This story is a based on Spyro and flame are addicted to cynder and ember, except,,
1. Its my own story, NO ADD ON'S!
2. It doesn;t have exactly the same plot as the other one.
It was a mild, warm day in Season Valley. Season Valley was a peaceful valley full of lush forest. The valley lay between Green Mountain and Avalar Valley,and for unknown reasons, all the seasons were mild. Summer wasn't to hot, and winter wasn;t to cold. In this valley was Timberpine, a dragon village next to Trail Lake. Trail Lake was a large lake that evantullay narrowed and flowed faster untill it became the Emerald river. This river filled with wild, unmerciful waters, where it grew even wilder when it flows past the outskrits of Timberpine, for the river lops past its home town before empitying into the Emerald Gorge. Emerlad Gorge was home to roaring and uncontrollbale waters that flowed past Green Mountain and strait through Avalar Valley. Which the Claw River, the river that roared past where the Hermit lived, fell over a cliff and joined the Emerald river. From there it travelled to and past the City of Warfang and evantullay emptied into the ocean. It was the longest,and wildest river known to dragon kind.
After the defeat of Malefor, Spyro and Cynder landed in Warfang,and heard about Timerpine. the two dragons decided to travel there, in hope of moving there and living in peace for their lives. they followed the Emerald River upstream untill they reached Timerpine, where they were welcomed and also discovered that the Gaurdians moved there as well. Green Moutain held a secret, only known to dragons in Timberpine. Wind tunnels formed at Green Mountains peak, leading everywhere. If there was an attack on Warfang, they could use the tunnels and get there quickly. Spyro and Sparx were also reunited, and the two dragons met and befriended two dragons there own age, Flame and Ember.
Summer soon came,and the annual Timer Festival, and Valentines Day. Valentines Day was held in June for dragons, instead of Febuary.
"Come on Cynder! It will be fun!" Ember encouraged.
"I don't know, these kind of things are ussaly fake." Cynder frowned, staring at the Fortune telling sign, advertising the booth. Cynder and Ember were at the Timber Festival, that lasted for about a week. Even though Ember and Cynder were best friends from the moment they met, they still argued over a lot of things. Like they were arguing now, whenever or not to have their fortune read.
"Who cares if its fake, its still fun. Besides, what if it isn;t, and the fortane reads that you'll be with Spyro?" Ember teased.
"Oh,, okay. But then we have to go on the roller coaster." Cynder reluctanly agreed. Ember squealed with excietment and led Cynder into the booth.
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#1 Posted: 23:38:02 27/12/2009 | Topic Creator
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#2 Posted: 00:16:52 28/12/2009
I like it so far!
so is it after cynder is adicted to spyro or is it like that never happened?
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#3 Posted: 02:01:38 28/12/2009 | Topic Creator
Nope. Its based on it, but it never happened here.
The inside of the booth smelled like tomatoes and daisies. It was lit by candlelight and was littered with fortune telling devices. "Hello, have ye come to have your future read?" A voice hissed. Cynder and Ember turned to see a black cat on two feet. She wore a scarlet red robe and huge gold earrings. her hat looked like a coiled snake and matched her robe. her eyes were round and huge. Cynder stifled a giggle. "Yes." Ember said. "Well, step right up and make yourself comfortorble. Iam Madame Meow." She welcomed in her hissing voice. "It, it doesn't cost anything?" Cynder asked, startled. Madame Meow narrowed her eyes. "I,, will never charge anyone to know there future, it is not always pleasent!" Madame Meow snapped. Cynder was suprised by her harsh tone. "Now, stare into the crystal ball and think of all your memories you can think of." Madame Meow instructed. Cynder didn;t notice the crystal ball before, she was to busy looking at the strange insturments. She stred at its smooth, turqiose surface,and thought of how Spyro freed her, being frozen in the crystal, Ignitus's death,, before she knew it, clouds seemed to form inside the ball and changed to all sorts of colors. Then it seemed to explode and stars , red silver and gold, settled to the bottom. Nothing happened. Cynder knew it was fake, but she couldn;t help feeling dissapointed anyway. "That's it?" Cynder sighed. Then a puff of green smoke exploded in the tent, and a chill went up Cynder's spine. Madame Meows eyes shone as her paws guided over the crystal ball. "You, the pink one, will,," Madame Meow started. "Ember," Ember corrected. "Ember, you will find a handsome dragon both you and him will be deeply intrested in eachother." Madame Meow said. "Oh, who is it?" Ember asked. "Iam not allowed to say. But beware,, for this will bring great trouble and freindships will be torn apart." Madame Meow cationed. She then closed her eyes for a moment, and Cynder swallowed nervously. "Cynder," Cynder said, before Madame Meow could speak. "Cynder,, you will feel betrayed by a long life friend, and a new one. Don;t be wuick to judge them, your friend troubles might be more then it seems." Madame Meow said. then the mist in the tent thinned and hissed, then vannished. Madame Meow closed her eyes shut, and her eyes lost their spooky glow when they opened. Cynder and Ember exchanged worried glances, then stred back at Madame Meow expectantly. It all seemed so real, was it really going to come true? "I know you must feel itimated. But go now there is still much more of the festival to enjoy." madame Meow soothed. cynder got up slowly, and looked over her shoulder back Madame Meow. Cynder flinched once she was back in the bright sunlight. "Now, you wanted to go on the roller coaster?"E mber reminded. "You bet!" cynder smiled. Soon they forgot all about Madame Meows spooky warnings. |
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#4 Posted: 02:37:01 28/12/2009
creepy..............................
