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bionicle2809 Diamond Sparx Gems: 8438
#1 Posted: 01:27:24 10/05/2009 | Topic Creator
Basicly, this is set in between the gap of the first cutscene of ANB and when the game actualy starts. I was doing this from Cynder's point of view at one point but then I decided not to. Now this is gonna be like... From both sides point of view... Like sometimes its the Dragons another time its the Apes... Anyway... So Im gonna do my famious... Character guide smilie

Hero's

Pyrhus
The guardian of Fire. Pyrhus taught Ignitus when he was a child and is now the only remaining guardian from when Ignitus was young. The other four guardians died before him. However, Pyrhus faught in the war against the Dark Master.

Ignitus
Guardian in training. Was trained by Pyrhus as a child. He is the oldest out of Terrador, Cyril and Volteer but the last to become a guardian. He has the ability to see visions, a rear ability that is commonly known to be the ability of a Dragon who is destined to be the Chronicler,

Terrador
The Earth guardian. Ignitus, Cyril and Volteers freind. Second youngest of the 4 guardians (including Ignitus).

Cyril
The Ice guardian. Ignitus, Terrador and Volteer's freind. Youngest of the 4 guardians (including Ignitus)

Volteer
The Electricity guardian. Ignitus, Terrador and Cyrils freind. Second oldest of the 4 guardains (including Ignitus)

Villans

Cynder
A tall black Dragon taken from the Dragon temple as an egg by Gaul, the ape king. She was corruped by Gaul and the Dark Master from birth and trained in the ways of the darkness. She is third in command, Gaul being second and the Dark Master being first.

Gaul, the Ape King
Gaul is a large ape in armour. He was found by the Dark Master when he was younger and trained to build an army of apes. He is second in command, the Dark Master being first.

The Dark Master (Malefor)
It is unknown if he was born evil or was corrupted by an even greater evil, the Dark Master (Malefor) is the leader of the army of apes. He started the war between Dragons when they refused to go by his demands and free him from Convexity.

Thats just about it smilie... I'll write the first chapter soon
darkdragon3809 Gold Sparx Gems: 2264
#2 Posted: 17:30:35 10/05/2009
Awesome, I've also done s tory similiar to that, Life before A New Beginning.
bionicle2809 Diamond Sparx Gems: 8438
#3 Posted: 17:31:21 10/05/2009 | Topic Creator
Quote: darkdragon3809
Awesome, I've also done s tory similiar to that, Life before A New Beginning.


Kwl dude... I'll go look at it...
bionicle2809 Diamond Sparx Gems: 8438
#4 Posted: 20:24:33 11/05/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter I: Dreams of the Lost

Ignitus' opened his eyes quickly as he looked around the room. Everyone else was asleep. He slowly creaped towards the wooden door as it creaked open. He turned around as he heard one of the other dragons move. The door closed behind him. No one had seen him leave the room. Ignitus looked forwards at the large golden plate. A green sparkling liquid shimmered back at him, even in the darkness of the stary night sky. Ignitus looked down into the liquid trying to make sence of the strange dreams he had been having recently. He sighed as he staired at an image of shadow and darkness. He had hoped to make sence of the dreams but they were more confusing to him now. A large red head reflected in the green liquid. "It doesn't make sence..." Ignitus sighed. Pyrhus shook his head and turned around. Ignitus looked at him as he opened his mouth. "It will soon Ignitus, in time." Ignitus thought this would never be true. "You just need to be patient." He said. Ignitus looked at Pyrhus and gave a doubtfull nod.

Pyrhus was a strong deep red dragon. His armoured chest was a dark purple like his horns with battle marks scratched on it. Pyrhus opened the door back into the sleeping chamber. "It will become clear soon... I am almost certain of that..." He said as the door slamed behind him. Ignitus slowly walked out towards the balconey of the temple. He looked up at the 2 moons the shimmered in the sky. Ignitus looked down at a small river that shined in the light of the 2 moons. "I will be free Ignitus... And you will know about it..." A voice said from behind him. Ignitus turned around. There was no one there. He shook his head and walked back into the temple. Ignitus turned to face the door back to the sleeping chamber until he began to hear the voice again. "Turn around Ignitus..." The voice said. Ignitus, doing as they said, turned around but there was still no one there. "Im down here Ignitus..." The voice continued. Ignitus looked down at the large golden dish with the liquid in. Two purple eyes glaired at him and bathed the room in a dark purple aura. "Who... What are you..." Ignitus asked as the voice began to laugh. It echoed in the room and almost deafened Ignitus as he feel forwards into the green liquid.

