So, I am making this story about a few dragons I made up.
Here are the casts:
Dawn: A black and blue dragon. Chest,horns, and spicks are blue.Tail is like Cynder's.Eyes are blue,too.
Pablo: A black and mustard color,like Dark Spyro.Eyes are black.
...and then,you know them and love them....
Spyro,Cynder,and Sparx.(their is an enemy here,but it is a surprise. )
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#1 Posted: 00:28:12 11/10/2008 | Topic Creator
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#2 Posted: 00:37:00 11/10/2008 | Topic Creator
Um, so that u know,I will make this story soon.Don't worry.
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#3 Posted: 00:37:24 11/10/2008
sounds cool! can't wait 2 read it!
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#4 Posted: 00:42:28 11/10/2008
sounds cool. will definitely check back to see what you write.
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#5 Posted: 00:50:04 11/10/2008
awsome, i like your idea and details that you put in for the characers.
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#6 Posted: 00:53:23 11/10/2008 | Topic Creator
Thank-you!!!I just want all of you guys 2 know them first!Thank-you 4 posting!!!
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#7 Posted: 01:36:16 11/10/2008
I really don't like fan-things very much but this gotta make my breakfast and make me happy, I really gotta follow the line
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#8 Posted: 03:28:14 11/10/2008
YAY Fanfiction! :D
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#9 Posted: 04:50:27 11/10/2008 | Topic Creator
Chapter 1:"Midnight Dreams?"
It is night time,as a female dragon walks alone,sadly,on a beautiful,deserted beach.This dragon is named Dawn,who always wanted and dreamt of becomming a legendary dragon.But she has no powers at all,and thinks to herself that she is a useless dragon.How she thinks about school,and the way the other dragons makes fun of her.She wipes off the tears on her face,and then walks toward the sea.She looks down,and thinks for a moment.While she did this,the moon moves towards midnight.Then,all of a sudden,the moonlight beamed at her,raising her up to the sky.It sparkled so bright and it shocked her with its powerful beam."A PowerMoon!,"thought Dawn.It is a moon that gives special powers to choosen ones.As it all ended,she was gently putted down to the ground. Moring came,and Dawn was in a whole new different place.
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#10 Posted: 09:27:04 11/10/2008
That's awesome!Continue,continue!!
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#11 Posted: 11:01:20 11/10/2008
AWESOMENESS!!!! That was a great chapter! I would like to read more!
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#12 Posted: 15:40:00 11/10/2008 | Topic Creator
Don't worry!!I'll write some more.But at the same time I have to help my grandma 'cause she had surgery.NO WORRYS!!!!!!
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#13 Posted: 15:41:37 11/10/2008
Whoa! That was pure awsomeness!
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#14 Posted: 16:19:05 11/10/2008
Sweet!
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#15 Posted: 17:24:02 11/10/2008
Cool, I liked it a lot, you should be an author when your older ! Please continue it !
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#16 Posted: 17:25:08 11/10/2008
I'm going to be an author! I'm skilled at fantasy!
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#17 Posted: 01:13:25 12/10/2008 | Topic Creator
Thanks Samuel!!!!Maybe I should be.Keep it up Dragonhope!!
I'll continue now.I LOVE!!!!!
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#18 Posted: 01:15:28 12/10/2008
Thanks DarkSpyro_101!
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#19 Posted: 01:16:59 12/10/2008
that was awesome!!!!
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#20 Posted: 01:17:56 12/10/2008
Great job! that was one of the best stories I have eva heard in my life!
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#21 Posted: 01:48:20 12/10/2008 | Topic Creator
Sorry!!!I was busy.My mom just said 2 turn off the computer.
BUT DON'T WORRY!!!!!I be back,and ready!!!! PEACE OUT!!!!!!!
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#22 Posted: 09:31:51 12/10/2008
Peace!!! V
Anyway good fic'. I like it. Has potention.