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#5 Posted: 18:48:05 29/12/2009 | Topic Creator
Spyro stepped off the tornado ride, still dizzy. Flame bumped into him, his eyes glazed. But his eyes cleared and his expression frose in horror.
"Look out!" Flame warned, pushing Spyro into a bench. "Ouch! WHat was that for!?" SPyro snapped. Then he looked up and saw a young adult dragon puking up his carnival supper after the ride. "Oh, thanks, man." Spyro said, thankful he wasn;t still under there. "No problem." Flame said. Sparx flew toward them. "I don;t see why I could come on the ride. It looked fun!" SParx complained. "Your a dragonfly, Sparx. That thing would tear you to pecies!" Spyro reminded him. The tornado ride was a huge tube with rubber walls. the wind was so fast that a dragon inside would be whipped around everywhere. It was fun, but nauseating. "Iam just glad we agreed not to eat anything before going on the fast rides." Flame said. At the subject of food, Spyro looked up at a clock. "In speaking of food, we got to get to the food court. We promised to meet Cynder and Ember there for a snack." Spyro said. The sun was setting on the park by the time the three friends reached it, casting a orange glow on everything. There were food carts, everywhere, selling all kinds of carnival foods. Spyro spotted carts selling Cotton candy, pizza, giant pretzels,popcorn, gummy grublins, (a dragons version of gummy bears) deep fried fruit, mini donuts, deep fried choclate, regular choclate, chicken and fries. They were even selling jello or pudding filled watermelons. "Fish sticks, get your fish sticks here!" A dragon yelled. Spyro and Flame passed a long glance at the fish sticks cart. They were dripping with grease and coated in some kind of yellow goo. there was even a fish eyeball sticking out of the middle. "Eww!" Spyro, Sparx and Flame said at the same time. "How could some of this stuff even pass as food!?" Flame exclaimed, spotting a cotton candy roll with sheep fur in it. Before Spyro could respond, SParx inturppted him. "There's Cynder and Ember!" SParx cried. "Where!?" Spyro said.He couldn;t see anyone familar in the thick crowd. Sparx slapped his hand over his face and led the two dragons through the crowd. Spyro found Sparx by the Ice Cream Parlor, just outside of the carnival. This was the most popular hangout for young dragons in Timberpine. Since winter was so mild, ice cream could be eaten any time of the year. Cynder and Ember were waiting at a booth just outside the Cafe. Once they saw them, they waved. "Lets go." Flame said as Spyro and Flame trotted across the path, following Sparx. "Hello. Have a good time?" Ember asked cheerfully. "Yup. How about you?" Spyro replied. "Certainly." Cynder said. The four dragons went inside to be welcomed by the cool air and sparkly clean room. Sparx shivered while the dragons sat at a booth. "Why is it so cold in here?" Sparx mumbled through chattering teeth. "Because your a tiny insect." Flame snapped. "Whatever. Order me a sundae with flys will ya?" Sparx requested before buzzing under a menu. He grabbed a sugar pack and layed his head on it. Soon he fell asleep. Soon a waitress came by. She was dark blue and wore a lot of makeup, which made her look really more ugly. Even her claws were painted with an ugly green and ornage pattern. "Hello, may I take your order?" The waitress asked, flashing a brillant smile. It was Saturday, so the dragons ordered all milkshakes. It was traditon for the four friends to order milkshakes on Saturday. Spyro ordered a vallnia milkshake, Cynder a double Choclate, Ember a strawberry shake, and Flame ordered blueberry. The friends chatted and laughed as they waited for their orders. The door banged open as someone else stomped in. Three teen dragons walked into the cafe. One was a pale green, another a sharp blue and the last one was the shortest, but was a dark red. The green once stopped by their booth. "Well, what's this? Dragons hanging out in our Cafe?" He growled. "Lay off Bruce. Besides, you don;t own it." Flame snapped. "Then who does? I think this place would be shut down if you owned it, you probaly couldn;t keep it in shape for an hour!" Bruce laughed. "The owners do, that who." Ember replied smartfully. Bruce turned to argue, but then he stopped. "Well, well, whos this foxy lady you've been hiding from me Flame?" Bruce churned, all the sudden freindly. Spyro snarled. The nerve of this dragon! "The girl you'll never get close to." Flame warned. Bruce ignored him and turned to Ember. He just opened his mouth to flirt when he turned to see the waitress ,who carried their snacks. Bruce turned to see her then left, followed by his friends, who were silently mocking them. "Who's that jerk?" Cynder asked, unbothered by Bruce's rudeness. "That's Bruce. he just moved here two days ago, and I only met him yesterday,but he already acts he owns everything." Flame spat, disgusted. "I haven;t met him, but i already dislike him." Ember said. The waitress reached the table and served their orders. |
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#6 Posted: 01:03:01 11/01/2010 | Topic Creator
The sun was barley over the horizon when the five friends walked home.
"So, what rides did you go on?" asked Cynder. "The Tornado ride, the Roller Coaster, the boat ride, and the Water coaster. What about you?" Flame answered. "Just the roller coaster. We were mostly at the games and Fortune Telling." Ember confided. Spyro rasied his eyebrows in intrest. "WHat was your fortune?" Spyro questioned. Ember and Cynder exchanged glances. They sundlenly remembered Madame Meow's spooky words. "Oh, the effects were really fake. the fourtane teller really stumbled with her words. I even saw her read from a book. It was fake." Ember lied. Spyro and Flame scoffed. "You should have known that. You didn;t eat any of the food there did you? It was disgusting looking." Flame said. |
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#7 Posted: 04:05:17 13/01/2010
i like it! srry i havn't commented in a while.
