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#1 Posted: 09:12:35 18/12/2008 | Topic Creator
"No matter what you say, it is what you do" = Deaver88
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#2 Posted: 11:23:12 18/12/2008 | Topic Creator
“Is this really necessary, Lady Bren?” Boy asks.
Lady Bren sign and turn around, Lady Bren looking at 15 year old boy. Boy was scruffy, bright hair, friendly face and smile, blue eyes. Boy wears black pants and white t-shirt. “Yes, it is Crysdell. This is important and you know why.” Bren turn back talk to doctor. “Is, everything alright?” “Don’t call me that, I hate my longer name call me Crys and I didn't do it for purpose.” Crysdell yell. Lady Bren lifts one finger and say angrily. “We are already talk about this, so be quiet.” ” Please, doctor can continue.” “Like I was saying, everything seems to be normal but blood tests aren’t ready yet, call me later or send in address.” “We do, thanks your time doctor” Bren open door “Crysdell we leaving” Crysdell get up chair and look doctor eyes and smile “Thank you doctor” “Anytime Crys, anytime” Lady Bren close the door behind him, they walk across hospital and hallway, errand parking lots Both don’t say a word, small yellow car drive away town and after few hours, car arrived orphanages garden. “You go straight in your room and stay here with out dinner, understood?” Lady Bren says icily. Crysdell look at Bren and try say some nasty words to him but only words he heard was “Yes, lady Bren” Crysdell run his room and locked door. “This isn’t fair, I only touch that toaster and it catches fire. It doesn’t even hurt my fingers but no, all I get is yelling and irony.” Crysdell was angry, but it was already late, soon he goes sleep. Clock was 2.00am, Crysdell wake up. Strange voice was waken him, Crysdell goes door and inspect lock, at that very moment door kicked inside, Crysdell jumped back bed and look doorway. Doorways stand two black suited men, Crysdell try throwing radio these intruders but before he grabs radio on his hand, second intruder raise gun and shot. Crysdell feel three needles pierce his chest and electric shock, he was still conscious after first shock but after second shock he blackout.
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#3 Posted: 16:49:58 18/12/2008
Don't double post.
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#4 Posted: 18:11:36 18/12/2008
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#5 Posted: 16:46:42 19/12/2008 | Topic Creator
Crysdell slowly open eyes, light hurts but not much. Quickly he pelt away bed and probe where he was. Chest hurt when he moves so fast, Crysdell was small white room, room only thing was bed.
Crysdell raise right hand and open hospital jacket, chest was taped by swathe. Crysdell look himself, Then room, up and down. “Where, heck I am?” Crysdell not heard answer his question, but sense that somebody spies her. He goes sit on bed and wait.
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#6 Posted: 13:30:45 20/12/2008
I whanna read mooooooooore!!!
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#7 Posted: 17:58:11 20/12/2008 | Topic Creator
After waiting hour or two, Crysdell heard talk and soon door opened, 2 soldiers coming in, they look Crysdell and raise stun guns, and then long man black suit coming in, after that door closed.
Man look at Crysdell. “Don’t do anything hasty, we want only talk.” Crysdell nodded. “What is this place, who you are and why I am here?” Man sigh and coming sit same bed as Crysdell “This place is called Factory, my name doesn’t matter to you but I am charge.” Crysdell looked man face, faces was old and sad. “And? ” “You are here because you might be dangerous.”
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#8 Posted: 11:20:40 21/12/2008 | Topic Creator
Crysdell mouth opened but he shut it quickly
“Me? Dangerous? Other situation this could be funny but not now. Please explain what you mean.” “I show you if you want.” Crysdell nodded again Mystery man takes small knife and gashed small wound his arm. “Now give me your arm” Crysdell look man and knife but he put the arm out. Man take knife press knife Crysdell skin, Knife not even leave scratch, after that man take lighter out of pocket, using lighter flame he try burn the arm. Crysdell exclaim when flame touches his hand. “What hell you try to do, get off me.” Crysdell pull his arm away, and look at it. Arm was fine, no burn and no wound. Crysdell looked man again, this time man watch Crysdell surprised face. “What’s hell is going on? What you are done to me?” “We don’t do anything for you, this might be frightening but you aren’t first case. There are 3 more human like you but different skills. If you want listen I tell you why and what you can do.”
