well, how could I resist one last fanfic?
Chapter 1: Uh Oh! Here Comes Trouble!
Stink and Flower sat in the warm sun, looking at the beatiful veiw. Flower sighed.
'It's good to be home, huh?' She said hevenly. Stink didn't reply, just stared at the veiw. Suddenly, before their eyes a beam of light, then a small boat was spinning around out of Control. Stink looked at the boat that was spinning out of Control.
'Time to save someone!' Stink sped off to his Speedboat Flower had made him at Christmas. Stink sped of after the boat.
'Be Careful!' Flower shouted after him.
'You Too!' He shouted back. The speedboat catched up to the raft in no time, but when he came to it there was nobody in it. Only a peice of paper. ahlf of it was smudged out by water. it read
Did you rea
could stop m
the greatest D
You can't possibl
He decided to go back to shore. Maybe Flower had some macchine to repair the message. but on the way, suddenly a huge tenticle shot from the Ocean. It grabbed the Speedboat. Stink looked down at the creature below. He gasped at what it was.
'THE KRAKEN???' He gasped. It luged foward, the boat jupmed from its grip. It chased the little boat with graet speed. Stink was shocked when he got to shore. He decided to find Flower..... But where was she? She wasn't waiting at the beach, nor on the rocks watching the veiw. He ran back to the house. Billy sat on the sofa, his huge turtle shell making a mark on the sofa.
'Is Flower here?'
'No.... she was with you.' He carried on watching Snake Snooker on TV. Stink ran off towards the rocks again, and found another note.
I think you'll find she's not here,
But no matter, she'll be gone for a while,
you won't be seeing her again!
Signed, the Dragon Gahard
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#1 Posted: 17:19:24 14/10/2008 | Topic Creator
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#2 Posted: 17:24:36 14/10/2008
Ooohhh! Nice!
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#3 Posted: 17:39:25 14/10/2008
Wow I like it! Can't wait for chapter 2!
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#4 Posted: 17:48:15 14/10/2008 | Topic Creator
Thanx!
Chapter 2: On the Case Stink sat down in front of Wise-Shelled-Billy, wisest Turtle in all the land. He is Stink's grandfather, as he is to the whole of Stink's family. Billy listened to every detail carefully. Stink finished talking. 'It seems we have an problem then.....' 'It's all my fault. I should of used that god danm telescope she gave me.' He sat silently. Ellena, Stink's other sister, a talking bird, spoke up. 'Well, I say we find her! If some weirdo, this, Gahard, has gotten her, we must save her!' 'Not we, just me.' Stink said bodly. He was convinced. 'What? You can't be serious!' Smash, his brother, a muscular tiger, said. 'She's my sister, my responsibility ad its all my fault. I should be the only one saving her! Not you guys. Just me. Billy looked at the others. 'I am afraid Stink is right. It is not our fight, if Stink wishes to travel alone, then we must allow him to do so.' Ellena nodded. Smash hesitated, but the nodded. Anuette nodded too. 'You Are Not Going Without Me!' A metal voice boomed. Stink turned around and saw DEXTA, a metal robot, standing in the doorway. 'She Is My Girl, And I Must Help!' Stink thought it over. Should he? Well, DEXTA was right... 'Okay, you can come.' Stink muttered. 'Let's go!' Billy had packed their bags with food. DEXTA was a robot, with no mouth, and didnt need to eat. So Stink had extra food, and drink. There was also a healing ointment to cure any wounds, three sleeping bags, some cushions and Stink's baseball bat weapon. DEXTA carried the bag full of the accesroies. 'Let's Head Off!' DEXTA said. 'Goodbye!' DEXTA cried after the others. 'Bye Bye!' Stink cried after his family. Meemo stood from his house watching. 'I wish you luck!' He said happily. Flower woke up on a small uncomfy bed. She sat up. She was in a jail cell. Huge black brick walls covered with mould surrounded her, and 3 inch bars at the gate of the cell. 'Where-Where am I?' She asked. There in the cell with her aws an guard. He smirked. 'At the castle of our lordship Gahard...' She satred at the blank face... 'And you are his servent now!'
