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A Creepypasta (Took me two hours!) [CLOSED]
Ash Starkindle Gold Sparx Gems: 2625
#1 Posted: 18:27:12 22/01/2014 | Topic Creator
I've written something like this before. If you remember, Waka killed my old creepypasta D': so I'm rewriting it in a spoiler. There will be blood. And gore. And it could freak you out smilie
Disclaimer. This is 100% FAKE.
Well, here goes.

Stay Away From the Closet

On a beautiful day, the sun shone. Birds chirped. Children laughed and played. Jessica wished that she could be as happy as the children were. It was hard for the twelve year old girl. Jessica's old house in Kentucky burned down. She lost nearly everything except her 3DS, games for it and iPhone. But she lost something extremely important to her: Hailey, her 15-year-old sister. Hailey went missing soon after the house caught on fire. Her body was never found. This saddened Jessica, Anna, her nine year old sister and her thirteen year old brother, Mark. Their parents cried for days. It was obvious that Hailey was their favorite. While they cried, the trio of kids packed up their few remaining possessions and readied the car. They were moving to Conneticut. The family got in the car and drove away.
When the family arrived at the house, they all gasped. It was a beautiful house, a pale blue, two-story huge house. The house had a kitchen, three bedrooms, three bathrooms, a living room, a guest room and a hallway closet. The closet had a piece of paper that read, "Stay away from the closet." It seemed to be written in red ink. Each room came with a decent closet. The family picked their rooms and began to renovate. It took a year, but the house of their dreams was finally complete.
The three kids wanted to explore the hallway closet so much, but their parents disapproved. And the children noticed weird, paranormal stuff in their rooms. In Jessica and Anna's room, there were often silhouettes of men with cleavers. In Mark's room, blue spheres often appeared. What seemed to be red ink was on their walls. "Find me..." "I'm dead..." "Don't forget me..." "Danger! Danger!" "Avenge me..." "Help me..." Those were a few of the many "red ink" messages. Anna started to get scared. Mark and Jessica did their best to comfort her, but failed to. A few weeks later, a horrid smell came from the hallway closet. Mark and Jessica wanted to check it out since their parents were at a fancy restaurant, but Anna was nowhere around. They wanted Anna to come, so they looked for her.
The duo dound her, huddled in the closet. Suddenly, "red ink" messages came up. "She did this!" The wall read. An arrow was drawn, and pointed to Anna.
"I don't believe you!" Mark shouted.
"Yeah! Anna is an angel!" Jessica agreed.
"What!?!" Anna exclaimed. The wall continued to appear with messages. "Anna did this!" "Check the closet!" "This is my blood, by the way." "Hurry!"With the last message, "See the truth!", a red bulb knocked out Jessica and Mark.
~~~
When the duo woke up, written in blood was, "I didn't touch her." Mark and Jessica stared up in horror. Anna had hung herself. Her throat was slit open. A note was in her cold, dead hands. Mark grabbed it. The note read,
Dear Siblings,
It was I whom has killed Hailey. Out of jealousy. Her spirit has made me feel guilty. I love you. Please, don't forget about me.
Love, Anna

"Whoa. She really did!" Mark exclaimed.
"But why..? Why would she just kill herself like that?" Jessica wondered.
A blood message came up. "You didn't believe me. Check the closet."
The two nodded and opened the closet. Hailey's body was covered in blood. Her throat was slit. Her stomach was as well. Her intestines hung out of her stomach. Her head was missing. They freaked out.
"Where's her head?" Mark asked. Bounce, drip. Bounce, drip.
No response. Bounce, drip. Bounce, drip.
Bounce, drip. Bounce, drip.

"Jessi?" Mark asked. Bounce, drip. Bounce, drip.
He turned around... and Jessica's body was there. Her whole body had been dismembered. Her intestines were everywhere. Her head was cut off, bouncing. The blood dripped from her body.
Hailerty's head bounced out from behind her body. "Your turn, sport!"
"No, please, ANYTHING!" Mark yelled.
"Well, you were always my favorite. I guess I could accept it. You must never forget about me, though." Hailey's head said. It exploded soon after.
