Ok. I finally managed to make up a story, and I actually think it's good. Ok, here goes.
There, Spyro was thrown against the wall of the temple. The Dark Master had been released, and was trying to destroy Spyro. Spyro was all bruised up and a bit weak, but he can still manage to dodge the Dark Master's attacks and use his breath weapons.
"What have you done to the others!?" commanded Spyro angrily.
The Dark Master chuckled. "Oh, you'll soon find out young dragon. But now, it's your turn to be next!" said the Dark Master, charging at Spyro with a sword in front of him.
Spyro jumped out of the way, and the Dark Master crashed into the wall. The wall broke, and Spyro saw some figures on the floor, uncautious. It was the guardians, and they were all scratched up and were bleeding a lot. Spyro also saw Cynder, who didn't look like she was hurt that bad, but surely enough, she was knocked out. Spyro stood there, shocked. The Dark Master lunged at Spyro from behind and stabbed Spyro in his chest. Spyro screamed in terror and agony, and fell to the floor. Spyro still had his eyes open, and then he heard a voice. A female's voice, but he knew it wasn't Cynder's. It was soft and gentle, as if she was singing. His eyes remained open, and he saw a big figure look down before him. He looked up, and she smiled, and gentle smile. Spyro looked behind her and saw the Dark Master dead. She was beautiful to Spyro, even though he caught a short glimpse of her.
"Spyro. Spyro. Spyro..." the female chanted. Spyro closed his eyes with the echo of the female's voice chanting his name.
"Spyro! Hey Spyro, wake up! Rise and shine sleeping beauty!"
Spyro opened his eyes. He looked startled, but he was too tired to panic, so he hesitated. Spyro shook his head slowly, and opened his eyes more.
"Sparx? What happened? Are the guardians all right?" Spyro now looked like he was going to panic, but but then Sparx said,
"Hey buddy, chill! The guardians are just fine. They're just dozing in the temple nearby. And what happened, nothing much really. I was just watching the sunrise while I was hearing you mumble and grumble in your sleep. And that's when you woke up, looking all scared. Is there something going on, or is it just me?"
Spyro sighed. "I just had a dream. A weird one too. I-I think I should tell Ignitus about it and see what they have to say."
Sparx was about to say something, but Spyro then walked quickly in the temple. When he got in, he saw Cynder and the guardians awake, looking into the Pool of Visions.
"Spyro! You should've seen it! When we went in the front of the temple while you were sleeping, I saw this creature, chanting my name." said Cynder. "It was a female, and she seemed pretty, but I can barely see her."
"Yes, she did tell us about this matter before you woke up." said Ignitus. "And I've been trying to look in the Pool of Visions for information. And..."
"I've seen the same thing! Except that I was being attacked by the Dark Master and I saw you guys dead! And he struck me, and I've also heard the voice, then seen the female who was also chanting my name! And that's when I noticed the Dark Master behind her, dead. And that's why I came to you to tell you about this to see if you know anything about her or what the heck it is!" said Spyro, who he said everything kinda fast.
"Hmmm. Let me look in the pool to find some answers. Uh, explain to me of what parts that you can remember of her." said Ignitus.
"Uh, she had purple eyes, long blue hair, she was wearing a white dress, and she had dragon-like wings that were a rainbowish kind of color, and the same thing of her tail! Her tail was also dragon-like and the same color of her wings!"
"Hmm. It sounds like the creature you're explaining is the dragon mistress. I've also heard her voice when I was your age, and I actually SAW her, and she would talk to me. I was in some sort of trouble, and she was protecting me, as if she was my mother. I've known her for years, and she may not look like a dragon in her form that you just saw her in, but she really is a dragon. A very powerful dragon, but she isn't evil. She just tries to protect those young ones who are in trouble, even though they might not know it. Or she would try to give you a signal that someone is in trouble, or that something bad is happening." explained Ignitus.
"Yes, I too seen her and heard her voice when I was young. It seems like she's a beautiful spirit, a good one though." said Terrador.
"Then, wait. I remember in my dream that I looked behind her and seen the Dark Master dead. Maybe she was trying to give me a signal." said Spyro.
"Yes. She may be trying to protect us from the Dark Master. But, if she doesn't even know us, why would she protect us?" asked Cynder.
"Because she's trying to protect every dragon that she knows that the Dark Master's minions will go to. And that she's trying to protect our world from eternal darkness. Maybe the Dark Master is trying to send his minions to get another dragon who's powerful enough to be able to free the Dark Master." explained Terrador.
"Yes. She was born from another dragon, but she was born to protect and fight for the good, since the darkness is already becoming too harsh. Which is why a dragon was made to protect the lands of the good, and prvent the dark to take over." said Ignitus.
"Spyro. Cynder. Spyro. Cynder." said the female voice that the young dragons explained to the guardians.
"It's her! Let's go to the back of the temple and see what's going on." said Ignitus.
"Oh, goodness! First I was hearing Spyro talking in his sleep, and then Spyro and Cynder talking about this lady, and now we're on an adventure to see the lady! Great, can things get any worse?" said Sparx.