To Be Continued...
Edited 1 time - Last edited at 20:25:23 11/05/2009 by bionicle2809
darkdragon3809 Gold Sparx Gems: 2264
#5 Posted: 17:02:05 12/05/2009
Wow...epic first chapter smilie. More, MORE, YOU MUST WRITE MORE otherwise I'll go on a destroying planets spree on Spore smilie.
bionicle2809 Diamond Sparx Gems: 8438
#6 Posted: 17:05:14 12/05/2009 | Topic Creator
Quote: darkdragon3809
Wow...epic first chapter smilie. More, MORE, YOU MUST WRITE MORE otherwise I'll go on a destroying planets spree on Spore smilie.


I think I'll sit here and... Let you do that smilie
bionicle2809 Diamond Sparx Gems: 8438
#7 Posted: 17:17:05 13/05/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapyter II: The Dragon

Ignitus lifted his large red head. He woke up to find that he was stood on the top of a mountain. An army of very orderly lined creatures marched away from the point he was standing at. He began to hear a voice in his head. 'This is the future Ignitus... An army, streatching there forces from here to all the way across the world...' Ignitus watched as a tall creature stood at the front of the army ordering them forwards. 'It can be stopped Ignitus...' The voice continued. Ignitus shook his head. He feared the worst. "What... What is it you want Ma-" Ignitus said interupted by the voice. 'Don't call me by the name Ignitus! That name means nothing to me anymore...' It yelled with a tone of anger in its voice. Ignitus sighed he looked forwards as the army had gone out of view. "Dark Master, what is it you want..." He said in an angry voice. The surroundings around them faded into the darkness as night fell over the mountain. 'I want that dragon Ignitus...' He said. Ignitus sighed as he looked up at the sky above him.

The two moons shone down to him as they had just before when he was back in the temple. "You... You heard the prophecy..." Ignitus said as the voice began to laugh. 'I have known that prophecy from the moment I met the Chronicler...' The voice continued, 'Yes... I want the purple Dragon... And you will bring him to me...' Ignitus closed his eyes as he saw himself handing the egg over the the Dark Master's forces. "You'll have to kill me first..." Ignitus said. The voice laughed louder and more fearce than ever. 'I will Ignitus... I will...' The voice faded away as a shadow stood behind him. "I am almost certain of that. You can't escape it Ignitus. You will bring him to me, and when you do... You will die..." The Dark Master whispered into his ears with a sinister voice that spoke with the voice of everyone he had killed. "Your words are as cold as your heart..." Ignitus said as the Dark Master faded away to remain just a voice in Ignitus' head. Ignitus felt himself lift into the air above the land bellow him. He opened his eyes as he woke up in the temple once more.

To Be Continued...
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darkdragon3809 Gold Sparx Gems: 2264
#8 Posted: 18:02:16 13/05/2009
Wow...epic, when is there more? This is awesome!! Ultimately epic!! Malefor rules!!!!!!
bionicle2809 Diamond Sparx Gems: 8438
#9 Posted: 18:08:22 13/05/2009 | Topic Creator
Quote: darkdragon3809
Wow...epic, when is there more? This is awesome!! Ultimately epic!! Malefor rules!!!!!!


YOU SAID HIS NAME!!! THAT NAME MEANS NOTHING TO HIM!!!!
darkdragon3809 Gold Sparx Gems: 2264
#10 Posted: 18:12:08 13/05/2009
Sorry, the Dark Master, bit I'd prefer to be called Malefor, sounds better smilie (and its faster to type smilie)
bionicle2809 Diamond Sparx Gems: 8438
#11 Posted: 18:20:27 13/05/2009 | Topic Creator
Quote: darkdragon3809
Sorry, the Dark Master, bit I'd prefer to be called Malefor, sounds better smilie (and its faster to type smilie)


He will kill you... smilie
darkdragon3809 Gold Sparx Gems: 2264
#12 Posted: 18:21:32 13/05/2009
....OK, but, he is not evil*

as it says on my channel on Ytube

*certain conditions apply
Wild Platinum Sparx Gems: 5045
#13 Posted: 18:26:37 13/05/2009
Lol. Good story and...

Malefor sure has a big ego, *rolls eyes* Okay, so it's 'The Dark Master'.

