darkSpyro

if you have something mean to say about my fanfic keep it to yourself don't post it here now i can start the fanfic.

chapter 1
there were six eggs one of the six eggs was red with black spots. the thieves stole the six eggs. the master thief took the red egg with the black spots on it. the red egg with the black spots started hatching then a big powerful wave of energy came out of the egg. the thieves ran away leaving the eggs behind. spyro found the dragon eggs and the orange dragon "the aura dragon"said spyro then spyro took the dragon eggs and the orange dragon to dragon shores. they named the orange dragon jimmy the dragon all the dragons prepared for the sorcerer's next attack but he did not attack. jimmy met a dragon called maja she attacked jimmy and flew off. later jimmy found maja again and he attacked her until she flew off again. then she teamed up with three dragons to attack jimmy. after that jimmy never saw her again but if he ever saw her jimmy would get his revenge.

that is the end of chapter 1.

Yeaaaah, another fanfic about jimmy the dragon No offense but why not write about a dragon not called jimmy, it sounds self centered, and try to punchuate it because without punchuation you can't read it. But I'm reading it though ._.

i named my account jimmy dragon because i had already thought about the dragon's name before i joined and i wanted to write fanfics about him and i stop writing on the other fanfics because of flamers.

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i named my account jimmy dragon because i had already thought about the dragon's name before i joined and i wanted to write fanfics about him and i stop writing on the other fanfics because of flamers.

I'm not flaming! Yeah writing about jimmy is fair enough....But what about the punchuating?

chapter 2
jimmy then looked for maja but he could not find her so jimmy went back to the dragon temple. the next day there was a flood in dragon shores. all the dragons escaped. then maja pushed jimmy off a big cliff but jimmy flew back up the cliff. then maja flew into the ice mountain. then jimmy went to find maja. jimmy then found a small cave inside it there was a crystal. then someone else called luna took the crystal. then jimmy went back to the dragon temple when he went back he saw luna. then maja stole the crystal and attacked luna. then jimmy attacked maja when luna saw this she knew that jimmy was an aura dragon. jimmy gave luna the crystal. then the sorcerer took everyone into a purple portal.

chapter 3 coming soon.

Now is better Keep writing.

Your punchuating! Just try not to use the word Then jimmy. Then maja, don't use then so much and it will be good

I like it! Its great!

write more!

i will write more tomorrow.

thats great! write more!
but i don't want to wait till tomorrow

i need to think of more ideas for my fanfic.

this story is great!I could wait for tomorrow.

it would be helpful if you gave me some ideas for the fanfic.

ok !
i'll see if i can help!

great start! keep going!!

Knowing you Jimmy, the next part should probably include Bandit!

write more soon please.

That was pretty imaginitive, just decribe it a little bit more, add a bit of detail, example: What the dragons look like, what the dragon temple looks like. Pretty cool though.

i am going to make a topic that tells you all about the people and places that have been in my fanfic.

Yes, that sounds good jimmy dragon, good luck!

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i am going to make a topic that tells you all about the people and places that have been in my fanfic.

awsome!can't wait!

I like jimmy dragon's story, don't you DarkSpyro_101?

Yeah,it's great!I need a nickname or something 'cause I have a long username.

You shouldn't have added the 101 part, it is kind of annoying.

yay.well I was thinking of putting 101 to my username,when I first came here.

chapter 3
the sorcerer took all the dragons to the shadow realm.before the sorcerer took all the dragons to the shadow realm.jimmy attacked the sorcerer. jimmy had to find the sorcerer.jimmy saw cynder trapped in a cage.
then a shadow creature appeared.jimmy kept hitting it with his tail.after that the cage smashed and cynder went back to the real world.jimmy then found a very dark cave and went inside. it it was very dark and wet.after exiting the cave jimmy found a big lake.jimmy flew across the river.when he crossed the river.he saw ember in a cage.another shadow creature appeared.jimmy then attacked the creature with his tail.then the cage smashed and ember went back to the real world.jimmy found a temple and went into the temple.in the temple there was alot of shadow creatures.bandit was trapped in a cage.jimmy used a chi attack on the shadow creatures.then the cage smashed and bandit went back to the real world.then jimmy saw the sorcerer.jimmy chased the sorcerer into a purple cave.jimmy then fireballed the sorcerer.the sorcerer then used a big laser to attack jimmy.jimmy attacked the sorcerer with his tail.jimmy fireballed the sorcerer until the sorcerer escaped through a purple portal.all the cages smashed and everyone went back to the real world.

chapter 4 coming soon.

oh yay! you wrote more!
i like chapter!
write chapter 4 soon plz

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Yeah,it's great!I need a nickname or something 'cause I have a long username.

How is DaSp101?

And keep writing jimmy

great! write more

Cool! It's good! Plz write more!

Cool! I like the new chap.

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Yeah,it's great!I need a nickname or something 'cause I have a long username.

How is DaSp101?

And keep writing jimmy

*thinks*maybe.*thinks some more...*does D.S_101 sound good?

I luv the story!

^yeah,write more!

chapter 4
back in the real world.jimmy looked about the forest.he saw maja.jimmy attacked maja with his claw.a dragon started a forest fire.jimmy flew out of the forest.the dragon temple was being attacked by other dragons.jimmy flew into the dragon temple.the roof had been destroyed.then another dragon attacked jimmy.cynder attacked the dragon wth her claw.the dragon flew off.jimmy chased the dragon.cynder went to find spyro.jimmy attacked the dragon.the dragon fell into the dragon temple.spyro was fighting all the enemy dragons.he got trapped by a rockfall.jimmy saw a robot version of cynder.the robot destroyed the dragon statue.jimmy smashed the robot with his tail.cynder found the rocks and tried to rescue spyro but the rocks would not break.

chapter 5 coming soon.

oh great! keep writeing!

Great!

great stuff!!! plz keep writing, jimmy!!!

awsome,write more!

how did this end up in the second page?

This is so cool carry on!

Please continue!

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if you have something mean to say about my fanfic keep it to yourself don't post it here now i can start the fanfic.

chapter 1
there were six eggs one of the six eggs was red with black spots. the thieves stole the six eggs. the master thief took the red egg with the black spots on it. the red egg with the black spots started hatching then a big powerful wave of energy came out of the egg. the thieves ran away leaving the eggs behind. spyro found the dragon eggs and the orange dragon "the aura dragon"said spyro then spyro took the dragon eggs and the orange dragon to dragon shores. they named the orange dragon jimmy the dragon all the dragons prepared for the sorcerer's next attack but he did not attack. jimmy met a dragon called maja she attacked jimmy and flew off. later jimmy found maja again and he attacked her until she flew off again. then she teamed up with four dragons to attack jimmy. after that jimmy never saw her again but if he ever saw her jimmy would get his revenge.

that is the end of chapter 1.

Dude... You suck at making story's, learn some story book lessons if you want to write... Oh gawd, please, no more. This story SUCKS.

too bad spyro2008.loads of other people like this story.

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too bad spyro2008.loads of other people like this story.

I really could care less. <.< Honestly, I think a lot of them are using sarcasm.

you don't fool me spyro2008.

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you don't fool me spyro2008.

I'm not fooling you. ;P Your fooling yourself.

you have not changed a bit spyro2008.i wonder how long it is before you get riptoed.

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you have not changed a bit spyro2008.i wonder how long it is before you get riptoed.

rofl.
I could seriously care less. And, really, it's funny. It's funny that people think I should be riptoed, some people really should think before saying that sometimes.