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Coal was about to stab Bluemoon in the chest, but then she woke up. she saw him standing over her with the dagger.
"Coal! what are you doing?!" she asked.
"doing........what the boss............said to do........."
"don't do this Coal! this isn't you! you can fight it!"
"no.............i can't............i'm evil.........."
"no you not! you can choose to be good!" she said, then she tackled him, and pinned him down to the ground.
"what are you doing?!" he asked.
"stopping you from making a mistake!"

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Coal looked up at Bluemoon.
"you can't keep me from, being evil!"
"yes i can! your part good, you don't have to be evil!"
"but its who i am! now, get off of me!"
"no! i won't get up untill your good!"
"well then, we'll be here forever! because i'm evil!"
"no your not!" she said, then she slapped him, "i hope that knocked some sense into you!"
"yes, as a matter of fact, it did!" he said, then he stabbed her in the chest. "that helped alot, thanks for helping me realize that i'm evil!"

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Coal threw Bluemoon off of him. she was bleeding badly, and would eventually die if no one healed her. Coal got up and looked at her.
"it was fun killing you!" he said. then he flew away. Goldstar was awake. she saw the whole thing, she walking over to Bluemoon and cried. she thought she was dead. Bluemoon moved her head slightly and looked at her.
"Goldstar..................i love you.............." she said. then she closed her eyes. Goldstar cried more. then her hands started to glow, she put them over Bluemoon's body, and started to heal her........
"please don't leave me mommy!" she said, as she tried to heal her.

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sounds familiar.is Goldstar related to Dawn?
Just joking.please continue!

Goldstar is a gold dragon. she isn't related to any other kind of dragon, but she thinks that Bluemoon is her mom.

I know.Just joking.

ok. as long as you know.

Goldstar continued trying to heal Bluemoon. but it didn't look like it was working.
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Coal was flying towards Blackdeath's home. when he got there, a wolf greeted him at the entrance.
"ah, Coal. welocme home. i see you've returned to the dark side" he said.
"yes, its good to be back"
"do you have the kid?"
"no. but i did kill Bluemoon"
"the boss will be happy to hear that"
"yes he will. well, are you gonna just stand there, or let me in?"
"sorry, feel free to enter"
"thank you" he said, then he walked to Blackdeath's room.
"ah, Coal. back so soon?"
"i'm only here to get whats mine"
"your mother's soul......." he said. then he held up, a small white ball.
"hand it over Blackdeath!"
"or what? you'll kill me?! Ha! you couldn't even if you tried!"
"don't press your luck! just hand it over!"
"not yet. first lets see if shes dead........"

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Blackdeath looked into a dark vision pool. he saw Goldstar trying to heal Bluemoon........
"well? is she dead?" Coal asked.
"we shall see.........." he said.
:meanwhile:
Goldstar was still trying to heal Bluemoon, but it didn't seem to bo working. then suddenly.........
"Gold.............star.............." said Bluemoon. she started to open her eyes. she looked at her. "Goldstar! you healed me!" she said. she was fully healed now, and she got up.
"Mommy! your ok!" she said excitedly, then she hugged her.
"yeah, i'm fine. thanks to you! you used your powers to heal me!"
"i didn't want you to leave me mommy!"
"i would never do that!" she said.

Blackdeath is going to be pissed!!

yep..........but you'll just have to wait and see what happens next.........

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"well, is she dead or not?" Coal asked. Blackdeath looked up from the vision pool. he walked over to Coal. he looked at him with angry eyes.
"Bluemoon was healed by Goldstar because she wasn't dead to begin with! how could you be so stupid to leave her alone with a healer?!" he yelled.
"i'm sorry! i thought she was dead! she wasn't moving when i left!"
"well she is now thanks to you! either go back and finish the job, or you'll never see your parents!"
"never! i refuse to be evil!"
"you don't have a choice!" he said. then he cast a spell on him. Coal glowed black. "now, go kill those dragons!" he said. then Coal looked at him with solid black eyes.
"as you wish!" he said. then he was gone.

