OK, this is just the introduction to the characters.
Gridion: My special dragon. He's red, with a gray tuft of hair. He has a silver underbelly and razor-sharp claws. But he likes to write...
Gawain: Green, with violet eyes. Vicious. Good-natured. Loves a good battle
Gwendolyn: Blue, with green eyes. Always thinks through things before jumping in. Loyal.
Gadzooks: Also green, loves to write. Always has a mischievious look in his eyes.
Drake: I'm not sure what he looks like, he's someone else's dragon. But he's in this story!
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#1 Posted: 21:15:49 16/11/2008 | Topic Creator
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#2 Posted: 21:27:38 16/11/2008
really cool! please write it soon!
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#3 Posted: 21:29:25 16/11/2008 | Topic Creator
maybe tomorrow, i have to get off now. Bye!
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#4 Posted: 21:38:17 16/11/2008
ok! bye! i'll wait for more!
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#5 Posted: 22:29:37 16/11/2008
waiting but it sounds good!
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#6 Posted: 22:34:27 16/11/2008 | Topic Creator
Gridion: Come on, write!
Wait! Don't worry, tomorrow after school, i promise i will write Chapter 1. |
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#7 Posted: 22:42:32 16/11/2008
yay! we'll be waiting!
Fireflight: yep! we'll wait!
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#8 Posted: 22:43:37 16/11/2008 | Topic Creator
Dang, i have to go. Bye.
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#9 Posted: 23:09:03 16/11/2008
bye! i think i have to go soon!
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#10 Posted: 22:52:46 17/11/2008 | Topic Creator
OK, chapter 1 will be written....after dinner!
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#11 Posted: 23:06:49 17/11/2008
yay! that reminds me, i'm hungry!
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#12 Posted: 23:13:50 17/11/2008
cant wait!sounds interesting.
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#13 Posted: 00:21:06 18/11/2008
Yeah,can't wait!!!
Dawn:More dragons!!! Pablo:Awsome!!!
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"I've missed you so much, even though I don't show it around. I dream of you and I see you in my mind. I hope that one day you'll be back..." |
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#14 Posted: 00:36:11 18/11/2008 | Topic Creator
Get ready to be amazed....with Chapter 1!!! The story will often switch between dragons when they are all seperated.
Chapter 1:Capture and Evasion They were all walking through Twilight Falls. The moon was full and shining brightly, the trees swayed with a gentle breeze, and the waterfall pitter-pattered into the lake below. "It seems too quiet," said Gwendolyn. "What do you mean? Don't you hear all the sounds of nature?" Gadzooks asked. "Ugh, what a nature boy," Gawain said. "Guys, guys. Can't we all just get along?" Gridion said tiredly. He was getting tired of these guys fighting. "Wait...what was that?" Drake asked. "I heard a rustle," he said. "It's the trees, dude," said Gawain. "No...i heard it too. It sounded louder, like someone else is here," Gadzooks said. They were suddenly jumped by 12 Grublins! Gwendolyn and Gawain, the 2 best fighters, were knocked unconscious instantly. "Scatter!" Gadzooks yelled just as he was clubbed on the head. "Come on, Gridion!" Drake called. He had already flown up into the air. Gridion went up with him, and they took off towards Warfang to warn the Elders of the capture of their friends. |
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#15 Posted: 00:38:00 18/11/2008
sweeeeeeeeeeeet dude!i like it!
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#16 Posted: 00:39:07 18/11/2008 | Topic Creator
Why thank you.
Gridion: I'm famous! What he means is, he says thank you too. |
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#17 Posted: 00:39:15 18/11/2008
wow! really cool! write more!
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#18 Posted: 00:41:01 18/11/2008 | Topic Creator
tomorrow i may write chapter 2 AND i will write Chapter 12 in Mole-Yair.
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#19 Posted: 00:42:06 18/11/2008
yay! i can't wait!
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#20 Posted: 00:43:14 18/11/2008 | Topic Creator
Trust me, Part 2 in mole-Yair will be excellent.
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#21 Posted: 00:44:53 18/11/2008
yeah! good story!!!!
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#22 Posted: 00:58:35 18/11/2008
i can't wait for more!
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#23 Posted: 21:33:02 18/11/2008 | Topic Creator
OK, i will let the fans decide. Should i follow Gridion and Drake? Or Gawain, Gadzooks, and Gwendolyn? Your choice!
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#24 Posted: 21:53:57 18/11/2008
Gridion!
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#25 Posted: 22:00:20 18/11/2008 | Topic Creator
OK, one for Gridion. Anyone else?
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#26 Posted: 22:29:35 18/11/2008 | Topic Creator
Hey! Hello? anybody here!?
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#27 Posted: 22:34:23 18/11/2008
gridion!gridion!*continues to chant*
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#28 Posted: 22:40:29 18/11/2008 | Topic Creator
Alright! i'm gonna guess Gridion takes the cake. But Chapter 3 will follow the other dragons. Alright, here goes!
Chapter 2: A Rescue Plan Drake and Gridion arrived at the temple at about sundown. Ignitus was in his usual spot in the gardens, watching the sunset. "Ignitus, Ignitus!" Drake called down to him. Ignitus looked up. "What is it, young dragons?" he questioned. They told Ignitus what had happened. "Hmm...why were you dragons in Twilight Falls?" he asked. "Uh...we were searching for....my special necklace. I lost it when i went to get the daily water from the river there," Gridion said. "Come. Let's go inside and make a plan of rescue with the other elders," Ignitus said, before turning and heading inside. The 2 youngsters followed him. They met Cyril, Volteer, and Terrador inside. "Look...there really is no secret way inside the place where your friends were taken. So we'll need to go inside the front door, and fight our way through," Terrador said. "Wait. How do you know where they are held?" Drake asked. "The vision pool, of course," said Cyril snottily. "Well...you young dragons must get some sleep. Tomorrow, you must train before we can attempt a rescue at your friends," Ignitus said. He sent the two off to bed. |
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#29 Posted: 22:43:57 18/11/2008
so cool!cant wait for more.
