Ok so this is a story where the original Spyro meets the Legend Spyro.This story is gonna be in the TLOS universe,it takes place a year after AHT and 6 months after DOTD.Hope you enjoy it
Chapter 1
A year has past since Original Spyro saved the dragon realms from the evil fallen dragon Red.It was another sunny day in the Dragon Realms,where a little hatchling is an easy target for the most hungry predators.The lion came closer from the bush,and suddenly....he ponced out of the bush and attacked the hatcling.
"HELP" cried the little hatchling
And then suddenly the lion was beat up by a dragon not just ant dragon but our very own Spyro The Dragon.
The little hatchling nuzzeld Spyro
"Your welcome little tiny dragon friend" said Spyro with a smile on his face
"Nice work Spyro you just saved that dragon's life" said Hunter proud of what Spyro did
"Big deal" said Spyro sadly
"what are you talking about you're a hero i wish i was you" said Hunter confused
"Since i defeated Red things got a little boring around here and saving people is kinda boring aswell" said Spyro walking away from Hunter "I was thinking giving someone else my job"
"Really can i have it...i mean don't be ridiciouls everyone loves you"said Hunter starting to get a little annoyed
"I don't have time to do other things in life, going to a beach that would colm my nervs"said Spyro dreaming about a nice beach with lots of food and....
"Come on if you like i can make you a schedule so you can have time to do more things"
"Hey guys what's that" said Sparx coming toward them
The three of them gazed at the helicopter that was coming near them.
A tall Mole came out of there with glasses an explorers outfith and a stick with binoculars.
"Good evening gentlemen my name is Sir Edmund The Third....my card
said the mole giving them his card."I am looking for gentlemen like yourselfs to be the first to use my universe teleporter"
"Why do we need to use it anyway" said Hunter a little confused
"I need you to use it to visit my ancestors in another universe diffrent from ours said the mole
"How can we visit your ancestors if they are already dead" shouted Spyro not liking the mole
"Hmm...you've got a point there...well bye" said the mole going to his helicopter when "Hold the phone,what don't you go explore the universe"
"Why should we listen to you,you're a j***" shouted Spyro starting to get annoyed
"If you go visit that universe you don't have to help people anymore you can just relax and enjoy your...."saying the mole was interupted
"I'm in" said Spyro going to the teleporter
"and for you two..." the mole was interupted again
"Dude we don't need anything we'll just go" said Hunter going to the teleporter.
"Perfect now just sit back relax and enjoy the ride"said the mole pressing buttons
For a second they were gone
Meanwhile in the LOS universe
It was a foggy night.A thunderstorm was coming to the meadow where Spyro and Cynder lived.Spyro was walking in the night alone looking for Cynder.
"Cynder....Cynder where are you" Spyro shouted hoping to find Cynder.
He searched for her,he started to get tired when suddenly he heard screaming.Spyro's eyes went wide he didn't know who was in danger but he decided to help him\her.He ran as fast as he could,when he came to a cliff near an explosive volcano.A helpless black creature was hanging for its life.Spyro came closer when he saw Cynder hanging for her life.
"Spyro help me" Cynder cried
"Hang on Cynder i'm coming"Spyro was shocked when he saw Cynder also scared.He tried to grab Cynder's paw.
"Cynder come on just a little closer..."Spyro was still struggling to grab Cynder ,when suddenly a black dragon was coming closer to him with his wide red eyes fulled with hate and malice.
"Gotcha,trust me" the black dragon shouted and grabed Spyro by the paw.Spyro didn't realize Cynder was sliping
"Spyro help me" Cynder shouted and suddenly she fell in the lava
"NOOOOO" Spyro cried,and then he turned to face the black dragon
"YOU" Spyro growled
And then the black creature changed it's shape it became smaller than Spyro it was a purple dragon.
"HAHAHAHHA" the purple dragon laughed at him
"What...another purple dra...."before Spyro could finish the purple dragon tossed Spyro into the lava when....
Suddenly Spyro woke up shocked.He saw the situation ,he couldn't see anything only Cynder and the forest.
"It was just a dream"Spyro smiled calming down and falling asleep.Little that he knew that unespected visitors came.
To be continued....
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#1 Posted: 19:38:16 27/06/2009 | Topic Creator
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#2 Posted: 20:42:34 27/06/2009
Very Good. Please write more
The very last scene sounded like it came from The Lion King 2
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#3 Posted: 21:47:56 27/06/2009
Woo! Please write more. I knew something like this was gonna show up.
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#4 Posted: 08:38:46 28/06/2009
nice!! write more!
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#5 Posted: 10:10:14 28/06/2009 | Topic Creator
Wow 3 readers already.And Solister yes the last scene is from Lion King 2.
Chapter 2 For a second the original Spyro and his friends safely landed.Spyro fell down. "Yea right safely look who's talking,ouch" spyro cried trying to get up "Where are we" Sparx asked a little confused of the place they were "RUN"screamed Hunter and running away from something Spyro and Sparx didn't realize the ThunderStorm and the boulders that were going right toward them "Yea what he said"Spyro shouted thinking of what Hunter said and started to run away Spyro looked for a safe place to hide when he saw a cave big enough for the three of them. "This way"Spyro said running to the cave The three of them went in the cave but the bolders blocked the exit of the cave.They were trapped,but they did have a place to sleep right? In the morning the Legend Spyro was standing on a cliff thinking of the nightmare he had. "Spyro" a voice called Spyro Spyro turned around only to see Cynder coming to the cliff. "Oh hi Cynder" Spyro said looking down the cliff "Are you alright" Cynder asked a little worried about Spyro's look on the face Spyro was wondering ...should he tell Cynder about the nightmare or about other problems. "Cynder i...i miss Ignitus" Spyro said not lying to her "I miss him too Spyro" Cynder said thinking about Ignitus "I miss Sparx aswell and the other guardians...and i miss home" Spyro said "What do you mean you are home" Cynder said worried but a little confused of Spyro's words "No i mean home home at the temple with Sparx and Ignitus and...." Spyro didn't want to finish the sentence "I understand Spyro" Cynder said sadly Meanwhile... The original Spyro and his friends blasted their way out "Where are we" Sparx asked still confused "We're in the Valley Of Avalar" Hunter said looking at a sign "Whoa how do you know that" Spyro asked confused "There's a sign"Hunter said pointing at the sign Spyro looked at it "We're 100 miles away from the Valley of Avalar empty head" Spyro corrected Hunter "I should have known"Spyro said "What" Hunter asked "That Mole send us to Dragon Shores a 100 miles away from the Valley" Spyro said "I'm confused" Sparx asked confusily "Don't you see he wanted us to have a vacation" Spyro said Happily "But i don't remember the Valley this way" Hunter said looking around "Look there's smoke" Sparx pointed "I guess we found a sign of civilazation this must be a tropical side" Spyro said "I'm not sure Spyro i mean sence when the Valley has Two Moons" Hunter asked "You probably haven't seen them...let's go"Spyro orderd as the three of them followed the smoke. Later the Legend Spyro saw the tracks and the budlozed cave.He put his paw on the tracks and they were a smaller version of his. "So Spyro what have you found" Cynder asked "I think there's another dragon smaller than me" Spyro said looking at the other tracks. "And look big cat tracks"Cynder said pointing at the other tracks"Maybe Hunter was here looking for us" Cynder said Hapily "I'm not sure but let's follow them,we're leaving Cynder now" Spyro ordered "Leaving?" Cynder asked "It's time to find Hunter and go back to the Dragon City Cynder if you don't want to come it's fine with me" Spyro said following the tracks "What are you talking about Spyro we're a team even without the chain i'm with you" Cynder said with a smile on her face "Well then let's go" Spyro said following the tracks of the unknown visitors To be continued.... |
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#6 Posted: 00:34:17 29/06/2009
cool!!
