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#51 Posted: 21:39:25 16/11/2008
wow! awsome! this is cool! write more!
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep. Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land. |
Dark Lord Platinum Sparx Gems: 7365 |
#52 Posted: 21:48:02 16/11/2008
Chapter 6 War
Dark soldiers,there were many but they were getting killed fast.I jumped and slashed but it blocked,then we dodged.then we jumped to the top of the tower i slashed left,and he slashed right then i slashed down and up left,left,left,right,up,down,right,right,down,down. then it used its power of its heart to destroy me.But thats not the end...
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Like fallen snow, I lay on the ground and wait for my turn to fade away, no matter how unique I seem. It's my gift to you... A true sacrifice... |
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#53 Posted: 21:54:40 16/11/2008
wow! really cool!
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep. Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land. |
Unknown1 Blue Sparx Gems: 520 |
#54 Posted: 22:02:41 16/11/2008
Introduction
Its my turn now!I'm a creature,i'm not human or dragon or alien.My father and mother died because of...anyway now i live alone.And i'll probably always be alone.I have no freinds but i have no enemies,i haven't forgotten anything about my biginning.It still gives me nightmares still!Anyway,here is my beginning...
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"Don't let me go." ♥ZarineNas♥ |
Unknown1 Blue Sparx Gems: 520 |
#55 Posted: 22:17:03 16/11/2008
Chapter 1 Unknown's Beginning
I was at home with my mom and dad.Until there was a rumbling "Dad?What is that?" "Stay close to me son!" i looked out my window,i saw something Dark and sinister.Then our house came crashing down,i ran out "Mom!Dad!" i began crying then i looked up,there he was.I brought out my fathers sword and i stabbed him.
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"Don't let me go." ♥ZarineNas♥ |
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#56 Posted: 22:19:08 16/11/2008
"Pathetic." I said,but then i had a thought and i said "Come with me." and that was the last time we saw that place.
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Like fallen snow, I lay on the ground and wait for my turn to fade away, no matter how unique I seem. It's my gift to you... A true sacrifice... |
SpyroKing Diamond Sparx Gems: 8960 |
#57 Posted: 22:23:02 16/11/2008
Ooh...keep writing!
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Cynder09 Diamond Sparx Gems: 9878 |
#58 Posted: 22:26:15 16/11/2008
write more!
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep. Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land. |
Unknown1 Blue Sparx Gems: 520 |
#59 Posted: 22:36:23 16/11/2008
Chapter 2 Unseen
I was going down the long corridors with a blind fold,then there was a Arua i never seen.I sliced behind me,then there was one on top.i cut his head off.But it was only made out of Light energy,he dissapeared and then i stabbed a dragon behind me.My own sword almost got me,but i wasn't afraid.Then there was someone with a whip behind me,i spun around and blocked his stab.He had a sword.It was childs play,i had a blind fold,but i could still fight,this one i was fighting didn't have a blindfold.i sliced at his arm.He had a scratch. "You are very good while wearing a blindfold.The same as not wearing one." i took off my blindfold "Thank you Doom" i turned around and as i was walking away "But you should always be on your guard!" Doom yelled,i jumped over his stab and my sword was at his throat.I turned around and as i'm walking away i spinned and stabbed Doom.He turned into Light energy then dissapeared,the i heard clapping "You are good!Are you ready to take the mission Dark Lord has for us?" "Yes." i answered back...
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"Don't let me go." ♥ZarineNas♥ |
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#60 Posted: 22:37:53 16/11/2008
Whoa, keep going.....
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Unknown1 Blue Sparx Gems: 520 |
#61 Posted: 22:40:21 16/11/2008
Chapter 3 I don't need anybody
"Yes did you wanted me Dark Lord?"
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"Don't let me go." ♥ZarineNas♥ |
SpyroKing Diamond Sparx Gems: 8960 |
#62 Posted: 22:40:53 16/11/2008
Short, but it makes you wonder...
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#63 Posted: 22:47:14 16/11/2008
I didn't turn or even look at him "Yes,this mission is both assinating and bringing me." Then i looked into the the pool. "I want you to assinate Clark,he is the new guard of ZarineNas,then after that.I want you to get the Orb of Life at Jungle Ruins"
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Like fallen snow, I lay on the ground and wait for my turn to fade away, no matter how unique I seem. It's my gift to you... A true sacrifice... |
Unknown1 Blue Sparx Gems: 520 |
#64 Posted: 22:48:30 16/11/2008
"Yes sir.Come on Doom."
