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Please read! Tell me if you like it! 'The Legend of Light' [CLOSED]
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#1 Posted: 22:29:02 29/08/2008 | Topic Creator
Okay, I made a topic called "The Shadow Age Beggins - Book One", but that had no responses. smilie Anyway, I'm actually writing this story in my notebook. It's called 'The Legend of Light'. It involves my character, Sky, and in like the fourth chapter, Spyro comes in. So, YES, this IS Spyro related, so don't come in here flaming me saying it isn't.
Anyway, here's the intro:

Legend fortells of a white light dragon to be born once every millineum. Such a type of dragon is always destined to defeat a great and powerful evil.
I'm getting ahead of myself. Our story starts with an egg. A white egg.And inside this very egg lies a miracle, soon to be named Sky. Her life, however, has a twist...

I hope you like this story so far! Please tell my what you think, and your suggestions so I can improve!!!
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Edited 1 time - Last edited at 22:29:44 29/08/2008 by Dragon8r10
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#2 Posted: 22:31:15 29/08/2008
Oh, this sounds cool!smilie
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#3 Posted: 22:32:22 29/08/2008 | Topic Creator
OMG YAY! A response! smilie And thanks! I already have chap.1 done. smilie
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#4 Posted: 22:48:35 29/08/2008
NP!smilie Can you post it?
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#5 Posted: 00:47:20 30/08/2008 | Topic Creator
Sure!

Chapter One: The Egg

It was a cool summer evening. Miles, a Dark Dragon chick, (baby dragon) was roaming a swamp nearby his clan.Suddenly, he heard a loud 'Croak!' that made him jump. Then, he saw a drak greyish-green toad sitting on a rock, and he began to chase it.
He chased it until the toad hopped into an algae lined pond. But, his attension was no longer on the pond's surface; waiting for it to ripple. It was now caught by a gleaming, almost glowing, teal marked, snow white egg.
He then began to ease in on the egg to get a closer look. He touched the egg, and it was warm. Which meant the embryo inside wasstill alive. He then picked the five pound egg, and carried a hal of a mile back to his clan.
Thirty minutes later, Miles had the egg in his arms standing infront of his father's hut, panting. He then burst through the curtain 'doors', and the chatter and bickering that could be heard outside of the hut fell silent.
"Miles, what have we here?" asked Black Magic. He is also the leader of the clan, and the other dragons in the hut are War Generals. "Father, I was chasing a toad in the nearby swamp when this egg's glow caught my eye." said Miles, handing his father the egg.
"This is peculiar... Sintrefuge! Inspect this egg!" shouted Black Magic. Sintrefuge is probably the most smartest, smallest, and weakest in the clan.
"Yes, Black Magic, sir!" said Sintrefuge. Black Magic handed him the egg. Sintrefuge looked at it closly.
"Miles, you see that greenish-grey book over there?" said Sintrefuge, poniting.
Miles got the book and gave it to Sintrefuge.
"The Book of Dragon History." Sintrefuge read the title aloud.
All of the dragons in the hut watched him with courosity and intrest.
"It says here; 'A Prophecy, white Light Dragon is born once every one thousand years. And it's extremly rare that the 'dragon' turn out to be a 'dragoness'. Also, the prophet's egg is believed to be snow white with teal marks....' " His voice trailed off as he stared, wide-eyed at the egg.
"I can't believe it!" said Sintrefuge with excitement. "We have a Prophet on our hands!"
"I can use it's power to win this war! Finally, our families can rest easy!" announced Black Magic.
All of the dragons in the hut cheered. Sintrefuge, however, just shook his head. He thought the war between the Dark and Light dragon clans was all rubbish.
Black Magic snatched the egg from Sintrefuge and forced into the arms of Zeke, a Warrior.
"Take it to the Hatchery, and give it the best care possible!" Then, his eyes started glowing red. "Or else."
"Y-yes sir!" stammered Zeke. And then he dashed to the Hatchery.


