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Luna the black dragon [CLOSED]
cynder21 Gold Sparx Gems: 2214
#101 Posted: 21:24:39 13/11/2008 | Topic Creator
it was ten years later and cynder was running around the temple like crazy. Saphira had a dream that luna would return but everyone was still uneasy. Sosa told everyone that a great evil that is not a dragon but a cloud of pure evil will decend on the world soon and all the heros were gone. He was angry that all his followers were killed. All was needed to free him was a simple chant thta was spoken by the dragon slayer. meanwhile comet and chily were talking. " we should come back to life to stop it.... it can not be stopped without our interference!" comet looked at her" we would need to bring back luna but she is gone!" comet and chily looked sad. they wanted to ambush this evil but even they needed help. a voice then said " you need help? well i am here!"
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Edited 1 time - Last edited at 21:31:45 13/11/2008 by cynder21
Cynder09 Diamond Sparx Gems: 9866
#102 Posted: 21:25:48 13/11/2008
great story! i love it! please write more!
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep.
Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land.
cynder21 Gold Sparx Gems: 2214
#103 Posted: 00:38:09 14/11/2008 | Topic Creator
luna came running into the room smileing and such!"you miss me?" she said. " were have you been?" yelled comet looking mistafied. " i don't know i just woke up!" comet did not know what freed luna but he was joyous!" luna we need to stop a great evil that no one saw coming! we need your help!" luna looked up and she glowed black and white and said " the power of the eclipse is here with me so i can help you!"
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Cynder09 Diamond Sparx Gems: 9866
#104 Posted: 00:46:45 14/11/2008
wow! really cool!
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep.
Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land.
cynder21 Gold Sparx Gems: 2214
#105 Posted: 02:15:02 15/11/2008 | Topic Creator
luna flew toward the temple and said" i thought all the evil was gone....what happened?" chily and comet looked at each other and chily said " well the leader of evil the one who created it decided to step in and we need to stop it we do not know how this happened."luna looked out and soon reached the temple spyro and cynder almost knocked her out of the sky! " we missed you" said spyro luna just smiled and then said" before we celebrate we need to start a cremoney that will bring the golem back to life! it is the only way to stop the evil one!"
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Cynder09 Diamond Sparx Gems: 9866
#106 Posted: 02:31:25 15/11/2008
really cool! write more!
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep.
Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land.
cynder21 Gold Sparx Gems: 2214
#107 Posted: 02:54:37 15/11/2008 | Topic Creator
okay anyone who reads this please post something! i need to know if anyone actually reads this!!! if not luna's story will end soon......i need 5 post from 5 different people by sunday or i will no longer write!!!
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cynder21 Gold Sparx Gems: 2214
#108 Posted: 03:02:22 15/11/2008 | Topic Creator
kay maybe i should calm down!
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gamer900 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1382
#109 Posted: 03:03:57 15/11/2008
you dont have to go to drastic measures. some people read others stories but dont say anything.

write more!!
Cynder09 Diamond Sparx Gems: 9866
#110 Posted: 03:07:42 15/11/2008
yeah, just think of my story! i know i should wait longer, but i get bored! people just forget to post i guess!
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep.
Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land.
cynder21 Gold Sparx Gems: 2214
#111 Posted: 03:09:48 15/11/2008 | Topic Creator
hhhhmm maybe i rember in the begining someone said that...... still it is awfully lonely here. " echo!" * echo* gah!
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Cynder09 Diamond Sparx Gems: 9866
#112 Posted: 03:14:47 15/11/2008
yeah, i know how you feel! i get lonely and bored too! but its not really that bad if someone would show up, or you could find someone to talk to or something to do!
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep.
Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land.
cynder21 Gold Sparx Gems: 2214
#113 Posted: 03:16:21 15/11/2008 | Topic Creator
yeah it does help! i guess i will write more tomorrow..... forget this whole thing happened!
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Cynder09 Diamond Sparx Gems: 9866
#114 Posted: 03:29:12 15/11/2008
ok! that happens to me alot!
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep.
Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land.
cynder21 Gold Sparx Gems: 2214
#115 Posted: 19:47:08 15/11/2008 | Topic Creator
" why would you do that?" asked spyro and cynder together. At that moment Drake and saphira came running in. they were boyfreind and girlfriend! " hi!" they hugged luna tightly! " well the golem was summened by someone evil and not someone good and if someone good but there powers into the golem..." then cynder said" then the golem can help us!" They went to the the temple's magic room and started to say" in lava cool master of desruction and hatred may you awaken and meet your new masters of good!"
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cynder21 Gold Sparx Gems: 2214
#116 Posted: 00:19:23 16/11/2008 | Topic Creator
when the golem walked to the temple it had blue lava instead of red lava. comet said " why is it blue?" luna then replied" well you know the ice vs fire thing...well ice is good while fire is evil the main reason i brought it back was so it can destroy the evil gem. but it will make up our army." spyro nodded but before they could take off to go ontop of the golem another red lava filed golem appeared and a puff of dark cloud was saying " i always win...." chily then said " the creator of evil is freed" but thier golem simply tensed for battle.
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cynder21 Gold Sparx Gems: 2214
#117 Posted: 00:37:15 16/11/2008 | Topic Creator
The golems sprayed fire and ice everywerebut drake said " what happened to the sky?" it was turning purple and she saw spyro and cynder and everyone else turn evil and they started to fight chily and comet!!! " evil and touched thier minds!" yepled comet. The cloud of evil just laughed and said " yourworld is doomed" but the golems continued to battle......and the good golem breathed ice and froze the bad one. Luna rembered the prochecy that sosa had said she didn't understand..the ultimate weapon.....free what matters msot? suddenly luna understood everything.
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cynder21 Gold Sparx Gems: 2214
#118 Posted: 18:17:03 16/11/2008 | Topic Creator
luna glowed again but it was not a color that was known and i cloud of white came next to luna. the creator of heros. " show your true form" said luna. she turned into a white dragon and across the battlefield the dark cloud turned into a black male dragon. " now it is the time to free what matters most! free the dakr and light and combine them for one can not exsist without the other." the to flew up and started to morph together as the spyro cynder,and the rest turned back to normal" may your powers be used for power and protection." said luna then when fully together a little amulet was left behind. luna picked it up and put it on.
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Cynder09 Diamond Sparx Gems: 9866
#119 Posted: 18:55:05 16/11/2008
wow! you wrote alot! its really good!
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep.
Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land.
cynder21 Gold Sparx Gems: 2214
#120 Posted: 18:59:10 16/11/2008 | Topic Creator
spyro then said" is the evil gone now? no it will always be here one can not exsist without the other." said luna" you can stay right? said saphira" comet said "yes" then comet and chily went away. Luna then said " my decendents will be the rulers off the dragons! they will always wear this amulet. saphira" saphira looked up" your decendents will be the protectors of the realm....like fireflight is one of the greatest and most powerful protecter!" they nodded and zoomed back to the temple and tommorrow they will relax and worry nothing.

sorry people but chapter 4 is over! chapter five will likely come next week! feel free to post while i come up with ideas!
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Cynder09 Diamond Sparx Gems: 9866
#121 Posted: 20:06:41 16/11/2008
wow! really cool!
Fireflight: i love it! write more!
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep.
Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land.
gamer900 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1382
#122 Posted: 20:34:17 16/11/2008
write more!
cynder21 Gold Sparx Gems: 2214
#123 Posted: 01:35:49 17/11/2008 | Topic Creator
yes i will write morre on thurs or wed
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cynder21 Gold Sparx Gems: 2214
#124 Posted: 22:30:27 17/11/2008 | Topic Creator
anyway sneak peek!!!! luna
falls in love and helps vanquish a new army!
okay????
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cynder21 Gold Sparx Gems: 2214
#125 Posted: 22:11:37 19/11/2008 | Topic Creator
Luna flew over the world and was so happy! everything was still right now! sure there was evil but they can rest for a frew day. She did loops and flips and drake and saphira were just looking at each other. it was quiet.luna looked foward but a dragon slamed into her!