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#8 Posted: 01:12:26 25/01/2010 | Topic Creator
"Of course not." Ember laughed.
Soon they reached the condos, where Volteer, Cyril, and Terrador were lying on the grass, enjoying some fresh coffee. "You should have been back earleir." Terrador huffed. "Sorry." All four dragons said at the same time. The four friends trotted on their favroite walking path. It went though a quite open pine forest with lots of pretty wild flowers. Rain or no rain, the path always carried the scent of fresh pine mixed with roses and the fading sun glowed orange. "Hey, theres a dance coming up, you wanna go with me?" Cynder asked SPyro. "Sure, I'd love to." Spyro accpeted, resulting in a beaming Cynder. "A DANCE!? When is it?" EMber sqealed. "Next saturday." Cynder replied. "Oh, I've got to help orginize it! You wann go with me, Flame?" Ember said. "Sure." FLame siad cassulay. Soon Cyril called them back and night ended the day. |
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#9 Posted: 01:14:29 25/01/2010
YAY!!!!!!! ANOTHER CHAPTER!!!!
*hugz*
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#10 Posted: 18:46:04 25/01/2010 | Topic Creator
*Hugs*
The next day was a monday, the weather was hot, but it was diminished by a strong wind. Ember and Cynder made her way toward the Town Hall. The hall was busy with dragons in line. All the lines were to sign up for events. one was for a sports tournament, another for a survival in the woods competiton, the third for a draw, and the last to help volunteer around town, including to help orginize the dance. "Are you sure you don;t want to sign up for the dance?" Ember asked. "I am super sure. I am not into that stuff." Cynder said. The only reason Cynder came with is because she wanted to sign up for the sports tournament. Ember and Cynder trotted up to the line. Ember picked up the pen and signed her name. "Aren;t you going to sign up?" the dragon at the table asked, puzzled. "No, Iam just here to keep her company." Cynder lied. "Well, do you want to sign up for the race?" The dragon asked. "What race?" Cynder and Ember said at the same time. "Theres going to be a tube race on the Emerald River. Its coming up next Sunday, a week after the dance. IT's the annual event for the Summer Fetivties, and the last. Dragons from the age of 11 to 17 can sign up, in partners." the dragon explained in great detail. Cynder and Ember exchagned glances. "That would be so much fun!" Ember squealed as Cynder signed the sheet. The dragon leading the commitee for the dance led the dragons inside. "I've got to go. See you later?" Ember said. "Okay, we can look for a tube before we have to go home." Cynder suggested. But what Ember didn;t notice on the sign up sheet was that Bruce had signed up as well. |
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#11 Posted: 01:06:34 26/01/2010
oh no!!! bruce! ahhhhhhhhhhhh!
*runs and hides under bed*
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#12 Posted: 02:08:06 26/01/2010
nice story going here. it looks interesting, i can surely sense drama.
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#13 Posted: 03:55:35 26/01/2010 | Topic Creator
Wow, thanks!
Your lucky, i can;t fit under my bed. Three days later, the weather was very hot, and there was no breeze whatsoever. Cynder trotted eagerly toward the soccer field. Spyro,Flame and Bruce walked beside her. "Hmph! A girl playing soccer! I can't belive shes on the same team as me!" Bruce huffed. Spyro opened his mouth to protest, then closed it again. He knew better that Cynder didn't need support. But he forgot warn Flame. "Were all on the same team Bruce. Just leave her alone." Flame growled. he glanced at Cynder and flinched under her glare. Cynder looked ahead and rolled her eyes. Typical. One boy thinks girls are useless and the other thinks I need protection. Cynder thought. But she knew that Bruce was just unhappy that his friend of enimies was on the same team as him. That and Cynder scored 35 goals on Bruce while he was in net in practice yesterday. After practice, the soccer game began. "And here, comes,, The Swwwwift Terrorsss!!" The annoucer rumbled,playing the music. Spyro,Cynder, Flame, Bruce,and their teammates, wearing their red and blue uniforms, ran across the feild, waving to the audience. The crowd roared, but the loudest cheers came from Ember, who wore a jersey for the team and a hat, waving a flag high in the air. The enemy team was introduced, who were named The Fried Green Tamators. Cynder would hate to see them in Langauge Arts class. The game began, and Cynder,SPyro and Flame was on the offense. Cynder raced toward Spyro and Flame, who currently were kicking the ball toward the oppisite net. A big brute of a dragon blocked their way. Spyro lifted the ball of the ground, and Flame head butted it high over everyones head. But another dragon was right in front of it, and started it's journey toward their side. Cynder jumped in front of him, wacking the ball with her tail in the enemy's net. A horn sounded nearby, and the crowd went wild. The game dragged on, and the score was 3-1. The Swift Terrors had the higher score. A break was called, and the players layed on the cool grass, drank their water bottles, ate the snack the coachs bought, and re-applied sun-screen. Flame streched his wings and wiped the sweat of his forehead. "Winning sure isn't easy." Flame said, nibbling his granola bar. "It;s not about winning, Flame, its about having fun." the coach reminded him. "So then we'll have fun out here running in circles and still lose?" Spyro laughed. "Of course not. We can still try without getting competive." the coch said in a warning tone. Flame reached for his sunscreen in his bag but dropped it. "Here, I'll grab that for you." Cynder chirped cheerfully. She picked up the bottle, but once she read the label, her expression turned to stone. It was fly gel! The gel helped dragons move faster, a lot faster. But it was technically cheating to use in sports, and harmful to use. So harmful, it was illegal. "Your using FLY GEL!" Cynder screeched. The auidence fell slent. Ember's jaw fell open, and she dropped her flag. "WHAT!?" the coach roared, enraged. "Is this true!" the coach demanded, his face red. "No, I don;t know how that got in there! I would never do that to this team!" Flame yelled, his limbs shaking with shock. "Well, without proof, you maybe will! You are disqauified, and don;t come back!" The coach roared. Flame tried to protest, but the coach gave him a murderous look. Flame retreated, his head hanging low and his tail dragging. The rest of the game was spent in low spirits. The Swift Terrors was so shocked with Flame's cheating that they didn't play as hard. Even the crowd was slient. They seemed to get even gloomier when a goal was scored. The game ended with a victory to The Fried Green Tamators. |
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#14 Posted: 04:01:59 26/01/2010
awww. poor flame.