The dragons ( and dragonfly) went to the back of the temple to follow the voice. Then, they saw a figure, with the rainbow wings and tail and the long blue hair and white dress. She turned around and saw the dragons ( and dragonfly) with a worried expression on her face.
"I-It's you!" said Cynder.
"Yes, young ones, it is me. The one you saw this morning. For my name is Guinevere, but something has gone terribly wrong, and I can't seem to do anything about it. Spyro, Cynder. I need your help. The Dark Master has been released, and he's killed a lot of dragons who are related to me! He's earned more power now, and is stronger than ever. And you seem to be the only brave ones who can help me. Please! If we don't do anything about it, then a shadow will fall over the land, and who knows what will happen then."
So how do you like it so far? Please comment!!
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#1 Posted: 21:01:59 23/10/2007
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#2 Posted: 21:08:31 23/10/2007
Brava!!! brava!!! Magnifico, Muy Bien, exellente, knocks the snot out of my spyro/cynder love stories (tho their still great, i even posted the engagement!! lol)
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#3 Posted: 21:25:43 23/10/2007
LOL You're funny! I mean, it just popped in my head and decided to create it and show it to other people, just to see what they think of it. But I also liked your love stories. Although I don't like romance much, I still liked it.
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#4 Posted: 21:32:24 23/10/2007
i know, i wrote mine when i was in spanish, or some other boring class, so i didn't think about them much.
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#5 Posted: 21:34:42 23/10/2007
Oh. Well, I let my imagination run wild after coming home from school, and I wrote this story on paper first. It took up a little more than 2 pages, but I added up some touches to it when I was typing it on here.
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#6 Posted: 21:36:14 23/10/2007
yeah i have a rough draft story thats like 6 pages long LOL, but, you should so make a part 2
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#7 Posted: 21:40:59 23/10/2007
Thx. I'll try, if I can make something that will catch someone's attention and make them like it, a lot. I would usually try to make some stories up on my own, but I screw up a lot, and have to start over. I hate that...
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#8 Posted: 21:43:17 23/10/2007
well, i don't really care if ppl like it or not, i can take critisim, though i don't like it when ppl use words like 'crappy' 'dumb' or 'retarded'
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#9 Posted: 21:48:44 23/10/2007
Same here
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#10 Posted: 21:49:50 23/10/2007
altho i HIGHLY suggest some chem between spyro and cynder
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#11 Posted: 20:18:23 24/10/2007
I don't care too. Even with my art, I don't want to become famous. Most of all, I don't want to become greedy.
So, awsome keep it up! I wasn't here the last few days, so I didn't know about this story. |
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#12 Posted: 21:04:08 24/10/2007
^ yeah i just write cuz i'm bored or i think it might be cool or something.
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#13 Posted: 23:51:34 25/10/2007
I do that too. And I think it's fun to daydream and think about stuff. Especially Spyro and dragons!!
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#14 Posted: 23:53:14 25/10/2007
I love to daydream i even have a complete story w/ the characters of TEEN TITANS
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#15 Posted: 12:08:40 26/10/2007
Really? I used to watch the series. And I love Teen Titans!!
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#16 Posted: 17:25:59 26/10/2007
Ok. Here's the 2nd part.
Guinevere gave them a sad expression, and the guardians looked worried. "Guinevere, there may be a way we could do this. But, I just don't know how. I just don't know the techniques and breath weapons yet," said Cynder, looking down at her feet. Then she looked up. "How has he been released? How long ago?" "There may have been a dragon that the Dark Master's minions had gotten to. I should've stopped him, but I lost some of my powers and there's no way I can do this on my own." said Guinevere, looking down. "What do you think we ought to do Igniuts?" asked Volteer, looking at him. "The Dark Master's been released without us knowing. And if we would've known sooner, then we would've done something. Maybe.." "Yes, I know Volteer. But I was trying to look in the pool of visions for information, and it hasn't showed me anything about the Dark Master. And if we're going to do this, then we'll have to train Spyro and Cynder in the ancient ways to reawaken their powers." said Ignitus. "We'll have to do this quickly before the Dark Master's army come here and destroys us, and there may be a possibility that they will take Cynder again and make her a slave. We'll just do it like we taught you before, Spyro. And same with you Cynder. I know you will do good like Spyro did in the beginning. As much as you don't want to, you would have to try." Cynder nodded, and headed in the temple. "I'll...just...try...to..." Guinevere got up and was transforming. She was glowing a whiteish color, like her long flowing dress. Then, her form became bigger, and a dragon figure stood before them. She was now a bluish purplish dragon, a bit bigger than Ignitus. Her chest had a big blue gemstone, which was supposed to be attached. Her silver horns were long and curved and she had big wings and a long tail with an arrow-like thing with gemstones on it at the end of her tail (like the big pointy things on the tip of Spyro's tail, but much bigger). Her purple eyes opened, and she looked down upon the dragon guardians. "Wow. Now a new record for being the biggest dragon I've seen." said Sparx, looking up at Guinevere in awe. "Ahhh." she breathed. "It feels good to be a full dragon again. Now it's time for your training young one." she said looking down at Spyro. Spyro