darkSpyro

Spyro smiled at Cynder
"What should we name her?' Spyro asked Cynder
"Roseline." Cynder answered Spyro.
Spyro nodded and smiled,he looked at his just hatched daughter,Cynder also looked at her.

At that time,another had hatched "Her name?"
"Isabelle."
"I thought you said we were going to kill her after she hatched?"
"You said that dear,but i didn't agree."
He frowned,he didn't want to take care of a dragon,but he couldn't kill her while his wife was there...

Chapter One Situations

Isabelle,a dragon that was violet,with black stripes on her back,a silver crescent moon marking on both her shoulders,she also had more silver markings,she had these markings when she first hatched,so these were like her birth markings,her crest and horns were also colored silver,her tail was in the shape of a circle,and the edges were very sharp,one of her eyes colored orange,another one colored sky blue,her parents died a long time ago,and before they died they asked Ignitus (The new Chronicler) to take care of her,Isabelle's friend Rosaline was red and the tip of her tail pink,her horns like Spyro,her tail like Cynder's.Isabelle was a teenager at the age of 15,Rosaline was the same age,Isabelle started running outside until Ignitus asked her "Where are you going?" Isabelle sighed "To the fountain." she said.Isabelle ran outside and ran toward the fountain,one of her best friends,Brandon,was there,she ran toward him and looked into the fountain "What was the situation again?" he asked her "The lake,you'll see when we get there." Brandon and Isabelle walked toward the lake "So?" then Brandon looked into the lake,it was bottomless,but it was never bottomless before,the bottom could always be seen "Ok then let's go down." Brandon said "Wait,there is another situation,somethings been bothering Ignitus,he sometimes mumble my name." Isabelle said,Brandon shrugged "We'll find out later,right now,let's do this." he said,Isabelle nodded,a little bothered that they couldn't see what's wrong with Ignitus before the lake...

Chapter Two: In Too Deep

Isabelle and Brandon dived into the lake,they started swimming underwater and they started swimming deep,Isabelle saw a school of fish,there were different kinds of fish,some were red,some blue,some orange,Brandon and her kept swimming,Isabelle couldn't see anymore fish,but before the lake was like this,there were fish at the bottom,something was terribly wrong,Brandon and Isabelle kept swimming,it seemed bottomless,but they kept swimming,Brandon was determined while Isabelle was worried about the shortage of air,they had to learn how to keep air in their lungs for a long time,they were dragons,and they needed their lungs to be strong to breathe a element for a long time if they needed to,Brandon first noticed the bottom,and swam down toward it,Isabelle followed him,a giant hole was at the bottom,Isabelle thought that she or Brandon couldn't make it at the bottom of the hole without dying or having to swim up for breath,Brandon nodded at Isabelle,they wouldn't be able to make it,Brandon started swimming up,but Isabelle's gaze was fixed on the hole,she couldn't help but swim over it,she saw a octopus like tentacle coming at her,her eyes grew wide quickly in fear and surprise,she tried swimming away,but the tentacle wrapped around her neck,Brandon turned around and looked,he saw her neck being squeezed and choked,Brandon swam straight at the tentacle,using his wings to swim faster,he used his claw and cut the tentacle in half where it was holding Isabelle's neck at the front,Isabelle mouth was open and her eyes closed,he grabbed her and swam to the surface as fast as he could,he saw light and he broke the surface of the water,he gasped for air,and coughed a couple of times,he swam to shore and put Isabelle on land,then he climbed out of the water himself.He looked at Isabelle worriedly,she was pale,and her mouth hang open,Brandon took a deep breath and put his mouth to hers,he breathed into her,giving his air to her,he stopped to take another deep breath,he tried again,he took another deep breath,then Isabelle coughed up water,she opened her eyes,and she kept coughing,Brandon let out a big sigh of relief...

Nice start
Keep going

Chapter Three: Cold Night


Brandon and Isabelle had gone home,Isabelle lived at the dragon temple,while Brandon lived somewhere in Warfang,it was the night "How was your day?" Ignitus asked Isabelle "Great." she said,she sighed,then began eating her steak.Ignitus wondered what was bothering her,but didn't ask
...
Later that night,Isabelle lay awake,while Ignitus was asleep,she couldn't get any sleep and decided to take a walk,she walked outside and began walking down a stone path,she heard something while walking like a crumbling sound.She kept walking down the path scared "Hey baby,what's wrong?" Isabelle jumped backwards surprised,she sighed in relief to see a dragon,a real jerk he was too.Keller,Isabelle thought his name should have been Killer,Keller always referred Isabelle as "baby",she didn't like that,and told him a thousand times not to call her that,Keller hit Brandon one time,which is why she didn't like him,Keller had the shadow element,although he was black with blue markings,which Isabelle made fun of him,sometimes calling him bruises,and Keller didn't like that,Isabelle shook her head and kept walking on "Baby,don't just walk away from me like that!" Isabelle ignored him,she looked at a cave that Ignitus told her not to go in,her curiosity got the best of her,she walked in,it suddenly became colder,she shivered.A wing wrapped around her,it was Keller,she growled at him,but she continued walking.After awhile there was another growl "Hey baby,has your growl gotten deeper?" he asked her,Keller looked at Isabelle,but Isabelle was frozen in place,Keller was surprised,Isabelle started walking backwards slowly,then whatever was in the shadows roared.Keller turned around and ran,Isabelle did too,but she tripped over something,it was a gem,it looked kinda like a star,and it glowed red,she looked at it for awhile then grabbed it.She heard the roar again,she quickly ran out of the cave back to the temple,and back her room.She covered her eyes with her wings,then after awhile she fell asleep...

