Hiya! If u've been on darkSpyro Story by Crashdude55 u will see Ive made a character called Adam. I am writing a series of Stories on him.
Chapter 1: The Egg hatches
It was a few years after Spyro was born, and Ignitus was in charge now the others had gone... all except Greffon and Frehyama. Greffon was a male dragon, who had been Terrador's apprentice for years. He had gladly been trained all the owers of the Earth, and was now a father. His wife, Frehyama, was a Lightning Dragon, and Volteer's daughter. She had married Greffon years ago. But now she was proudly mother. In the egg room, was one black egg. Ignitus was in charge of it. Frehyama came in and approached.
'Has it hatched?' She asked. Ignitus didn't look at her when he replied, just staring at the egg.
'Nothing...' Frehyama was worried. She thought the egg was dead, making her have no children. And she'd spent hours of labour laying it. Greffoon came in, and looked at the egg. They stared at it for an hour, and then fell asleep as night came...
Frehyama was rudley awoken by Greffon.
'Honey! Honey!'
'What?' She groaned.
'It's hatching...'
Chapter 2: The power of Adam
There was a crack. The egg wobbled. Ignitus laughed a bit.
'Looks like the young one's having trouble getting out.' Greffon looked at the tears in Frehyama's eyes.
'Our son...' The egg stopped wobbling. Silence. The dragons leaned closer. Suddenly the egg exploded into a beam of light, blinding and beautiful. The light was so huge you could see it miles away. The egg started cracking, finally smashing into peices. Suddenly boulders fell from the sky, leaves and grass flying around everywhere. The baby dragon layed on the cushion, smiling. The light had vanished.
'What was that?' Greffon asked, sounding so scared.
'That...' Ignitus said, 'Was an Earth Fury...'
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#1 Posted: 09:02:04 21/09/2008 | Topic Creator
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“The innocent, the innocent, Mandus, trod and bled and gassed and starved and beaten and murdered and enslaved. This is your coming century!” |
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#2 Posted: 09:13:05 21/09/2008 | Topic Creator
Chapter 3: The watching of Adam
After that fury Adam was watched carefully. His power was more than anybody could imagine. But what made Ignitus stare at was his eyes. They always glew red. A sign of Evil. But young Adam was no way evil. He was kind, unselfish and polite. Whenever Greffon saw Adam's smiling face, Greffon always felt happy and smiled back. But Adam was annoyed with being watched. Everywhere he went, Ignitus trailed him. One day, he turned around and asked 'What seewms to bwe the pwoblem, elwder?' he asked, trying not to sound rude. 'Oh nothing.' 'But why are yoou following mwe?' He asked. 'It's just you are a bit.. lets say, over powered.' 'Really?' His wings flapped. And he slowly lefted off the ground. But do remeber, Adam is mearly 2 years old. A dragon would only be ready to fly at 10. Ignitus stared, unable to speak. 'Elwder, why arwe you getting smawler?' He then noticed. He was flying...
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“The innocent, the innocent, Mandus, trod and bled and gassed and starved and beaten and murdered and enslaved. This is your coming century!” |
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#3 Posted: 09:17:21 21/09/2008
cool! nice story!!
I think Adam is cool! |
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#4 Posted: 09:27:25 21/09/2008 | Topic Creator
Chapter 4: Training to Hunt
Adam smiled at the thought. It was midnight, everyone was asleep... except Greffon. 'So son, would you like to learn how to hunt?' 'Suwre fing dawddy!' Greffon smiled. He loved the way his son spoke. It filled his heart with joy. 'But we must fly. And do not tell your mother! Or Ignitus!' 'Yow have mey word, dawddy!' Without warning, they left the temple, flying to the swamp. Greffon expected Adam to be a bit silly with flying, but he flew like an expert. better than Ignitus himself. They landed in the swamp. Again, expert landing for Adam. Greffon looked around for something to hunt. There was a small tasty looking rat. 'Now son, that...' his wings pointed at the rat, who hadnt noticed the dragons yet. '...is food.' 'Hewllow food!' He said, thinking Food was his name. The rat was apparently and luckliy death. Greffon laughed. 'Now, eat it, but you must kill it first.' 'Oh, ike this?' He let out a huge breath of fire, burning the poor creature so it was burnt as a crisp. Greffon stared. Adam picked it up. 'Hungwy dawddy?'
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“The innocent, the innocent, Mandus, trod and bled and gassed and starved and beaten and murdered and enslaved. This is your coming century!” |
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#5 Posted: 09:30:59 21/09/2008
Whoah!! Cool!