shook his head and nodded, and walked in the temple. She looked at the guardians. "You guys can rest. I'll take care of the young ones. And I will be teaching them some new abilities." she said, then walked in the temple. The guardians' eyes followed her. "I should hit on her," said Sparx. Ignitus rolled his eyes, and then they headed in the temple. "Good Spyro! Very good! Ok Cynder. Now it's your turn!"said Guinevere. Cynder thought about the fire breath that Spyro just made. She was concentrating, and pretended that the dummy was attacking her. She growled and blew, and fire came out. She looked at the torched dummy, and looked at Spyro. Spyro smiled at her, and then turned away. "Good Cynder. Now that you've mastered your fire breath, it's time to unleash it's fury. Go on. Try it." said Guinevere, smiling at Cynder. "Ok. I'll try." she said nervously. Guinevere sent some dummies who were going after Cynder, but Guinevere wanted to be easy on Cynder, so she sent two at a time. Spyro and Guinevere sat there and watched her slash and hit away at the dummies. When Cynder felt that her fury was full, she stood in the center and was looking at the five big dummies that Guinevere sent when she sensed that Cynder's fury was full. And Cynder blasted out a big fury, and destroyed the dummies. She fell to the ground and looked at Spyro and Guinevere, who were clapping and smiling. "So, uh. How did I do?"she asked, looking nervous. "Well, I think that you did better than I have. And your fury is kinda different compared to mine." he said, smiling. "Ok. Now it's time to learn the element of electricity, the spark of light. Just follow the techniques of fire, but think electric, not any other." instructed Guinevere. Spyro did all of the techniques first, since Cynder was a bit tired from doing the fire fury, so it was like a little rest time. Spyro slashed and attacked at the dummies, and then did his electric fury. Cynder was next, and she went to the center of the room. A dummy appeared, but Guinevere made it still, so it would be easy for Cynder to think about the breath weapon that she was supposed to use. Cynder did the same, and breathed out a long stream of electric. It wasn't yellow, but purple, since she was a darker color than Spyro. What Cynder just used as her electric breath was stronger than Spyro's, from what Guinevere sensed. Cynder was doing well, and it seems that Guinevere was a great teacher after all. And after discovering her earth and ice breaths, Guinevere made them do more breaths. But first, she let them rest after using the four elements, so they sat and talked to each other. "So, where were you born Guinevere?" asked Spyro. Guinevere sat and thought for a moment, then said, "I was born in a very magical place. It's called Draconia's Depths, and it's a place where not a lot of dragons were born in. In my rainbowish egg, I've been hit by molten lava, sprayed by the waves of the ocean, zapped by a bolt of lightning, blown by a magical green wave, which gave me earth, and hit by a beam of light, which allowed me to be on the good side and possess the power of light. Yes, it may sound painful, but this is a way for an opal dragon to be born. If I was hit by dark and not light, then I would be evil. If I was hit by both light and dark, then I would be nuetral. And that's where I was born." said Guinevere. "Wow! Then we must be lucky that you're hit by light and not dark. Uh, where exactly is this place anyways?" asked Spyro. "Oh, it's very very far away from here young one. You would have to use that pool of visions thing to teleport there. And the reason why not a lot of dragons were born there is because that place is not very easy to find. My mother was fleeing from the Dark Master's army, and she found Draconia's Depths, which is a place that I just explained to you. She layed me here, and hid me in a dark spot and put prayers upon me. She made a tear drop on my egg, which means that I should be protected by her power. When a mother dragon lays her egg and puts a fire tear upon that egg, it means that that dragon is protected by his or her mother's powers, and that there's a possibility that the dragon will hatch and survive. But that happens when a mother dragon needs to leave it. When they don't, they watch it and protect from other little critters that like to eat dragon eggs. Yes, there has been many of the Dark Master's minions that have tried to take me and hand me to the Dark Master, but when they pick me up, they get killed by the powers that the mother put in. I know my mother is still alive somewhere, but there are places that just aren't safe for a dragon at any age to live. The Dark Master's free, and there will be a hero among us, that will destroy him and be in the legends forever." explained Guinevere. Spyro, Cynder, and Sparx were listening to each word that Guinevere was saying, and they asked questions when she would pause. So the dragons (and dragonfly) have learned something. "Ok now. Are you guys ready for the next elements that I'm going to teach you? They're just like the ones that you just tried out, except that they're harder to unleash some of it's strongest powers." Guinevere explained. "Uh yeah. Yeah, we're ready." said Cynder, and they went in the training arena to train more. So, did you like part 2? Please comment |
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#17 Posted: 18:29:44 26/10/2007
Interesting. Yeah I like it!
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#18 Posted: 20:06:34 26/10/2007
altho i thought that only spyro could use all 4 elements
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#19 Posted: 01:06:45 28/10/2007
Thx, again I was going to write this down on a piece of paper first, but I screwed up and then I just put all of the things I could think of in this part. Spyro's new breath abilities will be water, air, dark, and light. And like Guinevere said in the story, it will be harder to concentrate on and the techniques for each of these elements. This is a story that I made up, not like it's going to actually happen in the next sequel to TEN, but it would be awesome if it did!!
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#20 Posted: 04:24:05 28/10/2007
Part 3!