i think i know who did it... back under my bed me:*looks over and sees bruce* AHHHHHHHHHHH *runs away*
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#15 Posted: 18:17:47 26/01/2010
yeah poor flame, I have a good idea who did it.
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#16 Posted: 18:22:33 26/01/2010 | Topic Creator
The next day was cloudy and gray, but still hot. Everybody expected a storm to come.
On the outskirts of town, there was an old barn with a lot of holes in the roof. This is where the dance was going to take place. The stars shining through the roof would create a romantic atmosphere. Ember hopped down from the ladder where she was hanging streamers. Haystacks were wrapped in red and pink wrapping. Orange,green,pink and red Streamers hung from the roof like vines in a jungle. Red,orange and yellow paper laterns gave the barn a warn and colorful glow. "This place looks great." Ember commented. "Yeah." Spyro said absent-mindedly. He was still confused by the soccer game. Spyro was convinced that Flame was innocent, but he hasn;t found any proof. he wanted to prove him innocent so he could be his parter by the River Tube Race. Everyone else was convinced of his gulit,though. Flame was banned from all activites, and now he sulked all the time, watching soccer games. Flame barely ate anything anymore. Once the fstivties were over, Flame would be sent to Juvenile Hall for a month. When he came back, he had communtiy service to fill his days. After that, summer hoildays would be over. "Oh,cheer up Spyro! He'll get over it evantulay. After his punishment, he'll be forgived and we can take him tubing down the river." Ember told him. "You do reailze this concerns you too. Now you'll have to find a new date for the dance, unless I prrove him innocent before it." Spyro pointed out. "I am not worried. i want to find a dress before I find a date." Ember said, reaching for her glass of water. SPyro did too and they both took a sip. All the sudden the wind blew hard, and patches from the roof were torn. Streamers were ripped from the roof and the staples that held them flew everywhere. "Run! The place could fall down!" Spots, the supervisor, warned. The dragons fled from the barn. The barns walls swayed in the wind as thunder rumbled closer. Lighting stirked and blinded Ember. She fell down a hill and landed under a tree. Lightning split the sky again, this time hitting the tree. The tree fell, casting a shadow over Ember. Embers muscles turned to ice. She was too fearful to move. "NOO!" Spyro howled, dashing down the hill. He leaped toward Ember and pushed her out of the way a spilt second before it hit the ground. Spyro and Ember rolled over, finnaly landing in the mud. EMber and SPyro looked up at the tree in shock. They both could have been killed. A heavy rain started to fall, and the wind whipped the two dragons off their feet. "We have to find shelter. We'll find Spots and the other sonce the storm has gone down!" Spyro yelled over the wind and thunder. Ember nodded and they did their best to run into a small cave. the entrance was pratly blocked by a fallen tree. the two dragons panted, then looked eachother in the eyes. "Hey, if we get through this,, will you go to the dance with me?" Ember offered. "Of course." SPyro said, forgetting about his date with Cynder. |
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#17 Posted: 19:08:59 26/01/2010
Wow spyro is in for it now. I wouldn't forget about my first date. Spyro is dead -.=.-' .
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#18 Posted: 22:10:04 26/01/2010 | Topic Creator
Cynder trotted up to the sports store at the edge of town. There was a crowd on the sidewalk as a group of dragons, bloodied and mud covered, limped in. Even Flame came to watch.
"Whats going on?" Cynder asked. "Its the dance commitee, they were trapped in the storm, and they surivied! There heroes!" Flame said, sounding more cheerful then he did for days. Cynder saw SPyro through the crowd. She was about to wave, when she noticed something. Ember was leaning on him,her paw twisted. There eyes hone when they looked at eachother. Cynder stomped toward them, followed by a puzzled Flame. "SPYRO!" Cynder screamed. Spyro jumped,startled. "What?" wondered SPyro. "What? WHAT! What do you mean by that! You look like you rin love with Ember!" Cynder screeched. "I AM in love with Ember. She's so sweet. I am taking her to the dance." Spyro said, mooning over Ember. Cynder's leg wobbled with rage. "WHAT!? But WE were going to go together! You stupid player!" Cynder yelled. "But then I reailze Ember's the only one for me." Spyro whispered passionltly. It seemed that no anger could penatrate his new crush. Ember blushed and giggled. "Spyro, you can't! Ember, this isn;t like you. " Flame questioned. "Well, Spyro is the love of my life. I'll never get the happiness I had with you. You and your fly gel." Ember argued, staring into Spyro's eyes. Flame looked bewildered, then really angry. he stomped off, too furious to speak. Cynder glared in hatred. She wasn;t done with him yet. "SPyro, if you go through with this, I will give you hell." Cynder snarled. "Sit on it." Spyro yawned, ignoring her. Cynder screamed and stomped away, fustrated. What on earth has gotten into Spyro? |
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#19 Posted: 22:48:32 26/01/2010
More like what made him change all of sudden thats odd, I feel something in that storm, made him change all of the sudden. Oh cynder is going to kill Spyro forsure.
