darkSpyro

hi i'm new here,and i got this idea for a story.i want to post it,but,i'm not sure.wat do you think?if you want me to post it,i'll post it here!please let me know.

sure! post it! welcome to darkspyro! i'm also writing a story, its called the ledgend of Fireflight! its very long!

Thank you Cynder09!I'll start it in my next post.

your welcome!

Fury walked through the forest in silence."Where are you,Spyro?"he muttered.Spyro had dissapeared one year ago.No one knew what happened to him.Fury,lost in his thoughts,took a wrong turn and soon found himself lost.He turned when he saw something.Was that a purple glow?He walked towards the glow."GASP!"in a small nest laid a dragon egg.The last dragon egg in the world.

That was the first part to my story,"Awakening".Please post your thoughts,and criticizems(sorry if spelling is wrong)here.

Excellent story....

thank you SpyroKing.Oh,i forgot.if you have ideas about my story,pm me,or just post it here.

great story! write more!

okay next part.

Fury ran the egg back to Volteer,leader of his tribe,Lightning Tribe."Volteer!Volteer!"Fury screamed.Volteer stumbled out of his hut."What is it Fury?"Other dragons had come out to see what was happening.Fury pulled the egg from his pack.Volteer was shocked."A purple dragon egg??Where did you find it?"Fury hesitated."In Gnorc country."The gathered dragons gasped."Fury,you know Gnasty Gnorc will be angered!"Volteer scolded.A nearby dragon spoke."What about Red?"he exclaimed.All conversation stopped when they heard the egg crack.From the egg popped out a purple dragon,a type of dragon not seen since Spyro dissapeared.

okay,i hope you like my story so far.

wow! cool! write more!

nice!!!! keep writeing!

all right,part three.

For the next month,Fury,a dragon of fire,Volteer,a dragon of electricity,Mordan,a dragon of ice,and Mordax,a dragon of earth,taught the new dragon,Violet,how to use the elements.Although she was young she learned quickly.

10 years later.......

Violet wandered through the forest in search of the long lost temple.She heard something nearby.Someone was following her!She jumped on her pursuer,only to find a dragon fly."HEY!GET OFF ME!!!"he screamed.Violet smiled sheepishly."Sorry.Whats your name?"The dragonfly brushed himself off."My name is Sparky,son of Sparx."

alright,thats all for now.

aww no more?????

alright heres some more.i try to make it alittle suspensful,but i cant wait to wright more.

"Sparx?The Sparx?The same Sparx that travelled with Spyro?He's your dad?"Violet was amazed."Yep that's him.Who's your dad?"Violet became very sad."I didn't know my father." "Oh.I'm sorry.So what are you doing here?"Violet hesitated."Looking for The lost temple." "WHAT!?!?You do know that the temple is in Gnorc country,right?" "Yes." "Well,uh....I'd better come with you in case ya' get scared or somethin'."Violet rolled her eyes."My hero."

srry if its too short,but i have to think about for a while

it's good! keep writeing

all right just to give a mental picture of violet,shes purple with a red underbelly,and white horns

sounds pretty!

shes very pretty!

keep writing! you should also come and read the story that i am writing (If you havent already) called The Wanderer

okay!part 5

Soon Violet and Sparky were in Gnorc country.The Gnorcs were ruled by Gnasty Gnorc,a terrible tyrant."So what do you know about he temple?"Sparky asked."I know that the Chronicler is there.And Ignitus."Suddenly they were attacked by Gnorcs!Sparky flew off somewhere and left Violet.Violet charged one Gnorc and lit another one on fire.Freezing another one,then more came!Summoning all her power,she let loose a powerful earth fury.Within minutes all the Gnorcs were dead.Sparky flew over."Guess we showed them huh?" "WE?!YOU LEFT ME!"Violet screamed."Thats...uh...because....uh...I....thought you were ready to handle them on your own!"

Ha, Sparky is just like his father

i know!like father like son

okay,my last post of the day!

"Lets just go."Violet said."That was pretty awsome back there.Spyro could do that too."Sparky said.Violet gave no response.

2 hours later......

Violet and Sparky were no where near the temple by night.They made camp and went to sleep.

srry about how short it is but im tired.ill post more tomorrow.

heres the next part.its a little lengthy.

By evening, the duo were at the temple,but they wern't the only ones.In the clearing in front of the temple stood an army of Gnorcs."ALL RIGHT!EVERYBODY!!!!WERE GETTING IN THIS TEMPLE TONIGHT!!!!THE CHRONICLER AND IGNITUS CAN HIDE NO MORE!!!!!!!!!!!"The largest one yelled.Sparky was shaking."Violet!That was Gnasty Gnorc himself!We should get out of here!"he whispered."And leave the Chronicler and Ignitus?!?!"Sparky hesitated."Um........YEAH!"Violet shook her head."No way.I'm going,with or with out you."Sparky sighed."Fine lets go.But hold on,...........ARE YOU CRAZY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"He whispered loudly.Violet ignored him and charged,Sparky close behind.The Gnorcs were caught off guard,and afew were killed quickly by Violet.Gnasty started shouting at the Gnorcs.All Gnorcs turned and charged at our heroes.Violet froze most of them but a few hit her.The Gnorcs cornered Violet and Sparky by the entrance."Well Sparky,I guess this it."Violet said.Sparky was crying."You know,I'm sorry for that thing when I abandoned you.WHY CRUEL WORLD,WHY DOES IT HAVE TO END?!?!?"he screamed.Suddenly the temple entrance opened,and a giant paw grabbed the two and dragged them in the temple.