He's so awesome and lovable! <3
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darkdragon3809 Gold Sparx Gems: 2264
#14 Posted: 18:29:24 13/05/2009
You really do like Malefor don't you.....
bionicle2809 Diamond Sparx Gems: 8438
#15 Posted: 18:32:36 13/05/2009 | Topic Creator
Quote: darkdragon3809
....OK, but, he is not evil*

as it says on my channel on Ytube

*certain conditions apply


Certain conditions as in... Calling him by a name that he does not wish to be called... MWHAHAHHA!! smilie
darkdragon3809 Gold Sparx Gems: 2264
#16 Posted: 18:34:21 13/05/2009
Y-yeah smilie
Wild Platinum Sparx Gems: 5045
#17 Posted: 18:34:43 13/05/2009
Quote: darkdragon3809
You really do like Malefor don't you.....


Yeah, no duh!

Ha ha ha. I want to seem him say...

"I'm not Malefor...I...am...THE DARK MASTER!!!!"
darkdragon3809 Gold Sparx Gems: 2264
#18 Posted: 18:36:06 13/05/2009
yeah thayt would by ultimately epic
bionicle2809 Diamond Sparx Gems: 8438
#19 Posted: 18:36:56 13/05/2009 | Topic Creator
Quote: Wild
Quote: darkdragon3809
You really do like Malefor don't you.....


Yeah, no duh!

Ha ha ha. I want to seem him say...

"I'm not Malefor...I...am...THE DARK MASTER!!!!"


He'd probabaly kill you before you had the chance to call him Malefor smilie
darkdragon3809 Gold Sparx Gems: 2264
#20 Posted: 18:37:57 13/05/2009
he's so cool, he shows no mercy smilie
Wild Platinum Sparx Gems: 5045
#21 Posted: 18:39:51 13/05/2009
Wild: Well hello M-

smilie *kills Wild*

Wild: I was going to call you master...sheesh you overeact! I love you!

smilie DIE ALREADY! *kills more*
bionicle2809 Diamond Sparx Gems: 8438
#22 Posted: 18:40:04 13/05/2009 | Topic Creator
Quote: darkdragon3809
he's so cool, he shows no mercy smilie


The moment he layed eyes on you he'd blow you up into little tiny peices... Yes... That... Is very epic... Don't you think smilie
darkdragon3809 Gold Sparx Gems: 2264
#23 Posted: 18:42:10 13/05/2009
smilie. Wild will fail epicly smilie. Got that off the Bionicle2809's Guide to Epicness smilie
Wild Platinum Sparx Gems: 5045
#24 Posted: 18:48:28 13/05/2009
Quote: darkdragon3809
smilie. Wild will fail epicly smilie. Got that off the Bionicle2809's Guide to Epicness smilie


Well, it's the thought that counts smilie

Do anyone of you know where I got ``I...am...THE DARK MASTER!!!`` from?
darkdragon3809 Gold Sparx Gems: 2264
#25 Posted: 18:50:16 13/05/2009
Maybe....maybe not....
Wild Platinum Sparx Gems: 5045
#26 Posted: 18:51:03 13/05/2009
*shifty eyes* I bet you don`t.
darkdragon3809 Gold Sparx Gems: 2264
#27 Posted: 18:53:04 13/05/2009
K, fine I dont smilie.
Wild Platinum Sparx Gems: 5045
#28 Posted: 18:56:33 13/05/2009
Quote: darkdragon3809
K, fine I dont smilie.


Read the last line of my sig.

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I wanna read more!
bionicle2809 Diamond Sparx Gems: 8438
#29 Posted: 18:59:00 13/05/2009 | Topic Creator
Quote: Wild
Quote: darkdragon3809
smilie. Wild will fail epicly smilie. Got that off the Bionicle2809's Guide to Epicness smilie


Well, it's the thought that counts smilie

Do anyone of you know where I got ``I...am...THE DARK MASTER!!!`` from?


Um... Ur... Somethings telling me... Dr Who... But I'm guessing not smilie

Edit: I'm writing chapter III now...
Edited 1 time - Last edited at 19:01:05 13/05/2009 by bionicle2809
Wild Platinum Sparx Gems: 5045
#30 Posted: 19:01:08 13/05/2009
Quote: bionicle2809
Quote: Wild
Quote: darkdragon3809
smilie. Wild will fail epicly smilie. Got that off the Bionicle2809's Guide to Epicness smilie


Well, it's the thought that counts smilie

Do anyone of you know where I got ``I...am...THE DARK MASTER!!!`` from?


