darkSpyro

Here are some poems I have written,they aren't very good butI thought I would post them anyway...

A Smile Exchanged
A smile exchanged
Is nothing without feeling underneath
We wait for another to grow out
While we conceal our true feelings
Beneath smiles exchanged
We wonder if the other is happy
The hidden feelings will surface again
For the sake of a broken promise
But we know it is not the truth
The lies buried deeper
'the feelings have desterted me
Or lowered in their quantity'
We know the lies are never true
While our felings lie hidden
Under smiles exchanged.

HeartBeats
I can feel your heart beat
Beating close to mine
I can feel our hearts beat
Beating together in time

Lying here I wish that this
Moment,it would last
But I knwo I feel your heart beat
Beating from the past

I can fell your heart beat
beating close to mine
I can feel our hearts beat
Beating across time ~<3

The Embrace
Return into the Darkness...
Go and leave this place
Return into the Darkness...
And leave with out a trace.

Your life,it shall continue,
Here in this dark place...
So join us all together,
Here in Death's sweet embrace

Eternal Rest
These friends of mine gather 'round
Engulfing me in their joyful cloud
And though they try to draw me near
With their enthusiasm and cheer

The mask that drew them to me
Has slipped off so slowly
And ending this masquerade
The true me reveals all the pain

The burning sorrow inside of me
Outshines all of their joy and glee
And though they wish me to join them now
In their enthusiastic crowd
I hold this bright flame to my chest
And grant myself eternal rest

Patchwork Quilt
A patchwork quilt of lies
Blanketing your words
Softening and dampening
The sharpness of the truth

Convincing me the truth
Is really in your words
Maybe there is beleif
Maybe it is absent
All I know,is the truth
Is buried deep inside

Your patchwork quilt of lies
Covering me softly
Hiding me from the cold,
Harsh ice of the truth.

Those...are pretty dang good.

Seriously? *is surprised*

I'm serious. I thought the eternal rest one was a professional one when i saw it in your guestbook. I like all of them.

I agree with Dark_Spyro999! These poems are genius,Blue!They go beyond what you expect them to be about.I love HeartBeats the most cuz it's nice and simple.<3

Wow...and Eternal Rest was written in a rush at midnight,all of them were except Patchwork Quilt.
Its funny you would say that cynd 'cause that one is the only happy one~

Oh wow,my brain thinks in strange ways.Well,I still love it!It's cute! Eternal Rest is one of your poems that I can really understand,I must say.Most of the parts have happened to me,but I dunno about the bright flame part.My brain won't work right now.Patchwork Quilt was great too.It goes beyond what a quilt is and instead makes it appear as maybe a web of lies or something like that.I cannot think today,honestly. It reminds me of my own poem,The World Is Crying.Pretty much,I make the rain seem like it's the world's pain.And I rhyme like there's no tomorrow cuz that's just what I do.

The flame part of Eternal Rest was about me contemplating suicide and one way was to light myself on fire... maybe then I would really be like the phoenix I am likened to.Apart from rising back up,I see no point in rising back up.AAAAANNNNYYYWAAAYYY enough depressing things~

Ohhhhhh... You made a promise,though,so no fire or anything else!And yesh,enough depressing things.Ummmm...The Embrace!The Embrace was forgotten about!Well,not anymore!My comment: I think it's cute like HeartBeats,but has more darkness to it.

Nice job! I like it.

Thank D-o
I knooooow,promised.
yeah,that one I was wanting to turn into a little song or something but never did

Yep,ya did!
Ah I see.Maybe it could be a song if The Marked Eeveelution idea is ever turned into a movie! That'd be awesome!There's always a song or two in every movie I've watched(I think),so it would work.

Awww in memory of Laurie and Jake 'cause its a lost love poem~

That would so adorable!:')

I knooooow! :')

Remember that they originally met in the WTF!? topic you made?That makes is too adorable for words!:'')

Oh yeah....and then we made that actually happen.It was so sweet...
I should make another topic like that

*happy sigh* Yeah,we really did...
I say yes to that! The ol' WTF!? topic was hilarious! Wasn't there Tigerstar and everybody else?Ah,the good times.

It was full of all the random characters,and even super depressed Liko at one point...

Mmhmm! Ah,many parts made me LOL.But...Aren't there now trolls an' stuff?Maybe it won't be the same.

They dont really leave S&N though do they?

Hm,I guess you're right.I'm glad for that.By the way,I'm making a new RP too.It's an insane asylum kind of thing.

Ooh!I WANNA JOIN It I WANNA JOIN IT I WANNA JOIN IT!!!!!

I knew you would! It's gonna take me a bit,though.I've got it all in my mind and none of it on the computer.I thought of it the second I woke up and the idea just hit me so randomly.We need more of those kinds of RPs,y'know?

Yus.I need to be able to let out my insaneso it doesnt appear at school,and that is when we need more of those rps.
Lol,I have been saying a little poem-y thing...I wrote it down ages ago and I cant get it out of my head now

Love is patient
Love is kind
Love means slowly loosing your mind

Ah,I see.I feel like going insane in an RP too.I think that the idea's pretty original,but I might need your help.Managing an RP is a little hard for me.Well,at least I think so.Darkness vs. Light and Lost In Time are both pretty easy.
Wow,pretty good Blue! It's true too. I remember when I had something I couldn't get out of my head that was pretty poemy or whatever you wanna call it.I made it into a little lullaby-like song for something that Jake did in the past,but I kept losing the lines cuz I never wrote it down.

