*To Start on May 1st*
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#1 Posted: 17:30:04 04/03/2009 | Topic Creator
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#2 Posted: 23:28:05 04/03/2009
you should have desighned it abit more.
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#3 Posted: 04:51:59 25/03/2009
When are you goanna start this?
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#4 Posted: 11:30:33 27/03/2009
LOL! ANOTHER ONE! SO GOOD!
+ = Icy & Zap!
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#5 Posted: 14:24:48 27/03/2009 | Topic Creator
May 1st is when it starts.
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#6 Posted: 16:03:13 28/03/2009
So, does it happen AFTER or BEFORE Spyro's kids: Icy (Story)?
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#7 Posted: 16:13:31 28/03/2009 | Topic Creator
After.
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#8 Posted: 10:56:07 01/04/2009
What program do you use to make those pictures?
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#9 Posted: 21:39:36 01/04/2009 | Topic Creator
The Dragon Generator, it is on this site.
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#10 Posted: 05:24:05 02/04/2009
*being electrocuted*T-this s-s-site? I-I'll l-look f-for i-it...
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#11 Posted: 15:32:59 02/04/2009
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is zap a boy or girl? and what does icy look like? |
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#12 Posted: 16:12:09 02/04/2009 | Topic Creator
Girl, and Icy's picture is on the first post of Spyro's kids: Icy
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#13 Posted: 01:40:01 03/04/2009
Will ther be others, like a fire or earth dragon?
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#14 Posted: 02:40:36 03/04/2009 | Topic Creator
Yes..
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#15 Posted: 03:07:35 03/04/2009
What are their names?
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#16 Posted: 15:56:52 03/04/2009 | Topic Creator
I Don't know yet, I've only gotten this far.
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#17 Posted: 22:39:07 02/05/2009
Isn't this supposed to start today?
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#18 Posted: 14:28:12 03/05/2009
Icy's story hasn't finished yet, so this can't start.
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#19 Posted: 11:33:55 04/05/2009 | Topic Creator
Sorry everyone.
I was busy playing Kingdom Hearts 2 (Adicting), when I remembered that this was supposed to be started. The new date is this saturday, I'll try to get Icy done.
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#20 Posted: 13:54:16 09/05/2009 | Topic Creator
Attention! Icy is done! I decided to change the name to Zappy.
Introducing........ Zappy! PART 1 Forgotten Chapter 1 Zappy Spyro and Cynder sat in their denn. "Another baby! I'm so excited. Bless Icy for risking his life to save me." said Cynder as she looked at her yellow egg. "Volteer's gonna flip when he sees that it's an electric." added Spyro. Suddenly, the egg began to shake, then CRACK! A tiny baby dragon looked out of its hole. "There it is." Spyro replied as the baby dragon nibbled at its egg. Cynder ripped the top of the shell apart and hugged her hatchling. "Mama!" squeked the Hatchling. "Ah Zappy." cried Cynder, hugging her Hatchling. "She'll be Zappy." Cynder said to Spyro. All the dragons in the room coohed as Zappy rolled over and smiled. "Dadda!" squeked Zappy. "Yes, Zappy." responded Spyro, hugging his Hatchling. "Raaaaaaaaaaarh!" croaked Zappy. And so that was the creation of Zappy, the one who changed my heart.
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#21 Posted: 19:41:12 09/05/2009
WM!!!
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#22 Posted: 00:54:17 10/05/2009
I wonder what Icy will think?
