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#651 Posted: 00:52:53 12/08/2010
*blows up bomb shack*
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Aww, I wanted to explode. |
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#652 Posted: 22:04:58 16/08/2010
^ why you didn't invite me? I love to blow things!!!!
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#653 Posted: 12:13:13 17/08/2010
....um, sorry.
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Aww, I wanted to explode. |
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#654 Posted: 12:45:00 17/08/2010 | Topic Creator
Don't waste pages please..
And, be patient. I haven't forgotten about this fic, but it's not like I think about it the every second of my life either, see?.. |
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#655 Posted: 12:47:28 17/08/2010
Alright.
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Aww, I wanted to explode. |
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#656 Posted: 15:48:22 17/08/2010
Ok, srry Samius
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#657 Posted: 19:27:53 24/09/2010 | Topic Creator
Ach, I havent' posted more 'n a while..
And that's why this is a momentous occasion. Because even after moths, I still believe I can complete this fanfic. It just takes time.. I'll *gulp* try to make some tomorrow.. |
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#658 Posted: 19:53:19 24/09/2010
Awesome! Thank you! All hail Samius! All hail Samius!
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#659 Posted: 20:08:50 24/09/2010
Stupid stink bugs there all over my house! ANYWAYS finaly the wait has come to end how exciting
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#660 Posted: 20:27:34 24/09/2010
Good good
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#661 Posted: 20:42:13 24/09/2010 | Topic Creator
I can't believe it! It's been a month and here you guys are, like you've been waiting for this the every second of it...
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#662 Posted: 20:44:18 24/09/2010
yeah.
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gritz88 Blue Sparx Gems: 818 |
#663 Posted: 22:12:58 24/09/2010
all beacuse its been a month dosen`t mean well forgot rights guys we cant dare to stay away from this story
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#664 Posted: 13:20:48 26/09/2010
I was going to post that it has been few months but i didn't want to waste pages xD
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#665 Posted: 22:51:49 26/09/2010
I'm only on chapter 14, but this is an amazing fan fiction!
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#666 Posted: 00:50:13 01/10/2010
We cant have a story of this caliber die. It has to be continued.
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Aww, I wanted to explode. |
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#667 Posted: 01:03:11 01/10/2010
so um when will the next chapter be posted cause you said you would post it like a month ago
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#668 Posted: 05:51:58 01/10/2010
He will post it right after he have enough time to do that, He have real life and he can't be here 24/7, Even him have to sleep sometimes xD
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#669 Posted: 06:02:55 01/10/2010
yeah give him sometime guys.
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#670 Posted: 04:16:16 02/10/2010
patience is a virtue.
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Aww, I wanted to explode. |
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#671 Posted: 19:59:28 08/10/2010
I can wait.
This is a really good fan fiction. I'm all caught up now |
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#672 Posted: 07:34:15 09/10/2010 | Topic Creator
ARGLHRBLGRABLHABL
Dammit. I can't come up with one single chapter.. I already know how the party is going to end. I'm just thinking about what happends afterwards.. |
deaver88 Platinum Sparx Gems: 6132 |
#673 Posted: 08:47:22 09/10/2010
Do you need more time?
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#674 Posted: 09:05:27 09/10/2010 | Topic Creator
That's exactly what I need, but thinking about it won't get me closer to my goal..
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#675 Posted: 14:26:36 17/11/2010
Man...it's been really long time
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#676 Posted: 20:17:44 17/11/2010
yeah.
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#677 Posted: 02:18:54 18/11/2010
I miss this story lol
I want it to continue |
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#678 Posted: 05:50:05 18/11/2010 | Topic Creator
Were it so easy.
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#679 Posted: 22:19:18 18/11/2010
You can do it, just take your time, and don't get stressed.
We've waited until now, we can wait more. |
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#680 Posted: 03:01:39 06/12/2010
hey its me your biggest fan remember fan power ( I FORGOT MOST OF THE STORY ) L.O.L
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#681 Posted: 14:00:14 06/12/2010 | Topic Creator
Yeah, sure.. How could I ever forget the guy who bugged me with all those "I'm your biggest fan" PM's..
I'm really going to bug my head these next couple of days, and try to write more. Lets' see how it goes. |
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#682 Posted: 21:14:01 07/12/2010
Thats good....for us i mean
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#683 Posted: 18:33:36 08/12/2010
I really love this story. I have read the first one already and the plotline for this story is amazing
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Story status- Skylanders: The Forgotten Elements- Chapter 11 is up ~ End of all Hope- Done ~Watch the Power of Aura~ |
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#684 Posted: 13:08:07 09/12/2010 | Topic Creator
Thanks. I'm trying to find a way to continue it.
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#685 Posted: 03:42:12 18/12/2010
PLZ CONTINUE OR I WILL
PLZ PLZ BTW CAN I spread the word about this story |
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#686 Posted: 10:46:40 18/12/2010 | Topic Creator
Yeah, do it as much as you want.
But, just remember that this is the second part of the story. I recommend people to read the first part before bothering with this one. Hey, I just got an idea. I'll try to write a chapter now. |
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#687 Posted: 12:20:48 18/12/2010 | Topic Creator
Chapter 35.