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#7 Posted: 08:00:38 29/06/2009
Yeah, I agree! I laughed at Orig.Spyro at the '100 miles from Avalar' thing!
And can you continue!?!
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#8 Posted: 10:15:35 29/06/2009 | Topic Creator
Wow now i have 4 readers ))))))))
Chapter 3 While Spyro and Cynder were following the tracks of the unknown visitors,Sparx was in Dragon City worring about Spyro was he alive or dead. "I wonder if Spyro is alive or dead" Sparx wonderd Sparx saw Terrador walking in the hall not noticing Sparx. "Hey Terrador" Sparx called "Can we go find Spyro beacuse i am sick and tired of waiting " Sparx shouted "Don't ever say the name of that purple whelp Spyro" Terrador shouted "Purple w....Excuse me"Sparx started to get angry "That little purple whelp betrayed us" Terrador shouted "Good thing i send an army to wipe out that purple whelp" "What he didn't betrayed us" Sparx started to correct Terrador "Really well if he didn't betrayed us why are there still evil forces wondering in the woods" "I don't know maybe they fell from the sky" Sparx made a joke "Don't play monkey with me kiddo, i want that small happy little purple dragon wiped out and forgotten forever" Terrador shouted "How could you say that if it weren't Spyro there weren't us" Sparx started to get angry "He saved the world" Terrador started to get really angry "Get out of here" Terrador shouted "What?" Sparx was confused and a little scared "I should have killed you months ago,get out of here we don't want you here" Terrador shouted and growled at Sparx "Fine i'll go then,but guess what i win,Spyro will be back and you will kiss his paws yes i win MA! Sparx shouted and ran out of the window "Why he shouldn't forget Spyro he is dead anyway" Terrador said to himself "Send the troops to follow Sparx he will lead us to Spyro,remember if you find Spyro just harm him and then bring him here,and kill Cynder and Sparx,burn down the cheetah villige if you encounter it they are on Spyro's side, move now!" Terrador orderd Meanwhile the original Spyro and his friends were still following the smoke. "I think we are lost" Sparx said "We are not lost dude there's the smoke come on" said Hunter Spyro was behind Hunter when suddenly he heard a voice "Avenge me" the voice said from the woods but Spyro ignored it "We'll camp here for the night"Spyro said poinitng at a cave they all went inside the cave and fell asleep except Spyro who was wondering of the voice he heard. Meanwhile Spyro and Cynder were tired and camped near a tree,Spyro was sad of Ignitus's death but he knew he had to move on and he fell asleep. The original Spyro was flyng in the night beacuse he couldn't sleep when he saw a glow in the woods but he ignored it. The Lgend Spyro woke up having the same nightmare and he walked up to a cliff. "I wasn't quick enough to save you Ignitus" Spyro said looking at the sky full of stars "But i promise i won't make the same mistake again" and then Spyro saw a dragon floating in the sky he wondered what it was when the dragon suddenly spat a fireball at Spyro,the dragon ran away,Spyro fell on the ground unconsious,Cynder suddenly woke up "Spyro are you OK" Cynder asked worried of Spyro "It's ok Cynder i guess i'm starting to halusnate" Spyro said But halusnation wasn't the problem Spyro didn't know that the dragon was actually the Future Dark Master To be continued.... |
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#9 Posted: 13:18:02 29/06/2009
More please! WOooo!
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#10 Posted: 22:08:03 29/06/2009
Iam confused. this story makes no sense whatsoever, no offense. iam outta here.
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Poppy Ripto Gems: 1021 |
#11 Posted: 06:06:17 30/06/2009
Hm... Not bad. This is the first Spyro fan fiction I've read.
