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#651 Posted: 00:15:13 10/07/2009
Wanderist: LOOK DAWN!!!! More horses!
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#652 Posted: 00:17:31 10/07/2009
F: what if it changes again? what if it changes to me?! Dawn! don't eat me!
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep. Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land. |
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#653 Posted: 22:53:36 10/07/2009
D: I'M SO CONFUSED!!!!!!!!
Me:GOOD!!!! |
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#654 Posted: 23:25:31 10/07/2009
F: eat the horse avi! but don't eat me if the avi changes!
don't you dare eat my horse avi!!!
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep. Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land. |
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#655 Posted: 18:04:08 11/07/2009
D: ok *puts avi in mouth*
Me: *tackles Dawn* |
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#656 Posted: 03:20:49 13/07/2009
Chapter 57:"The Fury of Two Dragons"
The dust -that remained- faded away, as all four dragons were lying on the ground, badly hit and weak. Back at the cage, all the companions just stood there, shocked, at what powerful breathes they all took to become weak. “Dawn, Pablo get up!” yelled out Starfire, finally breaking the silence. “Young dragons, do not quit just yet! You’re destiny is still yet far away!” said Ignitus, entering the lair. He looked at the cage, and tried to open it. “It’s no use! This cage is way to powerful than we have expected!” said Starfire. As DarkShadow was the only one able to get up, he started to run up to the both dragons, still on the ground. All at once, he managed to grab them both by the neck, and pushed them up the wall. Dawn and Pablo then opened up their eyes wide, gasping for air. “Now it’s time to complete my destiny! The world is almost at its completion from my spell, and there’s no stopping it!” he said. As DarkShadow had said this, Ignitus, surprisingly agreed. “Dimness and evil is nearly here, young ones. If Pablo and Dawn does not use there Fury quick, who knows how the world will be like!” “What?! You’re giving up, Ignitus!” replied Starfire, in shock. “She’s right! Why are you giving up now, when we are so close to winning!” said Spyro. “Look at the Pool of Vision,” said both Comet and Rookie, pointing in fear. As they focused, they saw little left of the world untouched. “That’s why,” said Ignitus. “No,” whispered Starfire. As some were in tears, others felt gloomy. Dawn closed her eyes, with a tear, as she had heard this. “There’s no more hope, Pablo,” speaking inside her mind. ”Remember a long time ago, when we were both at the beach? And you were giving up, just like now?” he questioned. ”You said that, Sometimes when all seems lost, a light shines through all of us…” she reminded herself. ” We'll find a way to make things better. You and me!,” he said. Just then DarkShadow released his grip, as Dawn and Pablo fell. “I see you both are quitting! I knew you had no chance to defeat me!” laughing weakly. Dawn looked at Pablo’s eyes, and “saw” the light shining through them. “Not…so fast,” she said, getting up. “What?! You still manage to get up, and not even weak!,” he said, angry. “A light is shining through both of us right now. But you can’t see it,” she replied, looking at Pablo, smiling. Just then, the ground started to tremble, violently. “It is completed!” yelled out DarkShadow. The lair was starting to break apart, with huge boulders tumbling down above them. As Dawn and Pablo saw the cage crack,-with there friends free- they both saw a bolder coming down toward them. “Watch out!” she yelled out, sending a LightSheild toward them. “Whoa, so close from being crushed!” said Rookie, horrified. “Thank-you so much, but you guys have to use the Fury, before anything else happens!” said Spyro. Dawn and Pablo both looked at each other, as they saw corrupted dragons and enemies heading on the way to them. “So I guess this is it, our time to leave this world,” said Dawn. “It seems so,” replied Pablo. “I never imagined or dreamt of saving the world from this condition before,” she said, shaking her head. “We’ll be at peace once more, and our love will forever be strong,” he answered, moving closer to Dawn. They glared at there allies for one last time, and Dawn said,” I love you.” “I love you, too,” ended Pablo. They then closed there eyes as they both turned into Light. Finally, they rise up, wheeled together, and spread their wings; unleashing there Fury of Two. It increased rapidly around the world with light green and sparkles, eliminating evil for good. A it ended, the planet was now at its peace and freedom. The End! |
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#657 Posted: 03:27:51 13/07/2009
Wanderist: So sad!!!!
