darkSpyro

while Coal and Blackdoom were fighting, Blackdeath had sent a Darklighter to finish the job. he had grown tired of waiting for Coal to make a move, so he sent someone else ot kill Bluemoon, and kidnap Goldstar. while they were sleeping the Darkllighter walked up to them, he slowly and carefully picked up Goldstar without waking her up. then he flew away with her, without anyone knowing he was there...

i'm back. i'll write more today.

Blackdoom dodged the energy ball. he then used his powers, and shimmered behind Coal.
"looking for me?!" he asked. then he grabbed him.
"let go of me!" Coal said, as he struggled to break free.
"not so fast! your not going anywhere!" he said. then he disappeared with Coal.
:meanwhile:
"boss! i got what you wanted!" said the Darklighter, as he dropped Goldstar in front of him.
"excellent! chain her to the floor! then leave"
"yes sir!" he said, then he did as he was told. onve he was gone, Blackdeath walked over to her.
"i finally have what i've been looking for!" he said.

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thats a little too anxious for more! my story is addictive for you people! i'll write more soon.

yeah you need to NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWWWWW!

ok! i'll write more! but it might take a minute because i'm eating!

Blackdoom appeared at a base of a tall mountain. there was a big rock there with some wiriting on it. Blackdoom let Coal go so he could read the wiriting on the rock.
"why did you bring me here?!" he asked.
"read the writing and you'll know!" Blackdoom said. then Coal walked up to the rock, he looked at the writing. "notice something about the way its written?" he asked
"mom's handwriting.............." Coal said. then he started to read it.

Bluemoon woek up. she got up and looked around.
"Goldstar? Goldstar?! where are you?!" she called. hoping she would come. "oh no! they probally have her! i need to save her!" she said.
"your right....." said a female voice telepathically. the voice sounded familiar...
"who said that?!" she asked.
"a close friend.......but theres no time for that.......you'll need some extra help to get her back........."
"what kind of help?!"
"help......only i could help you with........" she said. then Bluemoon started to glow white.
:meanwhile:
Blackdeath sensed something....
"the Pure One! its been revealed!" he said, he looked at Goldstar. she looked the same. "but its not her........."

i think that i know who it is

i think its kinda obvious now......

yup,we all know that it is me!just kiddin'.

yeah, Darkspyro_101 is the Pure One! lol! it has to be a dragon it the story!

*looks at a surtain someone*you!are you the Pure One?!dont make me go over their!
sorry,the stupid cake won't answer me!

lol!
Goldstar: i'm the-----------uh---------whats it called again?
the Pure One, and no your not...........someone else is.........

is it the cake?
why won't you answer me?!*cake explodes*
well,I guess it's not him.

Bluemoon glowed solid white, then she started to change colors. she was now solid white.
"ok...........what the heck just happened?!" she asked.
"you've become the Pure One, a dragon destined to rid the world of evil"
"really? sweet! look out bad guys 'cause here i come!" she said.
:meanwhile:
Coal read the writing on the stone. it said:
dear Coal,
i'm sorry that i died so suddenly and you never knew me. there is a dragon after me and he wants to kill me to take your egg. his name is Deathnight, hes one of the Triad. i don't have much longer to live, i hope you turn out good, and i hope you can take care of yourself. your a powerful dragon, and i know you'll be ok. my worse fear, is that you turn evil and blame your father for my death. take care, and remember that i'll always love you!
and that was all it said.

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i'll write more soon.

well,I have to go.BYE!!

ok, bye BFF!!

se ya,BFF!

bye! i'll write more while your gone.

