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awesome keep going!

thanks! i'll write more soon! if i have time!

Starfire and Fireball were flying to where Nadia was taken,
"i hope shes ok!" he said
"she will be!"
"how do you know?!"
"i don't! but we won't let them hurt her!"
"yeah! if they try to, they'll have to get through me first!"
"lets not get careless!"
"ok, but we need to save her!"
"i know! i've been doing this longer then you!"
"i know! but i won't let them hurt her!"
"lets just keep going!"
"ok!" he said, as they kept flying
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"what do you mean by that?! whats going to happen to them?!" she asked worriedly
"you'll see!" he said, then he walked out of the room, he then walked into a large room with 2 other dragons in it!
"well hello Blackcloud!" said Moonlight
"hi mom" he said, he only glanced at her, then he kept going!
"woa! where do you think your going?!" asked Firecloud, Blackcloud din't even look at him
"none of your buisness!" he said, as he letf the room, then he walked into the hallway where he ran into another dragon
"hi big brother!" said Nightfire
"leave me alone!" he said, walking past him! then he walked inot a library, went through another door to the vision pool room "now, lets see our guests!" he said, looking into it!

Dawn:Cool!!Write more!!
Yeah,C'mon!!!
Pablo:MORE!!!
*warnning,all had sugar!*
all:SUGAR!!!!!
...The End!....

lol! funny! sugar rush!
Fireflight: lol! you mean dragon sugar rush!

while Blackcloud was looking through the pool, Nadia was alone, then she thought she heard a noise!
"who's there?!" she asked, thinking it was probally either Blackcloud, or someone here to save her! but there was no answer!
"hello?! is someone there?! whoever you are, come out where i can see you!" she said, then she thought she saw soemthing move in the darkness! "who's there?!" she asked again, getting nervous! then she saw a dark shadow in the shape of a dragon! it got closer!
"who are you?!" she asked, nervously! then the cage door broke! Nadia saw a the dark shadow come closer, he reached out a claw, and grabbed her! "let me go!" she said, then it flew off with her!

Starfire and Fireball reached the mountain, where they thought Nadia was taken! but, they were greeted by a dragon!
"you must be here to save your firend!" siad Blackcloud
"yes, we are! now where is she?! what did you do to her?!" asked Fireball
"calm down! i didn't hurt her!" he said
"how do we know that?!" asked Starfire
"well, why don't you come and see for yourselves!" he said, leading them to where he had Nadai! when they got there the light were off, the cage was in pices, and Nadia was gone!
"i don't see her!" said Starfire
"what did you do to her?!" asked Fireball, ready to attack!
"nothing! i swear!"
"your lying!" he said, as he grabbed his neck, and held him up agaist the wall!
"Fireball, calm down! we won't find out anything if we kill him!" she said
"then i'll torture him, untill he tells me where she is!"
"let me go! she was here when i letf! i don't know what happend anymore then you! besides you'll need my help to find her!"
"i don't need you! i'll kill you now, and find her myself!"
"Fireball don't! lets at least hear him out! he just might know something!"
"fine! start talknig!"
"i cast a spell, to be able to track her, in case she escaped, with the spell. i should be able to find her! but first, you have to let me go!"
"do what he says!" she said, then he let him go!
"fine! but if you screw up, your dead!" said Fireball

fireball sounds mad......

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fireball sounds mad......

he is! Blackcloud better watch his back! or he won't have one anymore!

Nadia had been knocked out, so she didn't know where she was going, when she woke up, she found heslef in another cage!
"oh no! not again!" she said, worried that she would never get to go home! then, she heard voices!
"did you capture a dragon?!" asked a male
"yes, boss! shes in a cage!" replied another
"excellent! keep her here untill i need her!"
"yes, boss!" he said, then they stopped talking! Nadia had no idea, where she was! she was scared and alone!
"Fireball where are you?!" she asked, hoping he would come save her!

fireball is probaly still angry........

AWESOMENESS keep writing!

Quote: cynder21

fireball is probaly still angry........

yep! he wants Nadia back!

who wouldn't????? how about you * points finger at random person i am on to you!