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#9 Posted: 11:44:20 21/12/2008 | Topic Creator
“OK, tell me all.”
“First, do you know what dragons are?” “Yeah, sure giant legendary lizards, breath fire, kill people but its just fantasy, dragons don’t exist.” “Are, you so sure about that?” “I am, there is never found proof that dragons exist, why?” “Factory is used to be genetic laboratory and Research Company and we have proof, bones actually." “Bones?” “Factory tried clone dragon long ago and failed, now we have find you, you are special one like others 3.” “What kind of special?”
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#10 Posted: 11:57:11 21/12/2008
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lol its her fanflic cool story by the way |
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#11 Posted: 12:02:24 21/12/2008 | Topic Creator
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Thanks i write more soon.
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#12 Posted: 12:38:38 21/12/2008 | Topic Creator
“You blood is part dragon blood, Somehow your genetic map is mutated and you are small part of dragon.”
Crysdell face tug and he die laughing. “That’s was good one, never heard so stupid talk. Me, a dragon give me break.” Man watch Crysdell laugh and wait him to stop and continue. “It’s hard to believe, but all blood test proof it, liked or not you have dragon gen.” “You, not joking?” “Why I have to?” “Well, let say I believe you. What about others like me?” “They have dragon gen too and they are here same reason than you.” “OK, what you are going to do? “We want you control your powers if you have them and train you fight skills, medicine knowledge, e.t.c , if you are successful we let you go after 2-3 years. But we take test and try research your dragon gen if possible. All this is safety this planet.” “So, its kind likes school, right?” “Yes, it is like school?” “And you let me go if I pass?” “Yes, you have my word, so what you think?” “Well, I am your student now, so can you stop pointing me gun? And can I get books to read, its boring here.” Man smiled, flip fingers and guards dismiss. “I tell this information others, your School start tomorrow and I try get you book or two, next time we meet Crys” Man shakes Crysdell hand and leave.
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#13 Posted: 18:47:13 21/12/2008 | Topic Creator
Crysdell go back sleep, before he do that he think.
(Something isn’t right, they hide something. Why they kidnapped me? And how they find me? Soon or later I escape, but now I should rest and see what lie ahead.) Mornings coming fast, Guard bring him new clothes, bag, books, and food. Guard peek him face a little and growl “Tell, me when you are ready, tests start soon.” Crysdell eat fast and dress down, he knocked door and guard lead him another room. Door closed behind him, he was small classroom and there were 2 boys and girl waiting. Crysdell sit free chair and look around. “Are you new guy?”
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#14 Posted: 19:10:32 21/12/2008 | Topic Creator
Crysdell watch windows and turn his head, girl watching him.
“Yes” “You do fine, what kind powers you have? “I don’t know yet?” Boys burst laugh “Don’t listen to them, they are bullies, its ok if you not know, you wind out soon, I am Uray.” “Crys” “I can control water; boys over there can use ice and fire.” She takes bottle and drinks little water, she burp and blue water kiss float right Crysdell cheek, waterkiss was warm and disappears soon.” Crysdell blush and sputter “Thanks, Uray” Uray smile “You are welcome”
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#15 Posted: 19:54:30 21/12/2008
nice story, keep writing!
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#16 Posted: 20:02:14 21/12/2008 | Topic Creator
Crysdell life was perfect, he get up, eat, go school, talk Uray, Train fight skill and sword-play as hobby. But especially he loves to talk Uray, girl was nice, love talk and try get Crys use his abilities.