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#23 Posted: 16:50:02 12/10/2008 | Topic Creator
Chapter 2:"Friends Aproach"
Dawn was barely waking up,confused,when a huge door opened.It was two dragons,about he age,and a dragonfly comming toward her."Are you okay?",asked a black and red female dragon."Wha--Where am I,and is this all a dream?,"asked Dawn,frusterated."Your at the Temple,a place to hide out and train,and no it isn't a dream at all,"said the purple male dragon."Who are you guys?,"asked Dawn."My name is Spyro,and this is Cynder and Sparx,"he said."Sparx?are you some type of mosquito or something?,"asked Dawn."No I'm not!!!!Everyone says that!,"started Sparx."I'm a dragonfly,okay,say it with me,dra-gon-fly, DRAGONFLY!!!!,"yelled Sparx."Okay,okay,no need to be offencive,"said Dawn."Don't mind him,he's been dropped on the head a few times when he was little,"said Cynder,making fun of him."No I didn't,"said Sparx in the background.They were starting to get annoyed,so the Dawn asked,"How did I got here,and-what is this on my neck?,"she said."Well,Spyro,Sparx,and I were flying at night,"started Cynder."And then we saw a beam on the horizen,and we went to check it out,"said Cynder."Then as it ended,we saw you asleep on the ground and we took you home,"ended Spyro."Oh--but then how did this necklase got on me,"asked Dawn."We saw when we found you,"said Spyro."Oh my god!!,you must have been chossen by--" "The PowerMoon!!!!,"jumped in Dawn."Yeah!!,"ended Cynder."I knew it! I'm going to become a legend!!,"said Dawn,happily."Wow,you know a lot about that!,"said Spyro."It's my dream to become one!,"said Dawn.She then thought for a moment,and said,"Spyro,Cynder,will you teach me how to become one?!,"asked Dawn."Um sorry,I'm already teaching someone else,"said Spyro.Dawn looked sad."Don't worry Dawn,I'll teach you!,"said Cynder."Thanks!!,"said Dawn.Sparx was about to leave when,"Oh Sparx before you leave,come with me to meet up with,Pablo,"said Spyro."Ooh--this is great,"said Sparx,crossing his arms, madly."I wonder who's Pablo,"thought Dawn."Let's walk the long way,so that we can talk,and know about each other,okay?,"said Cynder."Sure,Let's go!!,"said Dawn.
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#24 Posted: 16:51:47 12/10/2008
Yay! Dawn got the PowerMoon!
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#25 Posted: 17:02:19 12/10/2008 | Topic Creator
OH!!Just so u know,Dawn's necklase can never come off.The necklase is silver and it has a blue pendant.It is pretty when u amagine it.
The PowerMoon only comes out at Midnight.These a facts so that u could know."PEACE& LOVE!!"
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#26 Posted: 17:04:00 12/10/2008
Lol. I was gonna do that for a novel!
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#27 Posted: 03:29:40 13/10/2008 | Topic Creator
Well,know it's night time.HEY!!!What happend to the others?
Is any one there? *crys* *jumps of a cliff* Plop. Oh I might not write my story during the week 'cause I've got school and lots of homework.But check it out everyday,there might be a surprise.
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#28 Posted: 03:31:32 13/10/2008
Maybe...I dunno know.
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#29 Posted: 03:32:35 13/10/2008 | Topic Creator
Hey Dragonhope.Do u know about the dragon generater by dark52?
If so,do u know how to put your dragon on any page on this website?I need 2 know BADLY!!! PEACE!!
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#30 Posted: 03:34:14 13/10/2008
Yeah, I know. Okay, here's how you do:
In the middle of the img's, put the code of your dragon and post it anywhere!
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#31 Posted: 03:34:48 13/10/2008 | Topic Creator
Great. Does any one else know?about my question?Please!!
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#32 Posted: 03:36:02 13/10/2008 | Topic Creator
But,do u put it in a folder or somthing 2 post it?
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#33 Posted: 03:36:02 13/10/2008
I just said how to post pictures!
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#34 Posted: 03:39:28 13/10/2008 | Topic Creator
Or do u put the code of your dragon on any page?
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#35 Posted: 03:40:52 13/10/2008
Yes! Something like that.