Starfire and Fireball were following Blackcloud, who said that he could help find Nadia!
"have you found her yet?!" asked Fireball
"dose it look like hes found her?!" she asked
"no........"
"then he hasn't found her!"
"calm down you two! i've almost located her!"
"great! where is she?!" he asked
"oh no!........................"
"what?! whats wrong?!" she asked
"did you screw up?!" he asked
"no...................shes............in alot of trouble!"
"yeah, thats kinda why we're going to save her!" she said
"no..........i mean...............we can't save her............we should turn back!" he said, fearfully!
"what?!" they both asked
"its too dangerous!"
"i can't let her get hurt! i have to save her! if you don't tell me where she is, your dead!" said Fireball
"i'm not going to risk my life to try and save a dead dragon!" he said, "you find her on your own! i'm out of here!" he said, flying away!
"well now what?!" asked Starfire
"we go save Nadia! come on, lets go!" he said, flying in the opposite direction
"why do i keep following idiots?!" said Starfire to herself, while she flew after Fireball

Fireball kept flying, he wanted to find Nadia
"Fireball, i know you want to find her, but do you even know where your going?!" asked Starfire
"i have no idea! i only know that i'm going to find her!"
*great! we're lost! why am i following him?!* she thought "that won't work! lets go back, and get help!"
"theres no time! we need to help her now!"
*seriously! a brain would help you! you haven't gotten any smarter, just bigger and more annoying!* "we can't help her when we're dead!"
"we won't die!"
*says the one that has no clue where we are!* "how do you know that?!"
"because we're unbreakable like mom!"
*i'm the empath! you go get yourself killed! and i'll go home and live!* "yeah, and look what happened to her!"
"well i want to save her!"
"me too, but i don't want to die either! i have a daughter, i can't just risk my life doing this anymore!"
"then go home, i'll save her alone!"
"how will you live?!"
"i'll either save her, or die trying!"
"thats my point! you'll die!"
"then let me save her by myself! let me prove i can do this alone!"
"fine! i'll go home! your old enough to do this alone anyway! i'm not your babysitter!" *thank god!* then she flew away
"finally! i'm on my own!" *i thought she would never leave!* he thought then he flew off on his own, to save Nadia!

this is good.

thank you!

still awesome keep going

thanks everyone! i'll write more soon if i can!

keep writing!!

i will! i'm busy right now! i'll write more soon! if i don't then you can hunt me down or something!

Nadia was in her cage, when a large dark shadow shaped like a dragon started to approach the cage!
"its time!" he said, as he opened the cage, he then knocked her out, grabbed her, and walked away! he then walked into a large dark room it was filled with candels, a large dark shadow shaped like a dragon, was waiting in the room!
"is that the dragon?!" he asked
"yes boss!"
"bring her here!" he said, then he put her down in firnt of him, "hmmm..................shes only a teen earth dragon"
"i know boss, but i found her caged up by black dragons! two purple dragons were on thier way there! she must be worth something!"
"hmm..................do you think she has what we want?!"
"she must know something! we can use her to get what we want!"
"hmm..........she could be used to our advantage! good work!"
"thank you sir!"
"now, leave me! i must be alone with her!"
"yes sir!" then he was gone

when Nadia woke up she noticed she wasn't in her cage she was sittimg in the middle of the room chained to the floor, she looked around the large, dark, room, then she saw something move in the darkness! "whos there?!" she asked, nevously,
"do not fear, earth dragon! i won't hurt you!" said a male voice
"easy for you to say!"
"i only need something from you!"
"like my life!"
"no! your no good to me dead!"
"really?! well then let me go!"
"i'm afraid i can't let you leave!"
"why dose everyone kidnap me and say i can't leave?!"
"because you have something we want!"
"well i'm not very powerful, so that can't be it!"
"i want something more valuble then your powers!"
"what?! you just said i'm only an earth dragon!"
*he chuckles!* "i want your knowledege!"
"my knowledge?! your going to take my brain?!"
"no! i want to know what you know! you can keep your brain!"
"oh............"
"now, tell me everything you know about the Pure One!"

woah ur story is awesome keep going!!!!! am so happy!

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woah ur story is awesome keep going!!!!! am so happy!

thank you! i'll keep writing!

keep writing!!

"the Pure One?!" asked Nadia, looking into the darkness
"yes! the prophecy tells of a dragon that will stop a powerful evil and save the world by starting a new age of peace!"
"um............................ok, but why do you think i would know about that?!"
"because, i've been told that several dragons are fighting to get you! you must know something!"
"what?! dragons fighting over me?! i think you've got me confused with someone else!"
"no! you were taken by black dragons, then purple dragons tried to get you! your what i've been looking for!"
"actually it sounds like your looking for someone else!"
"no! i need you to get who i want!"
"are you sure you haven't, i don't know, lost your mind?!"
"i'm sure! now, tell me about the Pure One!"
"i told you, i don't know anything! you've got the wrong dragon!"
"no, i don't! if you won't tell me, then i'll find out myself!" he said, then he held out his claw, some strange black magic filled the room!
"whats happeneing?!" she asked, scared
"i'm getting what i want!" he said, he put his claw on her head, more black magic filled the room! "ah! i see! i see the Pure One! you apparently know the dragon, but don't know who it is!" he said, Nadia tried to get away but she couldn't move! not only was she chained to the floor but the black magic held her in place! "don't try to escape! you can't leave untill i get what i want!" then the magic stopped, he backed away, back to the shadows, leaving Nadia unconcious in the middle of the room! "now, i must find the Pure One, if i am able to fullfill my plan!" he said, then he did an evil laugh!