Interesting, I wonder what this star shaped gem is
Good chapter

Great story! Very interesting,too. Keep it up!

Chapter Four: Obsession

Isabelle woke up,she felt something hard pushing against her arm,she looked and she was still holding the stone,she was never obsessed with anything,maybe she thought it was something to make her stop being afraid while she was asleep,her stomach growled,she went into the dinning room,and Ignitus just set down a plate of fruit for him and Isabelle,Isabelle went over to her seat and sat in it "Did you sleep well last night?' Ignitus asked her,she nodded,she began eating the fruit,after she was done she said "Excuse me!I've got to do something really important!" she got out of her chair and ran outside.
...
Brandon and Rosaline were surprised when they heard what happened last night "Isabelle,you know you shouldn't have been there!" Rosaline whispered,Isabelle groaned "I know,but my curiosity got the best of me!" she whispered back "Let's take it back where it came from!" Brandon whispered "NO!" Isabelle said looking at it "Isabelle are you alright?You have never been this obsessed with a object,only your friends." Rosaline tried to joke "Your-your right!We need to take it back as fast as possible!" Isabelle said,Rosaline and Brandon nodded in agreement...

Interesting and good
Please continue

Chapter Five: Evil Released

Isabelle started walking back home,she would usually look at the stone,she climbed,laid in bed and fell asleep.
...
Isabelle woke up and walked to the dining hall,she saw a plate of food,and a not,she read the note,it said

Isabelle,
I made your dinner,but i noticed you were asleep,your food may be cold when you wake up,so i kept the fire burning,put it out once your done young one!
Ignitus

Isabelle smiled,after she warmed up the food,she ate it,put out the fire,and sneaked outside,Brandon,Rosaline,and herself agreed to put the stone back tonight,the morning would attract too much attention from other dragons,she began walking back to the cave,Rosaline and Brandon were waiting. "What took ya so long?" Brandon asked "Laid in bed and fell asleep." Isabelle replied "Let's do this quick,it's creepy to even be near this cave!" Rosaline said.They entered,they all felt that cold feeling,they kept walking "Shhh!Stop!I here more walking." Isabelle said,she was right,they also heard laughing "Come on,let's continue." Brandon said bravely.They continued,the cave seemed darker and colder then before,they finally reached the spot.that's when they heard growling.Isabelle bring out the gem,but it started glowing,she was confused,she began walking forward and it kept glowing,soon the red glow filled the whole cave,but the gem and Isabelle could still be seen "Isabelle!" Brandon yelled,Isabelle was in the air,her chest was glowing the same as the gem,then the whole cave shook,and something flew out from the shadows from the back of the cave,Brandon and Rosaline couldn't see what it was,it was too fast,it flew out of the cave and roared,flying away,Isabelle floated to the ground slowly,Brandon caught her with his wings,her eyes were closed "He's out...i let him out...my nightmare..." Isabelle whispered,Brandon was really surprised,the gem wasn't seen anywhere,and Isabelle fell into unconsciousness...

Very interesting
Please continue

Chapter Six: Start of a Journey

Isabelle was soon waking up,Rosaline was pacing,and Brandon watched her "She's waking!" he called out,Ignitus looked "H-how long was i out?" Isabelle asked "Three days." Ignitus answered "We were really worried,mostly me." Brandon said.Ignitus sighed "Isabelle,you must listen,i have kept this from you long enough,someone came to me and told me you would become a hero,you would be apart of these events." "Who?" Isabelle asked,Ignitus "I don't know." he said,then continued "You must go on a journey,find the gem,and you must travel to other lands to give it it's power to recapture and confine the evil let loose,you'll need plenty of food,and drink,your friends can come along." Rosaline nodded,Brandon smiled "Hey!Can i come with you baby?" Keller called as he was running in,Isabelle rolled her eyes "Yes." Ignitus said "No!" Isabelle said,looking at Ignitus "You need all the help you can get." Ignitus said,Isabelle sighed "You need enough food and drink Keller." Isabelle said,trying to say imitate Ignitus's voice,she almost sounded like a male,but her own voice could still be heard a little,Keller nodded "Sure baby,i'll go get some of the food at home." Isabelle sighed,all day Isabelle,Brandon,and Rosaline prepared,getting food,hunting,getting water from the lake,that night Isabelle thought about what would happen to her and her friends,eventually,she fell asleep,the next morning,Ignitus gave her a note "Don't open it until your at your journey's end." Isabelle sighed,then Isabelle and Ignitus hugged each other "You've protected and taken care of me ever since i was a hatchling,your like a father to me Ignitus,thank you." she said,Ignitus smiled,Isabelle walked outside,a strap around her stomach,with bags of food and water on the strap,when Isabelle,Brandon,Rosaline,and Keller walked to the spot they were supposed to meet,and after saying their goodbyes to the ones they loved,they looked at each other,everyone had the same strap as and bags as Isabelle,they nodded,and all at the same time,took their first step from outside the boundaries of their homes...

Good chapter

Chapter Seven: Plans

The evil dragon that was released,Marik,was planning to stop Isabelle and her friends "She released me,she was the only one with the power to free me,now she is the only one with the power to recapture me,give her a little presents,the plants,the skeletons,and the guardian,but not all at once,we don't want to kill her,we want to capture her,bu you can kill her friends." the plat like creatures,the skeletons in armor,and one guardian walked out while snickering,giggling,but the guardian only laughed,they soon disappeared out of sight...

