darkSpyro

Chapter Α: First Blood

It was late at night, about 11:30,and the scene of spyro escaping the alternate dimension known as convexity played on-screen. This along with the other ending scenes was watched by a 15 year-old boy named Andrew who loved The Legend of Spyro. As the game finished he decided to play a short bit of the next game The Eternal Night before crashing for the night.
He stuck in the disc and went to the bathroom as it was loading. As he walked back in the intro music began to sing louder and louder and as it reached its peak lightning struck both outside and on-screen. Malefor's top half appeared simultaneously with the lightning and rather than disappearing as it usually would it began to grow larger and larger until it filled the screen. The usual vocal music was in the background but it seemed more like screaming.

Malefor then began to speak “firstly I must thank you for the great favor you have done me.” he spoke in his deep gravely voice.

Andrew managed to get out “W-what favor.”

Malefor proceeded to explain “You have released me from my prison in the well of souls. Unfortunately or, for me, fortunately no one on Earth can know I am coming so tomorrow morning you shall die and I will enjoy making you suffer”
Andrew quickly shut off his ps2 which was steaming and his TV and ran to his room to go to sleep.
Next morning he decided to e-mail his friend Matt so someone else would know of Malefor. It went like this:
Something crazy happened last night involving the legend of spyro. It may sound like a joke but trust me; it's all true. Malefor spoke to me saying I had freed him and that he would come to earth and that he would kill me today. There is something that is keeping me from dissmissing it as false but I hope it was just a dream.If I don't e-mail you again by 12:00 then you know what has happened and you are probably the only hope for this world.
He tried to eat breakfast but was too nervous. He tried his best but he couldn't get last night off his mind. The next few hours passed as slowly as a turtle in dragon time to Andrew. The whole time Andrew couldn't focus on anything and the nervousness just kept getting worse. 3 hours later he heard a crashing sound that essentially confirmed his fears.
Malefor moved way faster than Andrew thought possible and within seconds had Andrew pinned on the ground with his back legs. Malefor raised a claw and slammed it into Andrew's gut. Andrew let out a terrible scream of pure agony. He tried his best to get Malefor off him but he was just too heavy. With every stab the walls were splattered with red. Malefor decided to finish him off so he flew up holding Andrew and forcefully ripped him in two at the middle sending blood flying all over. Malefor dropped the parts of the body and knew he was fully dead. He flew off satisfied thinking about the fun he had just had.

o.0 Wow, That was creepy and bloody...

Very nice

Good.
But it's a little hard to understand who's talking at times. Maybe you should include a new characters speech on a new line.

Who's Andrew anyway? Do you know him...
*Push head down* Poor Andrew...

Hmmmm Andrew took his death fairly well for a 15 year old.

VERY SHORT only 10 chapters...what? And if all of them are going to be that short well. Well the stories very fast though the concept of the dark master being re-released on earth is kind of cool. I would love to know what sort of powerful inter-dimensional force managed to revive a sealed being and bring it to Earth. Something tells me you're going to need seriously long chapters to get this done (if you want the story to be notable any way).

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Who's Andrew anyway? Do you know him...
*Push head down* Poor Andrew...

I'm Andrew. I decided to be a minor character in my story.

SUICIDE.

...
*still push head down*
Poor you

More like SUICIDEPTION(amirite?). You wrote yourself into a story only to kill him because you wrote it that way.

Chapter Β: Tessaractor

SPYRO!
What do you want Sparx mumbled Spyro.
Oh nothing in particular I just felt like waking you up.........Nah Terrador wants to see you.
Did he say why? replied Spyro
No, he just said it was urgent.
Okay I'll go since I'm fully awake now agreed Spyro.
Spyro ran to the center area of the temple where Terrador was waiting. Spyro I need to get right to the point-this is really urgent. I was told to tell you that Ignitus wishes to see you .however, he doesn't wish to leave the celestial caves so he decided you could come to him. He says he can explain the odd seismic events that have been taking place. Spyro departed immediately for the celestial caves which were now located 100 miles from the dragon temple on an island.
Spyro was alone with his thoughts during his flight and this led to him reflecting on the year that had passed since Malefor's defeat. The reconstruction of the ruined world had been going faster than he thought it would-all the ruined cities had almost been rebuilt already. He had also spent the last year training with the guardians in case another threat should show itself. Also his dragon time ability had returned 2 weeks ago and Spyro was glad it had-it is quite useful. And then there was Cynder. Cynder had been——— his thought was interrupted by a loud rumbling sound. It was caused by yet another earthquake which had been occuring more and more often. He flew the rest of the way without any thought. He easily made it through to the center where Ignitus would be waiting.
Good, you're here Spyro. Right to business, I assume you know that there have been an unusual number of earthquakes recently.
Of course I do, replied Spyro, one happened on my way here.
Spyro I believe I have figured out what is behind them and if i'm correct it is quite terrible, young dragon. I have been researching and have recently learned of a being called the Tessaractor. This being is the ultimate evil and has powers beyond what anyone could ever imagine. Young dragon, comparing the destroyer to the Tessaractor is like comparing an argument to a world war. The Tessaractor has the ability not to just destroy the world but erase an entire universe from existense. This creature is very intelligent-as much so as the smartest dragon. The tremors we nave been feeling are caused by the Tessaractor moving in the planet's mantel. I believe he is looking for something.
But what? asked Spyro

Yes, i've finally found it! A shapeless creature looked towards a dragon encased in crystal. The evil second to only me.

wow, nice.
I wonder what "Tessaractor" look like...

