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#1 Posted: 21:36:44 28/10/2009 | Topic Creator
i am making a new story, well, technically old story, about the ancestors. now, this is will be about the ancestors from my 'Firelfight' books. so, if you haven't read them, you may want to read them before reading this one. i will start writing it shortly.
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#2 Posted: 22:00:57 28/10/2009
start already
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#3 Posted: 22:03:32 28/10/2009 | Topic Creator
it was a beautiful morning. the sun was shining bright, and the sky was crystal clear. many creatures were still asleep this early. however, there was dragon couple, living within a cave inside a large mountain, who were wide awake, andready to greet the day, among other things.
"oh, just thinking about it brings me great joy!" exclaimed a dragoness. she was a large, dark purple dragon. she had six horns, and her tail-end was shaped like a flame. her eyes, belly, and inside wings were violet. "yes, it is exciting" replied a male dragon. he was large and muscular. he was jet black, with blood red eyes, belly, and inside wings. he had four horns, and his tail-end was shaped like a blade as well. they both sat in a small, warm room. there were two small straw beds in front of them. laying on each bed was an egg. the egg on the right was blood red, while the other was ice blue. "i believe this one will be a fire dragon" the male continued, looking at the red egg in fornt of him. "and this one must be an ice dragon" said the female, looking at the blue egg in front of her. "indeed. Soulwing, what do you suppose we should name them?" the male asked. she looked at him. "well, if they are boys, i want to name the blue one Icewing, and the red one will be named Firefang" she answered him. "and if they are girls?" he asked. "well, Blackfang, if they are girls, i want to name the blue one Artica, and the red one Flare" "wonderful. but, Soul, why have the boys have part of our names in them, but not the girls?" "i was thinking of doing that, but i thought of the names Artica and Flare, and thought they would beautiful names for girls" she replied. "ah, i see" he said. then he saw a crack on the red egg. "look, Soul! the red one is starting to hatch!" Blackfang exclaimed. Soulwing looked, smiling. "i see it!" she said. then she looked at the blue egg. "look,Fangy! this one is also beginning to hatch!" she exclaimed. then they both smiled, and waited for the eggs to hatch. alright, what do you think so far?
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#4 Posted: 22:16:06 28/10/2009 | Topic Creator
both eggs continued to crack more and more. Blackfang and Soulwing waited auxiously for their children to be born. then suddenly, both eggs cracked open, and two baby dragons lay surrounded in egg shells. Blackfang and Soulwing smiled at their newborn baby dragons. each one was female. the red female was covered in blood red scales. she had six small horns, and her tail-end was shaped like a blade. her eyes were sappire blue. the other female was covered in ice blue scales. she had six small horns, and her tail-end was blade-shaped. her eyes were sky blue. the two hatchlings then looked at each other.
"they are so precious!" said Soulwing, smiling. "yes, they are. Artica and Flare, our girls" Blackfang smiled. the hatchlings looked at their parents, and then backed at each other. then Artica got up, and then tackled Flare, playfully. Flare giggled as they rolled around on top of one another. Artica then pinned Flare to the ground, and smiled. she thought she had won the playful fight. then Flare sneezed, accidenlty breathing hot flames on her sister. Artica jumped up, surprised. Flare got up, and looked at her. then they each looked at their parents, as if to say "what was that?" here is next part.
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#5 Posted: 23:40:33 02/11/2009
lol its good
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#6 Posted: 23:42:55 02/11/2009 | Topic Creator
thanks. i'll write more when i have time.
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#7 Posted: 07:00:24 05/11/2009
So this is your new story. sounds very nice
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#8 Posted: 07:53:54 05/11/2009
Good story so far
Please continue
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#9 Posted: 21:30:34 05/11/2009 | Topic Creator
thanks guys. i'll try to write mroe soon, but i'm busy with hw.
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#10 Posted: 09:57:24 10/11/2009
Now??
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#11 Posted: 01:37:42 11/11/2009 | Topic Creator
i'm sorry i haven't written anymore. i just get busy. i'll try to write more soon.
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#12 Posted: 06:42:36 11/11/2009
Okay.
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#13 Posted: 21:54:12 13/11/2009 | Topic Creator
"elements?" Flare asked.