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#20 Posted: 02:06:39 27/01/2010
ummm........ spyro went crazy
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#21 Posted: 02:23:45 27/01/2010
Aha, I think I know what caused them to fall in love. Can I say it ignitus?
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#22 Posted: 17:36:49 27/01/2010
i think it made my cry
YOUR SUCH A MEANIE SPRYO¬!! OMG IM SUCH A SUCKER FOR ROMANCE NOVELS!!!! *falls on the floor and cries* |
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#23 Posted: 18:40:21 27/01/2010
hey cynder, hahaha. it's ok. I'll try to join your latest RP.
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#24 Posted: 01:11:33 28/01/2010 | Topic Creator
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NO!! Seriously, keep guesses to youself!! You can share after the stories over. But when did I get so many new comments? Flame walked through downtown,hsi frown deep in concentration. "What exactly are we looking for?" Cynder wondered. Ever since Spyro and Ember mysteriously fell in love, Flame was outside almost every hour of the day. If he was going to prove his innocence, he had to do it himself. Spyro was to busy mooning over Ember to continue with that quest. Cynder of course, didn;t fancy spending all her time planning how to make Spyro miserble, so she decided to help. They had been friends long enough for Cynder to belive Flame wasn't guilty for long. "The place where the carnies live."Flame replied. "Why? After the health insperctors found 40 saftey and food hazards there, they shut it down." Cynder pointed out. "Yeah, but there still in town. Whoever planted that fly gel on me got it from a secret drug dealer. And the best place for him to hide is the carnival. Theres so much there it would be impossible to find." Flame explained. Finding the place wasn;t hard to find. it was a run down place surronded by a rusty chain-link fence. The tents were gray and had millons of holes in the hide, chewed by rodents and moths. the dragons looked weak and drank a lot of dragon-berry beer. Some were fighting and eating rotten food on decaying tables. the place smelled like burnt pancakes. Even breathing it in was painful. Flame and Cynder kept to the outside,trying not to breathe in the bad air. "I almost feel sorry for them. There so poor that they can't do anything else." Cynder sighed. Once they came to the far left corner of the fence, they found a suspicous, bright colored tent. It had pink and green stripes and the rest was a blinding snow white. There wasn;t a single hole in it, but yet there was smoked butts all over the ground around it. "It doesn't make sense. It looks like there trying to cover up to much." Cynder commented. "I guess we found our tent." Flame confirmed. he found a hole under the fence and crawled under it, followed by Cynder. They entered the tent, which had an overwhelming scent of sweet smoke. A pale,thin,hairy gray dragon with a fake right eye watched there every move. Flame looked at the shelfs with all the drugs. He reailzed they were orginized althabetically, except it went backwards. I am so going to work super hard in school after I saw this. Flame thought. Soon he reached the Fly gel. It was in a small tube filled with clear liquid. "Is that your choice?" the drug dealer hissed in a weird voice. "Just one question." Flame said inncoently. Cynder stared at him in horror. Flame winked, and she relaxed. "What is it?" the dealer asked. "I saw a fly gel in my bag at soccer. I didn;t buy it, so I knew it must have been my brothers. it just fell in there before I went to soccer, but I want o know exactly who," Flame stopped in mid-sentence, watching him out of the corner or his eye. Behind his back Flame started the tape recorder. "Oh, I was at that soccer game. I bought a tube of that to bring to my sister who plays, but I lost it, so it must have fallen in your bag, I am terribly sorry." the dealer explained. Flame clicked it. "Oh, no harm done. Oh, I am gonna be late for lunch, i gotta-" Flame said pielty before he bumped into a shelf and he dropped the tape recorder. The drug dealers face turned to pure fury. "You TAPED ME?" He growled. he closed in on them, cornering Flame and Cynder to a shelf. Flame gulped and glanced at the exit. Flame and Cynder exchagned glances and nodded. the dealer caught on and snarled. But Cynder and Flame breathed posion and fire on him, and the dealer screamed,ringing Flame's ears. The fire flew onto the self, and the drugs started burning. Flame and Cynder grabbed some gas masks and flew out of the tent. "You got the tape?" Cynder reminded him. "Yep." Flame replied, showing it off. The dealer stormed outside, hsi face steaming. "STOP THEM! THEY TAPED ME AND THEY'LL BUST US!" The dealer roared. |
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#25 Posted: 01:36:28 28/01/2010
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!! RUN FLAME AND CYNDER! RUN!!!!
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#26 Posted: 01:38:28 28/01/2010
oh dang, well i see where this is going. nice story keep it up. and I wont say a word then. thats why I asked.
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#27 Posted: 20:41:57 28/01/2010
Hey, nice story, It's more intresting than most.
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#28 Posted: 20:57:38 28/01/2010
im still angry with spyro for breaking cynder's heart. *mumbles swears at spyro* friggin......make me wanna.....stick....a knife........