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#5 Posted: 17:59:08 14/10/2008 | Topic Creator
Chapter 3: The Castle Gahard
Flower was silent. 'Whos he?' The guard stared at her. There was something about his pale face and blank eyes that made her shiver. 'The Master. He feeds us prisinors and takes us in....... and he is the best......' 'What?' She cried. 'Your a Prisinor but you still like him?' 'But of course!' He said drearly. 'Whats wrong with you? Your face is so pale! and thoses eyes are blank! and your voice is flat! You sound hypnotised or something!' 'But I am,' He said flatly. 'How can I worship the lorship if I am not hypnotised?' Flower stared, her moutyh open. 'WHAT? GET ME OUT OF HERE!' She screamed through the bars. The pale face stared at her. 'That is no use. But soon, you will join the legion of Gahard.' 'I AM NOT BEING HYPNOTISED! DONT YOU DARE! DONT YOU DARE!' 'There is no use, you will join, whever you like it or not. And screaming will only make it happen faster.' Then the door opened. A huge bulky soilder came in carrying a sword. Behind him was a second girl. She looked exactly like Flower. She walked in, with another Skunk. He looked exactly like Stink. 'Hello,' She said politley, 'sorry to disturb you, but I'm your clone, and my name is Rosie, this is Stunk.' She said smiling. Not a smile, but a smirk. She poured a drink into the two cups. 'Just delivering you daily hypnosis drinks... and newcomers are always first. Now, open wide.'
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#6 Posted: 18:10:22 14/10/2008 | Topic Creator
Chapter 4: The Ambush of the Clones
Stink and DEXTA walked along through the woods. It was dark and scary. But Stink's mind was only focused on one thing - to get Flower back. And to kill this, Gahard guy. But who said it was a Guy? Stink thought. He shaked away the thought. The thought of a Woman capturing Flower was freaky, and he didn't like it. 'DEXTA, how long till we reach this castle place?' He asked. DEXTA scanned the place. 'Only Five Days Away Predicted' He reported. Stink moaned. 'Five days? Who knows what could happen to her by then? She could go nuts!' 'I Am Sorry, And I Have Feelings For Flowa Too, She Is My GirlFreind.' He beeped. Suddenly, the woods was awake with noise. Monkeys started jumping around screaming. Suddenly, a girl came walking through the wood, smirking. It was Flower. 'Flower?' 'Flowa?' 'No,' She said simply, 'I'm Rosie, her clone. She was cloned during her sleep, and I'm the resut. And, you shouldn't have held her hand now you have a clone too!' Another Skunk walked along beside her, arms folded and a smug grin on his face. 'DNA, such a esay thing to clone.' The Skunk muttered. 'Who are you?' 'I told you, I'm Rosie,' 'And I'm Stunk.' Stunk finished. Stink looked around. Small T-Rex creatures surrounded them. 'And now we're gonna kill you!'
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#7 Posted: 18:21:33 14/10/2008
Could you please read my fanfic, It's called Born in Darkness and it's in fandom! Spread the word!
Please please please!
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#8 Posted: 18:41:58 14/10/2008 | Topic Creator
I hope you like it so far!