Is Adam a special dragon? |
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#6 Posted: 09:32:22 21/09/2008 | Topic Creator
Yeah! He's a black dragon, with red eyes. He did his first fury when he was 5 minutes old!
Adam pic coming soon
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“The innocent, the innocent, Mandus, trod and bled and gassed and starved and beaten and murdered and enslaved. This is your coming century!” |
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#7 Posted: 09:33:17 21/09/2008
He is a little cuty! 8D
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#8 Posted: 09:33:57 21/09/2008 | Topic Creator
You bet! His teeth are real sharp!
finishing adam pic on paint
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“The innocent, the innocent, Mandus, trod and bled and gassed and starved and beaten and murdered and enslaved. This is your coming century!” |
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#9 Posted: 09:46:56 21/09/2008 | Topic Creator
heres adam!
he looks kinda weird cause hes on paint
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“The innocent, the innocent, Mandus, trod and bled and gassed and starved and beaten and murdered and enslaved. This is your coming century!” |
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#10 Posted: 09:52:49 21/09/2008
ohh cool. i like really like him!!
I give it: |
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#11 Posted: 09:54:51 21/09/2008 | Topic Creator
aw thanks CD55!
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“The innocent, the innocent, Mandus, trod and bled and gassed and starved and beaten and murdered and enslaved. This is your coming century!” |
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#12 Posted: 09:55:35 21/09/2008
no problimooooo!!!!!!!!!! =D
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#13 Posted: 10:03:24 21/09/2008 | Topic Creator
Chapter 5: the feirce warrior
Just then huge apes jumped out of nowhere. They attacked Adam, who ducked. Greffon was defenceless. 'Adam run!' Adam stood still, his eyes closed. 'SAVE YOURSELF!' Then Adam's eyes lifted open. he let out an fury of Earth. The apes shot into the distance. The remaining ones left Greffon and attacked adam. Adam used Earth and froze the small ones into snow balls. He electrocuted the medium ones and flamed the huge ones. The apes ran in fear. Adam laughed. 'Swo dawddy, where wer we?'
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“The innocent, the innocent, Mandus, trod and bled and gassed and starved and beaten and murdered and enslaved. This is your coming century!” |
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#14 Posted: 10:04:43 21/09/2008
woweee!
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#15 Posted: 10:08:18 21/09/2008 | Topic Creator
okay this is a spoiler for future series. Don't want future series spoilt, dont read!
3 years after Spyro, Sparxa nd Cynder are gone Adam's family shelters at the temple. He has a little sis too!
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“The innocent, the innocent, Mandus, trod and bled and gassed and starved and beaten and murdered and enslaved. This is your coming century!” |
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#16 Posted: 10:09:09 21/09/2008
coooool!
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#17 Posted: 10:19:52 21/09/2008 | Topic Creator
i just posted this cause it looks evil... like malefor
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“The innocent, the innocent, Mandus, trod and bled and gassed and starved and beaten and murdered and enslaved. This is your coming century!” |
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#18 Posted: 10:20:16 21/09/2008
niice!
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#19 Posted: 10:43:59 21/09/2008 | Topic Creator
Chapter 6: Return to the Temple
Adam and Greffon landed in the temple, and woke Ignitus up. Greffon told him the whole story. 'We were simply hunting but then he had the most powerful Fireball id ever seen! Then he blasted the apes with Earth Fury... and Electric... and then Ice... and flame... and and...' 'Greffon, calm yourself.' Greffon calmed down. 'You should've known better than to take young Adam to the swamp... and what's more, at night!' Greffon looked very guilty. 'I'm so sorry, Ignitus. It's just he was so powerful... i wanted to see the power myself!' Little did they know Frehyama was awake. 'What happened?' She asked. Everyone was silent. 'Adam's power is more than i imagined. I feel i must train him.'
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“The innocent, the innocent, Mandus, trod and bled and gassed and starved and beaten and murdered and enslaved. This is your coming century!” |
Crashdude55 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1090 |
#20 Posted: 10:45:44 21/09/2008
wow! How many chapters is there going to be?
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#21 Posted: 10:47:07 21/09/2008 | Topic Creator
Not sure yet.
It ends in Dawn of the Dragon, where ive got a real exciting... or sad... ending.
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“The innocent, the innocent, Mandus, trod and bled and gassed and starved and beaten and murdered and enslaved. This is your coming century!” |
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#22 Posted: 10:47:46 21/09/2008
coooooooooool....