It was too much for Mark. He passed out.
~~~
He woke up in a hospital. His parents surrounded him.
"Why.. why am I here?" Mark asked.
"Your legs are broken. Hailey did it." His parents explained. "We're moving back."
~~~
The three remaining family members moved back to Kentucky. They are haunted by the ghosts to this day. Somehow they're still alive...
This is why you stay away from closets...
Edited 1 time - Last edited at 18:43:58 22/01/2014 by Ash Starkindle
I-Brawler Emerald Sparx Gems: 3565
#2 Posted: 18:34:13 22/01/2014
AAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!
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you never saw me
NINJAsk11 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1124
#3 Posted: 18:48:17 22/01/2014
That is realy well written Ash! smilie
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#4 Posted: 18:50:08 22/01/2014
Oh my that was scary O.O
spyrothe111 Ripto Gems: 3702
#5 Posted: 18:54:09 22/01/2014
Awesome Creepypasta! smilie
Ash Starkindle Gold Sparx Gems: 2625
#6 Posted: 18:56:12 22/01/2014 | Topic Creator
Thanks! (:
Troll Slug Ripto Gems: 2054
#7 Posted: 19:00:32 22/01/2014
Nice! smilie
darkwolf Platinum Sparx Gems: 7095
#8 Posted: 19:02:40 22/01/2014
Nice work! smilie
Ash Starkindle Gold Sparx Gems: 2625
#9 Posted: 19:23:48 22/01/2014 | Topic Creator
Thanks guys. smilie
Big Green Platinum Sparx Gems: 6345
#10 Posted: 19:27:17 22/01/2014
why am i not in it
Ash Starkindle Gold Sparx Gems: 2625
#11 Posted: 19:30:02 22/01/2014 | Topic Creator
Quote: Big Green
why am i not in it



Because this isn't the darkSpyro creepypasta
SoulFly Emerald Sparx Gems: 4660
#12 Posted: 20:23:03 22/01/2014
Yup.
Now goes a lock To closet.
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Ligi
MoonHorizons Gold Sparx Gems: 2826
#13 Posted: 20:26:00 22/01/2014
and everyone died because there were barely any paragraphs.
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Ash Starkindle Gold Sparx Gems: 2625
#14 Posted: 20:49:14 22/01/2014 | Topic Creator
Quote: SoulFly
Yup.
Now goes a lock To closet.



My closet doesn't lock smilie
Quote: MoonHorizons
and everyone died because there were barely any paragraphs.



There were paragraphs.
hardcoreignitor Gold Sparx Gems: 2583
#15 Posted: 20:56:13 22/01/2014
Scary o_0
(blows up all closets)
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nyeheheheheh

hey lois, i’m dustah from mudda 3
assassinelf Yellow Sparx Gems: 1180
#16 Posted: 20:57:30 22/01/2014
Hmmm..... there were flaws...... not many, but a few. All of them easily fixable.
1. Often, it seems, that unless the 15 year old has never done anything to in any way improve her health, and the 9 year old is a body builder, even if the 9 year old has a knife, the 15 year old will overpower the girl.
Oh wait, tat's the only one, and it's only 50% true.
And everybody makes mistakes.
So it's marvelous
But I din't think it was scary.
I just feel sorry for the girls.
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Ash Starkindle Gold Sparx Gems: 2625
#17 Posted: 21:42:17 22/01/2014 | Topic Creator
Quote: hardcoreignitor
Scary o_0
(blows up all closets)



Hehehe.
Quote: assassinelf
Hmmm..... there were flaws...... not many, but a few. All of them easily fixable.
1. Often, it seems, that unless the 15 year old has never done anything to in any way improve her health, and the 9 year old is a body builder, even if the 9 year old has a knife, the 15 year old will overpower the girl.
Oh wait, tat's the only one, and it's only 50% true.
And everybody makes mistakes.
So it's marvelous
But I din't think it was scary.
I just feel sorry for the girls.


Not all the time. I've seen a five year old overpower a thirteen year old.