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#29 Posted: 00:32:42 29/01/2010 | Topic Creator
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Their flying you numbskull. |
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#30 Posted: 02:41:36 29/01/2010
oh.
(filler)
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#31 Posted: 23:29:00 29/01/2010 | Topic Creator
Besides, they'd never get away if they were running.
The drugs started to burn a lot, and soon you couldn;t see anything trhough the smoke. Several carnies chased after them, but since they weren;t wearing gas masks, many dropped to the ground,fainted, or started counting imaginary butterfiles and bubbles. Even for Flame and Cynder, who wore the best gas masks in the enitre area, the flight was a mess. Seeps of the drugs got inbettwen the mask and Cynder's vison blurred. She had to shake her head to clear it. The two dragons were forced to fly high in order to avoid buldings,even though the smoke was worser the higher the dragons flew. But the flight wasn't even a bit of a problem for the drug dealer. He was so used to drug fumes, he didn;t even show a crumb of reaction. In fact it seemed to make him faster,, and stronger. His eyes watered and his mouth foamed, but he never fell behind of Flame and Cynder, always snapping at their heels. He caught Cynders leg and Cynder gasped. The dealer started to drag her backward, until she whipped around and slashed his face. The drug dealer howled and let go. Cynder flapped her wings rapidly to gain distance. "We have to find a way to shake him off." Cynder barked. "We can;t! The carnies could have laid an ambush. And the smoke is getting so thick, we wold get caught for sure-" Flame stopped in mid sentence once he saw an outline of a fence zooming toward them. "Look out!" Flame shouted, dragging Cynder higher. Flame and Cynder just barly missed the barb wire at the top of the tall fence, saving themselves from a painful belly slashing. The drug dealer though, didn;t see the fence in time, and the barb wire ripped his belly open. The dealer screamed and crashed onto the grass, defeated. Lucky for them, three poilce officers came too see what the commotion was about. They ran toward the three dragons and dragged them out of the smoke. "What on EARTH are you doing here!" The first one demanded. Flame and Cynder 's story came spilling out, and the officers took every word in. they even listened to the tape recorder. "Okay, but you still need more evidence then that. Come with us." The second officer commanded. Flame and Cynder followed gratefully, while the drug dealer, now seriously ill from the smoke inhales through his scratches, was dragged away. Spyro and Ember returned to the spot where Ember was almost killed on the day of the storm. This had become their favroite place to take a picnic. It was a few days since the incident with the carnies. After some interrgation, the poilce found the fly gel that was in Flames's soccer bag. After study, it showed that none of Flame's paw prints were on the tube. he was proven innocent and was now allowed back into the events. But that didn;t solve everyones problems. Spyro and Ember were now so crazy about eachother that they hardly spent any time away from eachother. they still planned to go to the dance together instead of their orignal date plans. "I still feel bad about dumping Cynder." Spyro sighed. "Don;t worry, she'll get over it." Ember cooed. But Spyro knew better. If he knew Cynder at all, she was plotting revenge right now. And it wasn;t going to be pretty. He told his suspicons to Ember, and she agreed. But they were too excited about the festivites to worry about that for long. "So, Spyro, I was wondering about something. Me and Cynder were supposed to go into the Tube Race together, but since she hates my guts now, it wouldn;t make sense to still be paired with her. Do you want to be my partner?" Ember said. "Of course!" Spyro agreed. They nuzzled noses and played tag untill they fell asleep under a tree. Spyro woke up in a massive hall. A dragon lay in there, that looked oddly familar,,"IGNITUS!" Spyro exclaimed. "Hello, young dragon. So I see you like Ember." Ignitus said camly. Spyro's wings drooped.He already knew what this was about. "I know It might be wrong Ignitus, but ever since," "That is not why I summoned you here Spyro. I want to show you something." Ignitus intrupted, pointing to a wall with his tail. Spyro followed his gaze and stared in amazement. Paintings of purple dragons hung on the walls in a neat row. Ignitus stood by the first one. The dragon was a deep purple with green eyes and a slim body like Cynder when she was corrupted. There was a dark green backround. "Meet Leslie. She was the very first purple dragon. She saved an entire land, and spent the rest of her days travelling around the world.." Ignitus said. He walked toward the second one. This one was a lighter purple with eyes just like Spyro, except it had a haunted look. She looked younger then Leslie, with a red backround. "The second purple dragon was Mindy. She was hunted all her life, and she spent all her life running. She trained in secret, and when Wafang was threatened, she gave her life to defend it. She was honured ever since." Ignitus limped toward the third painting, which showed a very light purple dragon with more muscle tone. He seemed to wear a sinster smile and had dark red eyes, which reflected the backround. "Ray had a darker path. He was honured among adults, but bullied horribly by his pupils. He knew just how to itimate someone. He was tempted by the evil side, but in the end, saved his true love from a terrible creature." Ignitus whispered. He came to the fourth painting,which featured a dark dragon, almost black. He seemed to have the same features as Ray, but seemed a lot darker. he was protrayed as a young hatchling. "Dark was born as Ray's desandent a long time later. Tortured by a cruel father, he learned his powers far too young, and slayed anyone in his path. It pained the dragons to kill such a young life." Ignitus explained sadly. Igntius walked toward the fifth painting, which contained a voilet dragon with yellow eyes. She had a strong muscle build, and had a longing look in her eyes. "Flo faced a heart broken destiny. Whenever she found love, he tortured her and Flo had to leave in order to live. After fighting a horrible war, she finnaly found true love and understood the meaning of life. But she died laying her eggs." Ignitus explained. They came to the second last painting, and dragon Spyro kew all too well. It was Malefor, with a pitch black backround and red eyes. "You may claim to know Malefor's story, but you don't. It took a thousand years for Flo's eggs to hatch, and one of them was Malefor. After namy years of stories passed down from genrations, dragons didn;t know what to think of purple dragons. Many tried to steer him in the right deriction, and after the murder of his mother, and he was fustrated with the gaurdians persistence for him to keep training. Once they found out his mothers murder was a test of his stregth, he snapped. He killed everyone around him,and vowed to destroy the world." Ignitus spat, the story sending shivers through Spyro. he came to the last painting. It showed Spyro and a young hatchling, with innocent,round eyes and a white backround. "Spyro was raised in a swamp by Dragonflies,a nd faced the hardest destiny of them all. After many years, he deafted Malefor and the world came to peace." Ignitus finshed quitely, almost to himself. he turned back to Spyro. "Are you noticing a pattern, young dragon?" Ignitus asked. "Yeah. After every purple dragon, they have a bigger effect on the world. But what does that have to do with me? I furfilled my destiny." Spyro demanded. Ignitus churred in laughter. "What I just told you was a summary of these dragons lives. Their lives were a lot deeper and complex. Even after their destinies, they had many troubles. Beware Spyro, there is still great trouble ahead,," Ignitus's words echoed as the dream faded. |
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#32 Posted: 00:16:22 30/01/2010
i liked this chapter!
