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Spyro: The Third beginning *Spoilers from DotD* [CLOSED]
Samius Hunter Gems: 9336
#751 Posted: 04:43:22 22/09/2011 | Topic Creator
Sorry, didn't get to write yesterday. I'm in school right now so I'll do it tomorrow.
deaver88 Platinum Sparx Gems: 6132
#752 Posted: 05:35:15 22/09/2011
It's okay, this is becoming interesting
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Samius Hunter Gems: 9336
#753 Posted: 19:22:40 22/09/2011 | Topic Creator
Chapter 41.

Spyro was woken up by a strangely vivid dream. He didn't remember what it was all about, but had had a weird feeling about it. And so far, his feelings had never failed his trust.

He yawned, and got up from the ground, stratching his back. Then he was instantly smacked across his head by something heavy and metally.
Spyro quickly looked around and saw Mirra hiding in the bushes, he had hit Spyro with the hilt of his two-handed sword, and was now waving at him to stay silent. Spyro looked around to make sure everything seemed fine, and then leaped into the bushes with Mirra.

"What-" Spyro managed to say before Mirra shut his mouth.

"Ape bandits. They're near.. Just stay quiet, I laready took care of the campsite." Mirra whispered.

Spyro looked around himself again. He hadn't noticed how well the campsite was now camoflaged with branches and grass. He hadn't noticed a clue about any apes though.

"Are you sure, I can't sense anything.." Spyro whispered.

"I can smell them." Mirra whspered back to him.

And sure enough, Soon, he saw a small band of ape raiders walking past their campsite, sniffing the air.

"There's only four of them. I can take them on, you just stay hidden, ok?.." Mirra whispered

Spyro, nodded. He would've wanted to fight the apes, but Mirra seemed confident in himself, and Spyro wanted to see how good he was with his sword. So he just laid low, while Mirra sneaked out, closing in on the apes.

Suddenly, the large, tattooed leader-ape turned around like he had heard a twig snap. Mirra was now standing right in front of the apes, about a dozen feet away.

He stepped forward, and grasped his sword with a renewed purpose. The ape was wielding a vicious-looking hafted blade. He too, took a step forward.

The ape, and Mirra looked at each other for a second, then Spyro saw Mirra's face. He looked surprised..

"Balak?.." He heard Mirra say, with a confused tone.

"Mirra?.." The ape-leader responded.

"Balak! It's damn good to see you old friend!" Mirra shouted, and sheathed his sword.

The ape dropped his weapon too, and the two shook hands with a hearty laugh.

Spyro was confused. He didn't know whether to stay hidden, or ask Mirra what was going on.

"I almost gave my men a signal to shoot you!" The leader-ape, Mirra had called by the name Balak, said.

"And I almost charged you, I though you were raiders!" Mirra laughed.

"It's been a long time. Over the last decade the only way to survive among your own kin was to pretend to be one." Balak said.

"Speaking of that, what are you doing here?.." Mirra asked.

"We were on our way to your village to find you. Theba has been worried." Balak explained, Spyro had no Idea who "Theba" was.
"And why are you here running around by yourself?!" Balak asked Mirra.

"Oh, I'm not alone. Come out Spyro, it's safe!" Mirra shouted.

With a little hesitation, Spyro took a step out of the bushed, so that the apes could see him..

"Oh, a purple dragon.. Looks like you've found even more dangerous company while I've been taking care of your businesses." Balak said, and nodded at Spyro, he didn't seem agressive. Strangely enough, he didn't even seem surprised.

"Spyro and I left the valley a day ago. We're on our way to Warfang." Mirra said.

"Hah, let me come with you! My business with you can wait for awhile. It'll be like it was before!" Balak shouted suddenly.

"Fine, you can come." Mirra laughed, and turned to Spyro, "Spyro, I'd like you too meet my friend Balak. Remember when I told you about my previous compaions last evening? He was one of them."

"It's a honor to meet you." Spyro said. He had never said that to an ape before.

"Hah! I like dragons that don't always find themselves above others! I am Balak, a friend of Mirra. I'm honoured to meet you too." Balak said.

Spyro didn't know what to think. But he had a good feeling about Balak.