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#36 Posted: 04:36:06 13/10/2008
I love it!!! great job DarkSpyro_101!
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#37 Posted: 13:04:47 13/10/2008
YA!!! Moar
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#38 Posted: 20:21:58 13/10/2008
i love your story! hope you write more soon!
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#39 Posted: 21:12:52 13/10/2008
hmm.. i just realized i wrote a novela with a dragon named dawn in it once
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#40 Posted: 21:20:57 13/10/2008 | Topic Creator
LOL!!Really?That's wierd Doinu.
Thank-you Skyqueen!!LOL,I'll write more.No Problem! (I'm eating frozen yogurt!!) *Yum!*
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#41 Posted: 21:22:35 13/10/2008
lol agreed, yum
im taking niquil NOT YUM!!!
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#42 Posted: 22:08:18 13/10/2008 | Topic Creator
Chapter 3:"More Than Friends"
"Wow,we have so much in common,we should be B.F.F's,"said Dawn."LOL!Okay,no problem!,"chukled Cynder.As they walked to the Training Room,Dawn couldn't belive it!,Spyro,Sparx,and Pablo were actually their."Dawn I would like you to meet,Pablo,"said Spyro.Both Pablo and Dawn blushed,but they still greeted each other."Um,so you want to be a legend?,"asked Pablo."Yes,of course I do...Um,why?,"said Dawn."Just wanted to know,"said Pablo."Yuch,do you like her or somthing?,"asked Sparx."N-No,No I don't!She's-she's not my type."said Pablo,embarresed."Okay--Dawn let's go and teach you some Elements,"said Cynder."Try to attack this dummy here with one of your powers,I think you'll have Ice first,for your breath attack,"said Cynder."Okay,here it goes,"said Dawn.She then opened her mouth,and...nothing happend.She did it a few more times and nothing came out."Come on Dawn,you can do it!,"said Pablo."Yeah,come on!,"said Cynder.Dawn gathered up her strenth and...Ice Streames came out!"Wow,I did it!,"said Dawn."Not bad,we'll practise some more later on.But know,let's head on to using Fury,"said Cynder."You shall only use this when trouble comes along,now,use it on Pablo,"said Cynder."What,Pablo?Won't I hurt him?,"asked Dawn."I don't think so,I'm strong!,"said Pablo,stupidly."Uh,shur,whatever,"said Dawn."Gather up your strenth,"started Cynder."Feel the power of Ice roaming inside of tou,now,let it expand!,"ended Cynder.Dawn then walked up to Pablo,and the next thing you know it,she rosed up and unleased Ice Fury!
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"I've missed you so much, even though I don't show it around. I dream of you and I see you in my mind. I hope that one day you'll be back..." |
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#43 Posted: 22:10:58 13/10/2008 | Topic Creator
So that u could know,her blue pendant lights when ever she uses Fury.Now,I have 2 go,My relatives are comming.
PEACE!!
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#44 Posted: 22:33:02 14/10/2008 | Topic Creator
HIYA!!!Were are my palies at?Any 1 their?NOOOOOOO!!!!!!
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#45 Posted: 23:32:30 14/10/2008 | Topic Creator
This is my dragon from Spyro's Lair:
This is my old one. Feel free 2 post your dragons,if u like!!!
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#46 Posted: 23:34:36 14/10/2008
hey cool! i really like your dragon! on spyro's lair my username is Nadia09!
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#47 Posted: 23:38:24 14/10/2008
cool! my dragon Nadia09 looks kinds like ignitus but its a girl, maybe like the daughter of ignitus!
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#48 Posted: 23:41:17 14/10/2008 | Topic Creator
AWSOME here is my new one:
I would like 2 call her EarthDragon_101,but I have all my info. in this 1 above.
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#49 Posted: 23:43:39 14/10/2008
cool! i only have one! but i'm thinking of making another one soon! and i think i'll name her Fireflight!
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#50 Posted: 23:45:26 14/10/2008 | Topic Creator
Her's a dragon I made up:
COOL!!!!Half Ice half Fire!
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