My, that's long. smilie
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#6 Posted: 00:51:46 30/08/2008
That's awesome!smilie Would you mind checking out my fan-fic too? It is called, "Clash of the Guardians."
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#7 Posted: 00:54:39 30/08/2008 | Topic Creator
Shur. smilie
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#8 Posted: 00:57:41 30/08/2008
Thanks! smilie
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#9 Posted: 01:37:58 30/08/2008
Outstanding. Very outstanding.
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#10 Posted: 02:25:13 30/08/2008 | Topic Creator
Thankies! Glad you like it!!
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#11 Posted: 02:26:22 30/08/2008
*smiles* I guess Sky was a dark dragon. Your and my chracter, Violetstar has a lot in common.
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#12 Posted: 02:36:31 30/08/2008 | Topic Creator
Wow, she was a dark dragon to? I didn't know that. 0_o Wild, ain't it? smilie
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#13 Posted: 02:44:42 30/08/2008
Yeah. She's torn on which side she should choose.
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#14 Posted: 02:59:19 30/08/2008 | Topic Creator
Very interesting.
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#15 Posted: 15:39:08 30/08/2008 | Topic Creator
CHAPTER TWO COMING SOON!! (maybe, like, tomorrow. smilie ) CHAPTER TWO SNEEK PEEK:

Chapter Two: It Hatches!

A few monthes had passed, and Miles was sleeping in one of the coners of his family's hut. Darkinia, his mother, walked in and gently shook his shoulder and whispered,
"Miles, get up. The egg is hatching."
Miles then got jumped up and dashed to the Hatchery, half asleep. He then bust, and nearly fell, through the Hatchery doors.
"What's I miss?" he yawned.
Suddenly, the egg glew white, and there was now a small hole in it.


Ha! I stopped just when it was getting interesting! Aren't I evil? X3
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#16 Posted: 15:39:52 30/08/2008
Lol. smilie. OMG!
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#17 Posted: 21:49:03 30/08/2008
that name is taken! on Spyro forum I made a story called THE LEGEND OF LIGHT! with my fan character light!
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#18 Posted: 23:33:34 30/08/2008
Well...is anyone reading it?
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#19 Posted: 23:34:16 30/08/2008 | Topic Creator
No, it wasn't. As a matter of fact, I don't even go on there anymore, let alone the fandom topic, due to the fact that that site's admin is a jerk. ><
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#20 Posted: 23:36:20 30/08/2008
Really? I can't believe it.
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#21 Posted: 23:37:11 30/08/2008 | Topic Creator
Yeah STF, and why don't you post the link to your story.
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#22 Posted: 23:38:38 30/08/2008
When will you poast another chapter?
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#23 Posted: 01:48:28 31/08/2008 | Topic Creator
I will tomorrow. smilie
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#24 Posted: 15:13:21 31/08/2008
I love it!!! smilie
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#25 Posted: 15:32:56 01/09/2008 | Topic Creator
Thank you! I'm still working on chap. two. ITZ LOOOOONNNG. smilie
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#26 Posted: 15:34:01 01/09/2008
smilie I cant wait!
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#27 Posted: 17:55:28 01/09/2008
PEOPLE ARE READING IT! and heres the link. http://www.spyroforum.com/topi...d-of-light.html I used that name! there are chapters. and people like it smilie
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#28 Posted: 18:06:03 01/09/2008 | Topic Creator
Big whoop, people like it. The thing is, I've never heard of that story, so I didn't steal it. If you don't believe me, that's your problem. Not mine.

THE REASONS WHY MY BOOK IS CALLED THE LEGEND OF LIGHT
1. Sky is a PROPHECY LIGHT DRAGON
2. At the end of each book, something happens.
3. It goes good with the story
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#29 Posted: 20:18:27 01/09/2008
Oh. Sorry! didn't know that.
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