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I'll write more sometime in the weekend.
Edited 2 times - Last edited at 19:25:21 22/09/2011 by Samius
deaver88 Platinum Sparx Gems: 6132
#754 Posted: 19:47:45 22/09/2011
Cool, I am waiting for more
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LTU Spyro Emerald Sparx Gems: 4985
#755 Posted: 20:13:34 22/09/2011
This is great!! Waiting for the next one!
S240sx24 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1970
#756 Posted: 17:42:31 27/09/2011
hmmm interesting
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please let me know what you think about my art, I'd really appreciate it.
http://forum.darkspyro.net/spyro/viewposts.php?topic=27051
Samius Hunter Gems: 9336
#757 Posted: 19:56:55 27/09/2011 | Topic Creator
Oh, sorry. I guess I just got a little lost with this again. I'll write more tomorrow.
deaver88 Platinum Sparx Gems: 6132
#758 Posted: 15:58:07 28/09/2011
Good good, means more today
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Samius Hunter Gems: 9336
#759 Posted: 16:23:31 28/09/2011 | Topic Creator
Yep. Trying to come up with something right now.
torok Platinum Sparx Gems: 6123
#760 Posted: 20:24:09 30/09/2011
Awesome!
Samius Hunter Gems: 9336
#761 Posted: 11:18:18 02/10/2011 | Topic Creator
*bangs head to wall*

I just realized my memory is not what it used to be. Trying to write more now.
deaver88 Platinum Sparx Gems: 6132
#762 Posted: 12:00:18 02/10/2011
Don't hurt youself D:
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Samius Hunter Gems: 9336
#763 Posted: 15:02:43 02/10/2011 | Topic Creator
I got something done already. I'll come here later tomorrow and finish it up.

Edit: Nope, didn't seem to get finished yet.

Anyway, I'm running a fever and I'm dead tired. Gotta get some sleep and then look over this again.
Edited 1 time - Last edited at 18:55:26 02/10/2011 by Samius
deaver88 Platinum Sparx Gems: 6132
#764 Posted: 13:29:28 03/10/2011
Aww. hopefully you get better soon :/
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Samius Hunter Gems: 9336
#765 Posted: 17:53:37 15/10/2011 | Topic Creator
Ahh, vacation has started. Now I'll have some more time to think about this story again. I'm sure you'll see more soon.
deaver88 Platinum Sparx Gems: 6132
#766 Posted: 09:03:31 16/10/2011
Hopefully soon
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Samius Hunter Gems: 9336
#767 Posted: 09:57:25 16/10/2011 | Topic Creator
Yeah, I'm writing ideas on paper right now. I might post a chapter this evening.
Samius Hunter Gems: 9336
#768 Posted: 16:09:28 23/10/2011 | Topic Creator
Why can't I hold all these chapters?
deaver88 Platinum Sparx Gems: 6132
#769 Posted: 16:22:00 23/10/2011
*shrug*
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Samius Hunter Gems: 9336
#770 Posted: 14:40:12 01/01/2012 | Topic Creator
Now that all the celebrations and holiday hazzle is over, I think I'll be writing more again. I'll certainly add a chapter, if not two, later today.
Samius Hunter Gems: 9336
#771 Posted: 00:26:28 02/01/2012 | Topic Creator
Chapter 42.

Spyro jogged happily alongside Mirra, the road to Warfang had been full of new experiences as he had never gone the way on foot. Most of the landscape was covered with forests, so he couldn't have even seen the road before as he had always flown overneath.

Spyro was also curious about the new companion that had joined their party. Balak seemed quite calm for an old, big ape that he was. Spyro had a feeling that he had seen a lot of danger and adventures in his days. Still, he didn't quite trust his own appraisal of experience, and decided to try to get more info from Mirra.

"Hey, Mirra." Spyro started, unsure of what to ask.

"Hm?.." Mirra replied quickly.

"About Balak.." Spyro continued carefully.

"You can trust him, if this is about that." Mirra said before Spyro could think of what to say.

"No, it's not that. Not exactly." Spyro said.

"Then what?" Mirra asked.

"You said you knew Balak. I just want to learn more about him." Spyro said.

"All right." Mirra looked the other way, "So you don't trust him?"

"Uh.. That's the thing, I don't know." Spyro said.

He was startled by a loud grunt.