Sorry the chapter is short,but i'm trying to get some ideas.

hmm, very interesting

Chapter Eight: First Battle

Isabelle looked at the ground sadly,Keller was talking to Rosaline about his "interesting stories",which were all lies,and Brandon kept walking,he looked back at Isabelle "Hey,are you okay?" he asked her in a whisper "No,that memory..." she said sadly "Why n't we think about the future?" Brandon asked,Isabelle nodded,after a few miles they stopped "Those trees are blocking our way." Keller said "How do we get past them?" Rosaline asked,Isabelle felt a vibration underneath the ground she was standing on "Do you all feel that?" she asked the others,they shook their heads "Feel what?" Rosaline asked "A vibration underneath the ground." Isabelle answered "You'll be fine when we start walking." Brandon said "Whoa!Wait!I feel it too!" Brandon said,he felt a vibration where he was standing "Me too!" Rosaline said "Hey!I feel it too!What's going on here?" Keller was a little confused,Isabelle then saw something different,either she was hallucinating,or it was real,she could see plant creatures coming out of the ground with spikes ready to impale anything above them,then her sight turned normal,and she called "Move!" Isabelle was the first to roll out of the way,where Isabelle was standing,a plant creature came out of the ground,with a spike,if Isabelle didn't move,she would've been impaled!Everyone else moved from where they were standing,the same creatures came out of the ground,plant creatures came out of the ground wherever vibration was,Isabelle tail struck one,Brandon breathed fire on the one Isabelle was fighting,which worked extremely well against it,Keller breathed Shadow Fire on the one he was fighting,which made the plant creature attack other plant creatures,and Rosaline grabbed one between her teeth,jumped up,and started scratching at it with her claws.Isabelle did a chain attack with her claws,striking at her foe five times,then landing a finishing blow by stabbing it.Brandon looked at the plant creatures around him,he jumped up,shot a fireball where he was standing,which burned the creatures,Keller bit one,and bit it tightly until it was dead,and Rosaline used her earth breath,creating flail,which seemed to make her foe stronger,Brandon came and comet dashed into the plant creature Rosaline was fighting,soon it was over,Isabelle looked at the blocked path,which was now unblocked,they had won their first battle,they continued,and while continuing,Isabelle thought How was i able to have a vision,without having to see into that pool,like Ignitus?...Is there something about me i don't know about?...

Good chapter

Chapter Nine: Visions

Isabelle woke up,she looked around,everything was black,then she saw a island,she was on the island,water,the ocean was around it,and on the beach,they were fighting,Marik and another dragon,fighting furiously,blocking each others attacks,dodging and slashing at each other. "You will not take her!" yelled the unknown dragon "I think i will!" Marik said,he slashed at the dragon with his claws,the dragon blocked with his wings,the island suddenly changed to a them on a platform,the platform was inside a storm,Isabelle saw a dragoness laying n the ground of the platform,the dragoness looked familiar...it was her!She was shocked and surprised,then she saw the dragon caught off guard "Now one final strike!" Marik said "No!" Isabelle called,she pounced onto Marik,but she went right through him,they didn't pay attention to her,she looked at herself laying on the ground unconscious,she ran over and said "Wake up!Wake up!" She looked at Marik,she began to ran toward the dragon,but something pulled her back "No!" she called,she pushed,then she began breaking a barrier,it was some kind of barrier that cut her off from reality,Marik struck "Adam!" Isabelle screamed "Isabelle..." he whispered as he looked at her,he could see and hear her,but Marik slashed at the dragon's chest,blood splattered on the ground.
...
Isabelle woke up from her horrible nightmare.
---
A dragon watched the night sky "I'll find you old friend..." he said "My one...true...love..." he jumped up and flew,flew north looking for her...

ooo eck
good chapter

Chapter Ten: Another Story

Adam looked at the sky "Big brother,why are you going?" a little dragoness asked him "I'm going to find for a old friend." he answered her "How old is your old friend?" she asked,Adam smiled as he thought it was funny how his little sister misunderstood "She's not old,she's young,she's my friend from along time ago,i'm going to look for her." his sister looked at him sadly "But big brother!You promised you would always be here!You would always be with me!" Adam looked at her "And i'll keep my promise...i'm in your heart." he replied "I want to come with you!" she had tears in her eyes "And you shall,go pack food,water,anything to help us survive." Lisa's eyes sparkled in the sun,her mouth was open while she was smiling,she ran toward her house,Adam watched the sunset.He was ready for anything to come,he would do anything to find her...
...
The next morning,Adam and Lisa said goodbye to their friends and family,Lisa climbed onto Adam's back,he began flying east,he looked at the lake below him,this was the final time he and Lisa would get to see it,they wouldn't see it for a long time,they looked at it for a long time,seeing there own reflection,after they fully flew over the lake,Adam looked ahead of him
...
It was soon turning night,Adam landed,Lisa got off of his back "Stay close." he said,he created a earth dome around them,made out of rock and dirt "This should protect us from rain and snow." Lisa was amazed,Adam laid down "There are little holes at the bottom of the dome around us so we can breathe." he laid his head down and fell asleep,Lisa looked at him,he was unusually serious and quiet.
...
The next morning Lisa was the first to wake up,Adam also woke up,the earth dome began breaking and disappeared,then Lisa tackled him playfully "Not right now Lisa." Adam said,Lisa frowned,her eyes had some sadness in them,they began walking south,when Adam pounced on Lisa playfully,Lisa laughed,Adam smiled and laughed,they played the rest of the day...