Um... Ur... Somethings telling me... Dr Who... But I'm guessing not smilie


No smilie ....
bionicle2809 Diamond Sparx Gems: 8438
#31 Posted: 19:03:29 13/05/2009 | Topic Creator
Quote: Wild
Quote: bionicle2809
Quote: Wild


Well, it's the thought that counts smilie

Do anyone of you know where I got ``I...am...THE DARK MASTER!!!`` from?


Um... Ur... Somethings telling me... Dr Who... But I'm guessing not smilie


No smilie ....


Oh well smilie
Wild Platinum Sparx Gems: 5045
#32 Posted: 19:38:04 13/05/2009
Quote: bionicle2809
Quote: Wild
Quote: bionicle2809


Um... Ur... Somethings telling me... Dr Who... But I'm guessing not smilie


No smilie ....


Oh well smilie


Yes, 'Oh well' smilie
darkdragon3809 Gold Sparx Gems: 2264
#33 Posted: 20:03:54 13/05/2009
OK....
Wild Platinum Sparx Gems: 5045
#34 Posted: 20:24:58 13/05/2009
*stabs DD3809 for no reason*

C'mon, I wanna read more!!!
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Shadow Hunter Red Sparx Gems: 63
#35 Posted: 21:00:12 13/05/2009
This is realy good, I can't wait for the next chapter. smilie
I''m definatly subscribeing to this.
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My personality hides in the shadows...
darkdragon3809 Gold Sparx Gems: 2264
#36 Posted: 23:38:04 13/05/2009
Quote: Wild
*stabs DD3809 for no reason*

C'mon, I wanna read more!!!



What %&# why ya stabbing me for, oh right, no reason, I God!! I'm bleeding!!! AAA!! I'm dying!!! I see the light...it went off, oh its back on, back off, on, off, on, off just write some more Bionicle2809! Please my life depends on it!! And I enjoy it smilie.
Melchia Green Sparx Gems: 233
#37 Posted: 23:52:11 13/05/2009
This is
AWESOME!
Now write more! MELCHIA COMMANDS YOU! And don't forget your gift basket on the way out!
spyro523 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1205
#38 Posted: 00:49:45 14/05/2009
technically what smilie said was true smilie did sortof hand smilie over 2 smilie in DoTD and just 2 bug him MALEFOR!!!!!!!!!!!
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"Even in the darkest of times there is always hope, now it is time to unleash the true dragon within you"
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bionicle2809 Diamond Sparx Gems: 8438
#39 Posted: 12:08:06 14/05/2009 | Topic Creator
Quote: spyro523
technically what smilie said was true smilie did sortof hand smilie over 2 smilie in DoTD and just 2 bug him MALEFOR!!!!!!!!!!!


DAMN! YOU FIGURED IT OUT! smilie That realy was why I put it in smilie...
bionicle2809 Diamond Sparx Gems: 8438
#40 Posted: 19:32:21 14/05/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter III: Voice of the Master

Ignitus stood infront of the large golden dish as Pyrhus stood on the other side looking at him. Ignitus staired into the dark green liquid as he tryed to make sence of what he was seeing. He shook his head as he looked up at Pyrhus. "Nothing, theres nothing..." Ignitus said with a tone of annoyance in his voice. Pyrhus sighed as he looked down into the green liquid. "Ignitus, you must widen your perspective. Clear your mind, focus Ignitus..." Pyrhus said trying to encourage Ignitus. He closed his eyes as he began to breath slowly. "Now, Ignitus. Do you see anything." Pyrhus asked. Ignitus did not respond. Pyrhus walked around him wondering what he was seeing in his mind. "Is it working Ignitus?" He said to confirm his theory. 'Im here Ignitus... Im right here... Give me that dragon Ignitus... Bring him to me and I will not harm any of you...' The voice of the Dark Master could be heard in his head. Ignitus grinded his teeth and he shook his head. "Your lying..." He whispered. Pyrhus looked at him confused. "Lying Ignitus? Who is lying? What do you see!" He yelled. Ignitus opened his eyes and turned to face Pyrhus.

