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#1 Posted: 17:03:23 30/06/2009 | Topic Creator
I had another title, but it kept freaking and scaring me smilie
Anyway, it's a short story, and i'll do it soon
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#2 Posted: 17:12:57 30/06/2009
Scary title smilie....smilie Joking,anyway,I'll read it,you're making interesting stories smilie
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#3 Posted: 17:14:15 30/06/2009
smilie Couldn't help,but now i'm interested because of the title!
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#4 Posted: 17:15:16 30/06/2009
Aww,he is offline smilie Come back! smilie
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#5 Posted: 17:19:24 30/06/2009
No,he's online.
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#6 Posted: 17:20:27 30/06/2009 | Topic Creator
It's kinda creepy.

It was mid day. Spyro and Cynder had come from visiting someone. Cynder wasn't in her best mood.
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#7 Posted: 17:22:36 30/06/2009
Dude,post the half of page! smilie
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#8 Posted: 17:24:27 30/06/2009
I think i'm falling asleep *snores,then wakes up quickly*
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#9 Posted: 17:25:11 30/06/2009 | Topic Creator
Fine. it'll be a while

'You could have told me they were sensitive.' Sypro broke the silence saying.
'I did! "They're a little bit sensitive"!'
'Couldn't you have said allot sensetive?'
'What did you think i meant by it? Oh, By the way they're sensitive, allot sensitive.'
'Would have made it easier.' Cynder breathed out angrily.
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#10 Posted: 17:28:59 30/06/2009
Sorry,i'm just bored,i'm not a hyper or joking or fun person.Unless i have lots of candy and soda,then i'm hyper.
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#11 Posted: 17:31:49 30/06/2009
Hmm....I don't know where is this going but continue.
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#12 Posted: 17:34:06 30/06/2009 | Topic Creator
They walked on a path by a steep slope. It was slowly becoming night.
'But i'm just saying, you could have said.'
'For the last time! I did! I even said not to mention what you did!'
'I didn't, alright?'
'No, you found some other way to ask though.'
'I didn't think that it'd cause any problems.'
'Well it did. Congrats!'
'Well i'm not the one over reacting.' Cynder then had a burst of rage and hit him hard. Spyro, not expecting to be offcentred, found himself falling down the slope towards the ground below. Cynder's rage instantly turned to fear as she saw.
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#13 Posted: 17:36:32 30/06/2009
Continue?Please?

I'm really frustrated!I've waited forever for this one game i want to come out!smilie
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#14 Posted: 17:36:59 30/06/2009
No!Spyro! D:
Anyway,continue.
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#15 Posted: 17:38:48 30/06/2009 | Topic Creator
Cynder didn't move, her life seemed to pause and slow down as she saw. Only when Spyro hit the ground below did she decide to jolt down to help. As she ran, she feared and hoped he was alright. Upon reaching the ground, she looked at him and ran over, still in fear.
'Spyro? Spyro?!' She asked in fear, with tears emerging.
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#16 Posted: 17:40:47 30/06/2009
Hope Spyro isn't dead.
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#17 Posted: 17:42:40 30/06/2009
Cynder,Cynder,Cynder....shame on you smilie
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#18 Posted: 17:45:24 30/06/2009 | Topic Creator
Not her fault, she was angry.

Looking round, she saw he didn't look to injured, a few scratches, that was all, but he didn't move. Still worried, he tried nudging him. When no response came, she feared what she wanted never to happen had happened. In her final efforts, she tried calling him, nudging him, anything to see if he would respond. Only when he didn't, she knew what she had done.
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#19 Posted: 17:48:33 30/06/2009
What is Cynder going to do now if Spyro is dead?I'm still not fully convinced he's dead.
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#20 Posted: 17:49:22 30/06/2009
smilie.....*cries* smilie
God I can't understand a thing,Michael Jackson in my living room and my mum is singing...annoying smilie
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#21 Posted: 17:52:55 30/06/2009 | Topic Creator
OOC: Micheal jackson is in your living room?! HE FAKED HIS DEATH?!! smilie

Cynder then went back to finding signs of life, breathing, heat, pulse. None of which she found. She looked round in fear. What if someone had seen? What if they thought she had murdered him? She panicked. Looking around nearby did she notice a small cave, big enough tp hide in. She looked at Spyro once again before trying to move his body out of sight into the cave.
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#22 Posted: 17:53:57 30/06/2009
smilie Elvis lives in my room.smilie

I'm just a little convinced that Spyro is dead.
Edited 1 time - Last edited at 17:55:03 30/06/2009 by Eternal
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#23 Posted: 17:57:01 30/06/2009
Damn!Why he did that!?I hate that guy! smilie
*reading*
He is dead....murderer! smilie smilie
Edited 1 time - Last edited at 17:57:48 30/06/2009 by Spyro-Fan
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#24 Posted: 17:59:23 30/06/2009 | Topic Creator
When Cynder had finished moving him, she looked to see if anyone was around that could have seen. She looked back, still not believing what she saw and what she had done. She looked back out, still seeing no one she ran. She hoped no one would have seen what had happened. But she knew too well that someone would know he would be missing. She looked at the cave once more, looking around. Unlike earlier, now she saw a light colour in the sky, pale from the sky. Pink, she knew who it was. She hoped she hadn't seen.
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#25 Posted: 18:03:03 30/06/2009
Cynder sees her enemy?Or a relative perhaps?