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Coal was watching Bluemoon and Goldstar get ready for bed. eveentually they fell asleep.
"now is the time to strike!" he said, hiding in the bushes.
"i wouldn't do that if i were you" said a male voice behind him. Coal turned around. he was shocked at who he saw.
"......................Dad?!................what are you doing here?!" he asked.
"stopping you from making a huge mistake" he said. he was a solid black dragon. his claws were stained with blood, and he had scars in varous places on his body from previous fights.
"and what mistake is that?" he asked.
"killing.................the Pure One............" his dad said.

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oh cool! wait i thought his dad was evil!

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he'll give an explanation for that when i write more..............

oh yeah! common Sense i wonder where mine went!

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yep i'll let you do that so i can read it
the only problem is that i have to wait ! but atleast it will be worth it!

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Coal looked at him.
"what?! your evil! i would think that you would want them dead!"
"i was evil! but not anymore............" he said looking down.
"what?! don't tell me your good!" he said, his dad looked at him.
"i am good! i may of been a violent killer back in the day, but i've seen what Blackdeath can do! i know what his plan is! he is pure evil!"
"well so am i!"
"no your not! your mother was good, which means you have good in you!"
"well sorry to disappoint you!"
"you don't know what Blackdeath is capable of! we need the Pure One to stop him! its the only way anyone will live!"
"don't tell me your scared! Ha! the mighty Blackdoom is scared of my master!"
"hes not your master! you shouldn't do what he says! his dad killed your mother!"
"Ha! now i know you've lost your mind! you killed her, not him!"
"no! your wrong! his father was more violent then i was! i could never kill your mother, i loved her! he disguised himself as me.........took your egg from her..........and then killed her........."
"liar! i was told that you killed her!"
"those are lies! rumours! i never killed her! when she died, i betrayed the Triad. i killed thier strongest dragons, and even the Source himself! its how my claws are bloody, and i have scars all over me! you have to belive me Coal! i would never do anything to hurt you or your mother!"
"its too late for that!" he said. then he grabbed a dagger, and stabbed him in the chest. "and now, its too late for you, traitor!" he said.

oh poor Blackdoom! i'll miss you!
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yep i'll be waiting!

^me too!

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Coal walked away as his dad lay on the ground. he had his back to to him, so he didn't see Blackdoom get up, and hold an energy ball in his hand.
"i'm sorry son, but i can't let you do this!" he whispered so he wouldn't hear him. then he threw the energy ball at him. it hit Coal, and knocked him down. it was low voltage so it didn't hurt him much. Coal got up and turned around.
"what?! how are you still alive?!"
"because your too good to kill anyone! think about it, you didn't kill Bluemoon, the kid, or me! your good andi know it!" he said. then he healed himself. "you can't just kill your old man that easily!"
"we'll see about that!" he said. then an energy ball appeared in his hand.
"oh, so you think you can kill me do you? well, let me teach you something son, you can't kill a dragon as powerful as i am!"
"oh yeah?! then you can't kill me either! because i have your powers!"
"but you don't have my knowledge! your too reckless, and inexperianced! you can't kill me! and i can't kill you! this is pointless!"
"maybe to you it is! but to me, its revenge for mom's death!"
"how many times do i have ot tell you that i didn't kill her?!"
"none!" he said, then he threw an energy ball at him.

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Nightshade was up late. he was outside looking up at the pitch black sky. it had been awhile since anyone has seen any stars, the moon, or sun.
"Bluemoon where are you? are you ok?" he asked. hoping for an answer.
"no one knows......." said a female voice behind him. then she walked up and sat down beside him.
"hi Icewind. i'm worried about Bluemoon. we haven't seen or heard anything from her in awhile. is she ok?"
"i don't know. no one does. we're trying to find her, but we haven't found anything. we just have to hope shes ok"
"i hope she is. i would die if anything happened to her..."
"me too. we'll find her. i promise" she said.

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i'm starting to think my story is a drug or something, all you want is more! i want to keep writing more for you. but i can't write more every 5 seconds, you'll have to be a little bit more patient then that.

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i'm starting to think my story is a drug or something, all you want is more! i want to keep writing more for you. but i can't write more every 5 seconds, you'll have to be a little bit more patient then that.

(FYI: i'm trying to be funny, not mean. in case anyone might have somehow thought that)

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