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#23 Posted: 11:04:07 21/09/2008 | Topic Creator
Chpter 7: Fire Training
Ignitus and Adam walked into the Dojo room. Adam looked at the huge statue, and frowned. 'What is it, young one?' 'Hwe dowsnt liiwke mwe.' He replied, staring at the statue. 'Who?' 'Malwefor of Corwse!' Ignitus looked scared. More scared than ever. 'How do you...' Adam interupted. 'He spewaks to me somwetimes. He sawys I'vwe got gwood powers, but i downt desewve them.' Ignitus thought of Malefor, and remembered. He left the thought and spoke. 'Well, then. Lets see your powers.' 'Owkay!' He shot a huge firaball into the sky. It smashed through the roof, and landed in the swamp, making a huge explosion. 'Sowwy!' 'Erm..... Never mind. Now, flame those dummies.' The second the dummies appeared they burnt to nothing. Ignitus was stunned. 'Youre a fast learner Adam. Fireball over the elemental wall.' Adam fireballed the Dummies over the wall. He laughed when the dummies burnt. 'Swo fuwny!' 'Yes...' frowned Ignitus. He the started again. 'Now Adam, tryyour comet strike and...' Adam charged at the dummies. They were gone in a flash. Ignitus was scared for the first timen ever. He was shaking. 'I can't do this. Adam, go to your mother and say your training is complete.' Adam smiled. 'Yewy!' He cried.
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“The innocent, the innocent, Mandus, trod and bled and gassed and starved and beaten and murdered and enslaved. This is your coming century!” |
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#24 Posted: 11:06:02 21/09/2008
coool. he makes ignitus scared!!
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#25 Posted: 11:15:08 21/09/2008 | Topic Creator
Chapter 8: Spyro meets Adam.
It had been 1 year and Adam was tired. He was the only child there. He sat on the temple floor. He'd never felt so alone. He was crying. Mostly cause he'd scared Ignitus a year ago, and later on Ignitus had been found on the floor. Adam was so sad. Nobody was there to play with him. Then Ignitus and a small Purple dragon came in. 'Adam?' He asked. Adam had been locked in the temple 1 year ago when it was evacuated. Greffon and Frehyama followed. They were crying. 'ADAM!' they huddled together, hugging. The purple Dragon smiled. 'Hi!' Beside him was a glowing light. A dragonfly. 'Aw sweet. How come I don't get any of that?' Sparx Asked. 'Cause your annoying.' 'Am I? Oh i never knew fat boy.' Spyro went up to Adam. 'Hi, I'm Spyro.' 'Mwy nawme's Adawm!' He was excited. 'Hey purple lizard! Whataboutme?' 'Oh, yeah. This is Sparx.' 'Sparx, the ladies love me!' He said. And so began Spyro and Adam's freindship.
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“The innocent, the innocent, Mandus, trod and bled and gassed and starved and beaten and murdered and enslaved. This is your coming century!” |
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#26 Posted: 11:18:10 21/09/2008
heheh sparx is funny! is cynder in this one?
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#27 Posted: 11:35:38 21/09/2008 | Topic Creator
Cynder appears in TeN part of the Story. Adam... wells its a spoiler.
Adam gets a crush on Cynder, but soon finds out she's in love with spyro. His heart is broken. *sobs*
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“The innocent, the innocent, Mandus, trod and bled and gassed and starved and beaten and murdered and enslaved. This is your coming century!” |
Crashdude55 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1090 |
#28 Posted: 11:37:27 21/09/2008
coool! nice logo!
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#29 Posted: 11:42:06 21/09/2008 | Topic Creator
did u read the spoiler?
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“The innocent, the innocent, Mandus, trod and bled and gassed and starved and beaten and murdered and enslaved. This is your coming century!” |
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#30 Posted: 11:43:05 21/09/2008
awwww poor adam....
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#31 Posted: 11:45:07 21/09/2008 | Topic Creator
Yeh. Its so sad. That happens in TEN part of story
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“The innocent, the innocent, Mandus, trod and bled and gassed and starved and beaten and murdered and enslaved. This is your coming century!” |
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#32 Posted: 11:52:17 21/09/2008
yeh...
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#33 Posted: 11:55:33 21/09/2008 | Topic Creator
I have the story planned out.
But i wont finish it today!
