darkSpyro

Here is my story about Spyro.
In my story,Malefor is back and he kidnap Cynder and Spyro must save her.

cool cant wait

yay another story about me!!
your gonna save me,how romantic!hope it ends with a kiss!!!

actually,story is on my profile but If you want,i can post it here
Name of my story is The Legend of Spyro Dawn of the Malefor.
I write name of story on topic name but I don't know why is write TloS DotD.

LET'S ROLL!!!
I was rainy day at the Temple.All have been inside and celebrate a new age of peace,but Spyro he is been outside and sitting,he is be sad.He is thinking about Ignitus,and then Cynder is come out to see Spyro.
Cynder: Spyro,are you okay?
Spyro: Hm?Yes,I am.-he say that with sad voice-
Cynder: Don't lie to me Spyro,I know it's something wrong,so tell me,what is it?
Spyro:I don't know,just....I miss Ignitus.He is be only one who is belive in me!
Cynder:Is okay Spyro,he miss me to,but you must stop thinking about it,okay.Now come in so we can celebrate.
Spyrokay,okay I will come in,but not becouse you are say that,because it's freezing outside.
Spyro and Cynder have been going inside,watching each other and then Cynder say:
Cynder:Spyro,I must you say something...
Spyro:Say Cynder,what is it?
Cynder:I.....I...I..........
BOOOMMMMM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Spyro:What is that!?
Voice:You worst nightmare!
Spyro:SPIDER!!!???
Voice and Cynder:What?
Voice:NO I AM NOT SPIDER!I AM....
Sparx:What is going on here?Whoah!O MY GOD IS THAT.....
Cynder:Malefor.....!
Malefor:HAHAHAHAAH!!
Malefor is kidnap Cynder and they are gone in the fog.
Spyro.CYNDER!!!!!!
Sparx:Isn't he dead?
Spyro:IS HE LOOK LIKE DEAD!HA!
Sparxamn!Now I must break party!
Terrador:What happen!?
Spyro:Malefor is kidnap Cynder!
Cyril:But that is inposible.
Spyro:I KNOW BUT WE MUST FIND CYNDER!NOW!
Spyro is runing out of the Temple,trying to go find Cynder,but Terrador is stop him.
Terrador:You can't go!It's to dangerous!
Sparx:Yeah,and is raining!I hate rain!Please,can we go later?
Spyro:Shut up Sparx!
Sparxkay,Okay!Damn!
Terrador:YOU CAN'T GO!
Spyro:AND WHO ARE YOU TO TELL ME THAT!?IGNITUS TRUST ME,WHY YOU CAN'T!?
Guardinas are not say anything,they are just looking at Spyro.
Spyronce I lost Cynder,I don't want to happen this again.Goodbye.
Spyro and Sparx are goes along the river an they are gone behind big rock.
Terrador:Good luck!......young dragon.
Guardians are go inside the Temple.......

To Be Continued.....

and If you want it can ends with kiss

and CMOK!

Sorry to ask, but could you use better English?

cool wright more!

Quote: Cynder_fan

Sorry to ask, but could you use better English?

yer same here, but very awesome story ! loveing it

Thanks
I will try use better English.
I don't know too musch English because I'm from Croatia,but I have English-Croatian translater

too much,sorry.

P.S How I can Spyro avatar with less 20KB?
Or where I can find it?
and I will write part 2 tomorrow

The Legend of Spyro Dawn of the Malefor part-2

It's night.Spyro and Sparx are stil follow the river.Sparx is realy tired,but Spyro is not tired,he is thinking about Cynder and Malefor.He can't understandable how Malefor can be alive.Then Sparx is adept:
Sparx: Spyro,I'm tired.Can we sleep over under that tree?Please?!
Spyro: Sparx we can't.We must find Cynder.
Sparx: Please Spyro,PLEASE!?
Spyro: Okay,but not under tree,I will find good place for sleep.it's still rain.
Spyro and Sparx are start looking for good place for sleep,and finaly,they did.They are find blank building next to forest...
Spyro: Well this is a good place for sleep.
Sparx: Yeah it is,FOR YOU!This place is scary.
Spyro: No it's not,it's quite and nice.
Sparx: Okay.
Spyro and Sparx are arrive to blank building.There is were broken arrows,bones,dust and net,but they are find nice clear room for sleep....
Sparx: This is so crepily.
Spyro: A little.
Sparx: A LITTLE!?HELL WHAT'S GOING ON WHIT YOU!?
Spyro: QUITE!This is old building!Everything will be fall on us!
He is whisper.
Sparx: Okay,can we sleep now.
Spyro and Sparx are get off....
Morning...
Sparx: GOOD MORNING!C'MON SPYRO GET UP!
Spyro: hmmm.......oh,good morning Sparx.
They are wake up and start to move on,but suddenly....
Spyro: Do you hear that?
Sparx:What?
spyro:I don't know but it's realy close to us....