Great chapter

Chapter Eleven: Watchers

Marik had watched them,his plant creatures had failed,he looked around,then he started using his powers to watch Adam and Linda "Send the Watchers." he said
...
Adam and Lisa were walking north,he could feel he was getting closer to his friend,he also felt like something watched them "Lisa wait,keep in here." he said,he created a earth dome around Lisa.He began walking again,the he ran,he heard then rustle in the trees,he looked from the corner of his eyes,he knew they were here,he shot ice at a tree,he had hit and killed one of them,he kept running,shooting a fireball at another one,he missed,One jumped at him,he stabbed it with his claw,then threw it at a tree.Another jumped at him,he was caught off guard this time,and him and the creature rolled,another one jumped on him,then another one,then a explosion happened,Adam had used his fury,he ran back to Lisa and broke open the dome,she was still there "We need to run now!" Adam put Lisa on his back and began running north,more Watchers were coming,following and watching Adam.

Good chapter

Chapter Eleven: Continuation

Isabelle,Brandon,Rosaline,and Keller were walking,Brandon was the first to notice,whenever Isabelle was tired,she was depressed,but she was never this depressed,something else depressed her "What's wrong?" he whispered to her "Just tired,and my heart is aching." "Why?' she looked at him,he saw the look in her eyes "It's alright,one day...one day..." Isabelle nodded at Brandon's answer ,they continued walking "Hey look!" they saw a small village and walked towards it "Welcome." said a dragon at the front gates "This is Bristia." he said "We don't have much because..." then the dragon's eyes grew wide when he saw Isabelle "Your here!The elder wants you right away!Follow me!" the dragon said to her.Isabelle was confused,she looked at Brandon and Rosaline,Keller wanted her to look at him,but she didn't,they were all confused and ran after the dragon,they soon reached a huge hut,they walked inside "There you are!" said a old raspy voice "I am Greenwood." said the elder,Isabelle turned to the elder "We knew you were coming because of the writings in the cave told us you would save us from the shadows in this land." "You must have the wrong dragoness." Isabelle said,Greenwood shook his head "You look just like her." he said,Isabelle looked at Rosaline and frowned,she couldn't run away from this,this was apart of her life,she couldn't escape her fate and destiny "This land was put into labor and slavery,not very far back,three months ago this had happened,Commander Ziggar rules over us,and the Shadow creatures here,they are trying to gather the power of nature,and earth when their master is set free." Isabelle felt a wave of sadness and pain,she released his master "But we have found a cave a month ago,we have study it,you fit the description perfectly!But the evil has been watching us a few years,with their Watchers,in the great Forest Maze,you must go kill Ziggar,please,oh and,i know what your looking for,it was in the cave,in the Great Forest is a orb of the nature power for the gem,if you kill Ziggar,i shall consider if you could have the orb or not." Isabelle nodded,she and her friends knew what to do,kill Ziggar,get the orb,and continue trying to get the gem "The Forest Maze is behind my hut,after your through there,you need to go through the Great Forest to get to Ziggar." They all nodded and ran toward where the Forest Maze was,it was right behind Greenwood's hut,they nodded at each other,they were all ready to go in...

ah, the plot thickens
good chapter

I'll start making Chapter Twelve as soon as i get ideas.

Chapter Twelve: The Maze

"Alright!I knew we should have asked for directions!" Keller said angrily,he was frustrated by all the dead ends they found,Isabelle sighed,this was the fourth time she heard Keller complain.Then something came down from the air,it was a giant spider "This will be easy." Rosaline said,then many spiders dropped "There are too many!" Keller said "For once,Keller is right!" Brandon said,they all began running,Isabelle tripped over a root,but that root wasn't there before.Brandon ran over to her,the spiders surrounded them,Rosaline and Keller were too far away to see them,Brandon and Isabelle were ready,Brandon shot a fireball,killing a few of them,Isabelle used her shadow power and came out under a group of them,killing many of them.Brandon stabbed one of them,a spider jumped onto Isabelle,it tried to stab her with it's pincers,but Isabelle held both pincers with her paws "Help!" she screamed "Isabelle!" Brandon yelled,a spider jumped onto his back,it seemed hopeless until they heard a roar,the spiders stopped,then Isabelle heard wind blow past her,it was like something too fast to be seen went past her.But Brandon didn't hear it,he was too busy with the spider,she knew who it was...

Chapter Thirteen: Reunion

Both the spiders were cut in half after a little while,beams were shot at all sides,some spiders died,Isabelle got up and met his eyes,then he was behind her,they were touching each others tails,Isabelle blushed,their tails began wrapping around each other,the dragon began spinning around really fast,Isabelle was in the air as he spun around,she stretched her arms,using her claws to cut and kill many spiders,then while their tail were still wrapped around the others tail,they floated up slowly,and used their fury,they were a little far apart,there tail were dangling in the middle of them,while wrapped around the others tail,after using their fury,the spiders were all killed,they unwrapped their tails,Isabelle was blushing,while he just smiled,they hugged each other "Glad to see you again and knowing that your alive..." Isabelle said joyfully "You too..." he said "Who is this?" Brandon asked "Wat...it isn't!" Isabelle nodded at Brandon "Yes Brandon,it is...this is...Adam..."

Good chapters

Chapter Fourteen: Lost

"Great!We ran away not even knowing if Brandon and Isabelle were behind us!" Rosaline said angrily And the worst part is that i'm lost with Keller! she thought.Keller led while Rosaline followed.