Starfire had flown home, she told the others about what had happened and they all were looking in the vision pool, to try and find Fireball, and Nadia!
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Fireball was flying around he was looking for any place where he might find Nadia, suddenly someone hit him from behind and knocked him out! then they grabbed him and flew off with him!
:meanwhile:
Nadia was put back in her cage still out cold, while two dragons were talking in the room she was just in,
"i found out about the Pure One!" said a male
"great job boss!"
"yes! now, i need you to take the others, find the dragon, and bring it to me!"
"yes boss! i won't let you down!" then he was gone!

Awsome!!!
Pablo:Write more!!!
Dawn:Hey,you took my spot!!!(Nice story)
....not again...

thank you!
ok, everybody listen up! there will surprises and twists in the story soon! my story i think will get alot better! i'm currently thinking of as many ideas as possible! i'll write more soon!

while Comet was with the others looking in the pool, Starfire was training Destiney! she had already learned all 8 elements! now, it was time for empathy!
"are you ready to learn your next power?!" asked Starfire
"yeah! what is it?!" she asked, excitedly
"its called empathy!"
"cool! how dose it work?!"
"calm down! you'll need emotions for this one! to use empathy, you must let loose all emotions, let them control you, then unlease the power whitin!"
"ok, cool!" she said, then she did as she was told, she glowed a bright amethisyt(purple) color! then used empathy!
"well done! you mastered it! you've learned all i can teach you! congrats!"
"yay!" she said, excitedly
"now, you go play outside if you want to"
"ok!" she said, then she ran out to play, while Starfire went to another pool room to keep an eye on her!
while Destiney was out flying, something moved in the shadows!
:meanwhile: something came up behind Starfire, knocked her out, and flew away with her!
while soemthing came up behind Destiney, and did the same!
they were both grabbed and taken away!

hello?! is anyone there?! i have alot of ideas, i hope someone reads it!

Misteries!!I like it!!
Dawn & Pablo:More!!

Quote: DarkSpyro_101

Misteries!!I like it!!
Dawn & Pablo:More!!

yep! there will be surprises and twists! but i won't say what!

Starfire and Fireball were put in cages, they were similar to the one that Nadia was in, and they were next to hers!
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Destiney was taken to a large dark room, it looked like the same one Nadia was taken into! when she woke up, she was in the middle of the room, chained to the floor, she was scared and alone! then something moved in the darkness!
"welcome young dragon!" said a male voice from the darkness
"wh---where-----am----i?!" she asked scared
"your in a place where you'll never escape young dragon, because you are the Pure One!" he said, then he smiled an evil grin!

is anyone reading this?! if you are, then show yourslef!

"what?! Pure One?! whats that?!" asked Destiney
"you!" he said
"me?!"
"yes! you are the dragon that will fullfill the prophecy!"
"what prophecy?!"
"while the world is helpless to defend itself from evil, and no one else can stop it, a dragon will be born to stop all evil in the world, to create a new world of peace, goodness, and light! this is the ledgend of the Pure One!"
"...............and you think i'm that dragon?!"
"yes! the world will soon be evil, then the Pure One will rise to stop the evil!"
"but its not evil now, and i'm not the Pure One, i'm just an empath!"
"it soon will be! my master will soon bring the world into complete darkness! and its my job, to make sure you don't get in his way!" said the dragon, then he stepped into the light where she could see him! she was surprised at what she saw!
"............you?!...................it can't be!........................your dead!" she said, scared
"oh, but i lived! your family only thought that i had died! but here i am! i mangeded to escape your family's attacks, i escaped to a place where your kind would never find me!"
"its not possible! no one can survive our attacks!
"untill now! i survived, but i can't say the same for you!" he said, with an evil grin, and an evil laugh!

i'll have to go soon! i'll write more tomorrow!

aw, i dont want to wait until tomorrow

sorry! my dad wants me off soon! i don't have time to write right now! but, don't worry! i'll definitely write more tomorrow!

i can't wait!
(btw this is my 400th post on the forums)

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i can't wait!
(btw this is my 400th post on the forums)

Congrates!!!*throws confetti*
DawnARY!!!
Pablo:If she goes to a party,she'll go beyound crazy!
Me,too!!!If I ever went to one!!

well, thats good to hear! anyway i'm back on! i'll write more today, as promised!

ok, the moment you all been waiting for........................more of the story!