To Be Continued........

New part and I hope I write better English now

Quote: Spyro-Fan

The Legend of Spyro Dawn of the Malefor part-2

It was night. Spyro and Sparx were still following the river. Sparx was really tired, but Spyro wasnt. He was still thinking about Cynder and Malefor. He couldnt understand how Malefor was still alive.
Sparx: Spyro,I'm tired.Can we sleep under that tree?Please?!
Spyro: Sparx we can't. We must find Cynder.
Sparx: Please Spyro,PLEASE!?
Spyro: Okay, but not under tree. I will find good place to sleep. It's still raining.
Spyro and Sparx then began looking for a place to sleep. They eventuly found a spot to sleep. They found an empty building next to forest...
Spyro: Well this is a good place to sleep.
Sparx: Yeah it is, FOR YOU! This place is scary.
Spyro: No it's not, it's quiet and nice.
Sparx: Okay.
Spyro and Sparx arrive at the empty building. There was were broken arrows, bones, dust and net. They found in the building a nice place to sleep.
Sparx: This is so creepy.
Spyro: A little.
Sparx: A LITTLE!?HELL WHAT'S GOING ON WITH YOU!?
Spyro: QUITE! This is an old building! Everything will be fall on us!
He wispered back.
Sparx: Okay, can we sleep now?
Spyro and Sparx then rest ready for the morning.
In the morning.
Sparx: GOOD MORNING! C'MON SPYRO GET UP!
Spyro: hmmm.......oh, good morning Sparx.
They then got up but heard something.
Spyro: Do you hear that?
Sparx: What?
spyro: I don't know, but it sounds close to us....

To Be Continued........

Grammer check

GOOD I have a little stupid translater
(There was were broke arrows....I almost forget ''was'')

The was some broken arrows.

OH
(my text is to small)

Eh, why dont you translate, then send me it to translate better?

Wait,you mean,I write story on English,then I send it to you,you tranlsate it on better Enflish and I just copy your version of better English on my topic.Are you mean on that?
P.S Can I change name of my topic,and can you watch youtube?

Yes, yes, Yes.
Thats what i mean.

Yes, you can change the title, just edited the first post you made on this topic.

Yes, the Wii internet browser does do youtube.

ok I'm in
I will send you third part in 3 days.
my youtube doesn't work.He says error on page and get the newest Flash Player.

You got Javascript not installed or not running.
Go to Java and download the lastest one.

I will change the title in The Legend of Spyro Dawn of the Malefor.

great story!!!

Thanks Third part coming soon

cool!!!

Thanks

Today I will write a third part!