"Come on Spyro! You can do it!" called Guinevere. Spyro was now trying the water breath. It may sound like it doesn't help much, but it actually blows away enemies and takes down their life when they hit the ground. Spyro concentrated too hard at some times, and would breathe some other breath, which would be the ones that he had already tried. Spyro would try to get really mad, and then breathe the other breaths. He tried again and again, but it's no use. No water. "Try to think about the breath that you're supposed to use in this round! Maybe it will help to keep your mind from all the other breaths!" informed Guinevere. Spyro did as she said, and the opposite of water came out. "Arrrgghhh!! It's no use! Maybe I wasn't born to breathe water!" Spyro shouted. "At least try. The more elements you learn from me, the more possible it is for you to defeat the Dark Master. Dust yourself off and try again!" Guinevere explained. Spyro groaned, but tried to do as she said. He sat there for a little while, staring at the dummy. He concentrated on the element of water, and closed his eyes. Spyro took a deep breath, and relaxed, and WHOOSH! Water flew form his jaws. "Brava! Excelente! Muoy Bien! That was the first time I've ever seen water come from a dragon!" shouted Sparx. "I told you. It takes relaxation and coolness to be able to breathe water. It's just like when they say go with the flow, and there you have it." said Guinevere, smiling at Spyro. "And now you'll learn the other techniques of this element. If you need to rest, then so be it." said Guinevere. After Spyro was finished, Cynder was next. It actually took a shorter time for her to be able to breathe water. And the water from Cynder was like more of a purplish clearish color, not a bluish clearish like Spyro's. Cynder was doing well, as well as Spyro when he had to begin his new breaths. The next one was air. Air was one of the easiest elements to use as a breath weapon, but in air combat, it was a bit more difficult for them. The dark breath was next, which was a very difficult breath to use because you would need to be very intelligent and strong to wield this power. Guinevere did let them use the melee attacks first, but when they had to use their breaths, Cynder was the first to go. "Come on Cynder. You can do it!" cheered Spyro. Cynder would look at him and give him a little grin, but then would try to concentrate on the power. Guinevere was chanting some kind of spell in some kind of ancient language, and Cynder closed her eyes. She took a deep breath, and BAM! A big stream of purple light came from Cynder's mouth. She was actually sprawled on the floor, looking shocked. "Did...I....just....do....that?"she asked. "Unfortunately, the dark breath may cause a lot damage when released from a dragon. When it's a young dragon's first time to use this breath, it may send them on the floor, looking shocked. Yes, it's happened to me before, but I've been using this breath for as long as I can remember." Guinevere explained. "Oh, cool! Maybe I should try it!" said Spyro. "Maybe? Maybe? Just where did that maybe come from? Didn't Gwen say that you would have to try ALL of the breaths?"said Sparx. "Oh, quiet Sparx." said Spyro, and walked in the middle of the arena. Again, Guinevere was chanting the same spell, which it sounded like the same words when Cynder was about to ue the dark. (This breath is kinda like convexity, but a little different). Spyro did the same, and Spyro was also sprawled on the floor. "Whoa! It felt really wierd when it came out! It was like releasing a rocket!" said Spyro, surprised. Spyro picked himself up, and shook himself. He then went over to Guinevere and asked, "What was that that you were saying before I used the dark breath? What does it mean?" "It was supposed to be a little chanting spell that some dragons use when they're about to use another breath that they've never used before. It's supposed to help make you and Cynder concentrate more on the dark element, so when you fight the Dark Master, you can remember this chanting that I used to help you. And now it's time to try to use your last element, light. It's just like the dark element, but think bright."she said, smiling. Spyro and Cynder completed the last of their powers in training, and went to foloow Guinevere to see what they have to do next. "So, uh. What now big girl?" asked Sparx. Guinevere stopped to think for a moment, and answered, "I want you guys to rest now. I mean, you would probably need to sleep too because you are going with Spyro, right?" "Uh, yeah. Yeah. Of course I am!" he said. "I just want you to know that if anything happens to Spyro or Cynder, use this, and my help will be on the way." said Guinevere, making a gem-like object appear in front of Sparx. "What is this thing?" he asked. "It's my dragon crystal, which I used to put all of my powers in, but now I use it for a help call, just in case. The army may be too much for them, so I want to give that to you. Oh. And do use this too. It's a little chain to keep it on so you won't have to hold it all the time." said Guinevere, making a silver chain appear, with the gem on it, which is just small enough to fit aroung Sparx's neck. "Errr, thanks. But why would you give this to me and not Spyro?" he asked. "Because if the Dark Master's army captures him, and sees him wearing that around his neck, they will be concerned about it and might take it off of him while seeping. So I gave it to you, since the army doesn't care much for you, which you should be happy because they look to kill." said Guinevere. Ah. Good point there. Well, I guess I'll see you in the morning, Gwen." he said going towards the temple. "Ok. Be careful. You may not know who will be out there." she said, and lied her head down and drifted away to sleep. Well, that's the end of part 3. I only typed this much because I had a few other ideas, and didn't want to forget it because this was typed around at midnight, which I was very tired and wasn't thinking very straight. So sry if it stinks. Please comment. |
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#21 Posted: 04:31:03 28/10/2007
It ended too soon!! but I LOVE the chem between spyro/cynder
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#22 Posted: 14:08:25 28/10/2007
Yeah, I know. I wrote part 3 right around midnight, and I was exhausted, and I didn't want to lose any ideas at that time. So that's why I kinda ended it short. But I'll make part 4 better.