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#30 Posted: 21:53:36 19/11/2008 | Topic Creator
OK, later i will write chapter 3 and it will follow the other 3 dragons. Eek, wait until you see the new bad guy....
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#31 Posted: 21:54:56 19/11/2008
OMG! its sooo cool! did you get most of the names form the book The fire withen?
Deanna: I think i like Gridion do you like like him? or like him as a friend? Deanna: LIKE LIKE!!!!!
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#32 Posted: 00:07:17 20/11/2008 | Topic Creator
Yeah, most of the names are from that book. Gridion is my own dragon. I actually have him, he's a plushie. And Drake is Cynder09's dragon, she let me use him.
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#33 Posted: 00:20:06 20/11/2008 | Topic Creator
Chapter 3: An old friend now an enemy
Gadzooks woke up suddenly. He had a throbbing bruise on his head. He would have to deal with it later, so he sat up, and immediately wished he hadn't. He felt sick to the stomach. "Gwendolyn. Gawain. Wake up," he said quietly. It was loud enough though, because he felt stirring next to him. "Where are we?" Gawain asked. "We're...we're in some kind of a cave," Gwendolyn replied to him. "Well...look who's awake," came an unfamiliar voice from behind them. They turned to find a big, red dragon with an eye spectacle staring down at them. But what really stood out to them was what the dragon was holding in it's paws. It was holding a great big bag full of gems. "You. I've heard of you, you're that bear, Moneybags. Only....you've become a dragon. How?" Gadzooks wondered aloud. "Ah, yes, you see, Spyro made me so rich that i was able to buy a machine that allowed me to turn into a dragon," Moneybags said. "Well, that figures," said Gawain. "Silence!" Moneybags roared. "Tomorrow you will be burned at the stake, because i just don't like dragons! Muhahahahahaha!" Moneybags left before he punched in a keypad code and the door to the cave opened, and he stepped out. |
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#34 Posted: 00:25:44 20/11/2008
SpyroKing,our story is now joinable!Or did you already read that part?
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Me and Unknown1,always and forever love you. ♥Unknown1♥ |
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#35 Posted: 00:26:56 20/11/2008 | Topic Creator
Yeah, i did. So...when can i join?
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#36 Posted: 00:29:12 20/11/2008
cool story! please write more!
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#37 Posted: 00:30:28 20/11/2008
Quote: SpyroKing
Deanna: I LOVE YOU GRIDION!!!!!*scremes* wow deanna! Deanna:
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#38 Posted: 00:31:26 20/11/2008 | Topic Creator
Gridion: Whoa, whoa. Down girl. Plenty of time for that later, eh?
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#39 Posted: 00:33:47 20/11/2008
You can join whenever you want SpyroKing!
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Me and Unknown1,always and forever love you. ♥Unknown1♥ |
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#40 Posted: 00:35:18 20/11/2008
Quote: SpyroKing
Deanna: *screames* DEANNA CONTROL YOURSELF!
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#41 Posted: 00:37:06 20/11/2008 | Topic Creator
Okey-dokey, i'll join. What should i do?
@Deanna: Gridion says: *kisses* You like that right? |
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#42 Posted: 00:40:34 20/11/2008
Right now,ZarineNas's egg just hatched.Gridion appeared out of nowhere.Now.What he chooses is his choice.Wether he would like to do something evil or not.
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#43 Posted: 00:41:25 20/11/2008 | Topic Creator
No, he will be good....ok, i'll be right there.
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#44 Posted: 21:40:59 20/11/2008
Quote: SpyroKing
Deanna:*squelles and faints* wow
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#45 Posted: 00:46:19 30/11/2008 | Topic Creator
Finally, i write again!
Chapter 4: Training Begins The next morning, Gridion woke up to find Drake staring down at him. "Ahh! Would you not do that?" Gridion said angrily. "Ooh, looks like somebody woke up on the wrong side of the bed!" Drake replied. "Look. Why are you so hyper?" "Because! Today Ignitus helps us start with our training!" Drake said excitedly. Gridion had totally forgotten. "Let's go!" he cried. They ran off to the training room where Ignitus was waiting. "Ah, there you 2 are. Let us begin! We will start with you Gridion," he said. "Watch and learn," Gridion whispered to Drake, who rolled his eyes in turn. Gridion walked to Ignitus. "Firstly, what is your element?" Ignitus asked. "Umm...i think it's fire," Gridion replied. "Good. Now, close your eyes. And feel the fire that flows through your veins. Allow it's heat to consume you...and breathe with it. Now rise up! And release the fire storm within you!" Ignitus cried. Gridion floated up in the air, and suddenly a huge surge of fire circled around the room! "Excellent work Gridion! Now we will continue to you Drake," Ignitus said. Drake was about to step up when suddenly there came an earthshattering roar. They turned around, and in the doorway to the gardens was... TO BE CONTINUED... |
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#46 Posted: 01:30:57 30/11/2008
Deanna: A WHAT!!! A WHAT!!! A WHAT!!!!!
CONTENUE!!!!!!!!!! Deanna: *chants* *chants*
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#47 Posted: 01:31:21 30/11/2008 | Topic Creator
You want to know what it is right now?
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#48 Posted: 01:37:31 30/11/2008
YES!!!!!!!!
Deanna: YESSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!
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#49 Posted: 01:42:10 30/11/2008 | Topic Creator
Weeeeell...here u go!
I don't know either! Muahahahahhaha!!! |
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#50 Posted: 01:44:35 30/11/2008
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
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