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"Don't let me go." ♥ZarineNas♥ |
Dark Lord Platinum Sparx Gems: 7365 |
#65 Posted: 22:51:30 16/11/2008
"One more thing" I looked if there was anyone here "Don't let ZarineNas know your there.If you do,your mission will fail,and i will make sure you don't live."
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Like fallen snow, I lay on the ground and wait for my turn to fade away, no matter how unique I seem. It's my gift to you... A true sacrifice... |
Unknown1 Blue Sparx Gems: 520 |
#66 Posted: 23:06:03 16/11/2008
Then me and Doom walked away,into the dragon universe,and into Spyro's world "The Jungle Ruins first." Doom looked at me "Why?" "I feel like something or someone is calling me." we began using our powers to fly to the Jungle Ruins,we landed "Doom,stay out here." "Hrmmm.You get that action." I went inside i saw a trap.I slided under the flamethrowers,i jumped over some spikes.And i fought some Grass Elements.I saw the Orb of Life,i was going to get it until..."Where am i?" i looked around then i saw my fear,i started walking backwards but them {I'm not afraid of anything!} I jumped on it,it grabbed me.I stabbed its hand,then it tried to eat my but i shhot energy at it.I fell on the floor,then it tried stepping on me,i started pushing his feet i won and i pushed them away and shot energy at it.i started blocking its claw attacks then i jumped on top of its head and stabbed it in the eyes.then i stabbed it in the head.But it was still alive,i jumped andstabbed it in the chest.Everything went white...I woke up "What was that?" i grabbed the Orb and got out of there.Me & Doom flied over to the Dragon Temple.Clark was outside,so it was easy. "Dark Lord,here you are.And i killed him." But it was far from over...
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"Don't let me go." ♥ZarineNas♥ |
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#67 Posted: 20:27:35 18/11/2008
The story is going good so far.
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Like fallen snow, I lay on the ground and wait for my turn to fade away, no matter how unique I seem. It's my gift to you... A true sacrifice... |
Unknown1 Blue Sparx Gems: 520 |
#68 Posted: 21:05:58 18/11/2008
Chapter 4 Visions
I was asleep,but what i saw was more then a dream...I looked everywhere,Spyro & Cynder fight in this war.There was also all the Nintendo & Sega characters.But there was someone i didn't reconise,he wore a jack with short sleeves and a hood,his pants covered his legs,but sometimes he turned into something that had a scales on his arm.He had a arm for a sword,and in this form.I could only see his mouth,in his normal form.I couldn't see his eyes or his mouth,and i also saw someone with a Light Blue cloak and hood.It was entirely covered and you couldn't see one inch of it. "What have you done to ZarineNas!" he said slashing down then left. "I cured her from a virus that could have killed her in seconds!" ??? said blocking.The character with the Light Blue cloak wasn't Blacklight,so who was it?When it said something,nothing came out of its mouth,yet i still understanded him? "She is dead because of you!Now the Dark Lord can't be defeated with our powers!" "Thats because you don't use the power of your heart!" ??? said whil slashing right,then left. "I didn't want you to fight me!I'm sorry for anything i've done to you..." he said blocking his attacks.Then it stopped and just standed there.The one with the gray jacked and hood,killed him. "Fear...fear...fear...fear..." I kept hearing this in my mind.I woke up,i didn't know if it was the vision of the future,a dream,or a nightmare...a fear...
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"Don't let me go." ♥ZarineNas♥ |
Unknown1 Blue Sparx Gems: 520 |
#69 Posted: 21:33:25 18/11/2008
Does anyone want me to write more?
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"Don't let me go." ♥ZarineNas♥ |
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#70 Posted: 21:34:11 18/11/2008
Yeah, yeah! Do it!