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#23 Posted: 00:05:36 29/10/2007
Part 4!
Guinevere was now in her dream cloud, and it was something interesting. (It was the same place that Spyro went to when he was on his adventure to defeat Gaul). She was on a platform, and looked around. "Oh my. I've seen this place before. But, why am I here?" Guinevere qusetioned. "You are sent here because there is trouble, and I made you come here so I can tell you of this dark matter," said a voice. "Hey, I recognize your voice. Aren't you the..." Guinevere's voice was trailed off by a gasp. "..you're the Chronicler aren't you?" she asked, amazed. "Yes, Guinevere. I need you to meet me in the Celestial Caves. The Dark Master is now released, and if we don't do anything about it, then darkness will fall on the lands. I need your help, Guinevere. It seems that Spyro and Cynder are resting, so I summoned you here. I'm going to teach you some other things that you have not possessed yet. It will be something a lot stronger than the things that you already possess. But, it will take some time for you to learn. I know you are old enough to know these things, trust me. I sent you here when you were Spyro's age about a hundred years ago, and you're still young. Come to the pool, and I'll tell you more," said the Chronicler's voice. Guinevere looked around once more, and flew to the pool down at the other floating platform. Guinevere stood over the pool that the Chronicler told her to stand over. It changed different colors, but one color at a time, as if it was some kind of giant rainbow gemstone. "Ok, I did as you asked. What now?" she asked, looking into the rainbow pool. "You will learn another element that most opal dragons have. You will be practicing the techniques of this element, and you will then possess it when you awake. It is the elemental rainbow element, and is a very special power for an opal dragon to possess. But now, let's see your fury attack." said the Chronicler's voice. Guinevere nodded, and stepped upon the glowing rainbow pool. There was rainbow light surrounding her, and she closed her eyes for a short time, concentrating. "Clear your mind, Guinevere. And release an elemental storm within you." he said, and Guinevere floated a few feet in the air, and a giant rainbow whirlwind was surrounding her, and she unleashed some glittery rainbow dragons that seemed like spirits, and it exploded in the pool that she sits upon. Guinevere opened her eyes, and looked around again. "This power is very strong, I can feel it. It's like as if I was using all of my power into it, but I can still feel my powers within me." Guinevere explained to the Chronicler's voice. "Yes, it seems like that to every opal dragon, but you will get used to it. But right now, you will need to use some other powers of this elements on your enemies, and see how it effects them," said the Chronicler's voice, and let the glowing around her dim and disappear. Guinevere walked through the door and jumped on the stones that were rotating and flipping. Of course, she has dragon time, and she would use it. She can fly but not in this place, so she had to jump, stone to stone. Then another big platform came up to Guinevere, and she had to use her elmental breath. Stone looking men that was twice the size of Spyro, went to Guinevere to attack her. She became angry and unleashed a powerful rainbow breath that had like all of the elements in it. They all died, and Guinevere moved on. More stones to jump on, but Guinevere got through. Now she had to use her elmental melee attack. It's an attack where Guinevere has rainbow flames all on her body, and she would knock up an enemy and do an air combo, which is kinda like the same air combo that Spyro would do, but with more flips and hits. She did that to all of her enemies, and they flew to the floor and disappeared in rainbow flames. Guinevere then had to jump on some other rotating stones, and went to the next platform. There were some magical orbs that would move every time she goes near them, so she would have to use dragon time to make it slower and hit them when she caught up to them. There were five, and she took her time on each, like while she was letting her dragon time refill. She completed the task, and went through another doorway with some rotating stones on it. She reached a blue platform, which made blue particles stick to her and then made her disappear. Then she reappeared on another platform, and she had to make some ice platforms on the lake that was there. She unleashed a blue breath with some little rainbows in it, and formed some ice platforms. Guinevere jumped on each of them, and jumped on more rotating stones. Then, she reached a platform where there are more stone men, and she filled up her fury, and was concentrating on her fury attack. She floated in the center of the platform, and made the giant rainbow whirlwind form around her again. She stretched out her wings and BOOM! A big destructive whirlwind with the glittery rainbow dragons coming out to attack the stone men. When they would hit the stone men, it would explode inside the stone men, making it very harmful to them. A rainbow shock wave then went through the stone men, and then rainbow fireballs fell down and crashed into them. Guinevere was now finished with her fury, and landed on the ground and moved on. She saw the place with the two dragon statues on each side of the doorway that was there. Guinevere glided there, and went inside. She reached the pool and looked in, and then said, "Ok. Now that I've everything that you told me to do with this element, what do I do now?" she questioned to the Chronicler. "You will train a little more with the young dragons, and then tell them that this happened to you, that I had to send you here and awaken