"yes. you each have certain abilitys that only certain kinds of dragons have" replied Blackfang. "what kind of dragons?" Artica asked. "oh, there are many diffrent kinds" said Soulwing. "there are ice dragons, fire, earth, electric, wind, poison, shadow, and fear. there are also black and purple dragons, like your father and i, who can wield more than one element" she explained. "what kind are we?" Flare asked. "we are not sure yet" said Blackfang. "we think that you, Flare, may be a fire dragon. and you, Artica, may be an ice dragon" he said. "yes. though i know a way to find out for sure" said Soulwing. "how?" Flare asked. "we test your abilitys in the training room" said Blackfang. "Flare isn't gonig to spit flames at me again, is she?" Artica asked. "what's the matter, Artica? don't think you can take me?" Flare teased. "oh, i can take you. i would have won if you didn't use a sneak attack on me" "really? well, if you think you're so tough, why don't you prove it in the training room" "oh, you are so on, sis!" Artica said, with a gleam in her eye. Blackfang looked at Soulwing. "your father and i will show you to the training room. although, i advise you to learn to control your powers before challenging each other" she said. "ah, just let them have fun, Soul. after all, you're only young once" he smiled. "alright. but after you have fun you need to start training" she said. "come on girls. the training room is this way" Blackfang said. he then started walking down the hallway. the girls ran after him, eager to begin training. Soulwing followed behind them. they got to a door, and Blackfang opened to the door to the large room. the girls immediately ran inside. Blackfang and Soulwing walked in after them. they sat down on the side of the room, and looked at the girls, who faced each other in the middle. "are you ready?" Blackfang asked each of them. "ready, Dad!" Flare called. "ready to get beat that is!" Artica teased. "alright then, begin!" he said. then Artica and Flare charged towards each other. Artica lowered her head, ready to attack with her horns. just then, right before Artica ran into Flare, Flare jumped up, avoiding the attack. Artica stopped near the wall, and Flare turned aroudn to face her. "you missed me!" Flare called. "that won't happen again!" Artica yelled back. "nanananana! you can't get me!" Flare teased, spitting her tounge out. "we'll see about that!" Artica yelled. then she ran towards her once more. Flare watched as she ran towards her. Artica came closer. she lowered her head, and got ready to ram into Flare. just then, a dark cloud surrounded Flare, and Artica ran right through her. "what the?! where'd you go?!" Artica asked, confused. Flare turned around to face her. "i'm right here!" she giggled. "you missed me again!" she laughed. Artica turned around. "no way! i hit you!" she said. then she turned to face her parents. "Mom, Dad, didn't i hit her?" "yes and no" replied Blackfang. "huh?" the both asked. "what your father means is that Artica didn't miss, but she didn't hit Flare. Flare used the element, shadow, to avoid the attack. she used it to hide herself in shadows, long enough to be unharmed by attacks" Soulwing explained. "cool!" Flare said, smiling. "that's not fair! i want to be able to do that!" Artica complained. "don't worry, Artica. not every dragon has that ability. in fact, you can probally do something that Flare can't do" Blackfang said. "i still think it isn't fair!" Artica kept complaining. "it is alright, Artica. i don't have the shadow element either" said Soulwing. "so, does this mean i am a fire and shadow dragon?" Flare asked. "no. like your mother explained earlier, some dragons can wield more than one element. you may be able to wield more" their dad said. "that's so not fair! i haven't even learned one element yet!" Artica continued to complain. "don't worry, dear. i'm sure you'll learn an element soon enough" said Soulwing.
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#14 Posted: 06:45:14 15/11/2009
more?
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#15 Posted: 21:51:38 16/11/2009 | Topic Creator
i haven't written more yet.
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#16 Posted: 09:24:30 17/11/2009
AWWWWWWWW......
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#17 Posted: 00:24:39 18/11/2009 | Topic Creator
sorry...i get busy...as usual..
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#18 Posted: 06:34:19 18/11/2009
Okay...i wait
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#19 Posted: 23:27:26 18/11/2009 | Topic Creator
weeks had passed, and Flare was training with her father in the training room everyday. she was learning many elements. however, Artica spent most of her time outside. she showed no signs of being able to use many elements like Flare. this angered her. Flare was getting all of the attention. she was being trained in the ancient ways, while Artica sat on the side lines. Flare had already learned the elements fire, ice, earth, electricity, and shadow. while Artica only knew ice. Artica would spend a lot of her time playing with her ice element outside. she would freeze ponds and lakes, and then slide or skate around on top of the ice. it was fun, but she wanted to be training with her sister. she didn't want Flare to get all of the attention. getting tired of playing outside, Artica went inside, and walked into the training room. Flare was still training.