Mystery men never show up again but Crysdell know him watching. One night after 2 weeks he talks again with Uray, outside building. They sit garden and watch stars. “How you conform here?” Uray ask Crysdell “Very good, because of you.” “That’s nice to hear. Have you got anything new your powers?” “No, results are clear; my skin is harder and better than normally people.” “Oh, I am sorry.” “Whats for, it’s not your fault. Cheer up, tell me how you wind out your powers.” Uray sign “You already heard it. I was swimming and I create small tsunami.” “It was fun hear it again.” Both smiled and watch sky. “Its late, I go back inside, tomorrow is new day and new challenges.” “I am coming with you.” Uray echoes They headed inside building, Crysdell escort Uray her room and go his own. After he open the door, four hands grab and throw him inside, door shut down.
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#17 Posted: 20:06:47 21/12/2008
yep write more!
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#18 Posted: 20:11:00 21/12/2008
write more!
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#19 Posted: 20:14:52 21/12/2008 | Topic Creator
Was dark, Crysdell couldn’t see very fell. Lights coming out, Crysdell get up and was ready fight.
Two boys stand near door and watching him. “Why, you do that?” Crysdell ask “You not belong here.” Both answer same time. “You are weak so DIE” Boys throwing Fire and ice balls, Crysdell evades first wave and hit ice guy, Fire guy see her and burst fire on her bag. Crysdell scream pain, fire burn his back. “Now you see how weak you are, we going to kill you and that girl too, she is in our way.” Crysdell, Stop scream, tears coming out his eyes and he say icily. “Why?” “We, don’t need reason, say you prayers.” Crysdell close his eyes, feel anger full heart, heard alarm bell and guards running, nothing has matter now, he open eyes, put hands together and free anger. Guards were close but, only they see how room door explodes out, and how two bodies fly out of room. After few second later they peek room, Crysdell was still up, but shaking.
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#20 Posted: 20:43:57 21/12/2008
keep writing!
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#21 Posted: 19:08:08 23/12/2008 | Topic Creator
4 guards aim Crysdell and them coming slowly inside room. Crysdell power was drain out all his energy, he dropped knees. Alarm was still on and its sound tease Crysdell ears.
“Can som…….” Guards shot him, when he opens mouth. But this time stun guns don’t knot him out, He feels how electricity full his body, get up, take knife on his pocket and stab one guard. After other guards see he moves, they turn stun guns highest point. Crysdell smile when he sees guards confusion, he throw knife and other guard yells, knife was perk his eye. One guard escapes but another drop stun gun and charges. Crysdell grabs stun gun needles out of chest and hit them guard face, power was still on and guard scream file electricity melt his brains. Crysdell run out room and go Urays door, door was broken and he peek in.
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#22 Posted: 21:11:58 23/12/2008
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Oh C'mon, everyone double posts! Your fanfic is AWSOME!
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#23 Posted: 14:22:03 25/12/2008 | Topic Creator
Room was destroyed, bed still burn. Crysdell step in, he can’t see Uray anywhere, he turn around and upset, Uray stand doorway, she eyes was wet.
“Uray, what’s wrong?” Uray shake a little and his voice was shrill “You………..You…………..You……” She lisp Crysdell come closer and try taking Uray to hand, Urays eyes get bigger, she go back and Yell “YOU KILL THEM……….YOU…….MURDERER, stay away from me.” Uray raise her hand too, water wave hit Crysdell and he smash in the wall. Attack still continues, Crysdell fear he might drown soon. Uray stop and falls floor, Crysdell spit water out his mouth, he move crawling towards Uray, She was unconscious. Before Crysdell touch Uray he feels sting his shoulder, turn look at it and realise what was happened. “Crap” He says and his eyes blur.
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#24 Posted: 20:57:11 25/12/2008 | Topic Creator
Darkness was many ours Crysdell mind but at last he see small light, he try touch it but cant.