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#658 Posted: 03:28:17 13/07/2009
Me: I wanna cry
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#659 Posted: 03:32:12 13/07/2009
Wanderist:
Sally, Hey, at least Rookie made it! |
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#660 Posted: 03:33:38 13/07/2009
Rookie: I'm here!
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#661 Posted: 03:38:19 13/07/2009
Wanderist: *hugs Rookie*
Sally: *hugs Freezer* Me: What the heck!? |
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#662 Posted: 03:40:40 13/07/2009
Me: I don't know...
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#663 Posted: 03:42:21 13/07/2009
Me: They are crazy. Are they alive?
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#664 Posted: 03:43:02 13/07/2009
Me: I dunno
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#665 Posted: 03:44:24 13/07/2009
Me: Wa!
Wanderist: |
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#666 Posted: 21:52:33 13/07/2009
it may be a sad ending, but its still an awesome story!
F: i wonder if everyone is ok... Sf: *acts like ghost. moans and groans* F: cut it out, Starfire. Sf: *stops* aw, Mom, you ruined the fun
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#667 Posted: 22:44:18 13/07/2009
Rookie:
Me: Next up, trying to make up a great title for Dawn's next and FINAL story |
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#668 Posted: 01:05:16 14/07/2009
Me: FINAL?!
Wanderist: NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!! |
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#669 Posted: 20:43:00 14/07/2009
Me: Oh, c'mon. After that there will be this: The Legend of Dawn: The Adventures. Or something like that
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#670 Posted: 18:21:08 15/07/2009
cool. if you need ideas or names, let me know.
F: yeah. shes great with names. after all, she named me and i can't wait for the next story!
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep. Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land. |
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#671 Posted: 19:50:48 15/07/2009
Me: I'm still think Can you help me with the title?
Dawn: She does have something up in her mind, but somethings missing... |
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#672 Posted: 19:53:57 15/07/2009
sure. but it helps to know at least a little bit about the story, so i can think of a good title for the story.
F: yeah. the name has to fit the story.
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep. Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land. |
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#673 Posted: 22:53:20 16/07/2009
D: Of coarse it does!
Anyone(like wanderist) that doesn't want to know what the next story is, DON'T CLICK HERE!!! Anyone who does, go ahead!! It's about the world dieing off. Which means it will by the end. Yeah freaky, but there will be something at the end. What do you think? Idea: The Legend of Dawn: The End of All. Or something like that |
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#674 Posted: 18:17:31 17/07/2009
sounds cool. or you could call it:
the ledgend of Dawn: the end is near
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#675 Posted: 19:17:40 17/07/2009
That sounds awesome! Thanks
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#676 Posted: 19:22:46 17/07/2009
np!
F: cool title!
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#677 Posted: 19:23:45 17/07/2009
I clicked the spoiler. I love it!
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#678 Posted: 19:27:35 17/07/2009
well, glad you like the name.
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#679 Posted: 19:28:58 17/07/2009
I'm a bad girl.
Wanderist: I told her not to do it. |
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#680 Posted: 19:35:26 17/07/2009
well, Fireflight never listens to me...
F: what?! i tell you to write my story all the time, but do you ever listen?! no!
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#681 Posted: 19:37:58 17/07/2009
Wanderist dosen't listen either. Or Sally.
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#682 Posted: 19:42:30 17/07/2009
what dragon does listen?
F: heck, what human listens?
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep. Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land. |
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#683 Posted: 19:45:37 17/07/2009
D: You never write my story!
Me: Yes I do! D: Then why not-*mouth is shut by my hand* Me: DON'T SPOIL IT!! |
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#684 Posted: 19:46:26 17/07/2009
Me: HA HA!!!
Wanderist: *slaps me* Don't be mean to Dawn! |
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#685 Posted: 19:49:25 17/07/2009
F: yeah! don't be mean!
what?! your always mean to me!
