and a huge lolling tail, a familier coal black* (normal voice) RUN SPARX! FLY! WARN SPYER!!!
Dragon Sparx: *gulps and flies upwards then zooms into the inky black forest* SPYER!!! EVIL CYNDER!!! RUN!!!
Spyer: What!?
Hm...huh?
*flies down and bites Ember's neck and throws her to a tree* You can't stop me Spyro
NO!!! Cy-Ember!!!
Spyer: ARGH!!!
Dragon Sparx: RUN!!! COME ON SPYER!!!
*raises paw about to slash Spyro...............then sinks and has tears in her eyes* (still evil) Why can't I do it! I want to kill him!!! I need to!
Because you're weak! You couldn't kill the first time and you never will be able to kill me!
You defeated me but you can't st........*howls in pain then falls to the floor with a huge slash on her back*
EMBER!!! You saved me!
Spyer: YOU RATS!!! *leaps at Ember*
*slowly begins to shrink to her old self* Go Spyer...please...
Spyer: I'm not leaving you here! SPARX!!!
Dragon Sparx: O.O
Ember: Oh no you don't! *grabs Cynder and flies off with her*
*earth breaths Sparx and Spyer into a tree*
Spyer: Owww *tries to get up but is too weak* Don't push your luck, I'll be back to get you! Just you wait and see...............

more more more ! xD ! PS i love TOP GEAR !

wow i love this story!!!! i can't wait to see whta happens next!

me too xD

I really want u to continue!

please don't have a writer's block!!!

YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY I'm happy

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more more more ! xD ! PS i love TOP GEAR !

I LOVE TOP GEAR SOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH!!!!! ITS REALLY FUNNY!!!!!!!

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YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY I'm happy

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more more more ! xD ! PS i love TOP GEAR !

I LOVE TOP GEAR SOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH!!!!! ITS REALLY FUNNY!!!!!!!

it is !!! sundays was awesome xD

Ember: It's time to end this, lets kill her
*looks at Cynder crupled on the floor in chains* Um....Cy-Ember
Ember: What?
Nothing! I need your help *whispers in Ember's ear*
Ember: But....What about me?
I love you....

Ember: NO IF YOU LOVE ME YOU WON'T DESERT ME!!!!!!!!!!
Don't get your hopes up...He said he loved me then what do ya know, he's cleared off....
Ember: You shut up! You are a rat and I am gonna make your life a living hell
It already is
She's nearly ready, and I must prepare
Who's nearly ready? What are you preparing for?
You're familier with DarkSpyro aren't you
O.O
Ember:
*a huge purple beam blasts in a caged room behind him*
Remember, I love you Ember, you know how to get me back *whispering to Ember and Cynder can't hear* the Chronicler *steps back*
*The beam fires through Spyro burning through him, Spyro HOWLS in pain then the beam stops and he stands there, black gas lingering round him, black skin, and glowing white eyes*
*hisses* RAWR!!!

^ Really terrible DarkSpyro smily I made

I like the story, but not the portrayal of Ember Spyro and Cynder. Spyro is a jackass, Cynder is stupidly star struck over Spyro, and Ember is a Bee-otch. Really, I still don't get why ppl hate her so much. She was only around for one game and she was really sweet, if a bit pushy.

MABY IF CYNDER KISSES HIM THEN HE'LL DESERT EMBEr
WOOT

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YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY I'm happy

Quote: SpyroGirlCazy

more more more ! xD ! PS i love TOP GEAR !

I LOVE TOP GEAR SOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH!!!!! ITS REALLY FUNNY!!!!!!!

it is !!! sundays was awesome xD

I can only watch the beginning of Top Gear on Sunday because we watch the Strictly Come Dancing Results Show so I watch it repeated on Wednesday, but I watch it ALL THE TIME on this channel on Freeveiw called Dave, It's on Dave LOADS!

Thanks for all your nice comments

MAKE ANOTHER COMIC

why are you NOT writeing more???

MORE!!!