your elmental breath. Then, you will tell them that you're going to seek me in Celestial Caves, and you will bring them along with you. When you reach me, then I will go with you to go and stop the Dark Master. But, beware. There is now a dragon servant who is in search of Spyro. It is a silver dragon, which it is taken over by the Dark Master's powers, and it can't stop it. His name is Silverfire, which he's a dragon who's a little younger than you. If you seek him along the way and he tries to attack you, guard yourself well or else he will take you to the Dark Master when you're out cold. Try to also help free him of the Dark Master's power. Give him every thing you got, and he might shake off the Dark Master's power and become good again. Now, awake!" said the Chronicler's voice, and Guinevere was no where in sight. Guinevere woke up and saw Sparx lying beside her. The sound of Guinevere's grunts and groans made Sparx wake up. Sparx looked at Guinevere and screamed. "Aahh! A big... oh. It's you." Sparx shivers. "Ugh. Meat eaters." he groaned. Guinevere chuckled. "Why were you sleeping beside me?" she asked Sparx, looking at him. "Oh, there was that wierd evil she dragon that was out and about again. I tell ya, she still gives me the creeps." said Sparx, trembling with nervousness. "Where's Spyro? Is he awake now?" asked Guinevere. "Uh, no. No, he's still sleeping. Besides, I...." "BOO!" "Aaahhh!" Sparx screamed, with Spyro laughing behind him. "Hey, that's not funny!" he demanded. "Ha. Guinevere, why do you look so startled? Is something wrong?" asked Spyro. "No young one. I'm fine. I just had a dream about me being in this place with the Chronicler's voice speaking to me. He taught me some other power..." she explained. "Really!? That happened to me too before! But it helped me with only four elements. What was yours that you had to learn?" Spyro questioned to Guinevere. "An elemental power. A power with all of the elements that destroys enemies all at once. But there's no time wasting on sentiment. Let's go in the temple and find Cynder." said Guinevere, who then went towards the temple. But then she was stopped by a big figure in front of her. It was a silver dragon that had red glowing eyes. He glared at Guinevere, and growled. |
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#24 Posted: 01:03:31 29/10/2007
Come on, I wanna hear your comments!!
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#25 Posted: 01:14:04 29/10/2007
awesome you joined!!
muy bien, delishoso, fantastico, exellente!! Want me to try and draw Guinevere for you??
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#26 Posted: 01:23:18 29/10/2007
Uh, sure. That's if you want to. And yes, I've just joined like 5 minutes ago. I just love this website!! And if you don't want to look back at the story for her details, then I'll list it here.
She has a rounded snout, two long horns, a long tail with an arrow-like thing at the end with six gems on it, a big gem on her chest, curvy spikes going down her back, big wings with a gemstone on it, some gemstones on each side of her leg, gemstones on her arms, she's very muscular, and a little gem on her forehead.
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#27 Posted: 20:59:43 01/11/2007
Awsome...I can't wait for some more!
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#28 Posted: 18:34:44 04/11/2007
Whew! Part 5
"Come my prey," said Silverfire in a dark evil voice. He licked his chops and stepped towards Guinevere. Guinevere took a step towards him too, and bared her teeth. She growled really loud and her eyes began to change color. Then, Guinevere's eye color stopped on the color red, which is as red as blood. "Get away from here or I'll tear you apart," Guinevere growled. "Wow. She's a tough cookie!" said Sparx to Spyro. Spyro raised an eyebrow at Sparx, and then looked at Guinevere in horror when she turned her head to face him. "Spyro get out of here! This is a bad situation for a young dragon to be in! Get Ignitus! He'll know what to d..." Guinevere was then hit by Silverfire's claw, and was then knocked to the ground. Silverfire glared at Spyro and started to take a few steps towards him. He laughed evilly. "Well, if it isn't the purple dragon. I've been wanting to see you for some time..." he licked his chops again, but then a big tail went into his back, and he screamed in agony. Guinevere lifted up her claw and Spyro began to fly to the front of the temple with Sparx following behind. The two dragons continued fighting, and Spyro landed at the front of the temple, and went to search in the rest of it. There, he spotted Cynder, searching for something... "Cynder! Where's Ignitus!?" screamed Spyro to her. Cynder turned her head toward him, and she had a horrified expression on her face. "Spyro, I-I can't find him. He must've left the temple! I've been searching for him for the past hour. And what's that racket!?" she cried. "Guinevere and a silver dragon are fighting. She's trying to protect me, and she told me to find Ignitus, but then she was thrown at the sides of the walls of the temple by the silver dragon. If Ignitus isn't here, then we must search for him elsewhere!" he said. Cynder nodded, and went to fly out of the temple. Spyro lifted his wings, and was then distracted by Sparx's words. "Spyro! Uh, maybe we shouldn't leave the temple, y'know! Cuz then maybe Gwen would die and the temple might be taken over by that silver beast and all, and, and..." "Enough Sparx! She told us to search for Ignitus to help her, and that's all that matters! If you don't want to leave here, then stay here! Maybe you can search for Ignitus here!" said Spyro, and jumped up and flapped his wings and started to drift away from the temple. "Ahh, what the heck! What am I doing!? I might as well go with them