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#9 Posted: 18:47:42 14/10/2008 | Topic Creator
Update on characters:
Stink is a male Skunk, who is a hero and has saved amny things Flower is a scientific genius and Stink's sister. Smash is a male, bulky, musculear Tiger with a attitude Ellena is a blue flying bird, a female. But swears alot. More of a tomboy. Anuette is a flying female ant. She is Billy's favroute grandaughter and is very witty Billy is the wisest Turtle and sometimes refered to as Wise-Shelled-Billy for his wisdom
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#10 Posted: 18:54:01 14/10/2008 | Topic Creator
Chapter 5: Nowhere to hide
stink and DEXTA ran through the forest, the way the monkeys were running. DEXTA had robotic feet, so didn't get tired. But Stink is flesh, so he did. 'DEXTA!' he huffed. 'I need a rest!' DEXTA stopped and picked Stink up, carrying him and running the way. They stopped in a small circle where the trees opened into a samll area. 'Hide!' Stink suggested. DEXTA ran the numbers and scanned. 'There Is No Possible Hiding Place!' He reported. Stink looked around. 'We're doomed!' He cried, kneled down and then..... the floor opened up and sucked him down. DEXTA Stared. 'Only Possible Answer Is........ Mole......' The floor opened and sucked him down. Flower sat up from her bed, she felt like gagging, but couldn't. The guard was sitting by the chamber pot, watching her. Her pale face looked at him. She spoke in a dreary voice. 'Is it time?' She flatly spoke. 'The Master is not awake.' The guard replied. Flower turned her pale face and looked up at the celing. Her blank eyes only focused on the mould and black bricks. she was desperate to start serving her glorious Master. She stared silently, but couldn't get the feeling of being watched away from her. She turned. the pale face still stared at her orange, pale fur. 'Can you stop looking at me?' She said in a dreary tone. 'Ever since that potion you drunk....... you have adjusted...........' He murmered. Flower shrugged. 'All for the better.' She said. 'What about........ your family?' He spat the word out like it was dirt. Suddenly Flower's mind flashed with images. And a Flashback.... Stink and Flower were playing frisbee with eachover, laughing and shouting. Then Flower missed the catch. 'Yes!' Stink said, smiling. His eyes twinkled in the sunlight. 'I win!' 'Oh, no you don't!' She laughed, throwing the frisbee. It wihzzed towards Stink, who missed it. Flower laughed and pointed. 'Now whos the loser?'........ The she saw another flashback. She sat on a cliff at nighttime. It was cold and chilly. She was all alone, until Stink walked along. The moonlight shone on his black fur and face. 'Are you okay little sister?' He said gentily. She shrugged. 'Cold are you?' She nodded. 'Here you go,' He took of his only warm source, a blanket, and wrapped ita round her. She looked at him, he had a smile on his face. 'Thank you......' 'Thats okay,' He said smiling, 'thats what family's for!' Then the gloomy black and green roof apppeared. Flower looked blankly at him. 'I don't remeber....' she said, answering his question. Her face was still pale and blank, her voice still flat. But her heart wished that Stink was with her............
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#11 Posted: 19:02:00 14/10/2008 | Topic Creator
anybody?
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#12 Posted: 19:07:05 14/10/2008
pot to short?
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#13 Posted: 19:10:18 14/10/2008 | Topic Creator
lol! *laughs* That made me laugh!
my plant pot is too short.
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#14 Posted: 19:13:51 14/10/2008
thats gross lol
Wow that fanfic is great! |
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#15 Posted: 19:15:00 14/10/2008 | Topic Creator
Really?
Thanks!
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#16 Posted: 19:15:28 14/10/2008
ya! cant wait for moar
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#17 Posted: 19:16:12 14/10/2008 | Topic Creator
mores coming soon!
in fact im writing another chapter!
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#18 Posted: 19:19:54 14/10/2008
yayz for chapters! *shot*
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#19 Posted: 19:29:08 14/10/2008 | Topic Creator
Chapter 6: Sleeping in a Tunnel
Stink's eyelids flickered open. He looked up. The roof was made of mud, and roots stuck down. He looked around the narrow tunnel. Moloe was sitting down holding a lamp. 'Lucky I followed you out of town!' he chuckled. 'I heard the comotion and came to save you!' Stink stared at DEXTA, who was sleeping. His circuits needed a rest to be at full strength. 'Yeah, well thanks. But we really need to get to the Castle of Gahrad.' Mole dug a hole in the roof. 'You mean this place?' He asked gleefully. Stink stuck his head through the roof, and Stink found himself staring at a huge castle, buit with black bricks and covered in mould. 'Flower.............' He muttered. Mole woke DEXTA up. 'Come on hero! Time to wake up and save your girlfreind.' Stink saw DEXTA, and he saw his metal go a bit red. He could swaer that was a blush. Mole had packed them fresh food, and some sweet things along the way. He also suggested, in case they were captured and food taken away, they should have some bubble gum hidden in their pockets. There were cookies and lots of things like pancakes. DEXTA and Stink approached the Castle gates, and looked around. It was being gaurded by perfectly normal villagers, but they had pale faces, blank eyes and spoke flatly. 'Hypnotised...' DEXTA said once he scanned. Stink looked at the villagers. 'Probally Made To Guard The Castle......' 'DEXTA, im afraid not.' DEXTA had no idea what Stink was talking about but the gates were wide open with a sign saying You are welcome to Enter at your own risk that did it. Stink marched towards the Gates, DEXTA running after him. The gates were so huge, Stink looked like a nsect to the guards sitting at the top of the gates watching. Three guards surrounded Stink and DEXTA with swords. 'What is you doing here?' One spoke flatly. 'I am here to find my Sister, Flower, the furry orange female.' Stink said. The guards looked at eachover. 'then follow us. i'm sure the lordship would let you have time with your sister....'
