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#1 Posted: 22:37:04 13/11/2008 | Topic Creator
twilight was staring out beyond the front gates of warfang. peace surronded everything. but little did they know that a new age will begin. twilight was the young 13 year old queen of warfang and decendent of spyro and cynder. warfaNG WAS A GIANT PLACE FILLED WITH BUILDING and dragons as the capital of the world everything rested on twilight's ability to lead. then a part of the city went up in a earth fire at the temple of spyro and cynder! A evil, voice rang out and said " this is a war and we the rebels shall bring twilight off the throne!"
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#2 Posted: 22:46:49 13/11/2008
wow!!! really cool!!! please write more!!!
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#3 Posted: 00:13:53 14/11/2008 | Topic Creator
twilight's eyes opened wide at the rebel as he and his army began to attack the city. many began to panic and started to fly. twilight called for the army to come and a clash started. Twilight was about to dive into battle when a dragon , the leader of the power hungry rebels came chargeing at her. she whipped her tail around but he punched her which knocked her out cold. when she woke up she was in the palace. twilight said" we won. this time but the rebels are power hungry and we need to stop them. i know that. but the leader breaths evil this is no rebel it is evil." said caspein Twilight was shocked nothing evil has came up for almost 1000 years! " they wish to bring back malefor. how will they do that? he is dead" laughed twilight caspein said" by killing you and giving power to alimar"
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#4 Posted: 00:14:46 14/11/2008 | Topic Creator
okay people bare with me this si new so i am just introducing things okay? it will get better soon! as the war processes!
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#5 Posted: 00:47:33 14/11/2008
cool! please continue!
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#6 Posted: 22:09:44 14/11/2008 | Topic Creator
* from twilights point of view*
i looked around the city. the only building that has not collapsed is the hospital and thank the ancestors for many were in need of medical attention. Caspein was looking around at the city too with a grimace on his face. it was twilight and it looked like my scales a lot. But i had this fealing i could not shake off it felt wrong and that someone needed my help. " caspein we need to plan an ambush and get rid of the issue....." as i said that a looked over the great river that was just near the forest which led to avalar...wait avalar? I used my amulet's power to look into the forest and what i saw made me relize that these rebels would not stop at anything.
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#7 Posted: 22:11:29 14/11/2008
wow! really good! please write more!
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#8 Posted: 22:33:47 14/11/2008 | Topic Creator
The cheetahs were all in cages and the valley is captured! I was stunned! even the children were in cages!" we need to help them!!!!" i cried out!I jumped in the air and began to fly to the rebels caspein and the army behind me. but just before i could head into the forest a voice in my head said " twilight......use the power of the eclipse to defeat the evil but not now..." i couldn't understand but the rebels started the attack and we were fighting again.
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#9 Posted: 22:37:48 14/11/2008
oh no! poor kids! great story! keep writing!
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#10 Posted: 22:41:20 14/11/2008 | Topic Creator
the day ended as another win for us but we began to cross the desert because there was another dragon city and we needed to get there to protect it. i went to sleep that night and dreamt something horrible. everyone was in chains and doing work like slaves! fire was almost everywere in the backround and a evil laugh crackled from nowere! Alimar was lauging but this is not warfang.......this was sesco the sea dragon city....but this felt like the present..... but i was woken by a large growl as a giant golem poped out of nowere and began to attack us!
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#11 Posted: 22:56:09 14/11/2008
wow! this is really good! please write more!
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#12 Posted: 02:35:09 15/11/2008 | Topic Creator
* third person point of veiw*
Twilights head spun up as the golem lifted it's giant hand toward twilight and nearly smashed her. she was now flying but the golem was distracted with the dragons attacking it but caspien her best friend, got hid dead on! caspien layed unmoving on the sand. but before she could do anything to spirits came out of nowere. there were spyro and cynder!!!they made the golom back underground. spyro flew to twilight and said " welcome young one you must use the amulet to defeat other creatures from the past but you must keep it from alimar's hands you share more than you know." cynder said" keep it from his hands!" twilight began to shout" but only a decendengt of spyro and cynder can use it!" but they dissapeared. caspien moaned and began to stand up.
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Edited 2 times - Last edited at 02:48:42 15/11/2008 by cynder21
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#13 Posted: 02:49:26 15/11/2008
awsome! write more!