Here is third part of my story:
.....Then they are saw little pink tail on the exit..
Sparx: IT'S MALEFOR!!!!WAAAHAAAAAA!!!!WE ALL GONNA DIE!!!!!
Spyro: Quite!It's not Malefor,tail is to small.
Sparx: Thank God,it's not Malefor!
Spyro and Sparx are getting close to the exit to see what is that..
Sparx: You go first,it's safer,for me..
Spyro: AA no!you are going with me too.
Sparx: Ok....
...Then they are get realy close to litle pink tail,and then they are saw....
Spyro: Ember...?
Ember: SPYRO,IS THAT REALY YOU...?
Spyro: Yes,it's me...Spyro
Ember: I CAN'T BELIVE!!!!!!!IT'S YOU!!!!
Sparx: Okay,you are see each others,can we go now?
Spyro: Sparx...
Ember: Sparx,you are here too!
Sparx: Yeah,yeah...
Spyro: What are you doing here,you are must be in Valey of Avalar?
Ember: Well I'm a little lost in the forest..but you must be in the Temple..
Spyro:I must save Cynder.
Ember: UUU and who is......Cynder?
..she say that with disappointment voice...
Sparx: Cynder is Spyro's mate...ulala
Spyro: SHE IS NOT MY MATE!!!!!
Ember: It's okay....AAAAAHHHH
Spyro :EMBER!¨
...Dragon hunters are catch Ember and they are take away her..
Dragon hunter: LEAVE HER!WE ARE NEED THE PURPLE DRAGON!
Sparx. Spyro,aren't you,PURPLE!!!!?
Spyro,Yes,I am..ehe
Dragon hunter:KILL HIM!
Sparx:AAAAAAAAAAAAAA
...Spyro is start to breath fire on them,but it doesn't work...
Spyro: It's not working!QUICK!IN THE FOREST!
Spyro and Sparx are start flying to forestin hope they are will escape,but they are not escape them.Spyro is stop in the middle of forest...
Sparx: WHY ARE YOU STOP!MOVE IT!
Spyro is not answer to Sparx,he is waiting for Dragon hunters..
Dragon hunter:HE IS HERE!KILL HIM!
Spyro: NOT THIS NIGHT,FOOLS!
Spyro is start fight with Dragon hunters,he is doing everything,but Dragon hunters is be more and more.One of Dragon hunters are come close to Spyro,he is holding a axe...
Dragon hunter:NOW YOU ARE WILL DIE!
He is punch Spyro..
Spyro: AAAUUU
Sparx: NO YOU ARE DEAD!!
Spyro: NO,I AM NOT,JET..
dragon hunters are punch Spyro more and more,Spyro is become weak,then one of Dragon hunters are hit Spyro with big rock,Spyro is fall on ground..
Dragon hunter: FINISH HIM!
Sparx:SPYRO WAKE UP!WAKE UP!!!!
...Main Dragon hunter are come to Spyro with sword..
Dragon hunter:SAY GOODBYE,PURPLE DRAGON!

To Be Continued...

Version of better English cooming soon

Better english...:
.....Then they saw a small pink tail through the exit..
Sparx: IT'S MALEFOR!!!!WAAAHAAAAAA!!!!WE'RE ALL GONNA DIE!!!!!
Spyro: Quiet!It's not Malefor, the tail is to small.
Sparx: Thank God it's not Malefor!
Spyro and Sparx got close to the exit to see who's tail it was..
Sparx: You go first, it's safer, for me..
Spyro: Ah! no!you are going with me too.
Sparx: Ok....
...They then got close to the exit and saw who it was....
Spyro: Ember...?
Ember: SPYRO, IS THAT REALY YOU...?
Spyro: Yes, it's me...Spyro
Ember: I CAN'T BELIVE IT!!!!!!! IT'S YOU!!!!
Sparx: Okay, now we've seen eachother, can we go now?
Spyro: Sparx...
Ember: Sparx, you are here too?!
Sparx: Yeah, yeah...
Spyro: What are you doing here. Musnt you be in the Valey of Avalar?
Ember: Well I got a little lost in the forest..but you must be at the Temple..
Spyro: I have to save Cynder.
Ember: Uhh and who is......Cynder?
..Ember says this with a dissapointed voice...
Sparx: Cynder is Spyro's mate...ulala
Spyro: SHE IS NOT MY MATE!!!!!
Ember: It's okay....AAAAAHHHH
Spyro: EMBER!
...Dragon Catchers then come and garb Ember, then take her away..
Dragon hunter: LEAVE HER! WE CAME FOR THE PURPLE DRAGON!
Sparx: Spyro, aren't you, PURPLE!!!!?
Spyro: Yes, I am..ehe
Dragon hunter: KILL HIM!
Sparx: AAAAAHHHH!!!
...Spyro then breaths fire on them, but it doesn't work...
Spyro: It's not working! QUICK! IN THE FOREST!
Spyro and Sparx start flying to the forest in hope they will escape, but they are not able to. Spyro stop's in the middle of the forest...
Sparx: WHY HAVE YOU STOPED?! MOVE IT!
Spyro doesnt speak to Sparx. He waits for the Dragon hunters..
Dragon hunter: THERE HE IS!! KILL HIM!
Spyro: NOT THIS TIME FOOLS!
Spyro starts to fight the Dragon hunters. He tries doing anything, but more Dragon hunters come. One of Dragon hunters comes close to Spyro, he is holding an axe...
Dragon hunter: NOW YOU WILL DIE!
He then punches Spyro..
Spyro: AARGH!!
Sparx: NO!! HE'S DEAD!!
Spyro: NO, I AM NOT, YET..
Dragon hunters punch Spyro more and more. Spyro becomes weak, then one of Dragon hunters hit Spyro with big rock. Spyro falls on to the ground..
Dragon hunter: FINISH HIM!
Sparx: SPYRO WAKE UP!! WAKE UP!!!!
...Main Dragon hunter comes to Spyro holding a sword..
Dragon hunter: SAY GOODBYE PURPLE DRAGON!