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“The innocent, the innocent, Mandus, trod and bled and gassed and starved and beaten and murdered and enslaved. This is your coming century!” |
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#20 Posted: 19:40:11 14/10/2008 | Topic Creator
Chapter 7: Brother and Sister Reunited
Stink walked along the gloomy halways. In every jail cell there was either a gloomy white pale face or a face, with one last glimmer of hope. He finally reached one corridor. 'If it's a girl, sh'd be down this corridor.' The guard said. 'Find her,' said one weird guard, that looked not so pale. He was claerly pretending to be hypnotised. He walked along, checkking every cell. Then he reached it. Flower was lying on a bed, and in the corner was one mad looking guard sleeping. 'This one!' Stink said. The guard unlocked the door. Stink walked in. flower sat up and stared at him. Stink was expecting her to be happy, but her afce was pale. Her orange fur looked white and her eyes were blank. She looked at him. 'Flower.......' He said. Tears formed in his eyes. Flower got up and ran towards him, and hugged him. Stink accepted the hug happily. 'I thought you were dead.......' Stink whispered quietly. Flower let out a smile. 'You should know me better than that,' She started crying with joy. Stink did the same. Then the door was pulled open. A dragon came striding along and stared at him. 'So, you are Stink?' Stink nodded. 'Good, I am Gahrad, the Dragon lord and king of these relms!'
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“The innocent, the innocent, Mandus, trod and bled and gassed and starved and beaten and murdered and enslaved. This is your coming century!” |
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#21 Posted: 19:48:33 14/10/2008 | Topic Creator
This is taking a long time
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#22 Posted: 23:59:01 14/10/2008
i bet, but its really good
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#23 Posted: 16:23:27 15/10/2008 | Topic Creator
Chapter 8: The Lord of Pure Evil
Gahrad led them down a corridor, passing many cells with pale white faces in. Stink stared at them. The Guard in Flower's cell had followed them, watching their every move. Stink and Flower walked into a huge room full with dazaling lights and electronic machines. 'Did you really think that my castle would have no technolagy at all? How do you think I brainwash these people! And you were lucky, that you only had one cup. If my servents Stunk and Rosie brought more than one cup, then you'd be more pale than you are now...' Flower looked at him angrily. 'What are you trying to do?' Stink said after a long silence. 'Nothing,' The dragon shrugged. 'Just prove that I am the greatest creature ever!' Flower growled. 'I don't think so,' She lunged at him, he kicked her off and she fell into a black hole. Stink looked down the hole a long time. 'Any second now.....' Gahrad smiled. Then a huge purple light. Flower came flying up, eyes glowing dark purple. Her hair had turned from blonde to black, and she was... flying? 'F-F-Flower?' Stink called. Her eyes darted at him. 'Good thing she drunk the evil potion,' Gahrad smiled, 'beacuse without it i wouldn't have the perfect soilder. Stink... Meet your new and improved sister... DarkFlower!'
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#24 Posted: 17:53:42 15/10/2008
kewl. i like it! I'm gonna start reading the next chapters soon!
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#25 Posted: 18:09:31 15/10/2008
Oooohhh I like Chapter eight.
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#26 Posted: 18:12:59 15/10/2008
Oh and there's updates on Born in Darkness.
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#27 Posted: 18:13:47 15/10/2008
yeah its awesome! 8D also im round malefo's house!