And I like it. But... On the third chapter: Who spat the fire at who? I'm a tad confused on that part... Other than that... Keep the awesome stuff going! |
Dragongirl Blue Sparx Gems: 946 |
#12 Posted: 15:39:52 30/06/2009 | Topic Creator
To ignitusforever:
Well the story will start to make sence,but this is the beginning be a little patient. To Poppy: A dragon shot a fireball at the Legend Spyro,i'm not gonna say who that dragon is,read and you will see. Chapter 4 Sparx was still wondering in the woods not noticing the moles that were following him.He started to get tired when suddenly he came to the cheetah villiage. "Yes,yes finnaly a sign of civilazation,i gotta fing Hunter and tell him about Terrador's plan and then i will be famous....and i gotta stop talking to myself" Sparx said and he went toward the cheetah village The moles were standing in the forest. "Terrador said to burn down the cheetah villiage" the mole said "Well then let's go" said a mole running to the cheetah villiage "NO we'll attack at night so nobody will see us prepare the canons...move NOW" ordered the mole Meanwhile the original Spyro and his friends were closer to the smoke which they didn't know it was the chettah villiage. "I'm not so sure about this" said Spyro "Spyro it was your idea" said Hunter "Yea but what you said last night i don't think this is the real valley" said Spyro taking a few steps back "Well i'll climb this rock and see what is on the other side which we have been following" said Hunter starting to climb the rock "Wait Hunter i'm coming with you" said Sparx following Hunter Spyro went to the river when he heard that voice again "Avenge me" said the voice Spyro decided not to ignore the voice "Hello is anyone there" Spyro asked coming closer to the woods "Avenge me" said the voice again "Um...yeah i heard that,who are you" Spyro asked "I am the first Purple Dragon known as The Dark Master" the voice said "If your evil i don't wanna join you dude" said Spyro "Do you want infinite power" the voice asked Spyro "Listen i don't buy infinite power from guys like you" Spyro shouted "With this power you can become the Master of the world" the voice said "Um no thanks you're evil" Spyro said starting to get annoyed "You can help people you can stop people from dying you can have a better life" the voice said "Tell me more about this infinitive power" Spyro said but he was interupted "Hey Spyro come on let's go we lost day light " said Hunter Spyro had no other choice but to meet this dragon again.They were coming closer to the cheetah villiage when suddenly they fell in a trap "What a trap aaaaa man" said Spyro "HELP...HELP" screamed Hunter and the others "WHat was that"said the Legend Sparx "It came from over there" said the Legend Hunter following the voice "Spyro did you hear that" said Cynder "We gotta help him" the Legend Spyro said following the voice when following the trap they met up with Sparx and Hunter "Spyro?" said Hunter "Cynder"said Sparx "Sparx" said Spyro "Hunter" said Cynder "Um... can we get a little help here" said a voice from the trap For a miniute they came all out of the trap "What another purple dragon?" said the Legend Spyro confused The original Spyro and his friends looked at the Legend characters similar to them ,confused. "Am i dreaming" asked the original Spyro To be continued.... |
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#13 Posted: 17:44:35 30/06/2009
This, is pretty good. But remember to capitalize your "I"'s.
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#14 Posted: 20:47:45 30/06/2009
Ohhh....
I mistook for that "dragon" to be the original Spyro... Oh, well... Yay! Fourth chapter is up~ |
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#15 Posted: 00:40:59 01/07/2009
more plz
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#16 Posted: 07:22:19 01/07/2009
MORE!
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#17 Posted: 15:52:05 01/07/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter 5
After alot of explanation they all went back to the Cheetah villiage. "OK so let me get this straight,you guys are from another world and you guys do look like us,and we all have the same names except Cynder she isn't in your world right?"Legend Sparx tried to understand "Well....we do have Ember the pink dragon" said original Spyro "Who is Ember" asked Cynder "Ember...um...OK....she is the most awfull,grose dragon you will ever see" said Original Spyro "Come on how bad could she be?"Legend Spyro asked "You don't even know the half of her" said the Original Spyro "Spyro i've got alot of bad news for you" said Legend Hunter "What is it" aked Lgend Spyro "They are gonna treat you as an enemy" said Lgend Hunter "Who" asked Cynder "The Dragon City,Terrador,Volteer,Cyril everyone" said Legend Hunter "OOO now that's a bummer man" said Original Spyro listening to the story "They think you betrayed them living some of Malefor's forces alive" said Legend Hunter Then the original Spyro remeberd the voice he heard "And where is he now"asked the original Spyro "It says he is trapped in convexity but still he's soul wanders in the woods looking for he's next victim" said Legend Hunter The original Spyro couldn't listen anymore of this story "I'm gonna go for a walk" said Original Spyro he went to the river when he heard that voice again "Avenge me" said the voice "Will you shut up: shouted the original Spyro "I know everything about you you're Malefor a.k.a. The Dark Master this is your soul and now your looking for your next victim well you know what i was interested in this but you lied to me" "Yes i did Spyro but this world is in trouble you were brought here for a reason,to save it.And your destiny is to kill the other Spyro" said the voice "Are you insane i can't kill him he saved me" shouted the original Spyro "You don't know anything about him he betrayed his friends his home,you must kill him before he unleashes the darkness.There is darkness in his heart,and he even killed Ignitus" said the voice "Who is Ignitus?" asked the original Spyro "He was he's father-figure and he killed him in the belt of fire.You must kill Spyro.If you agree i will grant you some of my infinite power,there is room for one Spyro in this universe" said the voice "I will join you master" said the original Spyro Then Malefor granted him some of his infinite power which little that he knew it was darkness. "Good your first mission destroy the purple dragon,but not right now wait for the right time,don't tell anyone and you better kill your friends aswell they will betray you...Avenge me" said the voice "I WILL AVENGE YOU" said original Spyro and his eyes glowed dark red as he went back to the villiage.But when Spyro came back there was war,the moles attacked the villiage. "Burn down the houses,destroy them except the purple whelp Spyro" orderd the mole "Master what should id do" asked the original Spyro "Help them they will start to belive you and then you will lead them to a trap wait till they gain faith in you" said the voice which was in original Spyro's head. To be continued the next chapter will have some action..... |
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#18 Posted: 16:12:26 01/07/2009
I like it.
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#19 Posted: 19:20:58 01/07/2009
Still not capitalizing your "I"'s
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#20 Posted: 20:32:39 01/07/2009
Wow.