"ready, Flare?" Blackfang asked. "ready, Dad!" Flare replied. then she lowered her head, and charged at her father. Artica watched. Blackfang saw her coming. he then used shadow to avoid the attack. Flare stopped inches from the wall. she turned around to she her father reveal himself. she then shot fire balls at him. he quickly turned around, and countered with shadowfire. then Blackfang sent a mini tornado towards Flare. Flare used shadow to avoid the attack. then she attacked from the shadows with her claws. Blackfang clawed back, and then used wind to send her flying towards a wall. Flare then used her comet dash ability in the air, giving her a fiery boost towards Blackfang. she then used her earth ball ability to attack. she was able to knock Blackfang off his feet, but he got up quickly, and then used his fear breath. Flare used shadow to avoid the attack. then she breathed shadowfire from behind him. Blackfang quickly turned around, breathing shadowfire as well. they each breathed shadowfire until Artica walked towards them, and shot ice shards at both of them. they both countered with shadowfire. then Blackfang looked at Artica. "Artica, we are training now. we don't have time to play" he said, sternly. Flare looked at her sister. "we can play later, ok?" "no, that's not ok! you guys never pay attention to me! just because i only know one lousy element doesn't mean i can't train too!" Artica complained. "Artica, we've been through this. you've learned all you need to know. you are simply an ice dragon. you can not go through the complex training that Flare is doing" "that isn't fair! i can fight just as well as she can!" "that may be so, but you only have one element, which limits your abilitys. you are a fine fighter, and will grow to be a strong ice dragon, but you can not do everything that Flare can. Flare hasn't even learned all her elements. i must train with her to teach her what all she needs to know. Artica, you may train with your mother, but i must work with Flare" her father explained. "ugh!" Artica groaned. then she stormed out. "Dad, can i go see if she's ok?" Flare asked, concerned. "not right now. i have much to teach you, Flare" he said. Flare continued to train with her father, while Artica walked around outside. she then saw something flying in the distance. "what's that?" Artica said to herself, looking at the sky. then it appeared there were hundreds of creatures flying towards the mountain. "are they dragons?" Artica wondered. she then ran inside. she burst through the training room door. "Dad! Dad! there's a bunch of things flying towards the temple!" she said. he and Flare looked at her. "what?" he asked. "come see!" Artica said, running outside. Blackfang followed. Artica led him outside, and pointed to the sky. "look!" she said. he looked up. hundreds of creatures flew closer to them. "oh no! Artica, get inside now!" he yelled. "but-- "Now!!" Blackfang yelled. then Artica ran inside. Blackfang roared loudly, and then flew up into the sky. Artica ran back to the training room, where Flare stood there with Soulwing. "we must leave!" their mother said. "why?! what's going on?!" Flare asked. "we're under attack!" Soulwing replied.
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#20 Posted: 01:38:09 19/11/2009
cool! err.. not for the family... but.. cool
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#21 Posted: 01:42:29 19/11/2009 | Topic Creator
thanks.
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#22 Posted: 21:54:36 23/11/2009
will they survive......
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#23 Posted: 22:40:42 23/11/2009 | Topic Creator
you'll have to wait and see.
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#24 Posted: 09:49:19 24/11/2009
I must know, please continue soon!
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#25 Posted: 20:02:07 24/11/2009 | Topic Creator
Soulwing and the girls escaped through a secret exit in the mountain. the girls ran into the bushes, and hid. Soulwing stopped, and looked back. she saw Blackfang flying towards the creatures in the sky. Blackfang flew closer to the army. he could see now that the army was made up of dreadwings, and a few black dragons like himself. he breathed shadowfire, but many dodged the attack. the black dragons breathed shadowfire as well, but Blackfang countered their attack with his own shadowfire. then Blackfang used wind to send a tornado after the army. many dreadwings were caught in the tornado, but the black dragons avoided it. the dreadwings and dragons surrounded Blackfang, and began attacking him visciously. the dragons got out daggers, and continued to attack. Blackfang fought back, but there were too many of them. the dreadwings were tearing up his wings, making it hard for Blackfang to fly. the dragons continued to attack, leaving many bruises and open wounds on Blackfang's body. they continued to attack, making Blackfang weak. then Blackfang started to fall towards the ground.