And he wants to talk! Malefor0001: Hi! Thanx for reading meh FanFic! Crashdude55: JEA! lol i was watching you when u wrote it! xD Malefor0001: And i watched u write that! Crashdude55: OMFG!!! UR RIGHT!!!! 8D Malefor0001: I'll post chapter 9 next! I think youll find it really suprising Crashdude55: 0.0 I will like it hopefully! xD *shot* Anyway this is getting crazy lets stop this lol! |
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#28 Posted: 18:40:28 15/10/2008 | Topic Creator
Chapter 9: Sisterly Love......Or Sisterly Hate?
Stink stared breathlessly at Flower, who was floating, purple evil energy flowing through her. Her eyes darted around the room. Stink walked foward. 'Flower?' He stuttered. 'Are you......alright?' She looked at him, staring evily. 'I'm better than fine, Brother,' he voice seemed darker, and more eviler, 'I feel wonderfully powered.... and now I see it all....... you've been holding me back from using my true powers.....' 'Flower, i'm your brother, I love you, If you did have powers, I wouldn't dare hold you back. But you don't have powers! You've just drunk some idiotic potion that made you powerful!' She stared at him. 'So,' she muttered, 'You confess to holding me back....' 'No!' '.....Anyawy, now I can finish you off............' She lunged foward. Stunk dodged out of the way. She smashed into a machine that exploded into peices. She blew the dust of her fist. 'Lucky dodge,' She growled, and she then shot a beam of evil energy. Stink ran as fast as he could, the beam following him. He was slowing down. He puffed and panted, and hid behind a small machine top rest. But he didn't get a long rest, because the machine was blown to bits by the beam. DEXTA ran in and saw Flower.... murderng her own brother. 'Flowa! Leave Him Alone!' He Screched. She turned away from Stink and aimed at DEXTA. 'Then, you will die first!' She shot another beam of evil energy. DEXTA fell backwards screaming. He jumped towards her, ready to grab her. He missed and hit against the wall. 'FLOWA!' She looked at him. 'I LOVE YOU! YOU DO NOT NEED TO DO THIS!' She hesitated and then lowered on the stone floor. She turned to Gahrad. 'When do we leave master?' She asked angrily. 'Soon my dear,' He muttered. They both walked into the teleporter, and vanished. The guard stared. DEXTA ran over to the unconcious Stink. 'Stink? Stink?' He shook Stink. 'Come On, Wake Up Stink!' No reply. 'Stink? Stink! STINK!'
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“The innocent, the innocent, Mandus, trod and bled and gassed and starved and beaten and murdered and enslaved. This is your coming century!” |
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#29 Posted: 19:09:19 15/10/2008 | Topic Creator
Chapter 10: Arena of Pure Gold
Gahard and DarkFlower arrived at the golden arena quickly. DarkFlower looked around wildly, but the old her who would've been impressed and smiley was gone. 'Not bad,' She muttered. 'It's my, ahem, Second hand palace, and my best arena. Much blood has been spilt her, little one.' DarkFlower glared. 'Don't call me that!' She spat. 'Hehehe.......... oh yes, why don't you show me your powers. Stink and his little pet robot thingiagig will be along in due time, and I want you to kill Stink.' 'He can't possibly find us!' She cried. 'He's dead!' 'No,' he muttered quietly, 'he was only knocked out. You didn't even hit him with that beam!' Flower glared at him. 'Fine, when he arrrives I shall kill him!' 'Good,' he replied, 'cause that will be soon......' Flower glared. The gates of the arena opened. Stunk and Rosie clamered through. 'My lordship,' began Rosie. 'SILENCE!' Gahard screamed. everything fell silent. 'YOU FAILED AT THE SIMPILIST THING! KILLING A SKUNK AND A STUPID ROBOT! HOW DID YOU FAIL? HUH? HUH?' Rosie was silent. Her eyes filled with tears. 'My lord, It wasn't...... I couldn't.......' She began to cry. Gahrad scowled at her. 'Silence, for you and your brother will go to the dungeons of the arena..... i always wanted to use the thumb screw on a female.' Rosie's eyes widened. She cried more. Stunk walked slowly into the dungeons, taking Rosie with him.