Can't wait for the next part. x3 |
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#21 Posted: 16:01:31 02/07/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter 6
As the moles attacked the cheetah villige war started.L. Spyro breathed fire on them to keep them away from the houses.He noticed moles were attacking him from behind and he wacked them with his tail.Cynder used shadow to snick up on them and attack him but suddenly the moles attacked her when she used her wind tornado. "Whoa she's good" said O. Spyro inspired by Cynder's fighting The two Saprx were hiding "What do we do" asked the O. Sparx "Well my trusty sidekick when the going gets tough the tuff gets going that's our moto" said L. Sparx "Wait sence when am I your sidekick and sence when we have a moto,I met you 15 miniutes ago" shouted the O. Sparx "Your my sidekick beacuse I have better graphics" said the L. Sparx The O. SParx was confused "I'm gust kiddin ya" said the L. Sparx "Now let's attack" The two Sparx flew to a mole but he wacked them with Fire "AAAHHHH like I said let's get going" shouted the L. SParx as the two of them ran away...again. The O. Hunter fought the moles,when one of them wacked him on the ground ready to kill him,when the L. Hunter shot and arrow at the mole. "Thanks man" said O. Hunter The O. Spyro saw them all fighting when a mole with a sword hit his eye.The L. Spyro saw the other Spyro helpless "NO" L. Spyro shouted and he breathed Fire on the moles which were attacking him and he ran over to the mole which was attacking O. Spyro.O. Spyro stood up and he felt some liquid in his eye,it was blood.O.Spyro felt great anger and hate he's eyes went dark red and he breathed darkness at the moles,he killed them for a second showing no merci and then he did a dark fury which killed all the moles.When the fight was over the O. Spyro saw a mole running away struggling for survivel and then O. Spyro ran to attack him. "Spyro don't" shouted the L. Spyro as he ran and he pinned the O. Spyro on the ground.The mole ran away "You will pay for this Spyro,if Ignitus saw this he would have never forgiven you" shouted the mole at the O. Spyro by mistake and then he ran away "What's the matter with you calm down" shouted Cynder "Spyro what were you thinking" shouted the L. Spyro "Um...Spyro there's a scar on your face" said O. Sparx "Yeah and your wings are torn" said the L. Spyro :We should take him to the Dragon City for medical help and explain to them that your not an enemy" said L. Hunter "And then we'll find a way to take you back to your universe "Hunter you should stay here" Cynder "No...the cheetah villiage has burned up there's nothing left my only choice is to come with you" said L. Hunter sadly "Well then let's go another epic adventure with me and Spyro and Cynder and..um... you guys" said L. Sparx "SO now it's Cynder" said Cynder "Well yea remember our last adventure right?" said Sparx "Hey Sparx what's epic" asked the O. Sparx "I have so much to teach you my padawan" said SParx as they all went to the Dragon City But the O. Spyro still had a quest to destroy L. Spyro To be continued... |
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#22 Posted: 19:09:45 02/07/2009
Getting better all the time.
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#23 Posted: 20:38:07 02/07/2009
Goodness.
That was so cool. |
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#24 Posted: 03:38:26 06/07/2009
Sorry I'm late! IT's good! Why not get Ember into the picture?!?
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#25 Posted: 15:56:07 06/07/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter 7
While L. and O. Spyro and their friends were going to the Dragon City back at the Dragon Realms Ember had problems of her own. "Did you hear me what i said WE HAVE TO GO LOOK FOR SPYRO" Ember said angrily to the Elders "But...but Ember theres no trace of him,it's impossible to find him" said Tomas trying to explain to Ember "I DON'T CARE WE HAVE TO FIND HIM NOW" shouted Ember "Ember will you give up Spyro's gone move on shhesss" said Flame "GRRR OUT OF MY WAY" shouted Ember pushing him out of the way,she went outside thinking of Spyro "Oh Spyro where are you i just know your thinking of me" Back at the Legend Universe the Dragons were camping while the two Hunters were on sentry duty "So let me get this straight you've been hiding of Ember, your girlfriend" said Cynder ready to laugh "For the last time Cynder she is not my girlfriend,grrrrr Sparx tell'em" said O. Spyro "She's not?" O. Sparx asked "GRRRRRRR.....Hunter tell'em" O. Spyro said "She's not" O. Hunter asked "AAAAAAA....." O. Spyro shouted with anger "I'm going to the river" "Sooo what abilites does he possess" L. Spyro asked O. Sparx "Well you know...Fire,Ice,Electricity,Water..." said O. Sparx "Water?... sounds like a dum element to me" said L. Sparx "Well...it's...um...it isn't....yeah,yeah it *****" said O. Sparx "But that element back at the Cheetah Villiage,that doesn't sound like those other elements,it sounds more like Darkness" said L. Spyro O. Sparx was a little scared so was O. Hunter "Spyro maybe it wasn't Darkness what are you talking about maybe it was...Convexity" Cynder said trying to change the situation "But..but..those ripped Wings that Scar that attidute does he normally look like that" L. Spyro asked "Um... no,no not really he's usually happy,but to tell you sence we came to this univerese he was acting kinda wierd" O. Sparx said "I'm so confused" said L. Spyro "Good news the Dragon City isn't far away let's go" said L. Hunter Meanwhile O. Spyro was looking at the river at his reflection he knew the changes aswell "What has happend to me,i'm a monster" said O. Spyro looking at his reflection when suddenly his reflection changed to Malefors,Spyro backed away but he heard that voice again "Spyro your becoming stronger by the miniute you know your destiny" said the voice Spyro knew what he had to do to destroy L. Spyro "Spyro let's go" shouted O. Hunter Back at the Dragon City the mole that survived informed them about everything and he told'em that he saw two purple dragons.When all of it was over Terrador went back to his chamber "Um Terrador aren't you gonna do something about those two purple dragons" said Cyril "Forget that, that mole has probably brain damage forget it" shouted Terrador "But why are you treating Spyro as an enemy,he saved us" said Cyril "Are you on his side or mine" Terrador asked "Um on you side" said Cyril "Good now MOVE" ordered Terrador Cyril knew that Terrador did the biggest mistake in his life and that was treating Spyro as an enemy To be Continued.... |
dragonlover Yellow Sparx Gems: 1122 |
#26 Posted: 01:46:35 07/07/2009
nice! plz write more!
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#27 Posted: 04:45:42 07/07/2009
Oh, wow...