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#14 Posted: 03:14:44 15/11/2008 | Topic Creator
just want to say i will switch from twilights and third person point of view but i will always say on top what it is! maybe even alimar's and caspien's view sometimes!
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#15 Posted: 03:29:52 15/11/2008
cool! can't wait for more!
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#16 Posted: 20:15:13 15/11/2008 | Topic Creator
Twilight runned to caspein who said " i'm fine i can follow" but soon he collapsed on the sand. he was carried by on the generals. As thety walked twilight pondered of what spyro had said " you share more than you know" immpossible is all twilight thoughed. they soon reached cester but what they found once again made twilight begin to think the rebels are insane.
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#17 Posted: 20:19:02 15/11/2008
Awesome! Do more!
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#18 Posted: 20:21:04 15/11/2008 | Topic Creator
thanks! ahh i don't think i'll write anymore today!
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#19 Posted: 20:32:52 15/11/2008
*sighs* alright. your choice.
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#20 Posted: 14:13:27 16/11/2008 | Topic Creator
everyone in cester looked freaked out and the flag that stood was for the rebels and twilight heard thier speech. " this is part of the new dragon kingdom now, no longer is twilight your ruler you shall work for me now now build a statue of me." cliamed alimar. Then he said " hello twilight! come to surrender?"
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#21 Posted: 18:55:51 16/11/2008
really cool!
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#22 Posted: 19:08:28 16/11/2008 | Topic Creator
"no way! i came hear to protect the city!"twilight was mad no more then mad! this guy is a creep! aliamr then said "attack and kill who ever"
* caspiens point of veiw* i couldn't let them hury twilight! she is sooo strong and pretty! but i am hurt! i can't help! then i felt power in me! i decided to let it out and maybe we can caputre them! so i did. when it was over i was in the city. must have fainted again. then twilight said " caspein you are the next protecter of the realms the decendent of the great fireflight! you just had an empathy fury!"
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#23 Posted: 19:09:34 16/11/2008
Great! Keep going!
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#24 Posted: 19:23:37 16/11/2008 | Topic Creator
yeah everyone might want to read cynder09's story and luna the black dragon because things from both we be in this one!
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#25 Posted: 20:08:15 16/11/2008
yep! read the ledgend of Fireflight for more on her! great story!
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#26 Posted: 23:01:26 16/11/2008 | Topic Creator
they captured alimar. that is a big achivement but i have a feeling i can not shake off! i walked beside twilight as we walked down to the prison. We saw alimar. he is red with...wait are those fangs???? gah!!! Twilight aslo had fangs i never noticed.....man she is pretty! " what are you trying to do? take the throne that is rightlyfully mine" replied alimar. He smiled and then said " the protecter of the realms will also follow whoever is the leader imagine your friend here under my command!" he laughed and then tried to grab the amulet. Twilight then said " bring him to warfang prison!" Alimar then said" your frined is what i want now come on caspien you know you want real power!" i simply ran after twilight.
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#27 Posted: 23:03:50 16/11/2008
really cool! write more!
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#28 Posted: 23:49:36 16/11/2008 | Topic Creator
yeah i feel bad for caspien i like being in his head!!! he thinks as more of an emotoinal character while twilight is a strong leader! maybe i will try out Alimar soon.
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#29 Posted: 00:29:45 17/11/2008
awsome story!!!
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#30 Posted: 00:37:39 17/11/2008 | Topic Creator
thaks for your support guys but no more tonight
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#31 Posted: 01:02:29 17/11/2008
sweeeeeeeet story
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#32 Posted: 21:51:24 17/11/2008 | Topic Creator
* alimar's point of view*
They think i can be stopped? ha! nice try! I will get to that caspien and use his powers!!! Now that i am in warfang prison i can now escape! I opened my fangs and snap the bars open. i explode into a wonderful earth fire fury and crush almost everyone." wellt that is easy!" now to gp stop and kill twilight. if only i can use that amulet of her i can rule all! " you share more than you know with twilight......" rang a voice in my head" i hated twilight we hsare nothing in common! i went out to captrue that dragon and spread my power on the world!
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#33 Posted: 21:55:42 17/11/2008
Ooh...bad alimar.
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#34 Posted: 22:10:41 17/11/2008 | Topic Creator
Quote: SpyroKing
he is bad very bad! but there is something you don't know about alimar.......