MagicFizz Emerald Sparx Gems: 3551
#18 Posted: 00:18:07 23/01/2014
Wow! Nice story smilie
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CommanderGame Emerald Sparx Gems: 3610
#19 Posted: 00:35:27 23/01/2014
Nicely written!
Though the punch line at the end of the story was pretty dull.
kardonis Platinum Sparx Gems: 6366
#20 Posted: 00:43:13 23/01/2014
Pretty good. I'm used to this sorta thing so I wasn't scared, but it was well written and didn't rely on the infamous, "blood was everywhere" gag that unimaginable people use. I'm a little disappointed that the mysterious cleaver-men never saw any purpose.
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Ash Starkindle Gold Sparx Gems: 2625
#21 Posted: 00:54:03 23/01/2014 | Topic Creator
Thanks guys! The cleaver men will be in another creepypasta I write. And CG, I purposely made it dull. smilie
ReshiramForever Platinum Sparx Gems: 5142
#22 Posted: 00:58:03 23/01/2014
it took you two hours for that?
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CommanderGame Emerald Sparx Gems: 3610
#23 Posted: 01:11:58 23/01/2014
Quote: ReshiramForever
it took you two hours for that?


Now that wasn't very nice.
ReshiramForever Platinum Sparx Gems: 5142
#24 Posted: 01:16:44 23/01/2014
Quote: CommanderGame
Quote: ReshiramForever
it took you two hours for that?


Now that wasn't very nice.


i'm not a very nice person
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self professed austGAYlian
kardonis Platinum Sparx Gems: 6366
#25 Posted: 01:56:40 23/01/2014
And actually, two hours is pretty fast for writing, at least for me.
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Rickorio Gold Sparx Gems: 2463
#26 Posted: 02:00:43 23/01/2014
Thanks for the nightmares!
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#hu
somePerson Diamond Sparx Gems: 8470
#27 Posted: 02:02:16 23/01/2014
It's not good or bad really.
Ash Starkindle Gold Sparx Gems: 2625
#28 Posted: 02:17:08 23/01/2014 | Topic Creator
Quote: ReshiramForever
Quote: CommanderGame
Quote: ReshiramForever
it took you two hours for that?


Now that wasn't very nice.


i'm not a very nice person



D':
Quote: kardonis
And actually, two hours is pretty fast for writing, at least for me.



It takes me longer to write scary stories.
Quote: Rickorio
Thanks for the nightmares!



No problem.
Quote: somePerson
It's not good or bad really.



So it's okay?
Sleepy0429 Emerald Sparx Gems: 3217
#29 Posted: 02:40:00 23/01/2014
Calling WAKA!
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Troll Slug Ripto Gems: 2054
#30 Posted: 03:12:01 23/01/2014
Quote: Sleepy0429
Calling WAKA!



Why? She spoilered it.
Ash Starkindle Gold Sparx Gems: 2625
#31 Posted: 20:52:01 23/01/2014 | Topic Creator
Yeah. I put it in a spoiler and EVERYTHING.
assassinelf Yellow Sparx Gems: 1180
#32 Posted: 22:00:09 23/01/2014
I know. That's why I said 50% true afterward.
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ShadowMewX Diamond Sparx Gems: 8081
#33 Posted: 23:17:16 23/01/2014
Woo! ^.^b
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Ash Starkindle Gold Sparx Gems: 2625
#34 Posted: 00:08:32 24/01/2014 | Topic Creator
Thanks!
MoonHorizons Gold Sparx Gems: 2826
#35 Posted: 20:37:01 24/01/2014
Quote: Ash Starkindle
Quote: SoulFly
Yup.
Now goes a lock To closet.



My closet doesn't lock smilie
Quote: MoonHorizons
and everyone died because there were barely any paragraphs.



There were paragraphs.


MAKE ACTUAL SPACES THEN DANG IT.

NOT
THIS

LIKE

THIS.
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Ash Starkindle Gold Sparx Gems: 2625
#36 Posted: 22:50:54 24/01/2014 | Topic Creator
Quote: MoonHorizons
Quote: Ash Starkindle
Quote: SoulFly
Yup.