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#71 Posted: 21:51:44 18/11/2008
Chapter 5 Beyond
I was in a world,a universe that i didn't know.Then i saw them,the team that was supposed save ZarineNas.He pulled out his wooden sword. "Hurry up,bring that plane!" he said.His watch had a communicator so he can talk to the person on the plane.then The X appeared behind me. "Another battle is it?2 of you?Its hard for me to fight 1 of you" I brought out my sword Starsoul "This time,you've gone too far" my power was biginning to go beyond legendary... "Finnaly!" I said i saw the guy with the Light Blue coat fighting X. {He was in my vision!} I thought.But also the other one in my vision was looking at him.But then "No!Not now!No!" he turned into the thing with scales and a sowrd as his arm.He slashed behind him,he slashed right then felt.He ducked from a slash,he then blocked with his now claw and he slashed at another one,the plane came..."What took you so long?" i said. "Roxas,your impatient" i looked at her.I frowned, (this is not the Roxas on KH2,this is a character i made up called Roxas) i turned back into myself. "I don't want this to keep happening" i said looking at the girl we saved...I looked up. "ZarineNas is in her human form,but her true form is dragon.She doesn't want to be discovered." i stabbed behind me,then i jumped over the other X.He blocked his back from my stab.I then used a power that turned this X into nothing.Now he is dead...
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"Don't let me go." ♥ZarineNas♥ |
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#72 Posted: 21:54:48 18/11/2008
Anyone want more of the story?
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Like fallen snow, I lay on the ground and wait for my turn to fade away, no matter how unique I seem. It's my gift to you... A true sacrifice... |
SpyroKing Diamond Sparx Gems: 8960 |
#73 Posted: 21:56:14 18/11/2008
Heck yeah!
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#74 Posted: 01:15:36 19/11/2008
I forgot about chapter 7 of Dark Lord's journey,now i forgot what to write.
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Like fallen snow, I lay on the ground and wait for my turn to fade away, no matter how unique I seem. It's my gift to you... A true sacrifice... |
Unknown1 Blue Sparx Gems: 520 |
#75 Posted: 01:53:54 19/11/2008
After this chapter we're going to let you join!You can change ZarineNas's history!But it will be after this chapter and the introduction!
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"Don't let me go." ♥ZarineNas♥ |
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#76 Posted: 01:55:11 19/11/2008
more!
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep. Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land. |
Dark Lord Platinum Sparx Gems: 7365 |
#77 Posted: 01:59:28 19/11/2008
Chapter 7 Only me
It was my turn,All of the Darkness came and made a war.I killed Roxas.
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Like fallen snow, I lay on the ground and wait for my turn to fade away, no matter how unique I seem. It's my gift to you... A true sacrifice... |
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#78 Posted: 02:23:10 19/11/2008 | Topic Creator
'Roxas?roxas?Wake up" i said making a tear.
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Me and Unknown1,always and forever love you. ♥Unknown1♥ |
Unknown1 Blue Sparx Gems: 520 |
#79 Posted: 02:24:10 19/11/2008
"Don't!No!" I yelled.
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"Don't let me go." ♥ZarineNas♥ |
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#80 Posted: 02:26:48 19/11/2008
cool!
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep. Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land. |
Dark Lord Platinum Sparx Gems: 7365 |
#81 Posted: 02:29:01 19/11/2008
"Ha!Ha!HA!My other half,now you shall feel true power!" I said turning into my true form "now i am the most powerful darkness ever!" I looked at them all "Thank you for crying,you weren't going to get mad,but making you do that tear released me!"
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Like fallen snow, I lay on the ground and wait for my turn to fade away, no matter how unique I seem. It's my gift to you... A true sacrifice... |
ZarineNas Green Sparx Gems: 307 |
#82 Posted: 02:32:00 19/11/2008 | Topic Creator
"What have i done?" I said looking at my worst fear...
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Me and Unknown1,always and forever love you. ♥Unknown1♥ |
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#83 Posted: 02:33:34 19/11/2008
Next is your Introduction.
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Like fallen snow, I lay on the ground and wait for my turn to fade away, no matter how unique I seem. It's my gift to you... A true sacrifice... |
ZarineNas Green Sparx Gems: 307 |
#84 Posted: 02:38:04 19/11/2008 | Topic Creator
Introduction
I have 1 brother who is 7 years older then me.I am a legendary purple dragon with Light blue horns and purple eyes.i don't have a mother or father.My powers are secrets.I don't have very many freinds.And here is my story...