"Where is Rosaline and Keller?" Isabelle asked "I think they didn't know,so their lost." Brandon said "Let's look for them then." Adam said.

Rosaline heard her own stomach growl.She looked at the food the packs on the belt on her stomach "I'm starving." she said,then she heard a sound come from some bushes,she heard more sounds,some spiders jumped out.Rosaline growled at them.Keller already pounced on one,but a spider pounced on Keller as he did,but Rosaline was different,she was smarter,one tried attacking,she jumped out of the way,the vines wrapped around it's legs and body and crushed it,then she shot a icicle at the one on Keller,Keller shot Shadow Fire at he one he was on,a spider tried to bite Rosaline,but she rolled out of the way and shot a fireball at it,it began running around while it was on fire,one of the spiders were sliced in half,Adam came down from the sky,one was behind,about to bite him,when a dragon landed on it and stabbed it,Adam looked at Isabelle and smiled "Wow,that's one handsome dragon!" Rosaline said,Keller mumbled,Adam was surrounded,Keller stabbed a spider with his tail,and Rosaline crushed another one,Isabelle was busy,she was blocking one's pincers with her tail blade,while one behind her bit her leg,she roared in pain s it injected it's poison,Adam saw ,and hit it away,then he shot fireballs at some of the spiders surrounding him and Isabelle,Rosaline and Keller were shocked after looking for awhile they began fighting again,Keller biting one,and Rosaline blocked with her wings,then counter struck with her slashing at it's legs with her claws then stabbed it's head,they ran over to Isabelle,Isabelle fell into unconsciousness,everyone that was awake decided to make camp there,and they did...

Chapter Fifteen: Dreams of the Past,and Visions

While Isabelle was asleep,she had a dream of the past,in her dream...
She ran up to a dragon "Daddy?" she looked at him,he looked at her back "Your father is...dead." Isabelle's eyes filled with tears "He asked me to take care of you." said the orange dragon,Isabelle looked at him "My name is Ignitus..." soon her dream disappeared and changed...
she looked around,she was her own age,a village was burning,she started walking,then she saw Adam and herself fighting a few Watchers,Isabelle slashed at one,it blocked with it's axe,Adam shot ice and destroyed a Watcher,Isabelle jumped up and stabbed one in it's back while landing on it,a Guardian came,Isabelle and Adam slashed at it,but it blocked with it's shield,Adam shot a fireball at it,while it was in it's blocking stance ready to block the fireball,Isabelle clawed at it from behind,it yelled in pain as it turned around but the fireball hit it,Isabelle front flipped over it and hit it's head with her tail,then she turned around and clawed at it,it blocked,Adam used his earth power to turn into a boulder,jump over the Guardian and hit the ground,which created earth spike,scratching the Guardian's back,then it let go of it shield and Isabelle stabbed it in the chest with her claws then pulled her claws out of it's chest,the Guardian collapsed,Isabelle and Adam looked at each other and smiled,then they saw the figure in the shadow in the fire,Adan ran over to it,but it did nothing and Adam was hit back,Isabelle growled at it,this figure wasn't Marik,Isabelle shot a beam at it...

Good chapterss

Chapter Sixteen: Cure to be Found

Adam paced,he was the most worried and scared of everyone else,he had just found his best friend,and she was already going to die,Isabelle's breathing was fast at first,then it turned slow,then fast again,she kept breathing like that while she was asleep,Rosaline,Keller,and Brandon were also worried,but Adam was the most worried,he paced while waiting for Isabelle to wake up,they couldn't just leave her there and go on without her,and there were too many foes for someone to stay with her and guard her,Isabelle began waking up,Adam ran over to her "Are you okay???" he asked immediately "Yes,but my leg still hurts." she answered,Isabelle leg had a bandage around it "What happened?I didn't see what attacked me because i fell into unconsciousness before i could." Isabelle looked at Adam "You were poisoned." Adam said,Isabelle was shocked and surprised "Haven't you made the cure?" she asked him "No,only Ziggar knows the cure." Adam looked sadly at her "Then let's go,we need to get to him not just to get the power,but to know the cure." Isabelle said,she got up and suddenly a wave of pain,like a shock of electricity,went through her leg "Isabelle,maybe i should carry you,you look like your in pain when you stand on your leg." Adam said "No,i'm fine." Isabelle said,they began walking,Isabelle was slower then the rest.They had finally found the end of the maze,,they went into a door and found a dungeon "Great,now we have to go through a dungeon to get to Ziggar?" Keller said,he was frustrated "Yes." Adam said,he saw a giant door that needed a big key "Come on!Into this room!" Adam went into a unlocked door to the west,the rest following behind him,they walked a little into the room,until skeletons came down,they had armor,and swords,Adam grabbed on between his teeth,one tried to attack Isabelle but she blocked with her wings and counter struck,hitting it with her wing,Adam decided that to end the battle quickly,he quickly ran and slashed at the two skeletons fighting them,they stood there for a moment,then the skeletons were cut in half,Adam wasn't going to let anything or anyone stop him from saving his best friend and finding out the cure for the poison inside of her...