Bluemoon was flying towards Blackdeath's home.
:meanwhile:
Coal was surprised at what the stone said. he looked at his dad.
"you were right all along............you didn't kill her............but i blamed you anyway............i turned evil and i almost made her worst fear come true............i'm so sorry dad........." he said, with a sad look on his face.
Blackdoom walked over to him. "its ok. i forgive you. you didn't do it on purpose. you were tricked into being evil. it wasn't your fault"
"maybe your right..........btu what do we do now? how do we stop Blackdeath?"
"we don't. the Pure One does"
"and whos that?"
"its Bluemoon"
"what?! i can't let her face him alone! i have to help her!"
"no! you'll get yourself killed!"
"i don't care! i can't let her get hurt!" he said. then he flew away. Blackdoom could only watch as Coal flew off to help her.
"you are truely good son. i hope you get there in time......." he said.

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Coal was flying as fast as he could to Blackdeath. he cared more about saving Bluemoon then himself. he got there and went inside. he went striaght to Blackdeath's room. he walked into the large dark room, and looked around.
"its nice to see you made it Coal! are you here to save your girlfriend?" Blackdeath asked.
"shes not my girlfriend!" he said.
"really? then theres nothing stopping me from killing her now is there?!" he said. then he revealed Bluemoon, chained to the wall.
"let her go now!"
"or what? i could kill your father!"
"he can take care of himself!"
"i know. but can you?" he asked. then chains came up from the floor, and four chains held Coal's feet in place. Coal tried to break free, but he couldn't. "going somewhere?!" he asked.
"i don't care what you do to me, but let her go!"
"well that wouldn't be much fun now would it?!" he said, then he held an enegy ball in his hand. "now, i want you to watch me kill her!" he said.
"No!!!" he yelled. "kill me insted! let her go!"
"well.................nah! on second thought, i'd much rather kill her!" he said. then he threw the energy ball at her.

noooooooooooooo bluemoon!
is she going to be ok?
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ok, ok, ok! i'll write more! more will be written soon!

the energy ball was getting closer and closer to Bluemoon. there was nothing she could do to stop it. then suddenly, Coal's chains broke, and then he ran up and jumped in front of the energy ball, making it hit him insted. he then collasped on the ground. Blackdeath looked at his body as it lay there motionless.
"hmm........not exactly what i was expecting, but it'll do!" he said. then he looked at Bluemoon, who was crying over Coal. "now, its your turn to die!" he said. then he held an energy ball in his hand. "any last words before you die?!" he asked her. she looked at him, tears ran down her face. her eyes looked sad, but when she looked at him, her eyes looked angry.
"you monster! how dare you kill him! you'll pay for what you did to Coal!" she said.
"Hahahaha!!!!!!!! oh really?! and what are you gonna do?! cry me to death?! Ha! your chained to a wall, and your too weak to stop me! i'll kill you just like i did him!" he said. then he threw the energy ball at her.

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the energy ball was about to hit Bluemoon. she thought that this was the end. and then, all of a sudden, Coal jumped in front of the energy ball.
"what?! how is that possible?! your dead!!!! i killed you!!!!!" he yelled
"no! you only thought you did!" he said. he looked at Bluemoon. "are you ok?" he asked.
"i am now. i'm glad your alive" she said, as she smiled.
"me too" he said, smiling
"you two are both dead!!!!!" he yelled. then he threw three energy balls at them. Coal quickly freed Bluemoon, and then they dodged the attack. "what?! how is this possible?! your suppose to be dead!!!!!" he yelled.
"sorry to disappoint you!" said Coal, then he attacked him. Blackdeath just threw him aside.
"you can't kill me Coal!" he said.
"we'll see about that!" he said. then he attacked him again.

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Coal and Blackdeath were fighting. Bluemoon watched them fight, as she glowed white, then her eyes glowed white. she knew what she had to do.
"Coal! get out of here now!" she yelled. he looed at her, as he held Blackdeath down on the ground.
"no! i'm not leaving him alone!"
"i'm the Pure One! i have to do this!"
"no you don't!" he said. then Blackdeath threw him off of him.
"your dead traitor!" he said. then Bluemoon got in front of Coal.
"leave him alone! its me you want! not him!"
"your right! i should kill you first!"
"you won't touch her!" said Coal, as he got in front of her.
"we'll see about that!" he said. then his eyes glowed firey red, then went black.
"no! not the evil eyes!" yelled Bluemoon. then Coal went up in flames in front of her. then all that was left was ashes. Bluemoon sat down nect to the ashes and cried.
"its too late to save him! hes dead now!" he said, with an evil grin.
"then i have no reason to hold back!" she said. then she got up, and glared at him with solid white eyes. "its your turn to die!!!!!" then she used a fury, elimintaing all evil from the world.