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gamer900 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1382
#126 Posted: 22:26:43 19/11/2008
write more!!
cynder21 Gold Sparx Gems: 2214
#127 Posted: 22:32:25 19/11/2008 | Topic Creator
The dragon siad " sorry sometimes i am a cluts" he was a orange dragon but his canines were really big i guess you can call them fangs. Luna said : umm no it is fine" luna blushed this guy was cute!" umm my name is constelation spelt wrong!" Luna smiled at constelation. a match made in heaven but something but to ruin the moment. a bomb hitted drake and he strted falling toward the ground! saphira followed but luna said " wait it is a trap!" buit it was too late for luna saw the enemies in camoflouge! they captutred drake and saphira! running underground they were quicly out of view.....
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Cynder09 Diamond Sparx Gems: 9866
#128 Posted: 23:48:31 19/11/2008
oh no! what will happen next?!
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep.
Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land.
cynder21 Gold Sparx Gems: 2214
#129 Posted: 20:37:08 20/11/2008 | Topic Creator
drake and saphira screamed but no one could here them!!!! drake held saphira close so they couldn't hurt her. meanwhile luna was paceing back and forth think what to do next. " well maybe we could open the earth." luna looked up and the totally good looking dragon" are you an earth dragon? somewhat but can control the elements as long as my power of light is in them." constelation opened the earth and a tunnel was there. constelation's tail turned into a flashlight and he said" i'll go first." really he didn't want luna to get hurt. luna heard saphira screaming and they raced foward.
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cynder21 Gold Sparx Gems: 2214
#130 Posted: 23:14:36 20/11/2008 | Topic Creator
saphira was being seperated from drake!!!! Drake said" saphira!!!" put a dragonfly came out of nowere and started to little wind powers and beat up one of the ememies! " sunny is here for the rescue!" creid sunny. Luna came in and she killed the rest! " are you okay?" asked luna. " yes! we are!" replied drake. luna looked toward the dragonfly. " i am sunny grandaughter of the mighty sparx!! and the first dragonfly to master an element!"
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Cynder09 Diamond Sparx Gems: 9866
#131 Posted: 23:51:53 20/11/2008
cool! write more!
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep.
Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land.
cynder21 Gold Sparx Gems: 2214
#132 Posted: 22:31:23 21/11/2008 | Topic Creator
Luna looked confused. she thought only dragons can master an element." that impossible! nope! that is why we are Dragonflies!" Sunny smiled. " welll thanks for saving us. yeah i wonder why they wanted to seperate us!"" luna and constelation wondered." lets go abck home" decided saphira" sunny said" can i come? sure!!" Constlelation said" me too?" luna said" sure come on!" constelation as they were flying home said " luna i am worried i think drake and saphira are the bait and you the target, you have more power than ever dreamed....... watch out." Luna nodded. she thought the same.
* meanwhile*
"ahahahhahahhaahhahahah thats right! watch out, i'll get you one day anyway!" laughed a Ape.
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cynder21 Gold Sparx Gems: 2214
#133 Posted: 16:17:42 23/11/2008 | Topic Creator
at the temple spyro watched constelation all the time. but luna felt something from the past was going to come soon.....that night she had a dream that felt like deja fu. It was when she was younger and captured by the ape king..she woke fast and constelation was outside and said " luna look out there i think i see something." sunny looked too and out of nowere saphira and drake came. " that looks like the ape king well the new one he is coming to the temple........ with more apes." said sunny. Luna started to fly to the apes but she didn't know what they planned.
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Cynder09 Diamond Sparx Gems: 9866
#134 Posted: 16:43:34 23/11/2008
cool! write more!
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep.
Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land.
cynder21 Gold Sparx Gems: 2214
#135 Posted: 21:48:29 29/11/2008 | Topic Creator
luna attacked the biggest ape thinking it was the leader. constelation was killing too. drake got slammed by a frew but saphira got rid of them. Luna was about to use her eclipse powers to kill the ape and he laughed." why are you laughing? because you think i am the king!" luna killed him anyway. the apes ran away and luna said" we need to find the real ape king....i read his mind and the plan is to take my powers and put it into thier leader...killing me in the process." constleation siad" that won't happen! i am here for you baby!!" luna smiled" feild trip" laughed sunny and they flew off luna knew the king was at ape island ( how orginal) but luna saw on the island whta made her almost want to go there sooner.