or else I might die," said Sparx to himself, and flew after Spyro. Spyro, Cynder and Sparx were flying towards Celestial Caves, but there was something there that looked like it would attack. It looked like a big bat like creature, and when the three of them landed, the creature jerked its head towards them. There was a rider upon it, and there was armor on the bat and the rider. "Well, if it isn't the purple whelp! The Dark Master has been expecting you..." he said, and took a step towards them. The rider started laughing, and the bat raised its wings and started hovering in front of them. He then starts saying something that the three can't understand, and then the bat starts to throw fire balls at them. "Watch out!!" Spyro cried, and moved Cynder and Sparx out of the way. Spyro then got up, and started strafing around. "Go ahead of me! I'll take care of him!" Spyro told Cynder and Sparx. "But Spyro,.." started Cynder. "Just GO! I know what I'm doing!" demanded Spyro, and dodged a fireball that was shot at him. It was then flying towards Cynder and Sparx, and they quickly went through the opening to Celestail Caves. Spyro turned to look at the rider and the rider chuckled evilly. "Foolish whelp! Now you're mine!" said the rider, and made fireballs homing in on Spyro. Spyro dodged them, but was hit by one of them and looked at the bat rider. The rider chuckled and attacked once again. Cynder and Sparx jumped and flew through some obstacles that they had to go through. "You think Spyro's going to be okay, Sparx?" asked Cynder with a worried expression on her face. "Hm. Who knows. I sure hope he's okay. Maybe..." Cynder gasped, and then looked at Sparx. Sparx gave her a surprised expression, and then when he turned his head to look ahead of him, he saw Terrador lying on the floor, motionless. Like it so far? Sry it took me so long to make part 5, I was struggling in school.
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#29 Posted: 19:32:45 04/11/2007
Come on! I wanna hear your comments!!
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#30 Posted: 22:19:11 04/11/2007
now i don't have time for read your history,but i read one part and i love it!If i learn how write my history in english here i'll put it in this forum.
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#31 Posted: 22:51:04 04/11/2007
You can post right here. I won't bite... Really I won't.
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#32 Posted: 00:01:55 05/11/2007
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no,i don't write right now because i don't know how write in english all the history!!I only know write the history in portuguese -.-" |
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#33 Posted: 16:34:55 05/11/2007
I love your story, "Dragongyrl1000". It flows good, and it has a good plot. The only thing I have to ask you about is this. How do you get an account on this site???? I've tried everything!!!! Anyways, I read parts 1-4 on Saturday, and liked it a lot. I gonna read part 5 tonight, and I can't wait for more!!!! Good job, "Dragongyrl1000".
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#34 Posted: 17:36:57 07/11/2007
I finally got an account, so disregard the part about registering in the last post.
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#35 Posted: 18:07:22 07/11/2007
I hope there's more. I enjoyed reading the story, and I hope you get the chance to write some more soon. But I can wait.
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#36 Posted: 21:28:50 07/11/2007
I just read it all now (all hail the power of speed reeding)... it is an excellent piece! My only suggestion is that you make two spaces when changing to a new speaker...
...of course... yours is more dialog based than things I write... so you might not have to do that. <.<; Just a question, do you mind if I try posting a small thing in this topic? It was an idea I had about a story after the Legend of Spyro trilogy.
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#37 Posted: 10:50:35 08/11/2007
read post #25, line two
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#38 Posted: 17:17:45 08/11/2007
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What language is it in?
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#39 Posted: 22:25:31 08/11/2007
I think it's Spanish. Because "muy bueno" means "very good", and "excellente" means "excellent", and "fantastico" means "fantastic".
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#40 Posted: 00:35:56 09/11/2007
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Yes... it's Spanish. <.<;
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#41 Posted: 11:13:02 09/11/2007
yeah, i'm takin spanish 1
but that story has a lot of potential!
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#42 Posted: 16:27:45 09/11/2007
I know. I just hope he/she gets the time to finally write some more. I love this story!!!!
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#43 Posted: 23:27:52 15/11/2007
Aw, thx SpyroGamer2008. You're now considered as my friend. You're so kind, but it'll be awhile for me to make another part cuz I have a Geography project to do. And yes, you may post whatever it is that you want to post HIR.
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#44 Posted: 23:31:14 15/11/2007
you'll regret that DG1000!!!!
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#45 Posted: 01:09:05 16/11/2007
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Forget it... I posted it on FF.net. <.<;
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#46 Posted: 16:22:08 16/11/2007
That's okay, "Dragongyrl1000". I can wait.
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#47 Posted: 03:57:41 17/11/2007
I sowwy SpyroxCynder. And thx for being patient SpyroGamer2008.