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a new age of peace was beginning. once again the world was eliminated of all evil by the Pure One. all was well once again, except for Coal, he was still dead. Bluemoon was back to her normal blue color. she was sitting next to the pile of ashes that was once Coal. she was crying as she looked down at the ashes.
"i'm sorry for your loss Bluemoon" said someone behind her. Bluemoon turned around. she saw someone that she had never seen before.
"who are you?" she asked. the dragon looked at her.
"my name is Blackdoom, i'm Coal's dad"
"what?! but he told me you were evil, how are you here?! why are you here?!" she asked him.
"i'm no longer evil, so i lived. and i'm here because, my son was killed here, and i thought that the dragon he loved could use some comforting"
"what?! he didn't love me............i don't even know why he came here....."
"he did love you. i saw it in his eyes. and you should know the look i'm talking about, the same one is on your face......you loved him....."
"well, i can't tell him that now can i? hes dead because of me....."
"he didn't die because of you..."
"yes he did! he jumped in front of me and got killed!"
"thats because he didn't want you to die.......he cared more about you then himself.."
"i jsut wish..........that he was alive.........."
"i know.......you miss him...."
"its not just that........"
"then what is it?" he asked. she looked at him.
"he was...........going........to be..............a.........father..........." she said.

O.O when did that happen?

it happened when i wanted it to happen! you'll just have to wait for more to find out!

Bluemoon was going back home, she carried Goldstar while she flew towards the temple.
"where are we going?" she asked.
"we're going home Goldstar" she said.
"ok, are all the bad guys gone?"
"yeah..."
"then how come your sad?"
"because i lost someone i cared about..."
"oh, its not me. so who is it?"
"a close friend of mine.."
"who?"
"his name was Coal..."
"oh.....whos that?"
"i don't want to talk about it..."
"oh, ok. but who is it?"
"i said i don't feel like talking. lets just be quiet tghe rest of the way..."
"ok. was he your boyfriend?"
"no. and i asked you to please be quiet"
"sorry. so he wasn't your boyfriend?"
"he was just a friend....."
"oh, ok. are we there yet?"
"we'll be there soon...." she said, she flew towards home.

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Bluemoon flew home, she landed outside the temple. Goldstar suddenly ran inside, she couldn't wait to see the other dragons, but Bluemoon didn't really want to go in. they would ask her questions about what happened, and she didn't feel like talking about it. so, she sneaked inside and quietly went to her room. she layed her egg on a nice soft bed she had made out if leaves,fur, feathers, and anything else she could find. she looked at her egg. it was blue, with a strange black marking on it, it was in the shape on a diamond.
"thats strange......." said Bluemoon as she looked at the egg.

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beware the multiplying rabbit dragons! lol!

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we shall multiply in great numbers, then we will hunt you down!!!!!! lol!

Bluemoon looked down at her egg. she wondered why it had a black marking on it.
"why does it have a marking on it?" she asked.
"i could answer that...." said someone behind her. she truned around to see who it was.
"hi Fireflight. why does it have a marking?" she asked. Fireflight walked up and sat down beside her. she looked down at the egg.
"this egg is like no other. because of who the parents are, this child will be diffrent"
"how diffrent?"
"the child will have powers that no one else in the family has"
"what kind of powers?"
"i'm not sure.........i just know of the prohecy..."
"what prohecy?"
"of a dragon being born, that would more powerful then any other dragon in the family.....having powers that have never been seen or even heard of...."
"what does this mean?"
"that your child, will be a special dragon, with powers that only he or she posses. this dragon will be diffrent from every other dragon in the family" said Fireflight

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