It's gonna be hard convincing me Spyro is dead in the story.Not for real.
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#26 Posted: 18:06:25 30/06/2009 | Topic Creator
Cynder saw the pink dragon coming, knewing all too well it was Ember, then one who Spyro had said to her as having "A bloody irritating crush at times" Cynder remembered the smirk he did after saying this, now making her fear even more.
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#27 Posted: 18:06:54 30/06/2009
Pink...oh my God Ember smilie
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#28 Posted: 18:11:16 30/06/2009
It's Ember,does Ember know Cynder killed Spyro?That is my interesting question.
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#29 Posted: 18:12:23 30/06/2009
We will see.
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#30 Posted: 18:17:03 30/06/2009
He's offline,gonna get real boring.
Cynder_fan Gold Sparx Gems: 2683
#31 Posted: 18:45:40 30/06/2009 | Topic Creator
The dragoness flew closer before landing in front of Cynder. Cynder thought that her heart had stopped because of the overwelming fear.
'It's a bit weird that Spyro isn't by your side.' Cynder feared that Ember was on to her.
'....He... He's... resting.'
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#32 Posted: 18:48:13 30/06/2009
Plz continue.
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#33 Posted: 18:52:07 30/06/2009 | Topic Creator
'Really? Hadn't you two gone to see someone?'
'We... did, then'
'Alright, i get where you're coming from?'
'You do?!' She said woriedly.
'Yeah... He went on his own.'
'S..Sure..'
'What's wrong? it's like you seen a ghost.'
''m.... just.... just terribilly worried...'
'About what? Love? Family?....... Your not pregnant are you?'
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#34 Posted: 18:53:49 30/06/2009
Interesting.
Cynder_fan Gold Sparx Gems: 2683
#35 Posted: 18:55:16 30/06/2009 | Topic Creator
'No.. No.. no no...'
'Then what?'
'.....N....Nothing.' Cynder was slowly calming down.
'It's like you seen a ghost or killed someone.' Cynder, shocked, thought that Ember was on to her.
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#36 Posted: 18:59:00 30/06/2009
Being surprised and nervous will only make it more suspicious Cynder...Continue?
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#37 Posted: 19:01:26 30/06/2009 | Topic Creator
'It's like talking to a brick wall...' Ember looked around. 'I better be going.'
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#38 Posted: 19:05:07 30/06/2009
.....I have nothing to say.....
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#39 Posted: 19:07:09 30/06/2009 | Topic Creator
Ember started walking away. cynder turned round and made a sigh of relief. She looked around, thinking of where she would go.
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#40 Posted: 19:17:31 30/06/2009
Pregnant part made me laugh smilie
Continue.
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#41 Posted: 21:43:17 30/06/2009
Good-
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Life is too short to be taken seriously
Cynder_fan Gold Sparx Gems: 2683
#42 Posted: 22:57:16 30/06/2009 | Topic Creator
'At least she doesn't..' Cynder was cut of by screaming. Fear struck once more. Cynder thought about hiding, but where? She had no place to hide, and soon, everyone would know of her deadly sin.
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#43 Posted: 22:59:48 30/06/2009
I would already die of a heart attack if I'm Cynder.Continue please.
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#44 Posted: 23:02:24 30/06/2009 | Topic Creator
OOC: **** you're on? That's what i litterally said.

It was only a moment of time. Cynder looked down, but didn't see Ember. Maybe she had gone in the cave? She asked herself. Upon turning around she was proven wrong. Ember, with a mixed reaction, sad, anger and fear, stood in front of the scared female.
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#45 Posted: 23:04:19 30/06/2009
Mmm yes...I'm talking with Dh about Japanese animes,why?Something wrong?Anyway,more.
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#46 Posted: 23:06:04 30/06/2009 | Topic Creator
Nevermind....

'You murderer!! How could you?!!'
'It's not what you think!!"
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#47 Posted: 23:09:07 30/06/2009
Leaving thing?And post a bit more,I easily forget when it's short...yeah,weird me smilie
Cynder_fan Gold Sparx Gems: 2683
#48 Posted: 23:11:12 30/06/2009 | Topic Creator
'I know what you did! And so will everyone else!!'
'NO!! WAIT!!' Ember had already turned to run. Cynder then grabbed her and pulled her back.
'LET GO!!!'
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#49 Posted: 23:12:15 30/06/2009
...............Oh,now I understand.
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#50 Posted: 23:14:27 30/06/2009
wow. this is really good. please continue.
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep.
Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land.
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