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Cynder09 Diamond Sparx Gems: 9866
#136 Posted: 22:17:47 29/11/2008
write more!
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep.
Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land.
cynder21 Gold Sparx Gems: 2214
#137 Posted: 17:43:40 30/11/2008 | Topic Creator
luna and saphira at the same time said" juno" it was juno and she was smileing evily." granddaughters nice to see you here!" but before anyone moved luna was captured in a magic orb and unable to move. juno grabbed luna's amulet" i think i will just use this! finish the job malefor was too weak to do! for i the new ape queen is powerful enough!" constelation tried to save luna but he was easily trambled by 100 apes. drake and saphira was too and sunny became a lanturn. the sky darkened and the air breathed shadows luna looked around and looked at juno she looked like her mom. lighing like poisen exploded from the sky and luna saw that the amulet was not glowing the power of the amulet could not be used by juno. luna smiled and said" juno lets fight! whoever wins is the most powerful dragon!" juno smiled and the orb disapeared.
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cynder21 Gold Sparx Gems: 2214
#138 Posted: 18:26:05 30/11/2008 | Topic Creator
juno slammed into luna. luna created a powerful eclipse attack and hit juno dead on. juno got up and said" my daughter ahs treated you well but you are not strong enough!" juno ran inot luna but puched her and used her dark attacks which damaged luna a lot. luna still was not out and fought. luna grabbed the amulet adn was about to finish off her grandma but could she?
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cynder21 Gold Sparx Gems: 2214
#139 Posted: 18:27:31 30/11/2008 | Topic Creator
people i have something to say but not now when this chapter is over.
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cynder12 Green Sparx Gems: 154
#140 Posted: 18:42:18 30/11/2008
awesome story sis!!!
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yo i am cynder21's younger sister smilie yayz she won't let meh on much guys so..........
Cynder09 Diamond Sparx Gems: 9866
#141 Posted: 18:56:09 30/11/2008
write more!
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep.
Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land.
cynder21 Gold Sparx Gems: 2214
#142 Posted: 19:01:55 30/11/2008 | Topic Creator
juno looked at constelation and apes killed him. " noooo" yelled luna soo loud that the apes tried to escape but luna's powers crushed them all plus juno. Luna ran to constelation. " there is nothing we can do" said sunny sadly. " no there is SOMETHING i can do. she mouthed some words and comet came and siad" this is not to be come to me constelation and join luna again" and constelation got up. he smiled at luna and they went back home.

thats it! short chapter! i know. now i will tell you all something....in the next post.
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cynder21 Gold Sparx Gems: 2214
#143 Posted: 19:07:21 30/11/2008 | Topic Creator
ok luna the dragon has ended!!!
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Cynder09 Diamond Sparx Gems: 9866
#144 Posted: 19:09:09 30/11/2008
write more!
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep.
Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land.
cynder21 Gold Sparx Gems: 2214
#145 Posted: 19:11:07 30/11/2008 | Topic Creator
but not really. it will continue. but not here!
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Cynder09 Diamond Sparx Gems: 9866
#146 Posted: 19:12:56 30/11/2008
ok, so you'll write another story
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep.
Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land.
cynder21 Gold Sparx Gems: 2214
#147 Posted: 19:14:24 30/11/2008 | Topic Creator
right!! the eternal one!!! look for it!
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Cynder09 Diamond Sparx Gems: 9866
#148 Posted: 19:19:25 30/11/2008
i found it! i can't wait for you to start it!
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep.
Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land.
cynder21 Gold Sparx Gems: 2214
#149 Posted: 19:48:53 30/11/2008 | Topic Creator
everyone who reads this go to the eteranl one!
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cynder21 Gold Sparx Gems: 2214
#150 Posted: 22:59:40 30/11/2008 | Topic Creator
really people go read it. if you want more luna go there!
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