Good chapter

Chapter Seventeen: To Save a Friend

Adam continued and saw a lake,he also saw some platforms This will be easy... he thought,he jumped onto a platform,it was safe and it didn't sink,across it was a small beach and another door,a few jumps wouldn't tire them out "Everyone else go,i'll stay here for Isabelle." Rosaline nodded and started jumping on the platforms to get across "Why do you get to stay with?" Keller asked as Brandon also started jumping across.Adam just growled at him "Alright!Alright!" Keller said,he mumbled something,then started jumping across also,Isabelle walked over painfully,she knew the platforms were too high to swim over to,the beach also had the wooden like dock which was also too high to swim to,it could only be jumped onto,Isabelle crouched down ready to jump,she jumped,and as she did,she felt the same shock of pain as before when she stood on it,she screamed in pain and hit the platform hitting her head since she wasn't focused on landing on her legs,Adam ran over to her since he only jumped onto the first platform "I'll carry you,and don't fight it,you can't jump all the way to the end without fainting from pain." he said ,Isabelle nodded,Adam started flapping his wings,he grabbed her with his paws and started flying across,as soon as he started flying,something started shooting arrows at him,he saw traps,he knew it was for dragons if they started flying across,Adam started flying fast,a arrow barely missing his wing,he was close,then he saw a barrage of arrows overhead,he spun around to go faster,he also folded his wings back,he kept spinning until he crash landed near the others with Isabelle rolling,she hit the wall,she looked at Adam,,he got up and said "I'm okay!" Isabelle was relieved...

Nice chapter

Chapter Eighteen: Past Night

Before their adventure started,before any of this happened,Isabelle wouldn't get very much sleep,she always thought of Adam,she was always worried about him,after another sleepless night,she walked over to the lake and looked at her own reflection,she also looked at the bottom of the lake,Brandon was beside her,trying to catch a fish,waiting for the right moment "Do you think i'll ever see him again?" she asked him "Yes,one day you'll meet again,you just need a little hope." Brandon answered,quickly putting his head in the water and bringing it out with a fish in his mouth "I heard rumors that their were screams in the graveyard,want to go check it out?" Brandon asked,he was always curious about rumors,and he always wanted to check if the rumors were true "Okay." she said "The screams happen at night." he replied "You know how scared i am when i'm at the graveyard at night." Isabelle said fearfully "Come on,besides,you won't be alone." Brandon said,Isabelle sighed "Alright." she said.
...
Later that night,Isabelle sneaked outside,she was careful not to wake up Ignitus,then she walked toward the entrance of the graveyard,Brandon was waiting "Okay,so we just wait here until we here a scream?" Isabelle asked "No,the screams are only heard from the inside and if someone is at the grave." Brandon answered,Isabelle had a lump in her neck which she gulped in fear,Brandon slowly opened the gate and walked inside,Isabelle walked in after walking awhile they heard the scream "Okay,let's go back." Isabelle turned around,and the left open gate closed and locked "Isabelle,tell me you have psychic powers." Brandon said,but he notice the shock on her face,like she saw a ghost,he turned around and saw skeletons and a ghost,the ghost was a Shadow Shade,it flew straight toward Brandon,but he dodged and it hit Isabelle,going inside of her and coming out "Isabelle!" Brandon shouted,the last thing she saw was a flash of orange,fire,Ignitus,then she closed her eyes and went into a coma...a coma that always kept her in a nightmare,Ignitus carried her back to what she called home,his and her home,he laid her on her bed...

Isabelle is having a really rough time here
Good chapter

Chapter Nineteen: Rose

Roseline wasn't like Isabelle,she had a normal life,her parents took care of her,she wasn't separated from her friends like Isabelle and Adam.She had her share of problems though,a month ago from the present day,she had went into an ancient temple that only she knew about,she was afraid to go in before but not this time.Brandon was sick and Isabelle...didn't feel too well either,she found out from Ignitus that Isabelle wouldn't come out of her room,and he didn't know why.Roseline obviously didn't want to bring Keller,she was left with one option...to go in alone.Roseline walked inside the temple,it was still in good shape,but there seemed to be only pillars to hold the temple up,some writing on the wall she wouldn't understand,Isabelle would understand it if she was there with Roseline,then she went into another room,she noticed that in the other room there was no writing,and there were holes in the wall,then he knew after awhile and jumped,a small spear managed to scratch Roseline's side,which created a giant cut,she screamed in pain,she twisted and turned and she dodged the other sphere,crashing near the entrance of the next room,she got up and looked at her cut,she was bleeding fast.She had to hurry,she walked into the next room,this room was empty,she noticed water on the ground,she looked up and saw two giant holes.Roseline walked under it,then she heard a sound,she looked at the entrance to the next room and the exit to the room she was in,they were both closing slowly,she rolled out of the way and noticed water was coming out of the holes,she could die if it filled the whole room!She began running but slipped,she got up,she felt dizzy,and she noticed that both doors almost closed.Roseline flew,she flew as fast as she could,she made it to the next room,she got up and looked around,she noticed on the floor more ancient writings,she continued to walk,then something began coming out of the floor,her nightmare.It was a evil version of herself,she turned around and noticed the door was closed,she turned around to face herself,it was coming closer,she shot anything she could shoot at it,but it all went through her,it engulfed her in shadow,after a hour,she could see again and noticed a familiar dragon, "You have to be careful,got it?" Keller said,she noticed she had a bandage wrapped around her body to cover the wound in her side,for once,Roseline was glad to see Keller,she was glad he stalked her.Roseline thought how glad she was to see him and remember to thank him,before she fainted...

Good chapter

Chapter Twenty: The Mission

Some of us have a goal,some of us have to do something really important,and some of us have a choice...to choose whether we will accept a quest of great importance...or not...