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“The innocent, the innocent, Mandus, trod and bled and gassed and starved and beaten and murdered and enslaved. This is your coming century!” |
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#30 Posted: 19:16:08 15/10/2008
Nice! Have you look at Born in darkness yet?
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#31 Posted: 19:18:48 15/10/2008 | Topic Creator
yer! its kewl!
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#32 Posted: 14:40:24 16/10/2008 | Topic Creator
Chaper 11: Stink and DEXTA's mission
Stink opened his eyes slowly. DEXTA was rubbing some of the healing ointment onto Stink's body. Stink looked at him quietly. 'Are You Alright?' DEXTA asked. Stink smile and nodded. 'Yeah, I think so,' he replied. 'We Must Continue And Find Flowa!' Stink remembered. DarkFlower...... 'Is there...... is there anyway we can cure her?' Stink asked hopefully. 'Yes,' DEXTA replied, Stink sighed with relief, 'She Has Absorbed Dark Energy Witch Has Made Her Evil. If We Destroy The Energy, She Will Be Freed From Gahard's Control' Stink got up. 'Then lets use the teleporter.' Stink said. DEXTA looked sadly at stink. 'I Am Afraid That Gahrad Destroyed It When He Left. The Link Has Been Undone!' Stink looked around the wreckage of the lab. The teleporter that had once dazzled with blue lights was now blank and switched off. 'How the heck do we get to Flower then?' Stink asked sadly. 'We Must Go By Foot, And This Time Mole Cannot Help Us.' DEXTA replied. The dreaded answer on foot Stink felt sleepy. He didn't feel like walking. It was dark outside. 'DEXTA,' Stink said quietly, 'is it okay if we camp here until morning. I'm so tired.' DEXTA looked at him. 'My Battery Also Feels Warn Out. Fine, We Shall Camp. We May Find Some Objects In Here Useful!' And that was it, the adventure had only just began...
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“The innocent, the innocent, Mandus, trod and bled and gassed and starved and beaten and murdered and enslaved. This is your coming century!” |
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#33 Posted: 15:09:12 16/10/2008 | Topic Creator
Chapter 12: Flower's Diary
DarkFlower stared at the blank page and sighed. She wanted to write something, but didnt know what to. She then decided what to write. Dear Diary, I am being held captive in this beauitful yet cursed arena. With all my heart I wish Stink was here with me. I have been ordered to kill him when he comes to my rescue. As I write i cry about this. Everyday I am fed only the most horrible gruel and drink the potion Rosie brewed ages ago. My clone is being tourtured though, and she crys every night. I don't blame her. But i only want one thing: My family. I feel so sad and alone. The dragon Gahrad is holding me captive, he is a bully and a big meanie. He is selfish, rude and Stubborn. All i wish is my family were with me. As she finished tears fell from her eyes and onto the page. She wiped away her tears. The very little of old her left had written that, but now she was gone. The thought ran through her head. If only Stink didn't come, then hed be safe. Oh, please, dont make me kill him!
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“The innocent, the innocent, Mandus, trod and bled and gassed and starved and beaten and murdered and enslaved. This is your coming century!” |
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#34 Posted: 18:41:24 16/10/2008
It building up this is, chapter 8 is my fave.
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#35 Posted: 18:49:46 16/10/2008 | Topic Creator
Thanx!
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#36 Posted: 19:01:00 16/10/2008
Dear Diary,
I read Malefor0001's Fanfic today, i thought it was AWSOME! Nice work, i really think they should make something with the fanfic |
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#37 Posted: 19:01:54 16/10/2008 | Topic Creator
Wow.............. thanx Coocie2!
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#38 Posted: 19:02:44 16/10/2008
no problem! ^.^ i seriously think they sould make a TV show or something with it
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#39 Posted: 19:11:33 16/10/2008 | Topic Creator
Seriously? wow thanx! i didnt know ppl on here liked it that much!
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#40 Posted: 19:19:02 16/10/2008
I do, its interesting, and EPIC!
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#41 Posted: 19:24:45 16/10/2008 | Topic Creator
Thanx!