I actually saw the whole images in my head. :3 I think the way I imagined the original Spyro looks cool(while he's in darkness)... Makes me wanna draw him. >w< Can I show it to you when i'm done, Dragongirl? |
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#28 Posted: 15:43:50 07/07/2009 | Topic Creator
Yeah sure
Chapter 8 They were coming closer to the Dragon City and they took a break.L. Spyro was drinking water from the river when he saw Cynder. "Hey Cynder what's up"L. Spyro said friendly "Oh hi Spyro" Cynder said "We haven't talked in a while sience we met Spyro"L. Spyro said "Yeah i haven't really noticed much,time shore flies when your having fun" Cynder said "Well i'm a little scared,about how the situation will be in the Dragon City when we are going to get there" L. Spyro said "Well we'll explain everything to them" Cynder said "Yeah but what will they say about Spyro" L. Spyro said "I don't know that's what i'm afraid of" Cynder said a little scared "well see ya" "Yea see ya too Cynder"L. Spyro said turning around sadly but still looking at Cynder going back to the others,when he continued he bumped into O. Spyro "Oh hi dude" O. Spyro greeted him "Hi Spyro" L. Spyro said sadly "What's wrong" asked O. Spyro "Cynder" L. Spyro said "Why do you love her" O. Spyro said "Yes i do but i have never told her,and i noticed her beeing sad" said L. Spyro"Maybe there's someone at your home thinking of you Spyro worring if your OK" "Well i think it's Ember but i don't like her so why should i worry" said O. Spyro "Well thats not very nice she's so worried and you don't care,what if you died what if she died of a heart break" said L. Spyro "Now her heart is broken and you don't care "Well she sometimes tells me mi corazon" said O. Spyro "You mean my heart" said L. Spyro "I...I never even gave her a chance" said O. Spyro sadly "But that doesn't matter right now what does matter is getting to the Dragon City by nightfall and get you checked ,your ripped wings and your scar" said L. Spyro "Your a nice guy Spyro ,i wish i was like you free and happy everyday but...my life has too much sadness" O. Spyro looked to the ground after hearing those words "I'm so sorry Spyro" said O. Spyro L. Spyro went away,meanwhile Cynder,the two Sparx and L. Hunter were at the forest.Cynder was really sad,L.Hunter noticed that "What's wrong Cynder" L. Hunter asked "Hm...oh nothing,it's just Spyro" said Cynder "Spyro my buddy" said L. Sparx "I know that Spyro's your buddy Sparx but i see him being sad this time" Cynder said sadly "What?" L.Sparx shouted "Um Sparx why don't you go leave us a little alone" L. Hunter said "Yes your great yellowness" said L. Sparx as the two of them went away "OK Cynder what's wrong" Hunter asked "I've noticed that Spyro hasn't even once mentioned that he loves me...has he" Cynder asked "Well he...um...no he didn't" Hunter said sadly Cynder went away sadly,Hunter saw her but he ignored that and they continued their journey,but O. Spyro was still at the river alone,thinking of L. Spyro's words everything he told'em.And then he started to think that the voice was lying to him about killing Ignitus and that other stuff.He uncoverd he's sadness and he didn't want to destroy him but.... "How is my student doing" said the voice in his head "GET OUT OF MY HEAD" O. Spyro shouted "I'M NOT GONNA MAKE THE BIGGEST MISTAKE IN MY LIFE" "YOU CAN"T LEAVE ME NOW,YOU PROMISED" the voice shouted in his head "DON"T YOU KNOW THAT THEIR OTHERS WHO ARE LOKKING FOR HIM TO KILL HIM" "There are?" O. Spyro asked "I don't care GET OUT...AHHHHHHH" O. Spyro shouted in pain " What...what are you doing to me i can't ...." before O. Spyro could finish he turned black,black as gold his wings became dark red and torn,the scar became purple and glowly,his horns became like Malefor's his eyes Dark Purple fulled with hate. "Now that i have control of you i will finish the task myself,and i'll probably gain control of the other Spyro's body beacuse your a worthless waste of flesh anyway" said the voice which was now Spyro,but the good Spyro was now trapped finding a way to get out,but then he came back to his original form not remebering anything. "You know your destiny" said the voice The O. Spyro had no other choice but to listen to him,not wanting to kill the other Spyro and his friends,now he knew the darkness and sadness,there was no going back to the light that faded away. "Now your not Spyro anymore your name is now Chaos" said the voice "Yes master" siad O. Spyro having no other choice but to be named that way "Soon you'll beacome ruller of this world" said the voice "Spyro let's go" shouted Cynder from far away O. Spyro went not knowing the cruel and bad things he was gonna do. To be continued.... |
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#29 Posted: 21:19:55 07/07/2009
It makes sence now, but I still don't like it.
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#30 Posted: 21:37:55 07/07/2009
OMG! There was a BHC scene in there!
Except instead of a girl saying it, it was a boy. :3 |
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#31 Posted: 16:36:46 08/07/2009 | Topic Creator
To ignitusforever: Don't like it don't come here please
Chapter 9 Back at the Dragon Realms Ember was at her house still thinking about Spyro,Flame was watching her from the window "If i don't find Spyro her heart will be broken" said Flame "Get your No more Spyro souvenirs,only for 50 gems" shouted Moneybags "Hey maybe you should shut up" shouted Flame angrily at Moneybags "What he always spat fire at me" said Moneybags "And is that the way you should behave now,we've got another problem here" said Flame Moneybags looked at her "I can help you for 50 gems" said Moneybags,but Flame slapped him "OK how about 30 gems" Flame slapped him again "OK 20 gems" Flame prepared to slap him but Moneybags ran away Back at the Legend Universe The two Spyro's were getting along fine,and they became friends but O. Spyro was still trying to stay away from the other Spyro so he doesn't make a mistake,L. Spyro even trough they were friends O. Spyro was still very odd to him.And the other L. characters gained faith in O. Spyro,little that they knew that O. Spyro prepared an ambush for them in the Dragon City,where some of Malefor's forces were still alive,but the citizens didn't know that.O. Spyro was still thinking,should he tell them and get corrupted,should he don't tell and they get killed,or should he ran away and so he made his final disicion to tell'em. "Sorry Malefor but your goin down" said O. Spyro to himself quietly When they were infront of the Dragon City's main gates,the moles and Terrador were watching them "Sir should we attack" asked a mole who was standing next to Terrador "No let them in will only attack Spyro" ordered Terrador "But which one is it" asked the mole "Hmmm....whoever you will catch" ordered Terrador "Terrador this is enough you've gone too far" said a voice Terrador turned around when he saw Volteer and Cyril "What do you want" asked Terrador angrily "This is enough Terrador you can't attack Spyro,Ignitus wouldn't do this" said Cyril "Don't say that name again,or is straight for the dungeon" said Terrador angrily "You have no right to enslave us,kill us,torcher us,burn us...and..um?" said Volteer fastly "Oh yeah take them away" ordered Terrador as moles and dragons came from everywhere,they pinned Volteer down "You have no right to do this" shouted Cyril angrily as he flew fastly to breath ice on Terrador,when a mole trew a sword at Cyril and heart his arm,he fell down and right infront of Terrador, "The Elders thought you well Cyril,but they didn't teach you everything" said Terrador as he attacked him with his claws "Take them to the dungeon" The two Spyro's and their friends were still standing at the main gates,when they suddenly opened and nowone was standing at the gates "Something is not right" said L. Spyro looking at the gates "Be careful" They all went in the city nobody was at the streets there was no voice,nothing "Stay here i'll see if i can find someone" said L. Hunter "Wait dude i'm coming with you" said O. Hunter The two Hunters went deep in the city when they heard voices "What was that" asked O. Hunter When a group of moles attacked them,they fought the moles,when Terrador jumped from very high and turned into a earth ball and attacked them,the two Hunters lay on the ground unconsious. 30 miniutes later The two Spyro's,Sparx's and Cynder were still waiting for the two Hunters. "Where are they" asked L.Spyro a little worried "Do you think they're in trouble" asked Cynder "No...but we should go and find them" said L. Spyro "We are coming with you" said O. Spyro "No you stay here incase they come back" said L. Spyro as he and Cynder flew away to find'em. "Should we follow them" asked O. Sparx "No...that's my buddy Spyro he'll come back...right?" asked L. Sparx "We can't just stay here come on let's try to find someone" said O. Spyro "Sure lead the way great miniature Spyro" said L. Sparx "Who you calling a miniature glowly" shouted O. Spyro While they were arguing and while O. Sparx was trying to calm them down,the moles were ready to attack'em. "OK let's attack" ordered a mole "Yes but are you shore that,that is the real Spyro" asked another mole "Yes now let's go" ordered a mole They attacked O. Spyro and the two Sparx,O. Spyro fough them he breathed fire on'em but there were too much,the moles pinned them down and they took'em to the dungeon. To be continued... |
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#32 Posted: 16:53:51 08/07/2009
No! Not Volteer and Cyril! Dx
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#33 Posted: 01:37:24 09/07/2009
TERRADOR HAS GONE NUTS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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#34 Posted: 20:21:39 12/07/2009 | Topic Creator
Sorry for having you guys wait so long,i didn't have time to write yesterday beacuse i was at my cousins house.
