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I wrote this because I was bored, but I hope you enjoy it anyway.^.^

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Smoke rolled in from the far east as a wildfire raged through the forest. Sienza, a electricity dragon, flew from the scene as quick as her small tatered wings would carry her. As she landed on the other side of a nearby river, she shook the cinders off her back, and coughed and weezed from sucking in to much of the foul odor.

As she regained her breath, she callopsed, exuasted from the flight. "What has happened to my home?" She wondered glancing back at the thicket. She could still see the fire ablaze.

All her throughout her life, Sienza had been forced to live in the forest by the Dark Masters law. He forbid dragons, to live any closer then 5 miles length between each other or communitcate or vist. If he knew that she was out of her land area. (Which ended right after the river) there would be severe consequences. Due to the fact that other dragons lived so far away from her, she had no idea how they acted or what they were like.

She sighed, glancing around the scene, remembering almost everything about her life, and wondering how it would be from now on.

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Well, their is a rough draft of the first chapter.

dat wazzzzzzzzzzzzzzz


AWESOME!

You serious? I wrote this in about 5 minutes!

Well, the proper thing I guess to be would be, thanks!^.^

yeah, I liked it off topic, but where has D_C been???

I don't know, I haven't seen her all day...

she hasnt been on for a couple days. ried to talk to her on msn but shes not online...

Hmm, maybe art requests or school?

she started school today, as do I. its 6:00 in the morning

oh. I love it!

lez get dis party started *dances* x]

Thanks NiOwl! *Parties*

*ends party* I ISH BACK 8D

Noooo, my favorite song was on!8D *Turns music up*

xD da music still playin... ITSH DISTURBED!!!!! 8D

He, He! *Turns music down...*

Ok, so you ready for another chapter?

YESH YESH POST IT!!!!!! x]]]]]]]

(random lower case letterz x])

Well, if I didn't have any homework right now, I could post it in possibly ten minutes. But with a heap of papperwork, expect it around nine o clock, if I have time...

dat sux. i started school today x[. mah classes SUX!

Darn, that must stink!

I may get done earlier, you never know. I am going offline now because I have to finish a project. See you soon!

xdlawlroflz u ish online now

Yep, I am! I won't write de chapter right now, let me settle down for a few...

yeah, i understand. I'm really tired right now, but I must stay up and wait for D_C! She might get on the computer before she goes to school.... I hope

I gone for about five minutes every minute before to see if there are any updates. Also, it helps wake me up!xD

black dragons can always wait

although we sometimes get verrrry tired.... like i am now

I understand!xD

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rawr extra words 8D

huh? what does 8> mean?! I dunno! XP

its like 8D but its a smug smile


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Wow, good story! Are you planning on writing more?

Yeah, of course there is more!

And, thank you!^.^ You don't know how much it means to me!

Cool! I can't wait!

Hey Cynder_Rox, look!


Name: Sienza

Age: 10

Dragon Type: Electricity

Elements: Electricity, Fire

History:
An electricity dragoness. Sienza was enraged ever since Malefor's Dark Armies destroyed her homeland, the Twilight Valley. She now joins forces with Angtor, an earth dragon whom happened to be her childhood friend.

Yeah, Angtor is pretty good name for a friend isn't it? I'll show more characters you can use!

Thanks, I that is a great generation of her! Only, one thing: I think she may only master "Electricity," but fire sounds good too...

Angtor, is also a great name for an earth dragon. I can actually picture him now!

Oops. Oh well...maybe I'll post the others tommorow.

Okay here's another one I still have to show you Jira.



Name: Angtor

Age: 19

Dragon Type: Earth

Elements: Earth, Electricity, Wind

History:
An earth dragon. Sienza's childhood friend. Like Sienza, Angtor's homeland, the Dragon City was destroyed by the Dark Armies and to make matters worse, Angtor's father forced him to follow the dark laws but he quickly resisted it and joins Sienza on her journey.

What do ya think?

Ok, I'll use him too!

Chapter Two:

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As the darkness subdued in the far west, Sienza lifted her tired head to see the first ray of sunshine. She seemed to bath in the bright light as she fluttered her eyes open sleepily. She smiled at the beauty, adding an extra "ray" herself. "Ahhhh," she murrmered as she streched out her long golden legs across the forest floor. It would have been an enjoyable moring, if the fire hadn't happened. She didn't know who or whom had caused it; which bothered her most. She wanted to get pay back at the creature who had destroyed her home, her treasures, her Life.

But yet, something held back that angry fire back inside her, and she was thankful for that. She didn't really want to do anything foolish, and she was more peaceful then anything. She sighed, gazing respectfully at the sun, for it was now her only "treasure."

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First half of second chapter. More will be added soon.

wow, i LOVE it! 8D

Thanks, but it is so small...

not its not! and it is only a half!

I know, but no one ever posts in my fan-fics. Oh well, Back to the drawing board.

Here Cynder_Rox!



Name: Jira

Dragon Type: Elemental

Age: 33

Elements: Ice,Fire,Wind,Shadow

History:
An elemental dragoness. Jira is originally an ice dragoness but when she was outraged after her father's death, she avenged herself by joining Malefor's dark forces, turining her into an elemental dragon. She later joined Sienza and Angtor when she realised what she has done.

Man, how come you are so great at creating fan-characters? THEY ARE TO AWESOME!!!

They just pop out of nowhere! Jira is just a name short for ''Jeiir'' but I used Jira instead.

"Jeiir" might have been a bit to confusing...

Good job, and keep up the good work!

I just keep getting more and more names.

I used "Sienza" from "Ezprenza" in a way. You can see the similarities.

Yeah. I see it. Can I use Sienza? I need to make a story about Jira.

Yeah, sure! Just tell people that I am the one that created her, if you don't mind!

Alright!

chapter 2 was awesome