I try my best, but i tink i diont make it emotinal enough, when its meant 2 be
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#42 Posted: 19:26:39 16/10/2008
lol i think its fine
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#43 Posted: 19:27:51 16/10/2008 | Topic Creator
really? thanx! me is real happy!
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“The innocent, the innocent, Mandus, trod and bled and gassed and starved and beaten and murdered and enslaved. This is your coming century!” |
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#44 Posted: 21:02:14 16/10/2008
no problemo
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#45 Posted: 04:27:22 17/10/2008
Whee! So cool!
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#46 Posted: 14:50:55 17/10/2008 | Topic Creator
Thanx guys!
Chapter 13: The Midnight Swamps Stink and DEXTA walked on alone through the swamps. The forest had ended ages ago, and now Stink was concerntrated on saving Flower. DEXTA spoke up. 'We Are Only Five Days Away...' his battery sounded a bit worn down. 'well, lets set up camp here......' Stink stopped and stared at the little huts that belonged to the lost inhabitents of the Swamp. The place was once occupied by the Swamplings, fairy like things, but they had left. The houses were in ruins, most had almost collapsed into te swamp water itself. The bridge to the other side was in ruins. 'We Should Set Camp Up In The Houses' DEXTA suggested. Stink nodded. 'Yeah, its cold and wet. and lonley. I really want to sleep in one of the huts.' 'Agreed, But We Should Find The Least Damaged Hut First.' And they did. One of the huts was perfectly clean, standing on the right angle and it wasn't rotting away. 'Perfect,' Stink said happily. At least, that's what Flower would've said, he thought misrably. The night in the hut wasnt that perfect though. Swamp bugs kept crawling up to Stink and waking him. Also the swamp kept bubbling making strange sounds. Also, the little hut was odd inside. The books were torn apart leaving a mess on the floor, the bed was soaking wet and the inside wasn't that clean.
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“The innocent, the innocent, Mandus, trod and bled and gassed and starved and beaten and murdered and enslaved. This is your coming century!” |
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#47 Posted: 09:18:10 19/10/2008 | Topic Creator
Chapter 14: A rude awakening
'STINK!' the metal voice made Stink jump instantly. He was looking at a mouldy wooden roof. Where am I? Oh yeah, Midnight Swamp he thought. DEXTA was shaking him. 'What is it?' Stink yawned. 'The Village Is Being Searched By Gahrad's Forces' DEXTA shuddered. Stink jumped up, and looked out of the window. There were some knights in black armour holding huge dark purple swords. 'Alright you worthless bags of bones, the master wants this place turned inside and out. Find those stupid creeps, they'll be hiding in one of the huts. I want this place turned inbside and out, until we find them.' The commander had a cruel harsh voice the made Stink's blood go cold. The knights started smashing into the small huts, and it wouldnt be long till they found the hut him and DEXTA were hiding in. Stink packed up the stuff quickly. 'They Are Coming...............' DEXTA said. 'I know, i know!' Stink said fustrated. 'Why Do They Have A Wagon? And A Comfy Looking One Too........' 'probally for Gahrad to sit in.' 'But Why Have They Brought It?' 'I DON'T KNOW!' Stink shouted. The Knights turned to the house and looked at it. 'Someone's in there..........' One said. They looked around. Only two knights were in the area. They aproached the door, thes handle opening......... and the Knights entered. Stink stood there cold and scared. 'Don't worry,' one said, 'freinds.' Stink recognised the voice. 'You were one of the Guards that showed me where Flower was!' Stink said. Find Her the voice in his head echoed. 'Yes, and we must tell you, don't go to the Arena of Pure Gold.' He said. 'Why?' Stink had a bad feeling. 'Because when you arrive you're sister's gonna kill you.' Stink stood petrefied. 'She wouldn't........' 'I'm sorry, but shes not herself. She's evil now. Joined iwth Gahrad. She's one of his faveroute pets now.' Stink stood facing only the wall for ages. 'My sister's become the pet of a Dragon?' the guard nodded, but Stink wasnt facing him. Somehow he knew he nodded though. 'Im afraid so.' 'MY SISTER IS A PET IN A CAGE?' Stink screamed. The knights jumped back. 'THAT ISN'T RIGHT! I'm going to this so cfalled arena, and Im gonna find my sister........ and IM GONNA KILL GAHRAD!'