“Is this punishment?” He whispered. “No, only test.” Crysdell eyes get open, he was white room and Doctors surround him and stab him. “What now?” “Research.” “For what?” He tries moving his arms and legs but he was chained. Terribly feel hit him slowly, he turn head to see his right arm. Angry and fear full his mind. “My arm, where is my arm?” “We need example piece our research fork.” That’s was last drop, Crysdell hate get new top, chains not stop him attach doctors or guards. He only meaning was kill all near him. After few minutes, all was over, dead bodies, security cameras destroyed, blood, swat and guns. Crysdell mind was sure now or never. He crap medical kit and one Real gun for his left arm. Alarm gets on again but he not cares it anymore, only meaning was get out that place. All guards who try stop him was doomed, he don’t care this new feeling on his mind and he even not feel sorrow when kill somebody. He was garden when Uray shows up with black suited man.
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#25 Posted: 21:05:11 25/12/2008
this is good! write more!
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep. Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land. |
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#26 Posted: 00:16:56 26/12/2008
yeah write more!
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#27 Posted: 14:53:55 26/12/2008 | Topic Creator
Black suited man smiled
“Well done Crys, your powers are incredible and we will use them well.” Crysdell look at Uray and her empty eyes. “What you have done to her?” “Nothing special, we just reboot her.” “Brainwash? Why you don’t brainwash me too?” “We try, but machine shut down, so we just cut you arm.” “Why?” “Factory is something else than you can imagine, we are war right now Crys and you are our new weapon or your clones are.” “My….clones?” “Don’t be so silly, after we get your DNA we start product clones and make DNA injection. That’s why twins attack you, they were first humans who get your DNA and results were unstable but this girl.” Man touches Uray shoulder. “Is better version, can you understand our surprise when we find out that everyone have different ability?” “You talk too much, so what now?” “Now, we will see you and Urays fight.” Uray step forward.
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#28 Posted: 15:39:58 26/12/2008
oh this chapter is interesting!
write more!
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#29 Posted: 20:29:41 26/12/2008 | Topic Creator
“Uray, don’t do this to me.” Crysdell beg
Uray shot water ball his face, Crysdell get back “She don’t listen to you, I have full control over her.” “You will pay for that.” He swears and evades another water ball “I don’t think so.” Uray shot his water balls rapidly speed and Crysdell cant evades them anymore. “Uray, please try remember.” “HE, NOT HEAR YOU!” Crysdell dive direct Uray and tackles her “Listen to me; you don’t want to do it.” Uray don’t listen and starts choke him and summon another water ball, Crysdell was trap and Black suited man only laughs while he was trouble.
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#30 Posted: 20:47:33 26/12/2008 | Topic Creator
Crysdell try say he was sorry but only bubbles coming out, Medical kit was dropped near and Uray see what he try to and kicked needle out his hand.
“(Crap, Its only she or me.)” Uray empty eyes looked Crysdells eyes, those eyes can’t see Crysdells tears flow, light flash and Uray was gone. Crysdell gathering breath while Black suited men escaping his car. Man doesn’t get away Crysdell runs after him and pull him out of car. “You will pay for her death.”
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#31 Posted: 20:57:58 26/12/2008 | Topic Creator
“Killing me, don’t bring her back, but I can help you.”
“No, you can’t, nobody Cant.” he yells and tears still keep coming “He was my family you know and you brake your promise too.” “Please, try undrs…” “What?” Crysdell put gun his head and swear “Be hell your home forever.” Using last ammo Crysdell shoots, blood burst everywhere and he throw man body out off car and Get in and drive possibly far that place, he escape was going well but he still cries same time loudly.
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#32 Posted: 20:02:19 28/12/2008 | Topic Creator
Black car drive up mountain road, it was time to sunset. All the time, same things rolling Crysdell mind.
