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Cynder looked up from her drawing she had missed Spyro since she moved away from the Temple at that same time Spyro was looking up from his homework seeing an illusion of Cynder looking down at him with tears in her eyes. Cynder could not take it any more she flew out the window heading to the mushroom forest where the temple was landing in Spyros room. "Cynder?" said Spyro he was shocked but Cynder did not answer she flew on top of him trying to kiss him but Spyro was stopping her "Cynder where not ready for this" Cynder's tears of joy turned into tears of shock and pain "why
' she said but befor Spyro could answer she flew out the window.

To Be Continued

do you like it?

its kinda short but it gets longer

I couldnt read it well....
If you make your english better, id understand it more, though i get what the idea is, almost

yea its good

GOOD i like it since i understand grammar problems


Spyro is being a bastard at the monement "raises Gravity hammer"

say sorry to cynder, SPyro

I understand it.Like what he said^.This is good,write more!

thanks guys srry if i got some of it wrong

Cynder was standing at the top of a clift she drew out a knife and cut her wings, her tears grew bigger. Spyro was thinking abotu the time that Cynder and him had together " Im going to get her back he said he flew out. Cynder looked down the clift " this is it" she thought Spyro saw Cynder jumping "CYNDER" he screamed Spyro flew down and grabed her paw "Spyro im, im slipping" cried Cynder. Spyros tears ran down his cheaks " no...NO IM NOT GOING TO LOSE YOU" shouted Spyro. Cynder smiled " Im so sorry Cynder" said Spyro. Cynder fell to her deth but before she slipped she said one thing "I love you".

THERE'S STILL MORE

DUN DUN DUUUUUUUN

SORRY I GOT LOTS OF TYPES

wow! that's sooo good. but soooooooo sad....

HOLY CRUD CYNDER I'LL SAVE YOU *jumps off cliff* great now i need saveing write more

whoh this is getting alittle grafic i mean cynder cut her wings and she commited suicid i hope she's not .........DEAD

Getting a bit crazy there ain't we.

that's really sad! and really good! but u need to work on your grammar a bit more.

wow,this made me cry.so good!good job!

that was sad.But is it still great!

Dont worry good things happen but im not going to be a spoiler

Three days later it was Cynder's funeral Spyro was sitting at her grave crying "Cynder I tried im so sorry I did this to you....... why......." On that night Spyro was having bad dreams of Cynder he struggled trying to get to sleep when a different dream came to him it was Cynder in a pail blue dress she came to him and whispered....

Ha I'm a party pooper you'll need to her the rest

AND THATS TO BE CONTINUED

oh i like!
plz continue!

that's great!

what they said^!!more plz!!

she came to him and whispered "Go to the crystal river there you will find clear water gather some in a bottle and give it to the man past the golden rocks and you will get something in return" and she gave him a blue bottle on a string of silver. Spyro woke with the bottle in his paw. He rushed out to find the crystal river."Spyro we have been flying fro like to hours now can we go home im starving" said sparks Spyro took no notice of sparks whining " look over there the crystal river" Spyro landed gently by the river bank it was beautiful.

Still more fokes

wow that's great!!

write more.

cynder was wearing a dress

cool,write more!

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cynder was wearing a dress

ya i know!

it's great! ^ plz write more!!

Spyro filled the bottle up with the clear water and flew to the golden rocks. An old lion was sitting there he looked up at Spyro "are you in the dark forses" he said Spyro shook his head and gave him the bottle "thank you kind lad my name is Radga" he said as he drank the water. Radga stood up and bowed to Spyro then gave him some black powder "oh yes black powder yeah thats what we need ay" said sparks. Spyro flew back bhome and in no time he was a sleep.

yippe it is soon going to be the end of book 1

verry soon

this is great!plz write more!

WOW! that's awesome!! plz write more Tinks!!

Yea what Sky said and that bit of Cynder's death made me cry

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yes, plz
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Is Cynder going to come back to life?

(I don't want her to)

plz write more!

woooooooooooooooooooow super coooool write more

please write more!
I like your avi.Misty Soul and Queen Mika Tinks!

Thier relationship shouldn't be that dramaitic...

I cant wait until you write more! Good job! You have a good imagination!

^I agree!

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good i like it since i understand grammar problems


Spyro is being a b****** at the monement "raises Gravity hammer"

say sorry to cynder, spyro

i reported you.

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Quote: Jackson117

good i like it since i understand grammar problems


Spyro is being a b****** at the monement "raises Gravity hammer"

say sorry to cynder, spyro

i reported you.

Why? They didn't actually swear.

Saying stuff like "****" Isn't swearing, but if you started to spell it out...


F

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Then you get reported.

yes but in the post that it came from there was no stars.

a little to dramatic when cynder cut off her wings and jumped off the cliff

Dude, I don't think it would get to the point of suicide, this is why the older members don't support SpyroXCynder!

sorry guys I was soooooooooo long

once again he had a dream a dream with cynder in it "spyro take the black powder to my grave and sprinkel it all over it then wait three days.............." Spyro woke up he did what he was told.

no it's good for now.

yeah,this is awesome!!