Mmm... Very nice, Keep going

Tessaractor. That's not cheesy at all

That sound like a spyro creepypasta but well made and based on the legend of spyro

What's "creepypasta?"

Chapter Γ: It has Begun

somewhere deep in spyro's planet

“Finally, I found him!” shouted the Tessaractor. “Now to free him.”
With that he began to literally melt away the crystal encasing Malefor. Within a few minutes the crystal had melted off and fallen into the magma below leaving Malefor to be caught by Tessaractor. He grabbed Malefor and broke a hole through the crust and set Malefor down on the ground next to the hole. Malefor immediately woke up and stood up.
He said groggily “what do you want”
“I have no time to waste so I will get right to the point. I have discovered a world I would like to have help in taking over.”
“ sure I'll help but where is it and how do we get there” replied Malefor.
“All taken care of” informed the Tessaractor “we can go right now if you want”
“sure but I want to have something to kill when we get there. I haven't killed in a while and I feel like I have to.
“can you communicate with other worlds”? Questioned the Tessaractor.
“Yes but I must know know this world's name. It's called Earth.
Malefor began to use dark magic and soon had a dark, misty portal opened. He began to speak to someone on earth “You have released me from the well of souls.” This was a lie, obviously but it would give him something to kill when he got to Earth. He finished and told the Tessaractor “we can go now.”.
They were able to use their power to create an enormous portal fitting right inside the hole that had been broken in the planet. They both jumped in and began their attack on Earth.

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On Earth

Matt loved his office. He admired its size and round shape. He couldn't be admiring for long because he realized he had an e-mail. It was from a young friend of his named Andrew. He opened it, read its contents and wanted it to be a joke. There was no way it could be true. He decided to wait until 12:00 like the message said to determine if it was a joke or not. By 11:30 he had not received an e-mail and began to worry. Just then someone burst into his office holding a laptop. “Sir” he said “ look what is happening in St. Louis. On the screen someone said “I still don't believe it but a dragon appears to have appeared from underneath the arch! Matt watched it for a minute then realized this is what he had been warned about. He turned to the man with the laptop and said “general, I request immediate military action against this creature.” “But sir” the general said “ we cant just send our army into the city” Matt replied “You will if you value your job.” “But sir” “I am the president of the United States and you will do what I say” said Matt angrily.

A bit short and choppy, but I like it! Kudos to you, spyro and sonic. Keep it up.

Matt. Creative name.

WOW!! Matt, another name, if Andrew is you, then who's Matt?

The President >:'|

No, I mean, in the real world, not in the story...

A president >:'|

I have a lot to be doing at school which is taking up most of my time. My teachers all decided to give me projects to do at the end of the year. Due to this I won't be posting the next chapter for about a month.

Oww, Sonic Unleashed...

What's oww for?

Realizing he is changing his avatar...

Oh. Sorry.

Just started reading and want more!! How many fanfics are pausing in the middle! This is the 3rd one that did it!

Aparently at least 3.

Really??? Just because I said 3rd!

Which means there's 3 or more.

The next chapter should be posted by next Friday. I will also be revising chapters 1-3 a bit.

It's Friday.

Sorry. I don't know if I'm going to continue. I have pretty much lost all interest in writing it.

WHAT?! NO!!!!

Oh man...wait long for nothing?!

Yup...

OK, I have regained enough interest in this story that I will continue with with it. It's summer break for me so I have plenty of time to think about how I want the write the story. However I am considering rewriting it or at the very least considerably editing the chapters. If I decide to rewrite it I will create another topic.

Hey Nice job with the story man, The first chapter was a little too gruesome in my opinion but neverless still a great story! Just wondering did u decide to keep writing the fic for me?

Thanks! Why I decided to continue it? I dunno, I looked back at this topic and thought, I must finish this!

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Thanks! Why I decided to continue it? I dunno, I looked back at this topic and thought, I must finish this!

LOL. Well anyway great job. Can't wait to see how this comes out!

This a great story so far!keep it up!

I'm glad you like it.

Well...after so long this topic dead...suddenly in revived

Eyep.

Nice story! Loving it!!

Thank you!

I plan to rewrite this story but I'd like an opinion on something from my readers. Should I finish the story first then rewrite the whole thing or should I just start to rewrite it now without bothering to finish it first?

It is a nice story...everyone who read will suddenly revive this dead fanfic...

Wichev works best for you.

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