Chapter 10 L. Spyro and Cynder were still walking the streets in Warfang,they were starting to get scared,there was no voice. Back at the dungeon O. Spyro was locked in a cage,the two Sparx in a small cage and the two Hunters chaned up.Terrador was entering the dungeon. "Well,well,well if it isn't the purple meanece.Finally we meet again,beacuse of the amount of trouble you managed to cause" said Terrador angrily "Terrador for the last time that isn't the real Spyro" shouted L. Hunter "Shut him up" ordered Terrador angrily The moles hit him with their swords. "Dude i can't belive you captured your own friends aswell...i mean...i just.....dude you ****" shouted O. Hunter but the moles hit him aswell. "Terrador gramps that isn't Spyro,Spyro isn't that small and look at him,the horns the wings everything,my buddy the real Spyro is out there and he'll come here and kick you butt" said L.Sparx "Quiet bug,you can't tell me what to do,and you will suffer for leaving without premission" shouted Terrador "Oooooo i'm so scared" said L. Sparx "Take him away,throw him in the volcano hahahha...Malefors ruined Lair,and also take the other Sparx away" ordered Terrador "Sparx nooo" shouted O. Spyro "That's OK Spyro i'll be alright" said O. Sparx "But you can't leave me now,we've been threw alot togheter,Sparx don't go" O. Spyro cried "That's OK Spyro i may haven't been the strongest,smartest sidekick a hero to have,but i admire you for you cariness and braveness" said O. Sparx so serious "Sparx no don't go please..." cried O. Spyro,the moles started to carry them away "Sparx no please...Sparx" Spyro said i final farewell to Sparx "Goodbye buddy" said O. Hunter "Take the two cats away aswell" ordered Terrador "Hey who are you calling a cat you big bug eyed freak" shouted O. Hunter "Hunter not you too" cried O. Spyro "We've been a good team Spyro a good team" said O. Hunter Terrador came close to L. Hunter and he weaspered "It was a great pleasure to destroy your home Hunter and also you" whispered Terrador "You monster,i will never forgive you for what you did,never" shouted Hunter "So Spyro you lost everything are you ready to meet your doom" said Terrador "Not excacly everything" said O. Spyro "Spyro,we'll destroy your friends and also your universe,and we will destroy Spyro and Cynder" said Terrador O. Spyro's eyes were wide "WHAT YOU KNEW I WASN'T THE REAL SPYRO" shouted original Spyro "Yes and when we find them will make them cry for mercy" said Terrador O. Spyro's eyes went completely wide and then they turned white,he's body beacame black,he's horns like Malefors,his wings dark red,he broke out of the cave and killed all the moles,he breathed Darkness at them and then he blasted out of the dungeon and went in the sky,then suddenly he turned into a big purple ball and he opened a portal which sereved as Malefor's prison "Yes the infinite power will be mine" shouted O. Spyro which was now Chaos Meanwhile Spyro and Cynder were still searching when they saw moles caring the two Hunters and Sparx. "What..where are they taking them?" L. Spyro asked "I don't know but we gotta help'em" ordered Cynder "But they are citizens" said L. Spyro "No they aren't Spyro they're evil,now come on let's go" said Cynder The two of them attacked the moles and when the fight was over the y freed them. "I'm free,victory feals so good" said L. Sparx "Spyro they want to kill Spyro they think him is you" said L. Hunter "What we gotta tell them the truth" said L. Spyro "Well i tried to explain about the tiny legs and stuff" said L. Sparx. Then suddenly they saw the purple ball which was opening a portal "What is that Spyro" asked O. Hunter "Oh no he's opening the portal to convexity" shouted L. Spyro " i gotta stop him L. Spyro jumped on high buildings and then he flew to the ball,he used convexity dash. "Finnaly the infinite power is ma...." before Chaos could finish L. Spyro pinned him to the ground with his convexity dash.O. Spyro came back to his original form. "Spyro what were you thinking,freeing Malefor,is that what you have been planing all long" shouted L. Spyro "Spyro...what are you doing here....oh no...what have i done" shouted O. Spyro "Beacuse of me all my friends are dead" "Spyro they're not dead they're alive please explain to me what happend" asked L. Spyro "Oh no i'm a monster i gotta get out of here,please don't follow me,beacuse i'm the ugliest purple dragon you've ever seen,being Spyro the lame is alot easier" said O. Spyro and he flew away into the mountines "Spyro wait please don't....leave" L. Spyro cried and he went back to the Dragon City.The O. Spyro was woundering should he go back but he made a choice. "I should have never heard that voice" shouted O.Spyro angrily "Spyro go back destroy everyone it's your destiny" said the voice "You know what leave me alone,you know why you stink" shouted O. Spyro,when suddenly he beacame Chaos again "If you don't kill them i'll do it myself" said Chaos as he flew back to the Dragon City To be continued... |
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#35 Posted: 20:32:20 12/07/2009
D'aw... Poor original Spyro. D:
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#36 Posted: 15:41:45 13/07/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter 11
Chaos flew back to the Dragon City he wasn't far away.L. Spyro went back to the Dragon City and he told'em everything. "What Spyro he can't be evil" said O. Hunter "He is, he's gonna come back and destroy everything we've got to get all the citizens away from the Dragon City as quick as possible" said L. Spyro "I sertanly agree with you Spyro,he could cause so much destruction" said L. Hunter "Why should we help them they tried to burn us down" said O. Sparx "We need to, they're innocent we can't let'em die this way" said Cynder "I most sertanly agree with you we need to warn them now" said a voice They all turned around to see Cyril and Volteer coming out. "Cyril,Volteer you're alive" said L. Spyro "Well of course young chap,down there was so scary,creepy,dirty,dark...um...ehh" said Volteer fastly "Volteer gramps just stay out of this" said L. Sparx "All of you get everyone out of the City" ordered L. Spyro "What about you Spyro?" Cynder asked worridly "I will fight him, i will hold him long enough for everyone to escape" said L. Spyro sadly "What you mean will never see you again" said L. Sparx "Yes Sparx i'm sorry but will see eachother in another world" said L. Spyro as he went to the Cities main gates to confront Chaos "I'm coming with you" said Cynder "We may have beaten Malefor togheter Cynder,but this time we're not chained up" said L. Spyro "Be careful" said Cynder sadly L. Spyro went away and for a moment he was gone. There was panic in the City all the moles running away from the Cities back gates. Meanwhile L. Spyro was waiting for Chaos and as tunder striked he was right infront of him. "Hello purple whelp" said Chaos "Spyro i'm not gonna fight you,let him go Malefor" said L. Spyro "Hahahaha.....that name doesn't excist in my life anymore,I AM CHAOS" shouted Chaos "I don't want to do this Chaos but bring it" said L. Spyro Chaos turned around and then as fast as possible he hit him to the wall,L. Spyro got up and then the fight started the two of them ran toward each other and started to fight. CYnder was about to leave the City back gates when she heard L. Spyro in her head.He was in trouble.Cynder as quick as possible flew to the main gates. "Cynder...CYNDER!" shouted L. Hunter "Oh no she went back for Spyro she's gonna get herself killed...hey where are you going?" shouted L. Sparx as he followed L. Hunter to catch up with Cynder.O.Sparx and Hunter followed them aswell.The fight had started...... To be continued.... |
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#37 Posted: 08:36:18 15/09/2009
I know I'm bumping a very old topic. And I'm very sorry for doing so....
I just wanted to say that your story is very interesting and I would like you to wright more. |
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#38 Posted: 18:31:43 15/09/2009 | Topic Creator
I'll write tommorow i promise
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#39 Posted: 19:18:20 15/09/2009
I just read those 11 chapters and I didn't expect this outcome. This is very good
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#40 Posted: 08:43:54 16/09/2009
Even though the story made little sense at the start, I do get whats going on now. And I think it's quit a good story line. A tinny bit predictable in some parts like Malefor coming back, but other then that, it's good!
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#41 Posted: 20:00:11 16/09/2009 | Topic Creator
I'm sorry guys i can't write today school is killin' me. The teachers give too much homework. If i wrote something it wouldn't make any sence. That's why tommorow i'll write two chapters.
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#42 Posted: 20:41:28 16/09/2009
OK, I can wait
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#43 Posted: 11:55:07 17/09/2009 | Topic Creator
OK here it is
Chapter 12 Spyro and Chaos were still fighting. Spyro used his earth element and for a second he turned into a giant earth ball. He bounced onto the trees and the cities walls. "What the..." before Chaos could finish Spyro's earth ball hit Chaos and he hit a tree. " You shouldn't waste your strenght on me dragon, you should save it for Malefor" Chaos said with a smile on his face "You won't get away with this Chaos, Malefor is inprisoned there is nothing you can do" said Spyro "Look up" said Chaos Spyro looked and he can see that a portal was openning which surved as Malefor's prison. "No....what have you done" Spyro shouted "I did what's right" shouted Chaos he used convexity but before he can hit Spyro, Cynder used her Wind breath. "Cynder? What are you doing here you should be leaving the Dragon City?" Spyro asked "I can't live you Spyro i'm with you with or without the chain" said Cynder "Looks like we get to take two dragons at once HAHAHHA, i will enjoy this " Chaos said with a evil smile on his face. "Give up Chaos it's two against one your unmatched" shouted Spyro "I don't think so" said a voice Spyro and Cynder turned around only to see Terrador. "Terrador what are you talking about?" said Cynder "When you and Spyro defeated Malefor he was inprisoned in Convexity once again.But one dragon that surved Malefor vanished long ago a dragon that learned that surving darkness was he's destiny.He had the power to awake ancient creatures like the Golem and the Destroyer, oh he wanted to free his master after you whelps defeated him. He used a crystal to free him again but the only way for Malefor to earn his body again was to corrupt another dragon.And Malefor was cursed to live his life in the form of an earth guardian. But now thanks to that dragon that curse is lifted" said Terrador. Suddenly dark magic came out of the portal which surrounded Terrador he's eyes went dark purple, then Terrador suddenly ripped his horns off and then new horns started to grow like Malefor's his wings went dark purple, the magic turned his skin purple, and suddenly Malefor was reborn and he opened his eyes fulled with hate. "Malefor was never the one that corrupted Spyro but it was the black dragon Chaos Malefor's servant" said Cynder. "Chaos, child thank you. You have freed me from this terrible form and now you will be my future king" said Malefor "you may now free that soul. Suddenly Chaos vanished and all that was left was O. Spyro. "Spyro are you OK" Cynder asked worridly "Oh my head what happend..." O. Spyro said "Long story right now we need your help to defeat Malefor" said L. Spyro "Wait... it's all comming back to me... i have surved Malefor" O. Spyro looked down "I'm sorry guys" O. Spyro said sadly "It's not your falt Spyro" Cynder said "but let's apologize later we have work to do" L. Spyro, Cynder and O. Spyro turned around to fase Malefor.Suddenly a giant convexity ball was going right for them. "Look out" shouted O. Spyro as the three of them dodged the ball. The convexity ball hit the ground "Today you will meet your doom Spyro" said a voice that was coming from the crash. To be continued.... |
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#44 Posted: 12:27:20 17/09/2009 | Topic Creator
Here is the next chapter