His eyes glowing a brght white with a line down the middle that was as dark as the night sky. "You've lost Pyrhus..." said a deep echoing voice. Pyrhus shook his head. "I remeber, hundreds of years ago... Your father lead an army of Dragons to fight me..." The Dark Master said. Pyrhus looked at him in anger. "You... You killed my father in that war! Why are you telling me this now!" Pyrhus yelled to him. The Dark Master began to laugh. "Because if you do not give me what I want, many more will die... The rest of the Dragon kind will perish at your failure!" He yelled. Pyrhus staired at him curiously. He had a bad feeling at what the Dark Master wanted. "Failure? Failure to go by your demands?" Pyrhus yelled. The Dark Master began to laugh. "Very good young dragon..." He said. Pyrhus looked at him frustrated. "I want that dragon!" The Dark Master yelled. Pyrhus shook his head as Ignitus collapsed onto the floor. "Ignitus!" Pyrhus yelled as he lowered down to his level. Ignitus opened his shining ruby eyes as he looked up to Pyrhus. "The dragon, the purple dragon..." Ignitus whispered. Pyrhus nodded as he stood up streight. "Do not fear Ignitus, he will be safe..." He whispered but deep down he feared the worst.

To Be Continued...
dragonlover Yellow Sparx Gems: 1122
#41 Posted: 09:04:35 15/05/2009
Mmore as soon as possible plz!
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Supernatural is the key to the world of hot guys......
darkdragon3809 Gold Sparx Gems: 2264
#42 Posted: 15:27:13 15/05/2009
Kwl...he feared the worst...most people use that line in many stories...

As the Tyranosaurus Rex smashed his head in the land-cruiser, Dr. Grant feared the worst for the children -Jurassic Park.

"I fear the worst for your kind, Sam" - (Optimus Prime) TRANSFROMERS

Josh feared the worst for Kane, it could already be too late to free him-100, 000 A.D

Thats just 3, theres stacks more....kwl story!
Wild Platinum Sparx Gems: 5045
#43 Posted: 15:31:20 15/05/2009
I fear the worst to the fact that this is a great story smilie
darkdragon3809 Gold Sparx Gems: 2264
#44 Posted: 17:46:57 15/05/2009
I fear the worst that the Dark Master is going to kill me because I keep on caling him M-Ma-Malef-Malefo....You know what i mean smilie.
Edited 1 time - Last edited at 17:47:24 15/05/2009 by darkdragon3809
bionicle2809 Diamond Sparx Gems: 8438
#45 Posted: 18:08:50 15/05/2009 | Topic Creator
Quote: darkdragon3809
I fear the worst that the Dark Master is going to kill me because I keep on caling him M-Ma-Malef-Malefo....You know what i mean smilie.


smilie I heard that you know!
Wild Platinum Sparx Gems: 5045
#46 Posted: 18:46:22 15/05/2009
Quote: bionicle2809
Quote: darkdragon3809
I fear the worst that the Dark Master is going to kill me because I keep on caling him M-Ma-Malef-Malefo....You know what i mean smilie.


smilie I heard that you know!



WH: *sneaks in* Hello purpleapinka fella! *pokes 'The Dark Master'*
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darkdragon3809 Gold Sparx Gems: 2264
#47 Posted: 22:02:06 15/05/2009
I need to get used to calling Malef....um the Dark Master, really...
spyro523 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1205
#48 Posted: 14:25:46 16/05/2009
wats rong with saying MALEFOR everyone calls him MALEFOR even smilie calls him MALEFOR and just 2 bug bionicle2809 MALEFOR MALEFOR MALEFOR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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"Even in the darkest of times there is always hope, now it is time to unleash the true dragon within you"
bionicle2809 Diamond Sparx Gems: 8438
#49 Posted: 09:20:05 17/05/2009 | Topic Creator
Quote: spyro523
wats rong with saying MALEFOR everyone calls him MALEFOR even smilie calls him MALEFOR and just 2 bug bionicle2809 MALEFOR MALEFOR MALEFOR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


I don't mind... I was joking smilie... Its part of the story... Why would Malefor call himself the Dark Master? The only reason I can think of is that he doesn't like the name Malefor...
darkdragon3809 Gold Sparx Gems: 2264
#50 Posted: 02:29:45 18/05/2009
Why wouldn't he like the name Malefor??? I mean it fits him perfectly. like I mean like its basically saying malice in there, and it just natuarlly sounds kwl smilie. The Dark Master is something like evrybody usues, seriously, but Malefor is just such a unique and awesome name....although everytime I say it, it reminds me of a dragon like creature called Valefor in Final Fantasy X.
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