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep. Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land. |
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#686 Posted: 19:50:04 17/07/2009
D:
Me: *slaps her* Don't laugh! us: *starts to fight* |
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#687 Posted: 19:52:44 17/07/2009
F: what a waste of time...
what? F: fighting what are you talking about? you argue with me all the time! F: do not! do too! F: do not! do too! *both start fighting*
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep. Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land. |
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#688 Posted: 20:23:58 17/07/2009
Me: *tackles Dawn*
D: Get off! Me:No! |
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#689 Posted: 20:25:51 17/07/2009
F: *tackles me*
*kicks her off* F: *flies at me* *gets up and runs* F: *chases me*
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep. Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land. |
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#690 Posted: 20:30:22 17/07/2009
D: HA! HA! GOT GET HER FIREFLIGHT!!!!!!
Me:*slaps her* D: QUIT IT!!!!!*breathes fire at me* Me:*doges* DON'T GET ME BARBECUED!!!!!!!!!!!!! D: WHO SAID I WAS!!!!!!!! Me: I DUNNO. WHY NOT EXPLAIN THE FIRE!!!!!!!! |
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#691 Posted: 20:37:15 17/07/2009
F: *shoots fire balls at me*
AHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!! *dodges and runs* F: *chases, shoots fire balls* GET BACK HERE!
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep. Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land. |
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#692 Posted: 20:38:35 17/07/2009
Me: TIME!!!! I HAVE AN ANNOUNCEMENT!!!!!!!! I think you'll know what it is after I post this:
_________________________________________________________ Chapter 58: “Survivors” Ignitus and the others saw everything back to normal with little sparkles fall gently around them. “They’re gone,” said Starfire. “I guess this was there destiny after all,” said Spyro. “Young dragons, be glad that you are all safe, despite that Dawn and Pablo are no longer with us,” responded Ignitus. “He’s right! Where every they are at, they are both safe and free!” said Cynder. The group then flew out of the damaged lair, and into the sky, glaring at the beautiful lands right before there eyes. “It’s beautiful!” said Starfire. “Yeah, it is,” responded Rookie. “It is now a new beginning for all dragon race!” said Comet. They then continued to soar around the lands, looking at the renewed places. Meanwhile…. A dragoness was starting to open up her eyes, as she heard voices calling her name. ”Wake up!” said a male’s voice. The dragoness finally unlocked her eyes, and stood up, weak. “Wha…I’m…where am I?” she questioned, confused “Why? Don’t you recognize this place?” asked The Chronicler. “My dream world?” she asked. “Yes, it is,” said Midnight. “My head’s pounding,” she continued, shaking her head. “You’ll be fine. Mine was too a few minutes ago,” said Pablo. “I’ve got a strange feeling that I’m still alive,” said Dawn. “You are!” said Dragsooth. “I knew it!” smiled Pablo. “I couldn’t believe it, too! I’d thought after completing a destiny, a dragon or dragoness was to die,” said Inferno. “Nature,” said Dawn, smiling. “What?” said Dragsooth. “It’s the element of Nature! Just like what Midnight said, if you are one with Nature, they will always be there for you!” she said, excited. “So, it is Nature that saved you both?!” said Inferno. “I knew you both would be one with Nature,” said Midnight, hugging Dawn and Pablo. “I’d wish we could stay, but I want to go back home,” said Pablo. “You’re right! Wait until Starfire and the others will react!” Dawn said. “Alright, calm down you two!” said The Chronicler. “I can’t believe that we survived!” exclaimed Dawn, still jumpy. “Keep on talking, and we’ll never go back home!,” laughed Pablo. “Sorry!,” she smiled. “Well, until then! It’s great to see you both are alright!,” said Dragsooth. “Not to mention to live another day!,” said Midnight. “Have a great time spending your new beginning together!” smiled The Chronicler. “Thanks!” ended both teenagers. They then finally walked off, ready to see there friends and the new world. ”This isn’t good,” whispered Midnight. |
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#693 Posted: 20:41:53 17/07/2009
awesome!
F: they lived!