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#23 Posted: 23:43:30 11/05/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter 2 Stormy night
Zappy learned to walk in only a second. Spyro gave her some pasta. "Dadda!" squecked Zappy. "She's learning fast." said Cynder. "I just hope she isn't killed like Icy was." Spyro wished. "I wish." I said from my Lair. Zappy fell sound asleep. "Shhhhhh......... she's asleep. I will give her my blessing: Aq z`e z^a Hatch^ing fu swessed." blessed Cynder. Spyro and Cynder fell asleep along with their child. "Googoo!" squeked Zappy in her sleep. A large claw swept right at her, it was a dark paw. Then she fell down and cried. "So much for the Twilight Princess." said the dragon as everything went black and Zappy saw the black dragon punch her. "Doyu!" squeked Zappy as she woke up. Just a dream Lightning flashed outside. "Mamma!" cried Zappy. Cynder guarded Zappy with her wing, "it's okay, my Hatchling." Suddenly, lightning flashed again to reveal a black dragon at the entrance. "You!" hissed the Dragon, relating to Spyro. "Me?" asked Spyro, shocked. "Yes you. You have 48 hours to give up your Hatchling or die. Don't play any tricks, for I have billions of soldiers sprouted across the Kingdom." warned the Dragon. The black Dragon disappeared. "Chaos." Spyro whispered. Zappy was scared. She knew her parents wouldn't give her up to this evil person, or would they. I stormed out of the cave and flew through the stormy night.
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#24 Posted: 23:48:09 11/05/2009
cooL!
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#25 Posted: 05:02:51 12/05/2009
Oh no! Zappy!!
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#26 Posted: 19:22:27 12/05/2009
Poor little baby Zappy.. I'll protect you... hey! I'll be a bodyguard! *Runs when chaos comes*
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#27 Posted: 00:48:36 13/05/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter 3 Casted
Spyro and Cynder placed Zappy in a basket and covered her up with blankets. She was sound asleep. "Goodbye, Zappy." they said as they kissed their daughter and walked outside with the basket. "Spyro, will we see her again?" Cynder asked. "As the prophecy said, the day we meet will be the last day." Spyro replied. "But why?" asked Cynder. "I'm not sure about the prophecy eather." said Spyro. "I hope that day is soon." pleed Cynder. Spyro and Cynder walked over to a river and set the basket in it. The Ancestors told them it would be a safe path down it. "Bye, Zappy." cried Spyro and Cynder. Zappy soundlessly drifted down the river.
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#28 Posted: 04:42:39 15/05/2009
Poor Zappy! And poor Spyro and Cynder!
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#29 Posted: 02:31:46 16/05/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter 4 Surrounded
Zappy yawned as she woke up. She rubbed her eyes and then looked around. "Doyu!" squeeked Zappy as she dug her claws into the blankets. "Mamma? Dadda?" called Zappy, but no one answered. They left me! I'm scared. What am I going to do? Zappy began to cry. She leaned backward and fell into the freezing river. "Doyu!" she squeeked. Zappy began to drown, "Mamma!" The water pushed her under. "Mamma!" repeated Zappy. "Mamma!" cried Zappy, then her lungs filled with water as she lost concious. Suddenly, a scaley blue hand took Zappy out of the water and layed her on the ground. Wha? She was surrounded by a bunch of dragons.
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#30 Posted: 14:46:54 16/05/2009
More!
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#31 Posted: 17:20:08 16/05/2009
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I think you could do better.
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#32 Posted: 17:39:17 16/05/2009
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Yeah. Add wings, horns, tail etc...
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#33 Posted: 19:59:49 16/05/2009
wow this is good...
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#34 Posted: 20:59:30 16/05/2009 | Topic Creator
Zappy was born that way.