sparky:WHAT?!THATS ALL?!?!COME ON!!!!
srry,but ill continue it later.
sparkyh.okay.

great story! keep writing!

thanks!im having trouble thinking of a name for a male dragon.any ideas??

hmm..........................*thinks of a name*............i have some ideas, but i've already used alot of names on my story!

okay.i have a few to.i just wanted to see if anyone had anything better.illwait,but if nothin comes up ill use mine.

what did you have in mind?!

i was tinking like maybe shadow,thorn,or marcon.

cool! i like those names!

really?!i kinda like marcon.its mysterious.ooooooooooo

cool! go with Marcon

okay!with the new name decided,another part!

"AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!IT'S THE ICY HAND OF DEATH!!!!!!I'M DEAD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!OH WHY,WH-""SPARKY!Were not dead!"Violet said.Sparky opened his eyes."Were not?"Violet shook her head."Nope."Sparky blushed."Oh,well,I knew that.""Are you two alright?"Violet and Sparky turned to see their savior.And none other than Igntus stood there!Violet stared up in awe."Were.....were fine Ignitus."she said."Are they all right,Master?"a young dragon said as he ran up.Violet fell in love instantly."HI!I'm Violet!"she said."Marcon."he replied.Marcon was the same age as Violet.Violet stared at him passionately.Sparky waved a hand in front of her face."Uh,hello?Violet?Are you in there!?HELLO!"

alright,another ending!
Violet:but,we were at the good part!
to bad.

really cool! this is great! write more!

hey,just to give a mental image of sparky,he looks like sparx except he has a red glow.i would draw what the characters look like,but i cant draw.if anyone wonders what a character looks like,ill post their discription.

ok, cool! i would draw them for you, but i can't draw either!

okay,my last part of the day!

"HEY!Little bug!leave her alone!"Marcon said."All right,let's set the record straight,I'm a dragonfly!Okay?Not a bug,not a fly,but a.....COME ON!I know you know it!"Just then Violet growled at him."OKAY!I'm sorry!"

thats it!
sparks:too short.
be quiet.

okay,my last part of the day!

"HEY!Little bug!leave her alone!"Marcon said."All right,let's set the record straight,I'm a dragonfly!Okay?Not a bug,not a fly,but a.....COME ON!I know you know it!"Just then Violet growled at him."OKAY!I'm sorry!"

thats it!
sparky:too short.
be quiet.

srry,that was an accident^

lol! funny! its great!

thanks!

np! it reminds me of sparx! i love that wise-cracking dragonfly!

i know hes hilarious!okay this is my last post!

ok! bye! i hope you write more tomorrow!

okay another part!

"Will you three stop it!You act like children!"Ignitus yelled.He cleared his throat."Now young dragons and.........young.........dragonfly,come with me."The three followed Ignitus through the temple.There were so many interesting artifacts in the temple!Soon they were in a chamber with a small pool of liquid."Come Violet,see your future."Ignitus said.Violet stepped forward and looked in.What she saw in it was terrible!There was a war raging around her!Death every where!And then she saw Marcon.And Marcon was the only thing she could see.Then in the last vision a dead dragon lay on the ground in a place she'd never seen before."Well,what did you see?"Ignitus asked.She told him everything except the part about Marcon."Hmmmm....It's just as I'd feared.I-"but Ignitus was cut off when the temple shook!The Gnorcs had gotten in.

thisi s just another post describing someon.Marcon is blue,has a green underbelly,pink horns,and controls earth and electricity.
marcon:i sound cool.
sparky:im cooler
violet:nah marcons cooler.
sparky:fine then!take his side!

Fireflight: lol! dragonflys are so funny!

okay my next part!

The four managed to get out in time and were flying to find the Chronicler."Hey I'm gonna sing to pass the time!Ah hem....*singing*I'm bringing sexy back!Them other boys don't know how to act!"Sparky sang.Marcon glared at him."What?Another song?*singing*AHHHHHHHHHH,GET DOOOOOOOOOOOWNNNNNNNNN!I SAW SHAWTY DANCIN ON THE FLOOR!I'M KINDA NERVOUS TO APPROACH HER THOUGH!OH SHE'S SO STYLELISH,LIKE A SUPER MODEL!SHOULD I MEET HER(YES I THINK YOU OUGHTA!)THE NEEDLE DROPPED!MY TRACK WAS HOT!WE BEG-""SPARKY!SHUT UP!"Sparky shut up.

5 Hours later.....................

They landed for the night to sleep.

okay thats all!
sparky:thank you,thank you!i take requests!
marcon:no he doesnt.

Alex: can you sing swing low sweet chariot?! (like from TEN!)
Fireflight: oh, please don't!