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#33 Posted: 03:22:11 30/01/2010
ditto awesome chapter, I wonder how cynder will pay him back haha. Wonder if he'll go back to normal?
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#34 Posted: 17:21:15 30/01/2010 | Topic Creator
You guys better have liked that chapter. It took almost two hours for me to write that!
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#35 Posted: 17:29:32 30/01/2010
i want to cry for cynder. *cries* all better... wait *cries harder* ...................waaaiiiitttt............*cries so hard that her eyes turn red and she turns into a black dragon* DIE SPYRO DIE!!! OMG I'VE ALWAYS WANTED TO BECOME A DRAGON!! ....im such a dragon fantard.......
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#36 Posted: 01:01:39 31/01/2010 | Topic Creator
The next soccer game was on a cloudy day.
Cynder practiced harder in warm-up then she ever did before. Ember had joined the soccer tournament on the team called The Misty Strikes, the team they were facing today. Ember was playing goal for the first two rounds, and Cynder didn't intend to let her have it easy. The dragons got into the postion. The whistle blew, and the game began. Cynder ran forward and took the ball away from Spyro. "Hey!" He protested. Cynder ran through the feild, snapping at anyone who got in her way. The net approched, and Cynder dug her claws into the grass. She kicked the ball toward the net. But Ember blocked it. The whistle blew and the dragons went back into postion. Cynder trotted back, puzzled. How did Ember block that goal? The game contniued, and Cynder raced back and forth with the ball. She didn;t let anybody have the ball, not even her own teammates. Almost everybody was puzzled, but Cynder didn't care. Her fustration grew with Ember's sucess. She blocked every kick she made, no matter what trick she tried. Cynder tried distracting her, and aiming the ball left but firing right instead. The third round began, and Ember was on the offensive. The goalie for third round twisted his ankle, so Cynder took net. Ember raced toward the net with the ball, untill Flame blocked the way. he snarled and spread his wings out. In her own bitterness, Cynder forgot that Flame was also mad at Spyro and Ember too. Ember kicked the ball over Flame's head and contniued her approach. Cynder looked around desprately. Her other teamates were too busy trying to stop their opponet's from helping Ember. Spyro was still free, coruching a few feet from the net. "Spyro! Help!" Cynder called. But when Ember passed him, Spyro didn;t lift a claw. Ember shot the ball, and she scored. The crowd went wild, but Cynder steamed. She stomped up to Spyro. "What are you doing!? You let her score!" Cynder hissed. "She was going to fast for me to catch up." Spyro fibbed. "You didn;t even try!" Cynder yelled. Then the whistle blew, and postions were returned. Ember caught the ball, and dashed toward the net. Flame race behind her, trying to slap the ball away with his tail. All the sudden he was tackled by Brutus! He got up immideatly and circled around Ember, stopping anyone from getting near her. Cynder clawed the ground. Brutus was on their team! Didn't anyone stick to their own teams anymore? To Cynder's complete suprise, Spyro strided toward them. At least Spyro was coming to his senses. But when they got closer, Cynder saw concern and fury in his eyes. He was just worried about Ember! Cynder's rage came crawling back. Brutus gave way at the last second,and Ember fired. The ball was coming in fast, Cynder knew she couldn;t stop it. Unless, Cynder jumped into the air spreading her wings out. But the soccer ball hit her in the chest,and sent her crashing into the net. The whistle blew, and the crowd cheered. It was counted as a goal. Cynder's chest throbbed painfully. She groaned and tried to stand up, but she was complexly tangled in the net. The pain spread to her legs, and she collapsed to the ground. "CYNDER! Are you okay?" A voice called. It was Flame, though Cynder could hardly tell. Her vison was blurred and everything seemed to be moving. Flame untangled her from the net and helped her out into the clearing. The crowd became silent once they saw Cynder's condition. She felt natious as she fell to the grass. The coach came racing onto the feild at once. "Is she okay?" The coach questioned. "Of course she's not okay! She just took a soccer ball to the chest!" Flame spat. Even in her bad state, Cynder was suprised by the concern in Flame's voice. Spyro and Ember came running over. "She will recover though,right?" Spyro said, sniffing her flank. Then it was Ember's turn to speak. "Well, she should have known better then to try and block that,," Ember muttered. That alone was enough for Cynder to get better. He rvison cleared and her pain vanished. She stood up and faced Ember. "Well you should have known better to take Spyro from me!" She shouted. At first Ember looked shocked, then angry. "Spyro and I were meant to be! Its not your fault if you can't take it!" Ember snapped. "How dare you say that, you, you PIG!" Cynder shot back, taking a threating step forward. "What are you going to do? Your injured remember?" Ember said snootfully. She tapped her tail tip on