Thanks! Chapter 5 Meeting the family Zappy turn her head and saw a Hatchling's face right infront of her. Zappy screached and hit it in the face with her wing. The Hatchling fell back and began to cry. The Hatchling bumped another one and made it cry, soon all the Hatchlings were crying. Their mothers hushed them. "Who awe ywou?" asked Zappy. "She can talk." murmered one dragon. "We are the Gold Dragon Clan." said a huge gold Dragon. "Gwold who?" asked Zappy. "What happened to you?" asked 1 mother, changing the subject. "I'wm wost." replied Zappy. "Where's your parents?" asked the dragon. "I - I dwon't know." responded Zappy as a tear went down her eye. "Would you like us to take care of you?" asked the dragon. "I gwuess." replied Zappy. "Then I'll show you around." said the dragon. The dragon pointed to a hatchling. "This little guy's name is Goldiex. These is Brighty, Goldy, and Shiny." said the dragon as he pointed to 3 other Hatchlings. "Hwi!" greeted the Hatchlings. Zappy looked at Goldiex, she just assumed she knew him. The gold dragon pointed to 10 kids, "These are Xey, Xeyzec, Hammer, Jolt, Tur, Turi, Gran, Grano, Yi, and Yio." "Hello!" greeted the dragons. The dragon pointed at 10 adult dragons, "These a Goldclaw, Goldfang, Gold, Goldwing, Goldtail, Goldpaw, Goldeye, Goldhorn, Goldcrest, and Goldspine. I'm Goldking," said GoldKing, "i'm the king of Goldclan, Gold is my wife."
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#35 Posted: 22:12:08 16/05/2009
Hey! You copied! I made up SilverClan!
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#36 Posted: 22:33:39 16/05/2009 | Topic Creator
Sorry. Will you forgive me?
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#37 Posted: 22:35:12 16/05/2009
Okay, but could you possibly change it?
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#38 Posted: 22:39:16 16/05/2009 | Topic Creator
Okay, how about Gold Clan? Or Electric Clan? Wouldn't Zappy be in the same world Shadowclaw is in?
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#39 Posted: 05:00:53 17/05/2009
Yes, if you did keep it to SilverClan, but I think that GoldClan would be good. But Spyro, Cynder and all the others don't exsit in Shadowclaw's world.
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#40 Posted: 11:34:17 22/05/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter 6 More Dreams
Zappy was rolling around in her sleep. The same dragon from her dream began to chase her, into a dead end. "Who are you?" asked Zappy. "I am your worst nightmare." screached the dragon as he jumped at her. "No!!!" cried Zappy as she was killed. Zappy woke up with a start. Again? Zappy saw a glimpse of black in the corner of the room. "Give me the Twilight Princess!" roared the black dragon. "Never!" shouted Goldking.
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#41 Posted: 01:32:50 26/05/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter 7 Attack of the Dragon
"Very well." said the shadow dragon as he tackled Zappy. "Leave her alone!"shouted Goldiex as he bashed the dragon in the waste. The dragon leaped up in the air, and laid a scar on Goldiex's face. Goldiex fell to the ground, bleeding. "Go away!" shouted Goldking as he shot a light beam at the Dragon's face. "Not until you give me the Twilight Princess." said the dragon. "Who?" asked Goldking. "The Electric dragon right there!" growled the dragon as he pointed at Zappy. Zappy gasped, she was unsure what the Twilight Princess was. Zappy shot bolt of electricity at the dragon and blew the darkness away. "Not the power of the Twilight beam!" shouted the dragon as he was knocked over, "I will return!" The Dragon opened a dark portal and walked inside. I looked into the crystal.
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#42 Posted: 05:40:20 26/05/2009
Write more!
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#43 Posted: 11:48:49 26/05/2009 | Topic Creator
Where'd everyone go???
Chapter 8 Floating Islands of Chaos "Dad, can I go to the Floating Islands?" asked Zappy. "No, Chaos lives there." replied Goldking. "Who's Chaos?" asked Zappy. "The Dark Master." responded the dragon in a grunt. Goldking walked over to his den. Zappy was going to ask who a Dark Master was, but she descided not to, because she couldn't go. "Then I guess I'll have to go by myself." whispered Zappy as she flew through the air. Zappy landed on the Floating Islands and walked inside a building. Just then, "Zappy! Where are you?" asked Goldking as he flew around camp. Back at the FI, Zappy opened a door and walked down a long corridor and found a huge banquet, fit for a King. Zappy sat down in one of the chairs. "So, the Twilight Princess has returned." said a voice. Zappy spun around and saw the black dragon. "Doyu!" cried Zappy. "Someone used to give me that same word." said the dragon. "Are you, Chaos?" asked Zappy. "Yes, I'm Chaos." replied the dragon. Zappy gulped, "I have to go." "You can stay as long as you like, Princess." said Chaos. "Am I really a Princess?" asked Zappy. "Yes." replied Chaos. Goldking burst through the doors and pinned Chaos down. "Go!" ordered Goldking. Zappy ran.