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep. Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land. |
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#694 Posted: 20:42:18 17/07/2009
Chapter 59: “A New Age”
”Pablo? Pablo,” said a voice. A few seconds later, he opened his eyes, glaring at something beautiful. “You okay?,” asked Dawn. He smiled and then got up, “Yeah, I’m fine,” he said, smiling. They were both in a thick forest, with few dim lights shining through the trees. “C’mon, let’s go and check out the new lands,” she said, kissing him. “Alright,” he responded, also kissing her. They both flew out of the forest, and like being in a dream, they saw a remarkable change of the world, because of them. “Wow,” they both said, amazed. “A new beginning for all dragons, and all because of us!” said Pablo. “Let’s go and find the others!” said Dawn, joyful. They flew off quickly, anxious, to find all there companions; after being knocked out, the teens still have energy to search for something they care for. Meanwhile at The Valley of Avalar…. The group looked horrible with tears in there eyes and others cried there eyes out. “I miss them alright,” said Cynder, teary. “We all do,” said Spyro, hugging Cynder. “Wait, where did Ignitus go?” asked Rookie. “I don’t know,” replied Starfire, without looking around for him. But the others didn’t care, for that they lost something valuable to there friendship. Rookie took off, to find Ignitus, because he didn’t want anyone else to leave forever; for that’s what he thought. Looking around worriedly, he bumped into him. “Oh, sorry Ignitus,” he said, getting up. “It’s okay,” he whispered, not looking back at him. “You okay?” he asked. “I’m fine. Somehow I feel a presence of Dawn and Pablo still here,” he answered. “Maybe it’s there spirits are still here, at peace?” said Rookie. “Perhaps,” ended Ignitus. Just then Dawn and Pablo spotted Rookie flying into a cave, and followed him in. “Hope you guys are okay,” he whispered to himself. “We’re fine!” said Dawn. Rookie jumped, and looked back, staring at the “lifeless” dragons. “Dawn?! Pablo?! But I thought you guys were...” “Dead?” said Pablo, ending Rookie’s sentence. “Yeah!” he said, hugging Dawn and then Pablo. “We’ll tell you the story, along with the others,” laughed Pablo. “C’mon, wait until we see the looks on their faces!” Rookie responded. “Alright!” ended Dawn, flying off with the rest. ”Shh!” said Pablo, hiding behind a bolder. “Let’s surprise them!” he continued. “Good idea!” concluded Rookie, hiding with them. “Now what? Yeah, it might be a new age, but what? Go our separate was now?” said Starfire. “I guess so,” said Spyro. “It feels like we lost all of our friendship,” said Comet. “It doesn’t have to, you know,” responded Rookie, walking away for the bolder. “What do you mean?” asked Cynder. “I’ve got a surprise,” he said. Just then, they two survivors walked toward there group. “DAWN? PABLO!” exclaimed Starfire and Cynder, running to them. “It’s us!” smiled Pablo. “But how?!” said Comet. “*sighs* We’ll tell you!” replied Pablo and Dawn, laughing. After a few minutes of explanations, Ignitus walked back to the group, to find something unbelievable. “You… You’re alive!” exclaimed Ignitus. “Stronger than ever!” grinned Pablo. “Yep!” said Dawn. “I guess we have to explain it to him too!” said Pablo. “No. You guys have fun flying around, we’ll tell him!” smiled Starfire. “Thanks!” they both said, taking off. They flew around and around each other, enjoying there freedom; at last. Laughing and staring at each other, they finally earned a happy ever after. the End. |
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#695 Posted: 20:43:21 17/07/2009
What's not good?
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#696 Posted: 20:45:46 17/07/2009
Quote: wanderist
You'll see what is wrong on the next story. All I can say is that Midnight, Dawn's mom, can sense something bad... |
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#697 Posted: 20:48:16 17/07/2009
hmm...intresting...its a really good story...but i'm gonna be curious as to why Midnight has a bad feeling untill i know something...
F: me too
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#698 Posted: 20:50:11 17/07/2009
Me&Dawn: You'll see....
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#699 Posted: 20:51:42 17/07/2009
*explodes with curiosity*
F: *sighs* i knew that would happen....she has a high curiosity level sometimes....she can be like a cat....and you know the saying...
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep. Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land. |
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#700 Posted: 20:53:49 17/07/2009
Well, the story is awesome!
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