And now for the exciting part, cuz here's part 6! Cynder and Sparx quickly ran up to Terrador and scanned his body. His eyes were closed, and his body was very still and cut up. "Silverfire must have done this, unless the Dark Master's armies have," breathed Cynder. "Uh, ya think? How do you figure, and by the way, how did Terrador even end up here? I mean come on! Don't you think we have had enough terrorism already!?" screamed Sparx. Cynder looked around, and called for help. "Help! Is someone there!? Hello? Can anyone help!?" Cynder then looked back and heard some screeching noise, coming from behind a wall. "What the.....?" "Uh, hey. This doesn't look good!" said Sparx. "And why is that?" asked Cynder. Sparx pointed his finger to where Cynder had heard the noise. "L-l-look!" he yelled, and then one of those gorillas popped it's head out from behind, and spotted Cynder and Sparx. The little gorilla laughed and then sent a wholr flock of his kind, big and small, out to attack them, and all Cynder could do was to just sit there in shock, while Sparx started to panic... Guinevere threw herself into Silverfire, and he only took a few steps back. He became angry as a bull, and he charged at Guinevere. Guinevere stood on her hind legs and put her claws out in front of her, only to find that Silverfire slams into them. Now they're two dueling dragons on their hind legs, slashing out with their claws and biting and tearing with their teeth. Guinevere put all of her strength into him, and was pushing him towards the edge. Silverfire was struggling to push back, but the female opal dragon seemed to make him go back. "RRRGGGHHHH! You'll regret this you foul female!!" said the silver beast, and made venom pour from his mouth and bit Guinevere in her neck. Guinevere screamed in terror, and fell to the ground. Silverfire laughed with an evil grin on his face, as he took steps towards her, closer and closer. Guinevere turned to her side, and her tail flicked up and threw the silver dragon across the field of the front of the temple and fell off the ledge. Guinevere layed there, eyes open with scratches and scars on her glittering multi-colored scales. She was breathing very heavily, but she can barely breathe because of the venom. Silverfire then flew back up from the bottom of the temple, and landed again only to face the paralyzed female. Guinevere's body began to glow, and she turned back to human again. Silverfire laughed, and wiped his mouth with blood and venom left on his claw. "So, you're a tiny human! Hahahahahahahaha!" Silverfire laughed, and he stood on his hind legs and reared up his head. He opened his mouth, and his mouth began to glow. Guinevere grunted and groaned as she tried to use her strength to use her magic or to block his attack. Guinevere shut her eyes tight, and put out her hands and made them face Silverfire. "Erif wobniar!" she cries, and her hands glowed a rainbowy color. She then let out a big beam of a rainbow blast and it hit Silverfire in his chest. The silver beast groaned and roared in terror, and his eyes began to turn for what it seemed like a normal dragon's eyes. A dark spirit released from his body, and he lay motionless on the floor. The spirit swirled around Guinevere, and she stood up and took out a big sword. She struck it in the heart, and it flew to the ground. Silverfire looked up at Guinevere when he was still on the floor, and she stood in front of the sun and looked as if she was some legendary heroine. Her blue hair was carried by the wind, her purple eyes glowed with pride, and her face was in a brave and serious looking expression. Her purple eyes lowered on him, and he stared back. Guinevere lowered herself towards Silverfire, and his green eyes looked behind her and saw the shadow dead on the ground. Guinevere stroked his snout gently, and he was closing his eyes very slowly. "Silverfire. Silverfire. Silverfire..." her voice chanted, as Silverfire's eyes closed and was hearing Guinevere's voice echoing in his head. Back in Celestial Caves where there was no one near, Spyro was knocked out from the fireball that hit him, but he managed to unleash a shock of the light breath on the rider and killed him, for now. Spyro shook his head, and slowly got up. "Ugh. Where am I?" he said to himself, looking around. He hesitated for a moment, and finally remembered. Spyro gasped. "Cynder! Sparx! I must find them before they get into any trouble!" Spyro said, and ran to where he remembered to where Cynder and Sparx had gone. Spyro followed the obstacles he had to go through, and then found footprints. Spyro's eyes scanned them up ahead, and found them rounding a corner. Spyro bent down and sniffed the ground, and said, "Cynder...Sparx..." and he ran, following the footprints, only to find Cynder and Sparx being surrounded by the Dark Master's army. "The black dragon, Cynder." said one gorilla. "We've lost you once, we've lost you another time. But this time, we won't lose you again..." said another, taking steps towards the frightened dragon and dragonfly. "CYNDER!" Spyro shouted, and Cynder jerked her head towards him. Her face brightened up a bit, but she was still a bit scared of the battle that she's about to start. Cynder turned her head back and closed her eyes. Guinevere's voice echoed in her mind. She remembered Guinevere chanting some spell when she was training with the dark breath. Cynder reopened her eyes, and all of the gorillas closed in on her. "AAAHHHHH!!! What's happening!?" cried Sparx. Cynder rose in the air, and a big shockwave was closing in on them. Then, Cynder unleashed some shockwaves here and there, destroying every enemy there is. Then she let out a big, huge shockwave, and it sent Spyro and Sparx flying back. Cynder landed with some purple flames left on her tail, and watched every enemy die. And Cynder then smiled when Spyro and Sparx came along to join her victory... So how do you like part 6? Please comment! |
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#48 Posted: 09:21:07 17/11/2007
it is AWESOME!!!!!!!!
you are muy artistico!!!!
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#49 Posted: 09:58:11 17/11/2007
WTH??? I really likew the story but, you weren't logged in at the time?????
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#50 Posted: 09:59:50 17/11/2007
hey i just noticed that!!!!
but keep up the good work!!! i myself had some pretty good ideas for a spyro fan-fic, but i'm puttin them aside to write my novel.
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