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“The innocent, the innocent, Mandus, trod and bled and gassed and starved and beaten and murdered and enslaved. This is your coming century!” |
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#34 Posted: 12:04:55 21/09/2008
ok. are u doing chapter 9 tomorow?
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#35 Posted: 12:08:08 21/09/2008 | Topic Creator
Yeh!
Unless i change me mind and do it today.
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“The innocent, the innocent, Mandus, trod and bled and gassed and starved and beaten and murdered and enslaved. This is your coming century!” |
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#36 Posted: 12:11:14 21/09/2008
k!
PS: Read my PM I just sent! |
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#37 Posted: 14:19:54 21/09/2008
You are too addicted to the Karazan Quartet my friend.
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#38 Posted: 18:56:41 22/09/2008 | Topic Creator
Yeh me iz adicted!
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“The innocent, the innocent, Mandus, trod and bled and gassed and starved and beaten and murdered and enslaved. This is your coming century!” |
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#39 Posted: 18:57:19 22/09/2008
me tooz!
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#40 Posted: 19:07:15 22/09/2008 | Topic Creator
They rok!!!!!
Anyway, adam chapt 9 isnt coming today... sorryz
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“The innocent, the innocent, Mandus, trod and bled and gassed and starved and beaten and murdered and enslaved. This is your coming century!” |
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#41 Posted: 19:16:35 22/09/2008
oh ok!!
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#42 Posted: 15:01:07 24/09/2008 | Topic Creator
Okay, i havnt updated on here cause im a bit buzy. im afraid i might not post chap 9 for a while
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“The innocent, the innocent, Mandus, trod and bled and gassed and starved and beaten and murdered and enslaved. This is your coming century!” |
Crashdude55 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1090 |
#43 Posted: 15:02:59 24/09/2008
kk! i'll check back here...
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#44 Posted: 15:05:26 24/09/2008 | Topic Creator
Hey, not many ppl on here. why isnt anybody on here?
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“The innocent, the innocent, Mandus, trod and bled and gassed and starved and beaten and murdered and enslaved. This is your coming century!” |
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#45 Posted: 15:06:31 24/09/2008
u could include it in ur siggy or ask ppl to come here...
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#46 Posted: 00:37:09 27/09/2008
Nice stories about Adam my sis and i loved them
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#47 Posted: 07:45:56 27/09/2008 | Topic Creator
thanks!
Chapter 9: Adam's Dream He's finally made a freind so he slept well tonight. But it was the dream that scared him... Adam was in a strange world. Then he knew it instantly from Mother's stories. The Convexity. Huge swirling portals around him, clumps of rocks. and a huge black dragon. 'You are Adam?' She asked. 'Yews....' He shuddered. 'It's okay... This part of me isnt like what the Dark Master did to me.... Okay.... my name is Cynder...' 'Cwnder's a niwce nawme!' He smiled. She smiled back at him. 'Thank you, but i bring grave news. You are in danger......' 'W--W-W-What dwo yowu meawn?' 'In the future my 'Master' will rule the Dragon relms....... You must stay at the temple.' 'What?' She vanished. He woke up suddenly. 'Muwst stawy at the tewmple.....'
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“The innocent, the innocent, Mandus, trod and bled and gassed and starved and beaten and murdered and enslaved. This is your coming century!” |
Crashdude55 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1090 |
#48 Posted: 07:52:16 27/09/2008
Cool! keep it up!
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#49 Posted: 08:02:08 27/09/2008 | Topic Creator
Chapter 10: Dentes Freezer
Spyro sat on the floor as Adam told Spyro his dream. 'She sawd to stawy in the tewmple.....' 'Well, thats very odd, I heard this 'Cynder' is evil, and who is this Dark Master?' 'No Idwea.' Ignitus came in. 'Young Spyro, it is your time to fight.... you must rescue an old freind of mine.' 'Who?' 'Volteer......' 'Cawn I cowme?' Adam asked. Spyro and Ignitus looked at eachover. 'Sorry but no,' Ignitus said. 'It is not your fight. Spyro is older, he can fight on his own.' Adam's heart sank. He started walking away sadly. Then Spyro flew off into the distance and Adam watched sadly. Then Frehyama came rushing in. 'Son! Son!' 'What mum?' 'Your going to have a sister....'
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“The innocent, the innocent, Mandus, trod and bled and gassed and starved and beaten and murdered and enslaved. This is your coming century!” |
Crashdude55 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1090 |
#50 Posted: 08:04:40 27/09/2008
Cool! i likez it!
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