"Blackfang!!" Soulwing yelled. then two of the black dragons got out some chains. then they flew to Blackfang, grabbed him, and put him chains. then the dragons flew away with him. the others flew towards the temple. "Mom, we have to go!" Artica yelled to her. Soulwing looked at her children. they each had scared looks on their faces. Soulwing nodded with tears in her eyes. then Soulwing, Artica, and Flare run for their lives through the forrest.
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#26 Posted: 20:08:32 28/11/2009
hmmmm......
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#27 Posted: 22:26:08 30/11/2009 | Topic Creator
i haven't written more of this one yet, so just bare with me.
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#28 Posted: 05:21:10 01/12/2009
okay.
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#29 Posted: 01:48:51 02/12/2009 | Topic Creator
the dreadwings and dragons attacked the temple. though they wern't just rampaging through the temple, breaking everything in sight; it appeared as though they were searching for something. then one large, black dragon looked around at the others.
"let's go. there's nothing here" he said. the others nodded, and left. the black dragon looked at some dreadwings. "go. hunt down what we're looking for until you find it. we must not let our master down" he said. the dreadwings nodded, and then they flew off in a hurry. the dreadwings flew outside the temple. they each flew in diffrent directions in search of something. the black dragons left the temple in flames from the destruction they caused. they flew north towards some distant mountains. meanwhile, Soulwing and the girls ran through the forrest. a dreadwing had smelled them, and began to follow them through the forrest. they ran faster, hoping to outrun the dreadwing. Soulwing knew she could easily fight one dreadwing, but who knew how many were nearby. the dreadwing could call for help if it wanted to, and Soulwing didn't want to risk it. she could hear the flap of the dreadwing's wings. she knew it was getting closer. Soulwing looked around, and saw a small cave surrounded by bushes, and other plants. it seemed like the perfect place to hide, but the dreadwing could still hunt them down. Soulwing had to think fast. she then grabbed the girls, and ran to the cave. "get inside quickly. keep quiet, and no matter what happens, don't leave this cave" she whispered to them. then Flare and Artica ran into the cave. they looked back to see their mother run off into the forrest. then they heard a loud roar, and the fearful cry of something else. they wondered what was happening, but knew they should stay where they were. then they heard angry growls, and painful crys. then there was a loud, painful roar, followed by, what sounded like, ratteling chains. then there were sounds of wings flapping, and the sound grew distant rather quickly. then there was silence. Flare and Artica walked to the cave entrance, and peeked through the bushes. they saw nothing but the forrest. Artica took a few steps out of the cave. she looked around, but still saw nothing. she began walking to where she saw her mother run off to. Flare soon joined her. they stopped when they saw a large puddle of blood on the ground. they looked around, and saw blood had splattered everywhere. there was blood on the bushes and trees. then they saw a trail of blood leading away from the puddle. they then looked at each other, wondering if they should follow the trail, or go back to the cave. then Artica looked at the trail. Flare looked back at the cave, and took a few steps back towards the cave. then Artica started to walk down the trail. Flare looked back, and saw her sister following the trail. not wanting to stay there alone, Flare began to follow Artica.
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#30 Posted: 06:29:45 02/12/2009
Yupp, sound exciting once again
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#31 Posted: 22:26:03 02/12/2009 | Topic Creator
thanks.
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#32 Posted: 09:45:01 03/12/2009
Write more when you have enoug time....
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#33 Posted: 23:23:30 04/12/2009 | Topic Creator
ok. i should have time today.
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#34 Posted: 03:48:25 05/12/2009 | Topic Creator
Flare and Artica continued to follow the trail of blood. they looked ahead, and saw the trail ended at an entrance to a small cave. Artica started to walk towards it, but then Flare grabbed her, pulling her back.
