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Chapter 1: Stealth Elfs...Return?
The first Chapter Yay! Enjoy! This part is kind of boring and non-actiony...Note: I might put in some fan-characters.
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I'm falling...All is dark...where is it...but the light is in reach...I must go out...and grab it...

*thump* *crash* *crack*

My eyes felt glued shut. It was just so bright for some reason. Who was I? Where am I? And how did I get here? I had lots of questions. I looked around and was surrounded by trees. I was with scratched up clothes and a ripped skirt. Well, at least I know I'm a girl. I tried to walk, but it felt like my legs haven't moved for years. I managed a couple steps, but fell like I was a baby. It was so embarrassing. I actually felt like a was in a new body. I looked around for help. Night was approaching. I went to sleep on the grass.

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I woke up on a bed. A very uncomfortable one too. And squeaky. I looked around. It was a dark, small room. I suppose it was still night. I heard voices outside my room.

"So, we took another one in?"

"Yes, she looks like she would make a fine one."

"When she wakes up, we should explain to her why she's here. I heard her murmuring that she dosen't know herself or something... But she will stay here with us."

"Are you sure? And supply her a room and everything? Why?"

"I want to give that girl the life she's been looking for. A good life. She will be raised as a ninja. We will train her to be the best one."

"And just why do you have high hopes for this little inexperienced girl?"

"I don't know. She just gives off that ninja, stealthy vibe. Anyways, that's enough everybody's sleeping now. Hush sweetie."

I was confused. But little did I care about everything else. I was tired. So I went back to sleep. But I woke up minutes later. I couldn't go to sleep. Something was bothering me. I found a window on the other side of the room, opened it, and crawled out of it. Then I fell. I didn't realize that my room was at the third level of this building. And yes, I caused a loud ruckus. *CRASH!* I fell into a garden, right into a patch of daises. I heard grass crunching, and I very silently ran behind a nearby bush.
"Who's there?"
I felt a tap on my shoulder. I managed a small scream. A beautiful elf lady with long green hair stood before me. She was pretty tall and wore fancy Chinese clothes. She had long green ears pointing out her hair.She reached her hand out. I reluctantly grabbed it and stood up. Her beautiful blue eyes glowed slightly in the dark garden. The full moon shined on us like something amazing was happening. "My name is Lady Elf. And you are...?"Her voice sounded beautiful too.
I shook my head no.
"Ah that's right. You don't have a name. Let me give you one. Let's see...Ninja Girl?
I stood still.
"Ah I got it! Ninja Angel?
I stood still longer.
"Please excuse me, I am no--"
"Stealth Elf. From this day forward you are now our daughter, the one and only Stealth Elf of Skylands. And my name is Sir Elf."
I looked up to see a man elf on the top level balcony. He was dressed almost the same as Lady Elf. Only difference was he was a tad shorter.
"Stealth Elf...I like that name..." I whispered.
Sir Elf went to the gardens and both of my new parents embraced me.
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"Everything will make sense, we promise. We'll talk at breakfast. Goodnight sweetie."
"You will be the best daughter a father will have. Have a goodnight my Stealthy.
I wondered how in the world the first day of my new life could be so exciting.

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Hoped you guys enjoyed it! I wonder what story this will turn out to be. And please note that I LOVE FEEDBACK! If you are reading it, at least say something. Enjoy!

Wow, this is nice!! As with the Pop Fizz one, you have some awesome fan-theories!!

Good work!! ^,^b

Thanks so much Sky! \^v^/

Note: I changed my avi to SE so people dont think of star strike while reading.

Haha, good idea. I dunno, I'm pretty good about keeping the chars straight, but I guess it'll help peeps to not get confused.

The way its written excits me very much

Great! Keep up the goood work!

nice chapter

Thanks guys!

Stay tuned, new chapter should be posted soon.

Announcemnts:

OMG OMG I'M SO SORRY I JUST DIED. I promise that you will never have to wait that long EVER AGAIN. Now to the story announcements.

I am partnering with NINJAsk11 on this. She will give me ideas, catch my corrections stuff like that.



I decided to change Lady Elf's name to (haven't thought of a name) And Sir Elf _____(...dont worry, i'll fill in the blanks later)

Tired of waiting? Well here it is, Chapter 2!

--------Chapter 2: Ninja Academy/School---------
"...up..."

"wake...now..."

WAKE UP NOW!

*CRASH*

I look up from the floor to see ____. "Yes?" I said, half asleep.

"You were supposed to wake up...15 minutes ago. Your lucky you came here last night, today is the first day of the Ninja Academy. You are late for our first breakfast together. Now up, up! Your clothes are on your bed. After you get dressed in, go out in the hallway to your first left to the dining room. See you later deary." She left closed the door slowly.

I quickly got my self cleaned and dressed in. Of course, my clothes were all black. I went to find the dining room. A huge double door greeted me. I opened the door and looked shyly around the room. ____ and ____ were at the head of the long white table. And the room was filled with...boys. Boys here, boys there, some boys there too. Not the happiest moment of my short life.