“(Why it happened? why me?)” Cars voice sound different. “(If I haven’t hurt her, will I be here?)””(Do I have power make decision just my own mind, and why my brains keep telling me its good thing?)” Car stopped, gas end. “No what? Night is coming, Factory probably following me, and no I am alone deep mountain area.” “GIMME A BREAK” he yells. Crysdell get out car and watching were he might be, giant white and stone mountains, nothing living things. Crysdell start follow animal footstep and try find shelter; rabbit footprints lead him near cave. “Better than nothing.” Crysdell mumbled Crysdell take torch by medical kit, when he do say, he first time stop thinking his lost arm. “It was my better arm, no I have only stub.” Hate against factory raises again his mind, but right when he thinks about how revenge Uray popped his mind. “No, I can’t do it. More innocent people can die.” Crysdell keep going deeper cave, suddenly he lost balance and collapse. Medical kit dropped ravine, and Crysdell heard it when it smash ground. “Great, more trouble.” He gets up and go ravines edge and look down, little light shines bottom by ravine. Crysdell frightened he hears voice but voice coming in said his head. “Dad, what is that?”
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#33 Posted: 01:34:19 29/12/2008
write more!
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep. Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land. |
deaver88 Platinum Sparx Gems: 6132 |
#34 Posted: 19:56:07 03/01/2009 | Topic Creator
“I don’t know Pearl”
“That thing dropped that hole” Crysdell see something move, he tries seeing better when edge falls and he fell too. Crysdell try grab to wall but it was too slimy. “Dad, look out.” Crysdell dropped top of something hard and hit his head. When he open slowly his eyes, he chocked when realise at giant green eye looking for him. “Is that food Dad?, I am hungry.”
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#35 Posted: 20:21:57 03/01/2009 | Topic Creator
“No Pearl, it’s human.” Crysdell cant heard words even; he was so close, words seems to coming inside his head.
“Can I still eat it?” ask female voice Eye tart moving. Crysdell see first head then neck, wings, body and tail. “This is unbelievable, Dragons? Here? I may hit my head too hard.” Dragon moves away from him, it was totally black, under wings was grey and nail, horns and end tail was white. Behind black dragon, was other, its skin was silver and eyes red and horns, nails and tail was white like other dragon, its seems to be younger and girl. “Can I? Can I? I am starving.” “Ok, Pearl you can eat it.” “Nice, lunch time.” Pearl looked Crysdell and her eyes shines when she coming closer. “This is just dream, I will wake soon” Pearl open her mouth and Crysdell smell hot and stinky air, Pearl spit dropped Crysdell hand. “This is not dream” He yell when mouth coming closer.
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#36 Posted: 19:41:25 04/01/2009 | Topic Creator
Sorry, i havent write for ages, so i will try write more now.
Crysdell gather his strength and jump away, Pearl mouth grab his left leg shoe. “Dad, is not dead yet.” Pearl echoes and spit shoe out her mouth. “Wait, I kill it” “No dad, let me do it, I need practise.” Pearl say angry And she runs after Crysdell. “This is great, all try kill me but this is first time anyone try eating me, how can tell I taste bad.” He muttered when runs away and try avoid Pearl teeth. “Stupid creature, it’s running towards blind alley” “Lets, see who is stupid, me or FAT lizard” Crysdell thought angry. Pearl stop, turn around and scowl black dragon. “I AM NOT FAT, HOW DARE YOU? YOU ARE MY DAD” She yells power that shakes cave “Pearl, honey. I don’t called you fat.” black dragon say Pearl eyes burn “Yes, you did. I heard clearly how you say FAT.” “No, I not.” “Who you are going to blame for that, Rocks maybe? There isn’t smart life here what can call me fat.” “Pearl, I swea…” “Ahh, great. Now my lunch is gone too. Thanks dad.”
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#37 Posted: 20:19:53 04/01/2009
cool! write more!
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep. Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land. |
deaver88 Platinum Sparx Gems: 6132 |
#38 Posted: 21:05:04 04/01/2009 | Topic Creator
Crysdell was climbed next level when dragons quarrel each other.