"Nadia! your ok!" said Fireball excitedly, as he looked at the cage beside his
"yeah, i'm ok for now, but i thought you were comming to save me!" she said
"i was! but, i kinda got knocked out"
"i see.................so, now what?!"
"thats easy! we break out of here!"
"good plan, except for one thing, the cages are magic proof, i already tried to break them!"
"so................your saying theres no way out?!"
"yep!"
"great! i was going to save you!"
"well, great job on doing that!"
"sorry......................"
"thats ok, i know you meant well!"
"so, now what?!"
"we wait for someone else to come for us!"
"oh boy, this will be fun!"
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"i was going to throw you in a cage like the others, but when i realized who you really were, i just had to think of something better to do to you!" said a male dragon,
"let me go!" said Starfire, she was chained to a wall, in a medium sized room, someone was talking to her from the darkness, "come out where i can see you!" she demanded
"you won't belive who i am!"
"try me!"
"ok, but you asked for it!" he said, then he came into the light, she saw who he was!
"your...................your...................suppose to be dead!..............we killed you all a long time ago!" she said, shocked st what she saw
"well some of us lived!" he said
"no! i know we killed you! all of the shadow dragons are dead!"
"not all of us! some of us got away!" said the shadow dragon
"no one can survive our attacks! we're empaths, you can't beat us!"
"we know! thats why we ran instead! some of us were smart enough to escape instead of fight!"
"then you'll die now!" she said, she tried to use her powers, but she couldn't!
"Hahahahahaha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! the chain drains your powers! you can't fight me! i could easily kill you now! but, my master wants you alive for what he has planned!"
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"stay away from me!" said Destiney, as the dragon walked towards her
"not untill i get what i'm after!" he said
"my family will come for me! and when they do, you won't live this time, Darkclaw!"
"we'll see about that!" he said, then a shadow dragon walked in
"you want me for something boss?!" he asked
"yes, Shadow, i want you to take care of everything while i'm gone"
"sure thing boss! but, where are you going?"
"i'm taking the kid to our master! he wants her to fullfill his plan!"
"oh! right, i remember now!"
"yes! now, i must be going!" he said, he walked over to Destiney, knocked her out, grabbed her, then flew away with her!

while Shadow was letf in charge, Darkclaw took Destiney, to his master!
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"i will find a way to kill you!" said Starfire
"save your breath! you can't do anything to me!" said a shadow dragon, then he knocked her out, "but i can hurt you!" then he grabbed her, and flew away with her!
:meanwhile:
"Fireball, do you think we'll ever get out of here?!" asked Nadia
"i know we will!" he said, just then, something broke throught the roof, and landed in front of them!
"Bluefire!!!!!" they both said excitedly!
"hey guys! now, lets get you out of here!" he said, then he broke them out, and they flew away
"we're sure glad you came to save us!" said Nadia
"no problem!" he said
"well, thanks!"
"your welcome! now lets go home!" he said, just then, someone knocked them all out, grabbed them, and flew away!

Yay! Mooore!!! I just read the chapters but I do know what's gonna happen to Starfire....

OMG!!!To mch knocking outs!!!lol!
Dawn:More,I lve it!!!
That's my word.
Dawn:Sorry!
Pablo: Please continue!!
That too!!Copycaters!!
both:Sooo?!!
(again with the arguments...)

when Bluefire, Fireball, and Nadia woke up, they found themselves someplace familiar!
"oh no! kidnapped again!" said Nadia, "and i know exactly where we are!"
"you should!" said a male dragon walking up to thier cage!
"Blackcloud!" they all said
"yeah, its me!"
"what do you want now traitor?!" asked Fireball, as he glared at him!
"its not what you think!"
"then tell us!" she said
"well................................you see........................my brother is missing!"
:meanwhile:
"ah! Darkclaw! please, come in!" said, a big dark male voice, as Darkclaw walked into a large dark evil looking room, he then put Destiney down in front of him
"i brought you something master!" he said
"hmm...........................is this..........the Pure One?!"
"yes sir! i thoguht you would be pleased!"
"you've done good, Darkclaw! and now its time to fullfill my plan!" he said, "Darkclaw, go get the other dragon!"
"yes sir!" he said, he letf, then came back, carrying a small solid black dragon! "here he is, sir!"
"excellent! put him in the middle, and chain him to the floor, jst like the other!"
"yes sir!" he did as he was told! then the other dragon walked into the light, and walked up to the unconcious young dragons! then you could see what the dragon really looked like! he was a large black and dark red male dragon, with large sharp horns, claws, teeth, and tail!
"i have waited a thousand years for this! and now, i'll finally fullfill my master plan!" he said, "now Darkclaw, its time!" then Darkclaw used some black magic, Destiney started to glow black, then magic was going from her to the large male! "at last! i will have all the powers of the Pure One! once i have gained all of her powers, i will be unstoppable!" he said, then he did an evil laugh!

Nooooooo!!! Destiny(that's the correct spelling)!!!