Chapter 13 The two Hunters and Sparx made it to Spyro and Cynder. "Spyro buddy we finnaly found you and M...M...Malefor" L. Sparx said "Malefor has returned" said L. Hunter "So that's Malefor hm... Red is scarier" said O. Hunter "What are you doing here you should have left the Dragon City" said L. Spyro. "You are gonna be the one that is gonna leave this world Spyro..." the voice said, and for a second it attacked L. Spyro, he bited him on the neck. L. Spyro started bleeding but Cynder pinned the dragon down. When she could finnaly see who the dragon was, her eyes went wide. It was a male black dragon that was a few years older than Cynder he had the same horns as Cynder but a little bigger and sharper. He had the same markings as Cynder and a tale like Malefor's. He had a dark purple belly and his wings were dark purple aswell. He had a scar on his left eye which was really big. His wings were ripped and he had a few scratches and scars on his body. He had a silver armor on his legs tail, neck and wings. Cynder backed away a little. Chaos got a up and took a look at Cynder and he was suprised aswell. "Do i know you?" Cynder asked "You don't know me but i know you" said Chaos "Drake!" Cynder said "Who is Drake?" O. Spyro asked " Do you know him Cynder?" "Drake was a dragon that excisted a long time ago" said Chaos " I am now Chaos" Cynder sighed and she lured her head. "Cynder what's wrong?" L. Spyro asked "Chaos is my...my brother!" Cynder said L. Spyro gasped "Ha i knew it i knew it everyone in her family is evil i just know it Spyro back off she's dangerous" shouted L. Sparx "Shut up" shouted Malefor angrily and he hit L. Sparx with his tail to the wall. "Sparx!" L. Spyro shouted "Quiet! Cynder, Malefor and I give you one last chance to return to the darkness" Chaos said "I can't belive it I have a brother" Cynder said "Little sister we must teach the other dragons a lesson.Come and we shall rule the world together" Chaos said "You...you called me sister" Cynder said in suprise "Come Cynder i will teach you what it means to be a black dragon" said Chaos Cynder started to walk toward Chaos. "Cynder stop" L. Spyro stood infront of Cynder blocking her way "Cynder don't do this don't make the same mistake again" "Spyro I am not alone" said Cynder "Cynder i can't let you do this..." before L. Spyro could finish Chaos used his convexity and he hit L. Spyro To be continued..... |
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#45 Posted: 12:27:53 17/09/2009 | Topic Creator
There you go two chapters just like i promised enjoy
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#46 Posted: 15:32:01 17/09/2009
Oh eck. so much tension
This is very good
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#47 Posted: 16:06:10 19/09/2009 | Topic Creator
Here is Chapter 14 and if you wanna know Chaos has Fire, fear, shadow and convexity.
Chapter 14 Chaos hit L. Spyro, and then he hit the wall. "Spyro!" Cynder cried "Come Cynder forget that purple dragon, you know your true destiny" said Chaos "If... if it wasn't for Spyro i would have trusted you and lost my soul to the darkness, he's my real brother!" Cynder said and breathed poison at Chaos but he flew into the air. "Bad choice Cynder" Chaos said hovering in the air and then he flew right at Cynder and breathed Fire. Cynder dogded his attack and she flew into the air and breathed Fear at Chaos. "Arrghhh.....lucky shot" said Chaos L. Spyro woke up and he ran to help Cynder fight Chaos but suddenly Malefor hit him with his tail. "Your fighting me dragon, and let's make this fast your wasting my time" said Malefor "Bring it" said L. Spyro Malefor flew high and he breathed convexity at L. Spyro. L. Spyro dogded the attack and he breathed convexity at Malefor, the convexity hit Malefor but nothing happend to him. "What?" said L. Spyro "Like i said i'm stronger than ever thanks to Chaos's crystal. "Crystal?" said L. Spyro. The crystal on Chaos drew L. Spyro's attention, he didn't notice the convexity that was going right at him.The convexity hit L. Spyro. Meanwhile Cynder and Chaos were still fighting. From Chaos's attacks Cynder was left with scratches. She wasn't strong enough to defeat Chaos. "Chaos.... why are you doing this we don't have to fight. Don't you see Malefor is using you" Cynder cried "What do you know Malefor gives me anything i want" said Chaos as he breathed Convexity at Cynder. Nothing stopped him not even Cynder's convexity. "Chaos please.... stop...this isn't your true destiny, you made a mistake but you can fix it" Cynder cried "Shut up" Chaos breathed convexity and Cynder hit the ground. Cynder laid down the ground not moving but still alive, bleeding.. Chaos glided down near Cynder. It was clear Chaos was victorious. "I did what is right, even tough i am your brother, but that doesn't matter you betrayed my master" said Chaos as he left Cynder alone. Meanwhile L. Spyro was still fighting Malefor. Spyro bited Malefor on the neck but that didn't weaken him. L. Spyro breathed convexity on Malefor he did everything he can to weaken Malefor but it didn't work. "Are you finished?" Malefor asked L. Spyro didn't say anything. Then L. Spyro with full speed flew right at Malefor turning into a huge convexity ball. But that didn't scare Malefor he used his full convexity power at L. Spyro. L. Spyro was hit the convexity ball didn't touch Malefor. Spyro hit the ground, he landed near Cynder bleeding aswell. Cynder opened her eyes. "Spyro?.....is this the end" Cynder said sadly "I'm afraid it is Cynder......i have failed....." said L. Spyro sadly "Spyro.... you have been my royal savior and my closest friend and for that.... i thank you" said Cynder almost ready to let the tears out. L. Spyro just nodded and then he closed his eyes. L. Spyro was dead. Cynder could hardly breath but did not cry beacuse she was gonna see him for a short time..... |
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#48 Posted: 18:26:48 19/09/2009
Spyro is dead!? D': Awesome story, by the way!
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#49 Posted: 19:48:50 19/09/2009
Oh No! L. Spyro is dead D:
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#50 Posted: 20:49:32 19/09/2009 | Topic Creator
The story isn't over there will be more chapters
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