"I can hear you, little one." Balak said with a low, grumbling voice, "I assure you, I mean you no harm."

Spyro suddenly felt a tingle of guilt, but he decided it was best not to dwell in it.

"I'm sorry. I know I can trust you, I just don't know much about you, that's all." Spyro said.

"I'll tell you anything you want to know once we get to Warfang." Balak said. He didn't feel like talking much.

"Ok.." Spyro said and looked to Mirra. Who noticed this immediately.

"He's just tired, the old man that he is." Mirra laughed a bit, "Don't let him intimidate you."

"I can hear you too, cat." Balak said, "Last time I checked, it was you who got tired and ran away, while I stayed to take care of your wife and your son!.. Just like I promised I would."

They all staid quiet for a moment. Spyro noticed a sudden change in everybody's mood.
He was about to ask Mirra about what Balak had said, but Mirra answered him first.

"Aye, and for that I'm grateful.. Old friend.." He sighed quietly, staring forward with empty eyes. He wasn't angry, but his voice was filled with a sad tone of longing..

After that, nobody dared to say a thing.

In a few hours, Spyro could already see the high towers of Warfang rising up on the horizon. It wouldn't be long anymore. He forgot compeletely about what Balak had said, and focused on his own mission.

His scar was still aching a bit, and he had thought about what to say to Cynder when he would meet her.
He almost missed her..


I'll post more later. It's pretty late here, and I haven't finished the next chapter yet.
spyrocynderfan7 Ripto Gems: 783
#772 Posted: 00:35:08 02/01/2012
Finally got a chance to read, good story.
Samius Hunter Gems: 9336
#773 Posted: 00:41:36 02/01/2012 | Topic Creator
Thank you. The first one had a lot of flaws in it's storyline as I just came up with some content as I went. I still have some trouble finding the will to write more.

Damn, I just realized I was a fresh green Sparx when I first started writing.
spyrocynderfan7 Ripto Gems: 783
#774 Posted: 00:43:41 02/01/2012
Wow..
Samius Hunter Gems: 9336
#775 Posted: 01:02:23 02/01/2012 | Topic Creator
Yeah, I write slowly. I've always got ideas, but I just can't be arsed to write them down.

Also, looking back a few chapters, this story has it's own little flaws too.

Hm, you did read The Second Beginning too, did you not?
spyrocynderfan7 Ripto Gems: 783
#776 Posted: 01:06:09 02/01/2012
I haven't read that one yet.

That's my next objective.
Samius Hunter Gems: 9336
#777 Posted: 01:08:02 02/01/2012 | Topic Creator
Alright, just don't laugh. I was 15 when I started with the first part.
spyrocynderfan7 Ripto Gems: 783
#778 Posted: 01:10:01 02/01/2012
Who's laughing?

Dude, I was writing AoL's first copy when I was four. smilie
Samius Hunter Gems: 9336
#779 Posted: 01:13:57 02/01/2012 | Topic Creator
Must have been pretty interesting then.

I mean, with all the characters ripped from kid's shows, you can't get a boring story.
spyrocynderfan7 Ripto Gems: 783
#780 Posted: 01:27:54 02/01/2012
Especially since said characters were "bastardized" as in, taken from innocence and thrown into a serious situation.

I.E, for example, mixing the opening scene of Vendetta from World at War with Spyro




Spyro and Alex were the only two survivors in an event EXTREMELY similar to this. Spyro actually literally escaped having half of his face blown off, instead was burned badly. Several things were created, but the overall idea remained, I can PM you the actual parts of what really happened if you want.


In this second video, Cynder was actually shot, and Piermont (an OC) saved her life, as she played the part of Dimitri (the player in this video) and Piermont played the part of Reznov"