Now goes a lock To closet.



My closet doesn't lock smilie
Quote: MoonHorizons
and everyone died because there were barely any paragraphs.



There were paragraphs.


MAKE ACTUAL SPACES THEN DANG IT.

NOT
THIS

LIKE

THIS.



Butbutbut that's just how I make paragraphs...
I-Brawler Emerald Sparx Gems: 3565
#37 Posted: 22:52:09 24/01/2014
Quote: Ash Starkindle
Quote: MoonHorizons
Quote: Ash Starkindle



My closet doesn't lock smilie


There were paragraphs.


MAKE ACTUAL SPACES THEN DANG IT.

NOT
THIS

LIKE

THIS.



Butbutbut that's just how I make paragraphs...



Para, para, paragraphs.
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you never saw me
wakapro77 Emerald Sparx Gems: 4196
#38 Posted: 23:39:51 24/01/2014
Quote: Ash Starkindle
I've written something like this before. If you remember, Waka killed my old creepypasta D': so I'm rewriting it in a spoiler. There will be blood. And gore. And it could freak you out smilie
Disclaimer. This is 100% FAKE.
Well, here goes.



this is a creepypasta in itself

muahahahha
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ShadowMewX Diamond Sparx Gems: 8081
#39 Posted: 23:43:17 24/01/2014
Quote: wakapro77
Quote: Ash Starkindle
I've written something like this before. If you remember, Waka killed my old creepypasta D': so I'm rewriting it in a spoiler. There will be blood. And gore. And it could freak you out smilie
Disclaimer. This is 100% FAKE.
Well, here goes.



this is a creepypasta in itself

muahahahha



Lols. Ash, make your next creepypasta about that! smilie
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Let's bust bunsen burners and bounce!
MoonHorizons Gold Sparx Gems: 2826
#40 Posted: 00:00:45 25/01/2014
Quote: Ash Starkindle
Quote: MoonHorizons
Quote: Ash Starkindle



My closet doesn't lock smilie


There were paragraphs.


MAKE ACTUAL SPACES THEN DANG IT.

NOT
THIS

LIKE

THIS.



Butbutbut that's just how I make paragraphs...



*cracks whip*
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the more obscure your favorite cartoons are, the more refined your taste is
I-Brawler Emerald Sparx Gems: 3565
#41 Posted: 00:01:57 25/01/2014
Quote: MoonHorizons
Quote: Ash Starkindle
Quote: MoonHorizons


MAKE ACTUAL SPACES THEN DANG IT.

NOT
THIS

LIKE

THIS.



Butbutbut that's just how I make paragraphs...



*cracks whip*


*cracks whip*

Bad. BAD MoonHorizons.
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you never saw me
MoonHorizons Gold Sparx Gems: 2826
#42 Posted: 00:03:42 25/01/2014
*catches whip*

*cracks both whips*
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the more obscure your favorite cartoons are, the more refined your taste is
Ash Starkindle Gold Sparx Gems: 2625
#43 Posted: 00:32:01 25/01/2014 | Topic Creator
Quote: ShadowMewX
Quote: wakapro77
Quote: Ash Starkindle
I've written something like this before. If you remember, Waka killed my old creepypasta D': so I'm rewriting it in a spoiler. There will be blood. And gore. And it could freak you out smilie
Disclaimer. This is 100% FAKE.
Well, here goes.



this is a creepypasta in itself

muahahahha



Lols. Ash, make your next creepypasta about that! smilie


Maybe I will!!! smilie

Quote: MoonHorizons
Quote: Ash Starkindle
Quote: MoonHorizons


MAKE ACTUAL SPACES THEN DANG IT.

NOT
THIS

LIKE

THIS.



Butbutbut that's just how I make paragraphs...



*cracks whip*


u meanie smilie
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