To Be Continued...

Thanks Cynder_Fan

Its ok....

I will write fourth part in 2 days

In fact,I will write it now

FOURTH PART:
...Spyro is still lying on ground,he wasn't aware of nothing because he was in unconsciousness..
Sparx: PLEASE WAKE UP!!!!
...but suddenly,arrow is shot main Dragon hunter.
Sparx: WHOAH!What was that?
...then something is came out from the forest,it was a cheetah warior,Hunter.
Hunter: Spyro,are you okay?
Sparx: Is he looks like okay!?DO SOMETHING HUNTER!
...Spyro is start waking up..
Hunter:Spyro,do you hear me?
Spyro: hhhmmmm.......who.....who are you?And where am I?
Hunter: I am Hunter,do you remember me,cheetah warior,I am from Avalar.
..Spyro is lying down and he is watching Hunter like he never saw him..
Spyro: i can't remember but I remember this shining things.
Sparx: SHINING THINGS?!ARE YOU CRAZY,IT'S ME,SPARX!
Spyro:Yes I mean Sparx..
Hunter: Never mind,you will remember me soon..

Later,Hunter is light fire and they are talking about what happen..
Hunter: Are you better now?
Spyro. I don't know,I'm feeling like.....like.....crazy.
Sparx: becouse you are crazy dude!
Hunter: I gues you are feel weel.
Spyro:Yeah I am fine...I am fine.
hunter:you know,I saw Cynder before 2 days..
Spyro:You saw Cynder,where?
Hunter:In Ruins of Warfang.
Spyro:In Ruins of Warfang?This is close,come on Sparx,we are must save her!
Sparx:Whoah,wait!You are just wake up,colm down!
Hunter:He is right,you are weak now,you need to resting..
Sparx:I AM RIGHT!?Whoah...
Spyro:Ehh....I gues you are right,I need sleep...We'll start in the morning,Ok Sparx...Sparx?
Sparx: HHHHHRRRRRRRRKKKKKKKK!
Sparx is asleep on Spyro's back...
Hunter: Smart dragonfly,hehe.Well,good night.
Spyro: yeah...good night.

To Be Continued.....

Very nice, write some more.

Same here Write more

plz cotinue

(try and solve my riddle on the riddle topic)

Thanks guys
I am working on it

I will write part-five tommorow

Sorry i didnt make better english. School and life.........All i need to say

Never mind,it's Ok

here is part five:
..In the Ruins of Warfang,Malefor is imprisons Cynder.Cynder is be in the chains and Malefor is doesn't care for her.Cynder is be captured in the cage under the waterfall.Malefor is come to her...
Malefor: and how are you today?
Cynder is not say anything...
Malefor: what?Oooo I know,you are think about your boyfriend,hm?
Cynder is be really mad.She is get up and start run to Malefor,but she can't because she is be in chains...
Malefor: Easy!If you do that again,I will kill you!
Cynder: Spyro will come!And he will kill you again!
Malefor: I don't think so.HEHE!
Cynder is be confused..
Malefor: Pih!You are so stupid!Don't you get it? You are the bait!When he come,but I will not kill him here,first I must agonize him.
Cynder: Anyway he will kill youu!
Malefor is go away.Cynder is thinging how to escape.
Cynder''I hope Spyro is okay''

To Be Continued.......

I don't have to much time so I can't write a lot of this part

cool!

Thanks.

here is part five:
..In the Ruins of Warfang, Malefor has imprisoned Cynder. Cynder is in chains and Malefor is doesn't care for her. Cynder has been captured in a cage under a waterfall. Malefor then goes over to her...
Malefor: and how are you today?
Cynder didnt say anything...

I'll do the rest soon.

Thanks

I think I will close this topic,nobody doesn't want to read my story

this story is good