Of course, there were some differences...
Edited 3 times - Last edited at 01:34:58 02/01/2012 by spyrocynderfan7
Samius Hunter Gems: 9336
#781 Posted: 01:34:51 02/01/2012 | Topic Creator
I know what you mean. I sometimes do same stuff in my own head with different characters.
spyrocynderfan7 Ripto Gems: 783
#782 Posted: 01:36:04 02/01/2012
I can PM you the events of what I formed from these two videos (all part of an 'episode' or two called Edge of Chaos)
Samius Hunter Gems: 9336
#783 Posted: 01:40:33 02/01/2012 | Topic Creator
Sure, I'll take a look at it. It's hard to find any really interesting fictions on a Spyro site anyway.
spyrocynderfan7 Ripto Gems: 783
#784 Posted: 01:45:15 02/01/2012
Some things are purposely misspelled to avoid dS's autocensor.
spyrocynderfan7 Ripto Gems: 783
#785 Posted: 01:46:33 02/01/2012
Dammit, I deleted most of them, but there are a few left...
Samius Hunter Gems: 9336
#786 Posted: 01:46:36 02/01/2012 | Topic Creator
All right.
spyrocynderfan7 Ripto Gems: 783
#787 Posted: 02:29:12 02/01/2012
There, all I have I sent.

Wish I had the rest...
Samius Hunter Gems: 9336
#788 Posted: 02:31:15 02/01/2012 | Topic Creator
I suppose these should be read in the order you sent them in?
spyrocynderfan7 Ripto Gems: 783
#789 Posted: 02:36:48 02/01/2012
No.

Part 1
Part 1 conclusion
Part 2
Part 2 conclusion


There is still a crapload of the story that I must have deleted, but you should be able to still kinda understand what's going on.


There is Part 1
Part 1 continued
Part 1 continued
Part 1 continued
Part 1 continued
Part 1 continued
Part 1 continued
Part 1 conclusion
Part 2
Part 2 continued
Part 2 continued
Part 2 continued
Part 2 continued
Part 2 conclusion

You have Part 1, Part 1 conclusion, Part 2, and Part 2 conclusion.
Samius Hunter Gems: 9336
#790 Posted: 02:41:07 02/01/2012 | Topic Creator
Ok, I'll take a look at it and tell you what I think.

I'll do that later though, as it's pretty late here already.
spyrocynderfan7 Ripto Gems: 783
#791 Posted: 02:43:45 02/01/2012
Both parts of "Edge of Chaos" are part of "Army of Legend - Volume III [2007 - 2012]" and takes place in April of 2011.


To fully understand the components of the army, and how they were formed, who their enemies are, etc. etc. You'd have to read from it's beginning in "Army of Legend - Volume I [1997 - 2002]" and through to Volume II which I am currently working on. These started when I was 4 years old, and the series is continually being made, never stopping, so that's why these events happened on a currently unreleased volume of the story.


It's already thought of, but I can't post it until I get there in the militia's storyline.


However, you should still be able to understand all that happens during those parts, as they are nothing more really than a battle, and require little to no need to know their history.
deaver88 Platinum Sparx Gems: 6132
#792 Posted: 21:44:33 09/01/2012
Nice part, i still wonder what will happen after Spyro finds out about CynderxFlame
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Samius Hunter Gems: 9336
#793 Posted: 21:28:15 10/01/2012 | Topic Creator
You'll see.
Samius Hunter Gems: 9336
#794 Posted: 13:54:02 11/04/2012 | Topic Creator
Damn, I completely forgot about this again.

Ahh ****..

Well, time to get writing I suppose. I'm still going to finish this sorry story.
deaver88 Platinum Sparx Gems: 6132
#795 Posted: 11:04:34 12/04/2012
yup, part of us are still waiting
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Samius Hunter Gems: 9336
#796 Posted: 11:17:52 12/04/2012 | Topic Creator
Next time I forget, just send me a message and I'll get writing.
deaver88 Platinum Sparx Gems: 6132
#797 Posted: 04:22:27 13/04/2012
Roger
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Denragon Gold Sparx Gems: 2763
#798 Posted: 13:31:25 20/04/2012
What a great story! I wonder if the creator of The Legend Of Spyro can make this story as movie or game... hahaha... :-)
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"Everyday we make our own story to tell later for the next generation of us." -Denragon
Denragon Gold Sparx Gems: 2763
#799 Posted: 16:52:48 20/04/2012
smilie I want to know... When will you continiue your story? I can't hardly wait it! I just confuse of something, is Spyro's scar can be cured?
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"Everyday we make our own story to tell later for the next generation of us." -Denragon
Denragon Gold Sparx Gems: 2763
#800 Posted: 03:55:28 22/04/2012
smilie I just want to say one thing, whatever you do, Samius, DON'T STOP WRITING THIS STORY!!!
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