The wind rushed past him as he was jumped to a platform,then jumped again toward another platform.He had a mission that he accepted "Are you almost toward the destination?" "Yes." he answered back in telekinesis,he was at full stamina and needed no rest in the present time.The platforms were made out of stone,all the platforms had sharp edges and a sharp spike on the bottom of it.His mission was a secret one that only he and one other knew about,this mission was important to him and the other I'm close,then we can point the light of the pillars at the door,they turn back to their original positions too fast to try and get to the other pillar,so we need to do this separated to open the door and continue. he thought to himself to remind himself What lies beyond the door?What demons do we have to face next? He had finally reached the pillar. "I'm here." he said in telekinesis "Good..."
they turned the pillars at the same time,they both already knew what to do,it hit the two jewels on the door opening it,he started jumping back until he heard in telekinesis "The path is cut off,but there is a door here,I can't follow you through the other door,but this door will probably lead to the same room.Meet you on the other side." "Separated for now?" he questioned "Yes..." he kept jumping back on the other platforms toward a much bigger platform,the platform was connected to bridge that led to the huge now opened door,once he had gotten to the platform,he ran on the bridge toward the door,he looked at the pitch black of the room,there was no light in the room What will they accomplish if we fail? he thought to himself as he walked into the pitch black room.

Hmm, interesting
Good chapter

Chapter Twenty-One: A Key

The group walked toward the stone circle that was a door in this dungeon,the door opened going up ,the group walked into the room,a chest was on the other side "This is easy!" Keller said,Adam looked at him "Don't speak too soon." he said to Keller,Keller frowned,Adam walked ahead of the group,Isabelle walking slowly behind Adam,Keller was next,then Brandon,and Roseline was last "Why are we going so slow?!" Keller asked,he was impatient "Isabelle's leg,can you try to remember that?" Adam answered Keller "Oh,yeah...Of course I remember because I care 'bout ya Isabelle." he said,Isabelle just rolled her eyes,she opened her mouth to say something to Keller but Roseline said something first "Hey!My paw is stuck!" they looked back and Roseline screamed,a skeleton's hand had grabbed her paw,Brandon ran over to it and hit it with his tail,breaking it's hand off of it's wrist,more were coming out of the ground running toward them "Isabelle!Stay behind me!" Adam said to Isabelle,she nodded and stood behind Adam,Roseline saw one already out of the ground,she jumped on it and bit it's neck,making it die,Adam shot a few fireballs from his mouth at a few skeletons,them exploding and into pieces and dying "Rest in pieces!" Adam joked and smiled,he looked at Isabelle,Isabelle was happy to see him smile,but she was in too much pain to smile herself,Adam stopped smiling and went serious again,Roseline tripped a skeleton with her tail,but her tail got scratched because a skeleton's claws got her,Keller jumped and hit the skeleton out of the way with the side of his shoulder,Brandon charged through the the skeletons,toward the treasure chest,he hit it with his horns,making it open and a key fly out of it,he jumped and grabbed it with his mouth "I've got it!" he yelled with the key in his mouth,Adam looked at Isabelle and she knew what to do,she slowly got onto Adam's back,and he started flying toward the entrance of the room,Roseline and Keller were close to the entrance,Roseline tail swept the room,taking some skeletons out near the entrance,and Keller jumped ad hit the ground with his head creating a small shock-wave and tripping some skeletons,Roseline and Keller ran past the tripped skeletons out of the room,Brandon flew out.After everyone was out, Adam yelled "Everyone don't waste time!Just fly out of here!" Roseline and Keller started flying,flying across the small lake,arrows were being shot at them,they kept flying,Adam was having a bit of some hard time with Isabelle and his own weight,but he could hear her breathing quickly and heavily,he folded his wings and began spinning,soon they all reached the other side safely,the door opening and them going back into the main room,Adam landed on his back with Isabelle on his stomach,her head was on his chest,he was panting and Isabelle was breathing quickly and heavily because of the poison.Adam looked at her,he wrapped his wings around her and embraced her,he closed his eyes,she also closed her eyes...

Good part

I've decided to change Adam's sister's name,Linda,to Lisa,and I will edit the before chapters to change her name,I hope this won't confuse anyone who reads this story.

Chapter Twenty-Two: The Search

Adam and Lisa had managed to get the Watchers off of their tails,they were resting near a tree,Adam looked at her "I shouldn't have brought her with me,it's too dangerous." he whispered and sighed to himself,it was the night and Adam laid his head down and stared sleeping.
...
The rays of sun started shining,some of the leaves weren't covering the whole sky above Adam and Lisa,and one of the rays shined onto Adam's nose,he began waking up and he yawned,he looked around and hen looked at Lisa,she was still sleep,he got up and walked over to her,he was going to shake her awake when he paused,he knew that Lisa had a rough night trying to get to sleep,but he also knew that waking up early would give him more time to look for Isabelle.Adam began shaking Lisa "Lisa,wake up!" he said.Lisa began to slowly open her eyes "Big bro?It's too early." she said,closing her eyes again,Adam looked at her,he picked her up and brought her out into the sun,where she woke up immediately and jumped up in surprise.Landing on the soft grass "Now are you ready?' he asked her,Lisa frowned "But I'm hungry!" she complained,Adam sighed "Come on,let's go get some food." he said to her.Lisa got up and began following Adam who was already walking somewhere.Adam soon saw a rabbit,he began sneaking up on the rabbit,he looked to see if Lisa was still following him and was surprised to see her gone,then he heard a snapping sound like small bones breaking,he looked at the rabbit and noticed Lisa was carrying it toward him "Hungry?' she asked her brother,Adam just smiled and shook his head "No little sis." he said,they waited there while Lisa ate,but something was watching them,Adam watched Lisa until something swooped down and hit head,Adam looked to see his sister being taken away by a falcon big enough to carry Lisa "Lisa!" Adam called "Big brother!" she cried out to him,Adam jumped up and flew toward the falcon,close to grabbing it when more falcons attacked and were covering his head,he fought them away furiously,killing all the falcons "Lisa!" he called out as soon as he saw again,but he didn't see Lisa or the falcon carrying her anywhere,he began flying around looking for her frantically "Lisa!LISA!" Adam called out,he kept calling her name and flying around looking for her,after awhile an hour of looking in both the air and on the ground,he roared in anger "Lisa..." he whispered as a few tears rolled down his cheeks and dropped to the ground...