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Me and Unknown1,always and forever love you. ♥Unknown1♥ |
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#85 Posted: 02:50:04 19/11/2008 | Topic Creator
Chapter 1 Anyone...
You are now in the history of ZarineNas,you see my egg and my 7 year old brother. He is sleeping close to the egg,he has guarded the egg with his life,my egg hasn't hatched in millions and millions of years,my brother also hasn't hatched until 7 years ago,you are now in a dragon temple late at night.There are many other dragons.These are your choices,wether you's like to wake up the other dragons,or steal my Legendary egg is up to you.Or guard it.These are your choices,so do whatever you want to do,be a villian or hero.You do not have to tell about your character unless if things start getting confused.
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Me and Unknown1,always and forever love you. ♥Unknown1♥ |
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#86 Posted: 02:56:33 19/11/2008
I would like to join
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Gaccha! Tanoshii dyueru dattaze! [][][][][] |
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#87 Posted: 03:01:37 19/11/2008 | Topic Creator
Ok.if read chapter 1,then thats what happened to you or your fanmade character.Now,this depends on what others do,if you do something it will effect the future.it depends on what others do,not Dark Lord or Unknown because there not in it yet,My egg is right now laying of the ground.And the dragons aren't awake yet.
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Me and Unknown1,always and forever love you. ♥Unknown1♥ |
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#88 Posted: 03:03:21 19/11/2008
What will you or your fanmade character do?
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Like fallen snow, I lay on the ground and wait for my turn to fade away, no matter how unique I seem. It's my gift to you... A true sacrifice... |
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#89 Posted: 03:03:47 19/11/2008
So I write the second chapter?
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Gaccha! Tanoshii dyueru dattaze! [][][][][] |
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#90 Posted: 03:08:46 19/11/2008 | Topic Creator
your in chapter 1 right now,As it was told in chapter 1 you (Or your fanmade character) just appeared here,Right now all the dragons are sleeping.My Legendary egg is laying on the floor with my 7 year old brother sleeping by it.Now its your choice,you can take the egg,or guard it,or wake up the other,its your choice,no one is commanding you what to do.
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Me and Unknown1,always and forever love you. ♥Unknown1♥ |
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#91 Posted: 03:12:15 19/11/2008
I'll guard it then.
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Gaccha! Tanoshii dyueru dattaze! [][][][][] |
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#92 Posted: 03:13:38 19/11/2008
We need more poople. Poople?Whats wrong with poople?Poeple.
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"Don't let me go." ♥ZarineNas♥ |
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#93 Posted: 03:17:22 19/11/2008
Then someone needs to bring more people.
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Like fallen snow, I lay on the ground and wait for my turn to fade away, no matter how unique I seem. It's my gift to you... A true sacrifice... |
Unknown1 Blue Sparx Gems: 520 |
#94 Posted: 03:21:13 19/11/2008
Morning finnaly came in 2 hours "who are you?Why are you standing there?Were you thinking about stealing my sister or brother's egg?" ZarineNas's brother says.
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"Don't let me go." ♥ZarineNas♥ |
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#95 Posted: 03:27:23 19/11/2008
A green dragoness looked at the egg that sat near ZarineNas's brother. ''Mind as well stay here and guard it.'' The dragoness says.
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Gaccha! Tanoshii dyueru dattaze! [][][][][] |
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#96 Posted: 03:28:39 19/11/2008 | Topic Creator
Egg starts shaking.
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Me and Unknown1,always and forever love you. ♥Unknown1♥ |
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#97 Posted: 03:29:12 19/11/2008
The dragoness looked at the egg. ''It's hatching!" She cried.
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Gaccha! Tanoshii dyueru dattaze! [][][][][] |
Unknown1 Blue Sparx Gems: 520 |
#98 Posted: 03:30:27 19/11/2008
"I need to tell the dragon elders!Its going to hatch.My name is Joe,i have to tell the dragon elders." he said running to another room that had the dragon elders in it.
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"Don't let me go." ♥ZarineNas♥ |
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#99 Posted: 03:32:08 19/11/2008 | Topic Creator
Egg starts shaking more.
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Me and Unknown1,always and forever love you. ♥Unknown1♥ |
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#100 Posted: 03:33:18 19/11/2008
Quote: ZarineNas
The green dragoness grabs the egg and touches it. ''It is hatching!!!''
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