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“The innocent, the innocent, Mandus, trod and bled and gassed and starved and beaten and murdered and enslaved. This is your coming century!” |
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#48 Posted: 09:40:28 19/10/2008 | Topic Creator
Chapter 15: DarkFlower
Stink and DEXTA hitched a lift in the Wagon to get to the Arena of Pure Gold. Stink had tears in his eyes all the way. DEXTA may have been a robot, but he could still feel feelings. He was sorry for stink. 'I Am Sorry.' He said in his metal voice. Stink turned to him, feeling Anger, hate and sadness all at once. 'She won't kill me. I know her better than that.' Stink said misribly. One of the guards were sitting in the wagon too. It was the same one that talked to Stink. 'Well, if you ae going to meet her you should try my sword. It will provide you protection....... yet I havnt seenher true power yet.' Stink looked at him. 'What's your name?' He said. He guard smiled. 'Jacob' He looked embaressed. Stink smiled. 'Nice name.' Jacob smiled. 'Thanks.' The journey was long and Stink started feeling a bit queasy. The horses pulling the carrige wern't in a good mood, obviously. Stink felt queasy, not because of the Wagon...... becuase of Flower. Jacob and DEXTA were clearly trying to comfort Stink, but it wasn't working. Then they saw. The Arena of Pure Gold. It shone in the darkness like a flame at night. It was beautiful, but deadly. Flower looked from her window. She saw the carrige, and knew. Stink was on board, and she was going to kill him.
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“The innocent, the innocent, Mandus, trod and bled and gassed and starved and beaten and murdered and enslaved. This is your coming century!” |
Malefor0001 Gold Sparx Gems: 2365 |
#49 Posted: 10:14:53 19/10/2008 | Topic Creator
Chapter 16: this isn't how it's meant to be!
Stink walked into the arena. Gahrad sat on a throne in the audience. And there standing on the arena floor was DarkFlower. Stink wanted to run and hug her, but he couldn't. He saw her new self. She was smirking.... and she was happy about what had to be done. 'Welcome!' Gahrad boomed. 'And this will be the last time you see daylight again, for you will die.' With Gahrad was Stunk and a very scared looking Rosie. 'But why?' Stink shouted out. Gahrad smiled. 'Beacuse you are Stink. A hero, so brave and corageous. What a load of Garbage.' 'Why did you have to do this?' He said quietly and sadly. Gahrad knew what he was talking about. Flower. 'Because i shall prove to the world how great I am. When she kills you i shall make her destroy the entire world itself. I shall be king. And you....will be dead.' He let out a fireball and Flower jumped at Stink. Stink jumped out the way. She landed on her feet. She smiled. 'I've been practasing since we last met.' 'Flower, Im not going to fight you.' She smiled. 'Then you are weak.' She drew a sword. stink stared at her. 'No....' She lunged foward and sliced. stink dodged. Flower smirked. 'I almost hit...... but no worry.............. this time i won't miss......... not once......' She started swiping her sword at Stink. She missed. Again. again. again. Stink was tired now, and Flower wasn't. She walked foward. She raised her sword and then........ she stopped, and stared. She threw her sword across the arena floor, sat next to Stink and cuddled him. Gahrad stared. 'Well, finish him off!' He was impatiently shouting. 'No,' Flower said. Stink looked at her. Her hair was blonde again, her eyes sparkling and her fur its normal colour. 'I knew you'd remeber......' Stink grabbed her and cuddled. DEXTA joined in. Gahrad nodded at Stunk. 'Do it.' Stunk produced a huge gun and aimed at Stink's back. Flower saw it being shot and jumpoed in the way. Stink closed his eyes only feeling spletters of blood on his face.
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“The innocent, the innocent, Mandus, trod and bled and gassed and starved and beaten and murdered and enslaved. This is your coming century!” |
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#50 Posted: 10:24:21 19/10/2008
OMG EPICNESS!
I think this should be made into a game series! Now where have we heard that before eh buddy? |
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