No, he watches how black dragon breaths fire and make light around cave. “Pearl, I can’t explain who call you fat, but it wasn’t me.” “I know, I just get angry, sorry for yelling.” Black dragon smile and say. “You have your mother eyes and fury. “Yes, she gets fire easy, did she?” “Yes she did, I always have to watch my side when she get angry.” “Am I like her? It’s almost 3 years, when she passed away.”
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#39 Posted: 21:14:49 04/01/2009
write more!
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep. Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land. |
deaver88 Platinum Sparx Gems: 6132 |
#40 Posted: 21:40:13 04/01/2009 | Topic Creator
Crysdell remember how his own parents died an explosion, nothing left and even blood was gone.
“You are only, what I have left Pearl” “I know, Blad” “Whoa, you haven’t call me years that name, say dad like good times” “Yes, Bl…I mean dad” “Come here Pearl, let’s play fire like old times” Pearl step next for his father and blows fire like dad before her “Your turn” Blad breaths fire too but miss. “Hey, not cheating” “Try, proof it” “That’s my girl” Both laugh Crysdell laugh too. Fire, talking makes he feel good and peacefully “They seems to be nice family” he thought Blad and Pearl: ”That’s nice to hear” “What?” both ask and moving their heads “I heard it too, Pearl” “Whose there?” Pearl ask and her eyes glares around cave
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#41 Posted: 20:05:58 05/01/2009
write more!
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep. Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land. |
deaver88 Platinum Sparx Gems: 6132 |
#42 Posted: 20:36:35 05/01/2009 | Topic Creator
Crysdell get down just in time.
“Whose, there?” Pearl ask again “Don’t force me coming after you” She echoes Blad get up, and start search Crysdell thinks and get idea not bad but not good either, He focus and thought “I show up, IF you promise that you don’t hurt me” “I promise, show your self” Pearl echoes Crysdell take other shoe and throe it near, Pearl hear voice and shot fireball right there. “Pearl, what name of the ancestors you did?” “I kill it” Pearl says happily “You are bad liar Pearl and you miss” Pears happy goes away quick “How you know my name? Who are you? And how you survive my attack?”
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#43 Posted: 20:41:44 05/01/2009
great! write more!
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep. Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land. |
deaver88 Platinum Sparx Gems: 6132 |
#44 Posted: 20:50:25 05/01/2009 | Topic Creator
I will, give me second "Write"
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#45 Posted: 21:00:39 05/01/2009
ok.
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep. Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land. |
deaver88 Platinum Sparx Gems: 6132 |
#46 Posted: 21:11:20 05/01/2009 | Topic Creator
“My name doesn’t matter, second I am the “Lunch” like you call me and final I used bait”
“Well, well, this human is smart, he trick a dragon” Blad say and smile “Thanks Blad, I feel I can trust your word, but you child……” Pearl snort black smoke “What about me? I am fat again, do I?” “You are nice person if you don’t try killing me all the time” “Excuse me” she yells and turn head away Crysdell get up and jump down near Blad, before anyone say anything Pearl moved her head fast and shot another fireball for Crysdell Crysdell evades fireball but flames burn his hair “Still don’t get it?” “You call me fat; you pay for it “Lunch”” Pearl says and her eyes burn. Same time tail slash earth “Stop, both of you” Roar Blad “Dad, don’t get involved this” Pearl roared back “Its OK Blad, Let her come. Maybe she learn something new” “Like what?” Blad ask and looked Crysdell “Food can bite back!” Crysdell say and looked Pearl burning eyes “You will die” Pearl opens her mouth and shot 3 Fireballs
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#47 Posted: 21:20:02 05/01/2009
great story! write more!
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep. Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land. |
deaver88 Platinum Sparx Gems: 6132 |
#48 Posted: 21:22:37 05/01/2009 | Topic Creator
Maybe, not many have interest this story but i like to share it with others.
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#49 Posted: 21:24:52 05/01/2009
ok.
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep. Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land. |
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#50 Posted: 21:27:48 05/01/2009 | Topic Creator
I will write more, but later
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