"what are you doing?!" Flare asked. Artica looked at her. "following the trail" "but you don't what's in there!" "that's kind of why i'm going in. it's the only way to find out what" she said. then she started walking again, but Flare grabbed her again. "wait! i don't think we should go in there" "yeah, i guessed that when you kept grabbing me" "i'm serious, Artica. we shouldn't be here. Mom said not to leave the cave" "yeah, well, Mom's gone. now, you can either go back and sit in the cave by yourself, or you can follow me into the cave" "i'm not letting you go in there alone" Flare said. Artica took a few steps towards the cave. "then you better start walking, because i'm going in. you coming?" Artica asked as she continued walking. Flare hesistated. she had a bad feeling about this. however, she knew Artica would go in either way, and she didn't want to leave her alone. "alright, i'm coming" Flare said, following her. Artica walked into the dark cave. she casually kept walking, not concerned at all as to what might be in there. Flare slowly followed behind her. she looked around, cautiously. just then, Flare heard what sounded like a groan. "uh...what was that...?" Flare asked, nervously. Artica stopped, and looked back at her. "don't tell me you're scared" "i'm not scared" Flare said. then she heard the sound again. she looked around, nervously. "yes you are. scardy-dragon!" Artica teased. "i'm not scared, Artica, just nervous" "uh huh. scardy-dragon, scardy-dragon, scardy-dragon!" Artica teased some more. "cut it out!" Flare said, now irritated. "or what? you're gonna breathe fire on me? ooh, i'm so scared of the little fraidy-dragon!" Artica kept teasing her. "hey, cut it out!" Flare snarled, getting angrier. Artica chuckled. "oh my gosh, Flare, you get so mad about nothing. geez, relax. there's nothing in here to be scared of" "i'm not scared, Artica. but i know i heard something" "oh, sure. well, when you find the mouse that made the horrifying squeaking sound, let me know so i can kill it for you" Artica chuckled. Flare only frowned at that remark. then Artica walked further into the cave. Flare stayed behind, and decided not to go any further. she wasn't sure if she wanted to hang around her sister after she teased her. then she heard a young female scream. "Artica, if you're trying to scare me, it won't work" Flare said, looking further into the cave. she heard the scream again. "Artica, this isn't funny. quit it" she said. the screaming continued. "Artica, seriously, you're not scaring me. just cut it out" she continued. however, the screaming got louder. Flare was getting worried. she walked further into the cave. the screaming kept getting louder. "Artica? where are you? this isn't funny. just come out" she said. Flare walked further into the cave. she then approached a large boulder. "BOO!" Artica yelled, jumping out from behind the boulder. Flare jumped a few feet straight up into the air, with a frightful look on her face. Artica rolled around on the floor, laughing. when Flare came back down, she glared at her sister. "Artica! that wasn't funny!" Flare snarled. Artica looked up at her. "your right, it was hilarious!" Artica laughed. Flare began growling. "that is it! i've had it with you, Artica! you're always picking on me, teasing me, or trying to scare me! well, you know what, not anymore! the next time you do something like this, i'll, i'll--" "you'll what?" Artica asked, getting up after she had calmed down a little. "tell Mom and Dad? ooh, i'm so scared of the little tattletail!" Artica teased. "cut it out!" Flare growled. then she pushed her to the ground. Artica looked at her. "oh, so you wanna fight, huh?" Artica asked, getting back up. "well, if it's a fight you want..." Artica then pushed Flare down. "..then a fight is what you'll get" she said. Flare got back up. "stop pushing me around, Artica!" Flare growled. then Flare blaster her with her earth breath. Artica was knocked further back into the cave. she disappeared somewhere in the darkness. Flare glared into the darkness. "good ridence" she said. she then started to walk out of the cave. then she heard more screaming. "oh no! it won't work this time, Artica! you can't scare me!" Flare growled. the screaming continued. Flare kept going. she figured her sister was only trying to scare her again. the screaming got louder, but then it stopped suddenly. Flare wondered why. then there was a flapping sound, as if something was heading straight for her. then suddenly, a large winged-creature flew over Flare, and headed for the exit. it moved so fast that she couldn't tell what it was. she then ran outside, and looked around. she looked up in the sky, and then spotted a dreadwing flying away. it flew awkardly, and appeared to have a injured wing. then Flare noticed it was carrying something. it appeared to be a young ice dragon. "Artica!" Flare exclaimed. Artica really wasn't trying to scare her. she was screaming because of the dreadwing, and now it was flying away with her. Flare wanted to go after it, and saved her sister, but she hadn't learned how to fly yet. Flare felt helpless as she watched the dreadwing fly away with Artica.
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#35 Posted: 07:12:13 05/12/2009
I LOVE Atica's sarcasm
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#36 Posted: 21:22:03 07/12/2009 | Topic Creator
yeah, me to
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#37 Posted: 22:41:03 08/12/2009
When we get more?
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#38 Posted: 22:45:47 08/12/2009 | Topic Creator
when i write more. i'll try to write more soon.
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#39 Posted: 10:36:41 09/12/2009
Okay.