her chest. Cynder groaned and fell the the grass, the pain returning. Ember crouched beside her. "Remember You and Flame's adventure? Doubts are still high, and I could easily make things worse again," Ember threatened in a low voice. Cynder slowly stood up and walked toward her untill their faces were only a inch apart. "That, was the last straw," Cynder growled, to furious to speak loud and clear. She tackled Ember and slashed her face. Ember howled in suprise and flipped her over, nipping her tail. The crowd wailed in terror and the coach was too shocked to move. "STOP!" Spyro begged, running toward the fighting she-dragons. Flame stood in his way. "You broke Cynder's heart, you couldn't even dump her properly. You don't have a say in this." Flame sneered. "Ember's my girlfriend! I can't let her get hurt!" Spyro exclaimed. "She was mine first, before you took her from me! And she still is mine!" Flame snarled. Flame attacked, and Spyro was sent rollling over. Flame pinned him down and slashed his belly untill SPyro escaped his grip and head butted Flame, sending him flying across the feild. Meanwhile, Cynder pinned Ember to the grass, and she slashed at her neck. Ember gasped in pain as her necklace shattered into pecies. Ember shook Cynder off and bit down into her leg. Cynder escaped from her grip and grabbed her by the scruff. Cynder lifted her up, being much larger then Ember, and shook Ember like a ragdoll. Cynder finnaly tossed her away and dived in for another attack. Ember doged and slashed her side as she landed. Cynde got up and the two she dragons circled eachother. Cynder evantullay breathed a ray of fear at Ember. Cynder felt satisifed,knowing that Ember was probaly a pile of bones by now. But when the ray vanished, Ember wasn;t there! "Hey, snob queen!" Ember snapped. Cynder whipped around only to be burned by Ember's flame. Cynder screamed that made everyone around freeze. Cynder stopped,dropped and rolled her face into the dewy grass. Cynder lifted her claw to her face and to her terror, the claw was steaming. Her face was burned. "WHy you little pink -" Cynder cursed, turning back to pounce on her. The coach stopped her. "Enough! That was very ireesponsible, all four of you!" the coach barked. Paramedics rushed on the feild and used healing breath to take care of their injuires. "That was competley iresponisble,stupid,and outrageuos thing I have ever seen!" the coach roared. Flame,Cynder,Spyro and Ember looked down their wings drooping. But their was no way the coach would get an apology from either of them. "Not only did you fight, but you all let your teamates down! the judges will never put up with this." He spat. Even as he spoke, the judges fixed the four dragons with dissaproving looks. "I can't afford anymore trouble from any of you!" The coach shouted. "So, were disquafied?" Spyro squeaked. "Its gone beyond that. The whole team will have to drop out now!" He turned toward the judges, who nodded to confirm his preiction. This bought out the worse of his fury. "YOU FOUR ARE THE MOST WORST,SELFISH, AND BITTER DRAGONS I HAVE EVER SEEN! LEAVE NOW, I NEVER WANT TO SEE ANY OF YOUR FACES AGAIN!" The coach roared so loud the ground seemed to shake. Spyro and Ember left through the one side, and Flame and Cynder the other. They both stared angrily at eachother before they turned the street corner. But something shocked Ember. 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#37 Posted: 01:59:46 31/01/2010
i ought to beat up spyro for what he has done. good chapter
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#38 Posted: 13:27:37 31/01/2010
same here S240.
wtf cynder leiks flame now. weeeeiiirddddd |
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#39 Posted: 20:36:20 31/01/2010
i thought they would.
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#40 Posted: 19:21:50 05/02/2010
meh i still want to kill spyro
HEARTBREAKER!!! girls here's a tip for ya. DONT FALL FOR SPYRO! HES A GOD DAMN PLAYER!!!!!!!!!!! |
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#41 Posted: 02:59:24 06/02/2010 | Topic Creator
Yeah, if you want to date a dragon. I'd hate to see you try bearing his children.
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#42 Posted: 17:58:35 06/02/2010
yea. i wouldn't want to
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#43 Posted: 18:54:09 06/02/2010
when you going to post more ignitus? just asking.
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#44 Posted: 19:19:18 06/02/2010
i like it. i can't wait for when u post again.
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#45 Posted: 20:48:21 06/02/2010
ZOMG SMILEY OVERLOAD!!
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#46 Posted: 22:29:57 07/02/2010
lol
(FILLER) whoops, caps lock.
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#47 Posted: 07:05:54 08/02/2010
more more more more more!
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#48 Posted: 18:40:11 08/02/2010
AHH HELP SMILEY OVERLOAD!!!!!!
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#49 Posted: 02:20:05 09/02/2010
again. lol
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#50 Posted: 01:20:32 12/02/2010
more! more more more!
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