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#44 Posted: 19:06:41 26/05/2009
I demand more!
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#45 Posted: 01:13:05 27/05/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter 9 Escape from Chaos
Zappy ran through corridors and corridors, trying to find her way out. Chaos stormed behind me, Goldking in his mouth. Goldking was stunned. "Now for the Twilight Princess!" said Chaos as he through Goldking against the wall. Chaos tackled Zappy and ripped her wings off. "Doyu!" squeeked Zappy in pain as yellow blood gushed out of her. Chaos grabbed Zappy's ears and broke them with a crunch of his jaws. Then Chaos bit down on Zappy's tailspike and ate it. "Doyu!" cried Zappy, about to die. Zappy shot Twilight Beam at Chaos. Chaos sneered up in the air and shot Convexity at Zappy. Zappy evaded and shot Twilight Beam right into Chaos's stomach and sent him hurling down the corridor. A hole in the wall was made by him. Zappy ran down the corridor. Chaos atempted to ram her, but hit the wall. Zappy ran out the hole. She jumped off the Islands, spotting a good spot to land on. Zappy landed on a bunch of bushes. Chaos growled from his lair as he picked up Goldking and through him down the Island.
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#46 Posted: 20:32:48 27/05/2009
Poor Zappy's having a very painful day.
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#47 Posted: 11:51:55 28/05/2009 | Topic Creator
Chapter 10 Returnig home
Zappy ran up to Goldking, "Dad?" "Dad?" she asked again. "DADDDDDDDDD!!!!!!!" cried Zappy. "He's dead." moaned Zappy. Zappy waddled down the trail. Zappy reached camp. "Where were you?!" shrieked Gold. "At the Floating Islands, Dad's in trouble!" shouted Zappy. "I'll go after him." said Gold. Zappy went to the den. Chaos looked so peace. He looked like he had love in his heart. He looked like someone I knew.
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#48 Posted: 16:40:38 28/05/2009
WE NEED MORE OF THIS STORY!!!!!
Please?
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#49 Posted: 15:49:43 30/05/2009 | Topic Creator
Part 2 Lost
Chapter 11 News Zappy waited and waited, still no sign of Gold. Maybe Gold is...... dead too. Just then a loud burst of lightning struck the camp. Chaos stood in the entrance. "Twilight Princess, don't be afraid." ordered Chaos. Zappy stepped back, she couldn't trust him, but then she saw something in his eye that looked sad, like someone she knew. Who is he? Chaos looked straight into Zappy's eyes, "I'm someone really close to you." He can hear people's thoughts? "Yes I can, Zappy." remarked Chaos. "How... how do you know my name?" asked Zappy. "I've known about you before you were born. I've been watching." explained Chaos. "How?" asked Zappy. "Through my Crystal ball." replied Chaos. "Why have you come here?" asked Zappy. "To warn you of the future." replied Chaos. "What is it?" asked Zappy. "When you are older, you shall meet your parents again, your true parents. You shall find out things that lie behind my reach, what a Twilight Princess is for, and about Goldiex." said Chaos. "Goldiex? What about him?" asked Zappy. "You'll find out." declared Chaos. Suddenly, Gold burst through the entrance, tackling Chaos. "By." said Chaos as he disappeared. "I've got good news and bad news, the good news is that Goldking lived, but the bad news is that a flood is coming this way." said Gold.
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#50 Posted: 18:37:31 30/05/2009
More! Please! Now!
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