Spyro woke up inside a dimly litted tent. He didn't know how early it was, but he could see light coming from the outside. His head was pounding like hell, and he didn't have the power to get up from the ground.. Spyro turned his head to look around, and immediately flinched from pain. The scar on the other side of his face was still sore. He had a feeling something had happened to it last evening, but no matter how hard he tried, he couldn't remember anything from last night. This was a new experience to Spyro, he didn't know why he was like this.. There were others inside the tent too, he couldn't see them properly, but he could hear them snoring, and smell them. He was the only one already awake. Spyro forced himself up from the ground, and immediately felt like he was going to throw up. He stormed outside the tent, and with some effort, was able to hold it in.. He looked around himself and saw trees. He wasn't in the Cheetah village anymore.. Spyro was sure he had been there last evening, but he couldn't remember.. "Good to see somebody else is awake.." A low, grumbling voice said behind him. The voice startled spyro and he turned around quickly.. Before him, was sitting a middle aged, red cheetah. He looked a lot like hunter.. "H.. Hunter, is that you?.." Spyro said, and coughed loudly. "Hunter?.." The cheetah said.. "What trouble has that brat got himself into now?.." "Wait.. You know hunter?.." Spyro said, and felt a little embarassed for mistaking the cheetah as his friend. "Whatever you like to call him, yes.. I am his cousin, they call me Mirra." Mirra said. "Mirra.. I didn't know hunter had any family left. He never spoke of any of you." Spyro said. "Everybody has got a family. 'Hunter' just never wanted to face the fact that he had any ties with us.." Mirra said. "Wait.." Spyro said, "What did you mean 'whatever you like to call him'.." Spyro asked, he was a bit confused, because he was still tired. "That's not his real name.. " Mirra said. "It's not?" Spyro asked, "Then why do you call him hunter? What is his real name?".. "We call him that because he was one of the tribe hunters, the best." Mirra said, "And.. He wouldn't want me to tell you this, but he's not around anyway. His real name is Merol.." "Merol.. Weird, I always thought his name was hunter." Spyro said. "Yes, I heard that. He was always secretive." Mirra said, "So, you are Spyro.." "How do you know me?" Spyro asked. "I spoke to Merol a few weeks ago.." Mirra said, "And besides, who doesn't know you.." "He was here?.." Spyro asked. "You ask a lot of questions, strangely enough, none about where you are, or what has happened. Come here.." Mirra said, and waved Spyro closer. Spyro hesitated a bit, but Mirra really did look like Hunter. He seemed really nice, and he had a relaxed feeling to him. Spyro went closer and sat on the ground next to Mirra. "Now, I will tell you about Merol, but we're not in a hurry.." Mirra said. "I quess not.." Spyro replied. "So... Where am I?".. "Not far from the village. This little camp is here to house all the people who pass out at the feast." Mirra said, "I'm here to make sure they're alright." "I passed out?.. Why can't I remember anything?.." Spyro asked. Mirra laughed a bit.. "Wine does that to people, and you drank a lot." Mirra said. "Oh.. What did I do there?.. I can't remember anything." Spyro asked. "See, there are two kinds of people who drink wine. Those who get nicer when they do. And those who get angrier.. You.. Well, started a couple of fights, then passed out.." Mirra said. "What?.. I hope I didn't hurt anyone." Spyro said. "No, you were the one who took beating." Mirra said, and laughed again, "Drunkards don't fight well.." "And I was brought here?.." Spyro said. "Yes." Mirra replied. Spyro turned his head away, and digested the information for a moment. He couldn't believe what he heard form Mirra. That he had started fighting inside the village. Spyro wondered what Prowlus was thinking right now.. "And, I suppose you want to know about Merol." Mirra said. "Who?.. I don't kno- I mean yes!" Spyro said, he wasn't yet accustomed to the fact that Hunter was no longer Hunter. "Was he here?".. "He was, he didn't visit the village, but he met me here. He told me he was leaving, and we spoke a little." Mirra said, "That's all.." "He didn't say where he was going, or what he was doing?.." Spyro said. "No, he didn't. That's Merol for you.." Mirra said. "Well.." Spyro managed to say. He tought about things a bit. And decided it was time to get back to the village. "It was pleasure to meet you Mirra. But I really need to return." He said. "Let me come with you.." Mirra said, "I'm hurting for things to do.." "Well, okay.." Spyro said. Maybe some friendly company wouldn't hurt after what happened with Cynder and Ember. Mirra and Spyro got up, and took the path to the village.. |
Edited 2 times - Last edited at 17:08:28 18/12/2010 by Samius
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#688 Posted: 12:53:22 18/12/2010
Wow, that was great. It was worth the wait.
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#689 Posted: 13:54:20 18/12/2010
yup, interesting Name for "Hunter" or should i say...Merol
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#690 Posted: 16:30:59 18/12/2010
Woohoo! Nice chapter, really worth the wait, but don't worry about us, remember, don't rush, and take all the time you need.
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#691 Posted: 17:09:38 18/12/2010 | Topic Creator
Edited some typos there. I noticed I accidentally called Hunter "Morel" first, when I was meant to call him "Merol"
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#692 Posted: 17:17:18 18/12/2010
Yay, story's back! And it's good chapter!
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#693 Posted: 17:33:39 18/12/2010
Good chapter
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#694 Posted: 05:48:33 19/12/2010
AWESOME
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#695 Posted: 23:57:38 19/12/2010
I KNEW HE WOULD GET DRUNK well anyways nice chapter
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#696 Posted: 01:39:13 20/12/2010
Nice job samius
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#697 Posted: 18:47:59 22/12/2010
The story contunies!
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#698 Posted: 22:49:15 12/02/2011
Cool.
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I'm batman!! Shh... |
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#699 Posted: 10:44:48 15/02/2011
When we can read more of this?
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#700 Posted: 14:42:53 01/03/2011
Looks like this story is as good as dead <.<
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