Dad Clapped his hands twice and the boys all found their seat. "Stealth Elf, find a seat, and quick!"

A found an empty seat at the corner of the table next to a boy with silver hair.

"Hello, and welcome to the 17359th Ninja Academy session. Many of you traveled here from the edges of Skylands and further. The attendance today is 36, not bad for a school. In this school you will be trained to be the most stealthiest, silent, and deadliest ninja in Skylands. Be prepared for hardcore, 24/7 training. You will make friends here that will help you through your good and bad. Enough of me, it's YOUR turn. Let me pick some people...YOU. The blue ghost...soul...ghost in the silver armor.

Note: I will also create fan-back stories.

"My name is Grim Creeper. I come from the Ghoulish Hillside. My dad is widely known for ending people's lives, as a reaper. I have come here to slice with my scythe with confidence. I think that this will help me be a Skylander."

"Very interesting indeed. Now...erm...person with the silver hair."

My name is Blythe. My family gets the power to control the Wind. I live in the Windy Way. I have came hear to control and move the wind with grace."

As everybody was talking, I saw something at the corner of my eye.

And then I see it. A Dark shadowy figure with glaring red eyes filled with evil.

I looked at him.

He looked at me.

Then Darkness engulfed me.

Everything was dark, just like before I appeared in the forest. "Where have been, my deary?"

"Take me back to the school, who ever you are!!!!"

An elf just like me with long, straght, blue hair in a hood appeared. The place I was came very visible. I was in a large castle, and a large portal was set in front of me. The other elf appeared on the portal.

"Go back to work sister. Did you forget that we are Dark Portal Masters?"

An evil lag echoed in the room.

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Man this chapter wasnt good.

Yup this story is going downhill.

help NINJAsk11....

or more.... I'd say:

"Lets start this over, this is shiz"

I can't find anything to focus on. besides, it does not fit with what is originally said.

As a small child, Stealth Elf awoke one morning inside the hollow of an old tree with no memory of how she got there. She was taken in by an unusually stealthy, ninja-like tree creature in the deep forest. Under his tutelage, she has spent the majority of her life training in the art of stealth fighting. After completing her training, Stealth Elf became a Skylander, putting her skills in good use while also trying to uncover the mystery behind her origins.

you got the following:

1- the tree, you've included it, but its not clear enough
2- an points to one, one unusually steatlhy ninja like tree creature
3- deep forest- no school
4- ninja like tree creature is not an elf....

just saying, and I spend alot of time at thsi posts

USELESS

Forget it I'm closing this

Im not fit for fan fiction, it seems.

No no

Just.. I cant chain anything with it

May I try?

Protostory

Where am I? Who am I? I looked around, at least I can connect pictures with words. Like the surrounding substance is bark, and in one direction is a forest, and a- moving tree? I can't remember much, but I don't remember trees moving. I yelled, "Hello, moving tree,0" and it, no HE, looked down at me " No one has noticed me before, you seem special." I, confused, asked him what he meant. "I am a ninja, and only people with the true heart of a ninja see me when I don't want them to he said. I finally got a good look at him. he appeared to be a small tree, with openings in the bark for eyes. He had a bow on his back, and knives in his hands. "Done observing me? Now as I was saying, i believe you would make a good ninja, under the right tutelage. and I happen to be the right tutelage! Would you like to train with me?" I nodded, for some reason, I felt as if this was my destiny.

No sorry I cannot let you rewrite this story assassinelf.

Oh no, that was just my version of it, I was just showing a prototype paragraph. Just to see if I am good at writing

You all need to go to the wiki and read the full story...

"She wandered the forest for a few days"

Im serious

Dangit, I forgot that part. ANd I pride myself as a Stealth Elf expert

Quote: assassinelf

Dangit, I forgot that part. ANd I pride myself as a Stealth Elf expert

if you are, then what is her age and size

(you'llneverknowonlytrueexpertsknowthis)

20 years human, 44 elven

At least 1 meter and 70 centimeters

Ta ta wrong
16 years human 20 years elven

1 meter and 50centimeters

Hey, i was close, HAHA.

Hehe still im not inpressed

Is she in love? Yes, or no?

This is only impressive for you against me if I am the same age as you... I suspect you are older then me.... and not like, by one or two years

So you give up?

Me or......

Forget it this is closing

Yes, I give up, but pm me your age and I will tell you if your knowledge over mine id impressive

Why should I? Its clearly in my guestbook.....

Oh......

Also, Im inpressed...

By what? My knowledge for my age? The nun-chucks that I practice with every day for the past 5 years?

EXCUSE ME?!

you have real nun-chucks? HOLY CRAP!

I have a sword but no daggers. I do have throwing knives

for such a joung kid you have alot...

My brother, my dad and I used to make it out of wood. The sword and the knives are real and shared between me and my brother

I see.......

It's enjoyable. Stabbing the dummies

Yeah, agreed, stabbing is fun isn't it

Yeah. I also enjoy beating the heck out of the pillow-dummies with the nun-chuks