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#40 Posted: 18:57:33 09/12/2009 | Topic Creator
Artica woke up the next morning in a strange place. she found herself in a small, dark room, lite up by only one or two candels. there was a large iron door on the far wall, and a tiny window near the top, with bars. she wasn't sure how she got there, or how long she had been there. she couldn't remember any of last night. she then heard footsteps coming towards the room. she soon saw a large shadowy figure through the tiny window. then the iron door opened wide, and Artica could now see the figure was a large, black dragon. he looked at her with yellow eyes, and walked towards her. he then reached out his paw, and picked her up by the neck. then he put small iron chains on her legs, tail, and wings. then he dropped her on the ground, and put a chain around her neck. the chain on her neck was connected to a long chain which led to an iron handel, which the dragon was holding. he then tugged on the chain as he turned towards the door. Artica then followed him out of the room, and then down a long, dark hallway. on either side of the hallway were many other rooms like hers, many appeared to be empty, and others she could hear noise coming from inside. the dragon continued to walk, and remained quiet. he tugged on the chain whenever Artica stopped for a moment. the dragon then stopped upon approaching a large iron door. he opened it, and continued walking, tugging the chain. Artica followed, looking around, trying to figure out where she was. they walked down yet another long hallway. this too led to a large iron door. the dragon opened it, and walked into a large, dark room. Artica followed, still looking around. this room appeared to be empty, but with the little amount of light, it was hard to be sure. the dragon walked towards the center of the room, tugging on the chain. Artica looked on the ground, and saw an iron bar connected to the ground. then the dragon took the handle he held, and attached it to the bar. he then walked back towards the door, and soon disappeard in the darkness. Artica looked in the oppostie direction when she heard footsteps coming towards her. then a large figure walked out of the shadows. Artica looked at the large dragoness that now stood before her. she was jet black, with lime green eyes that shone in the dark. she had six grey horns, and she had lime green markings all over her body, which appeared to look like green wind. her inside wings and belly were a dark green, and her tail-end appeared to look like that of a scorpion's tail. she had dark green spikes from the back of her neck to the end of her tail. she looked at Artica.
"what is your name, child?" she asked, calmly. despite her appearance, her voice sounded nice, and she didn't seem evil at all. "my name is Artica" she replied, trying to be brave. "i see. and what powers do you posses?" "so far, i only have the ice element" "hm, then you are not the one i seek. tell me, young one, do you have any siblings?" "one sister" "and this sister, what is her name?" "Flare" "and her powers?" "so far, fire, ice, electricity, earth, and shadow" "hm, i see. then i shall meet your sister" "why? what do you want with her?" Artica asked. the dragoness smiled. "i shall not tell you of my plans. take her away" she said. then the dragon walked over to Artica. he grabbed the handle, and tugged on the chain as he walked away. Artica followed. she then looked back before leaving the room, but she saw only darkness.
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#41 Posted: 19:37:50 09/12/2009
DX............MORE!
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Life is too short to be taken seriously |
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#42 Posted: 19:39:07 09/12/2009 | Topic Creator
i thought you would say that.
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep. Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land. |
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#43 Posted: 19:41:30 09/12/2009
I want to know, what they plan with Flare
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Life is too short to be taken seriously |
Cynder09 Diamond Sparx Gems: 9878 |
#44 Posted: 19:46:24 09/12/2009 | Topic Creator
so does Artica.
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep. Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land. |
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#45 Posted: 23:22:38 09/12/2009
good story keep writing
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#46 Posted: 23:24:10 09/12/2009 | Topic Creator
thanks.
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep. Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land. |
deaver88 Platinum Sparx Gems: 6132 |
#47 Posted: 19:12:03 10/12/2009
Something.....pikatchu......heart....butt moving.....suspicious...
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Life is too short to be taken seriously |
Cynder09 Diamond Sparx Gems: 9878 |
#48 Posted: 22:14:01 10/12/2009 | Topic Creator
yes....i see it too.....very suspicious....
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep. Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land. |
deaver88 Platinum Sparx Gems: 6132 |
#49 Posted: 09:49:01 11/12/2009
First page is almost over
Luckily there is 199 left
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Life is too short to be taken seriously |
Cynder09 Diamond Sparx Gems: 9878 |
#50 Posted: 22:17:12 11/12/2009 | Topic Creator
yep. i've written a little more of this one, but i haven't finished the next part yet. i'll post it when i'm done.
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep. Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land. |
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