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#35 Posted: 23:19:26 17/11/2008
cool story! write more!
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#36 Posted: 00:21:46 19/11/2008 | Topic Creator
* third person*
Twilight was sitting in her palace in cester watching out toward the ocean city which is now free too. this war has been easy...too easy. caspien walked in quickly and said 'Alimar is free! what will we do he wants my powers!" Twilight sat up and said nothing. * twilight's point of view" how can he be free? this is horrible! he will capture caspein.....is he always this cute! focas! i said " get the army we must capture him and soon" i walked into my room to get things packed for the journy back to warfang. " hello twilight." alimar siad! Before i could do anything he banged me on my head and i was unconsious. i knew he will kill me soon..... but i soon drifted off.
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#37 Posted: 00:29:20 19/11/2008 | Topic Creator
end of chapter one!!!!!! cahpter two comes soon....
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#38 Posted: 00:35:40 19/11/2008
really cool! write more!
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#39 Posted: 00:37:51 19/11/2008 | Topic Creator
can't there needs to be a time of suspense before the next chapter is begins.....it will be mosley from caspien's and alimar's piont o view!
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#40 Posted: 00:42:24 19/11/2008
cool! i can't wait! i wrote more of mine! major twist!
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#41 Posted: 00:45:31 19/11/2008 | Topic Creator
major twist? be right there!
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#42 Posted: 22:39:19 19/11/2008 | Topic Creator
*alimar's point of view*
I smiled that the fact that i had twilight and i will win this war came inot fact.this is huge! I carried her out of the city and into the forest were two troll were waiting. " take her to rebel prison should we kill her" I looked Twilight" no i need to know how to use the amulet." The amulet had a low dull light coming from it. The voice said in my head again " you and twilight share more than you know.... so if you kill her there will be a punishment!" i simply laughed and went underground with the trolls.
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#43 Posted: 23:36:10 19/11/2008
cool! write more!
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#44 Posted: 21:45:00 20/11/2008 | Topic Creator
*Caspiens's point of view*
i was frantic! not only is twilight gone but i am the leader of the dragons now!!! being protecter and all! but we needed to find alimar and kill him before he does it to twilight! ohh but i don't know enough abilitiys of the empath dragons to do much fighting! we needed to find a secret place a place the rebels will take her. maybe some ancient place that was used in the past. i began to read and found what i was looking for. i knew were twilight was.
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#45 Posted: 00:17:19 21/11/2008
cool! write more!
Fireflight: i like it!
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#46 Posted: 14:30:49 22/11/2008 | Topic Creator
* alimar's point of view*
I saw twilight trying to open the prison with her light powers but thet could not be broken by powers...what magic will do. i laughed and then said" nice try even i could not break out of dark magic! and yet i control it!" twilight looked at me and said" when i get out i will kill you!" i walked away. i went to the rebels planning room were Stefan was" hello alimar. you are doing a great job, hahahah maybe you can lead the rebels soon but you might also rule the world!" I smiled and siad" yes father maybe i can soon rule everything! commence with capture of caspien!" Stefan looked annoyed" no, alimar you stay here and finish twilight."
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#47 Posted: 14:34:25 22/11/2008 | Topic Creator
everyone i just want to tell you alimar's age...same as twilight!
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#48 Posted: 00:40:28 23/11/2008 | Topic Creator
i went to twilight in the arena " time to finish this off! yes very much" says twilight she starts to glow. i do to. WE clash and it is equal. Stefan says " hurry!" twilight hits me with light claw and i fall down and she covers herself in light energy and slams into me hard. i was about to do a dark force field that also injures but a voice said " twilight!"
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#49 Posted: 00:42:14 23/11/2008
Ooh, cool!
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#50 Posted: 16:03:59 23/11/2008 | Topic Creator
* twilight's point of view*
Caspein flew in to the room and i saw the empath power coming from him " caspein quick get out of here! no twilight i...." before he could finish Stefan grabbed caspien and created a magic force field he could not escape from. " now alimar finsih her, no one is here to save you no vladimir or queen vally here to protect you!" i saw caspein shudder as his father's name was mentioned.Before i could respond alimar hit me dead on with a headbut which sent me flying in the air a created a force field and slammed into alimar and the fighting continued.
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