I shall be here to help yooooooooou

YAH,and the poem is so truuuue its getting stuck in my hed along with the whistle from Kill Bill

Yay!Thanks,Blue! I think I'll get started on it right now,since there's no one in the house.I need silence!

It's kinda annoying to have something stuck in your head,though.Repeating over and over and over... But the poem is pretty awesome.<3 I've only had songs stuck in my head,really.Shadows by Red! Currently my favorite song,which might change if I go on another song hunt.

Right~

I have a tune from a movie stuck in my head.Its an awesome tune and I am hopefully going to get it as my phone's ringtone today.But when it is stuck in your head for 12 hours or something like that is gets a little irritating

Hm,I hope it'll be a good enough plot.Well,you'll see.Tell me if it's good when I post it and be honest cuz I'm not very sure of the idea now.

Ooh,cool!And yep,couldn't agree with you more there.I remember I listened to the radio and the one line of this song I still do not have the name of kept repating in my head nonstop.Must've layed there awake for an hour or something.

I am sure it will be good.

Its such a cool tune though

I can only hope.It was one of the most random ideas I've ever had.

Never listened to many cool tunes.The only song that was good from a movie was Let The Monster Rise and that was from a musical kind of movie.The songs were great,though.I've got maybe half of them in my playlist.<3

Lol.Okay

Nice.This tune is sooooo catchy

I think I'll make it tomorrow.Do you mind,Blue?I'd rather stay on and talk to you than make the RP.I make my RPs slowly so I would have to get off in order to make it.

I hope it's a nice,nondirty song.The only song with a catchy tune that I heard was Whistle.Knew what it was about the moment he started singing.Or at least,until my dirty part of my mind turned on and told me.Yaaaaay.

Its fine.I have school tomorrow though.

Indeed

You do?Shoot!Eh...I'll stay up,then.When it's night here,it's day there.Would that be good?

Dirty mind ain't fun.But my sister...She's two years younger than me,yet her mind's unbelievably dirty.

Sure.OMG I AM SO TIRED AND ITS ONLY 10:20 IN THE MORNING

I know a 6 year old with a mind almost as dirty as my own...its not a good thing

Yay! And it is?Huh,cool.Yep,it'll be night when I come on.I'm gonna be so tired tomorrow,but I don't care.

I agree that it ain't.But it isn't your fault.Probably been around a few bad people.

Yeah,and nooow its 5:04 PM

Yeah....but it is my fault sorta,for some things

Really?So at three at night...It'd be seven PM where you are.Okay,I'm stupid.When do you usually come on?I see you around three,then you go around five.That is how I remember it.

Ah...That ain't good.I'm the reason my sister knows half the dirty things and words.Taught her through Batbies.That's the truth too.I regret it,yes,but cannot go back.We all make mistakes.It's part of life,unfortunately.

On a weekend I am on as soon as I wake up,which is from 7-9 in the morning depending on the previous night....and I log off randomly at all times.

Atleast it was me who did this and not her family (Well....the rest is her school and then her family...)

Ah,I see.Well,I stayed up again!This time,I got on when you're on! 2:30 in the morning.Don't know whether my grandma will wake me up early or if I'll sleep until 5 in the afternoon.

Yeah,I guess that's good.Don't worry 'bout it,Blue.It's done and you can't change it.I've learned from my friends and the computer,as well as my dad.Can't change that no matter what I do.

Its 7:11 PM here

True...

3:11 AM.Jeez,I hate timezones. If there was only one,half the world would be nocturnal,so I guess it's pretty nice in a small way.

Mmhmm.We all have our regrets about things we've done,but it'll get a little better with some time.

I dislike timezones too

Too true

Who doesn't?Well,the people who don't have friends or family in other timezones,I guess.Europe's in a different timezone too,so that's another reason for me to get mad at timezones.Most of my family lives there.

*nods*...To think,this conversation started with a dirty song. Scary thing was,my mom didn't know what the song was talking about and I did.I guess teens these days know more than their parents do.

I find them irritating,especxially when you need to get an urgent message through.

Oh really?I have only heard that song once and I knew what it was about immediately... >.<

Yeah,that's when it becomes too irritating for words.Mail ain't fast either.I wish there was some way...

I had to listen to it a few times before my mind woke up to the realization.It wasn't that I didn't know what it was about,it was that I didn't want to tell myself that the song really was about...THAT.

I wish too sometimes

Lol,sometimes you wish yo didnt think like that and cold be blissfully unaware like some people

Yeah.At least we can still see each other sometimes! I keep in mind that you usually come on around 2 PM my time.But still I stay up for almost no reason.I was doing random stuff.

Right,exactly!I taught myself,though.I didn't know what most of the dirty things were,so I went online.Came up in two seconds and ruined my life forever.Ah well,it happened and I can't change it.