Oh dear

Chapter Twenty-Three: A Different Story

As I ignored my emotions,I continued my mission,some of me hoping that he was okay,and most of me focusing on the mission

He looked around in the room he was in,it was big.It was the only way to describe the room,it also had stalagmites,but besides that,the room almost had no description to it "What does your room look like?' he asked his partner through telekinesis "Long,narrow,hall." was all the answer he got,both the hall and room they were in had almost no description,soon he saw some of the stalagmites fall to the ground a break.He had to dodge some of them,but he knew the real danger wasn't the stalagmites falling,but what was inside of them.He had already faced these enemies before.The spider like enemies that were inside stalagmites.the stalagmites were actually hollow,they were created like that because that's how they created this building.Not knowing to call it a cave or temple,the huge spiders had a body made out of rock,hard to kill by using anything sharp,these spiders could only be killed by force,these spiders were almost magical resistant,although they were weak by ice or water,the water would soon turn them into pebbles if they were sprayed with enough,ice would be able to freeze them and make them easier to break with enough force,but it was hard to break these spiders without water or ice.Some metals are strong enough to slice through the spiders' rock bodies.He sighed and ran toward the first spider that dropped,hitting it hard and shattering it,he back flipped and grabbed another,throwing it toward the wall and shattering it,one jumped at him,but he easily ducked and dodged,then he hit it breaking in half,his hand was starting to hurt from hitting these spiders' bodies,and there were still five more,he grabbed one that jumped at him and threw it at the wall,one pounced behind him,he spun kicked it and shattered it into pebbles,the other three pounced at him from different sides.He looked at all three rock spiders,he jumped and kicked two on his side.He ignored the bit of pain that came when he had to quickly move his legs to his sides to kick the spiders,he punched the last one and he shattered all three rock spiders at the same time,he brought his legs back together and landed on his feet,the door to continue was open "Did you fight the same things as me?" he asked "No,I fought something that was more bull like,which is smart because of this hallway.But the door is open..." "See you on the other side then." then he continued on...

It might be awhile before I make another chapter.

Good chapter

Chapter Twenty-Four: Special Bond

Isabelle was sleeping beside Adam,a little while ago,Adam decided they should rest before going through something like that,but in a few minutes,Isabelle fell asleep because she was getting weaker from the poison,and Adam saw her shivering,so he wrapped his left wing around her,no one decided to go,there were some reasons,Adam didn't want to ever leave Isabelle,he didn't want to be separated ever again from her,Brandon,Keller,and Rosaline didn't go either,Adam was the strongest out of all of them,and they didn't want Adam to be ambushed while he was protecting the sleeping Isabelle,and what if they were ambushed?Adam looked at Isabelle,Isabelle had the worst life out of any of them,first,he and Isabelle were separated from the attack of a creature,the creature also killed Isabelle's mother,of course Adam was hurting when they were separated,but on top of that,she had hurt from her mother's death,none of Adam's family was killed except maybe his uncle,although no one was sure if his uncle was dead or not,they didn't found his body,but Isabelle's mother,was found dead,and then what Isabelle told him in the the little time they were together,her father,a warrior,died.And now this poison,Adam somehow could feel Isabelle's physical hurt and the hurt in her heart,Adam met Isabelle's father and mother many times when him and Isabelle played together,her father was wise,and had a good sense of judgment,he was also good at fighting,Isabelle's father back then was way stronger and better at fighting than Adam's skills right now,Adam knew Isabelle was going to have her father's skills,wisdom,and judgment someday,Isabelle already had the beauty,love,and gentleness from her mother,Adam also somehow knew what was in Isabelle's heart,he knew she truly loved him,he didn't know how,but he knew,he remember the day him and Isabelle met,when they met,it was like something connected them,like a special invisible bond tied them together,and even if they were separated,it felt like their souls would always be together,that's how Adam knew where Isabelle was,and he knew Isabelle knew where Adam was too,but she also knew that Adam was the one getting closer,all she had to do was wait,this special bond was this special,Adam knew no one else with this special bond...no one else except Isabelle's parents.All that time Adam was separated from Isabelle was spent training himself,disciplining himself,and taking very much responsibility,he thought one of his responsibilities was to protect Isabelle,this responsibility was one he gave himself,no one else gave him this responsibility.Adam knew that Isabelle was very special,he knew she was special and she would do something special,he just didn't know what.In Adam's mind,he could hear Isabelle's voice say Our souls will always be together...

This is good! I like what I am reading! Please continue. Though I will say I have a little trouble keeping track because each chapter is all in one giant text. Maybe spacing it out would be nice.

Kay,I'll try,I'm used to writing it like a book.