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cynder2000 Gold Sparx Gems: 2277
#101 Posted: 23:04:59 20/03/2011
So unfair!smilie
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#102 Posted: 23:21:31 20/03/2011 | Topic Creator
I know
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"The cowboy has always been a dying breed
But he takes his dying slowly, perched upon his steed."
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#103 Posted: 23:41:11 20/03/2011
*waits*You must find it!smilie
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#104 Posted: 23:41:39 20/03/2011 | Topic Creator
I WILL
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#105 Posted: 22:09:07 22/03/2011
How about right now?
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#106 Posted: 01:51:15 01/04/2011
Me likes your story! smilie
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#107 Posted: 16:59:37 01/04/2011
Did you find it?I just can't wait!This story is too good!
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#108 Posted: 21:57:25 01/04/2011 | Topic Creator
I Believe I did
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#109 Posted: 21:58:33 01/04/2011
Post it,then!smilie
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#110 Posted: 22:15:58 01/04/2011 | Topic Creator
It's not that long
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But he takes his dying slowly, perched upon his steed."
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#111 Posted: 23:35:29 02/04/2011
Doesn't matter!I need to read some!
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#112 Posted: 21:48:17 04/04/2011 | Topic Creator
I writ a outline of the chapter since I have to rewrite it because it was monster coated.(yes,i spilt freaking monster all over it......D8<)


I. The fight ends

  • a. both Zarath and Maxi get tooken to the infiramry.
  • b. Maxi dies for a short while.

II.Zarath has to tell Kara what happened.

  • a. She gets really ticked and goes off on Zarath,telling him he was supposed to protect maxi.
  • b. back in the infirmary,the heart moniter on maxi finds a faint heartbeat
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But he takes his dying slowly, perched upon his steed."
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#113 Posted: 23:04:28 07/04/2011
Ah okay!A. cuz...IDK!Maybe B.No,A.B.A.B.A.B.A.B.AAAAAA!NO,B.I'm going crazy!B!Make it B!No,make it A!Just make it B cuz I give up!*whispers "A"*
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#114 Posted: 00:14:42 08/04/2011 | Topic Creator
-slaps c2000 upside the hed- Calm Down, It's what is going TO happen. An outline is something that gives you a hint of what is going to happen in the next chaptar
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But he takes his dying slowly, perched upon his steed."
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#115 Posted: 22:28:43 08/04/2011
Ah,okay.
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#116 Posted: 00:44:28 13/04/2011
Post. Now. CHAPTER.
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#117 Posted: 02:25:15 13/04/2011 | Topic Creator
OK OK. DON'T YELL AT ME.... >:/

Ch. 7



The arena was covered in a dense,eerie fog. Seth and Eron,I couldn't find them or Zarath. There was a feeling at the back of my mind saying something bad was,and is, going to happen. There was a voice inside of my head,shouting to finish this fight alive. Oh GGGGGRRRREAAAAT! I've lost my ****ing mind!! Sarcasm was a specialty of mine, and not being a killjoy,I HATE THIS BULL! HATE HATE HATE IT!!!!! All of a sudden, there was an extreme sharp pain in my right side. "TCHK!" with a sharp cry of pain, I fell to my knee. Seth stood above me with booming laughter,"You stupid,stupid boy! You actually thought you could beat me?!"

"Y-Y-Yes.....I do and WILL!" I managed to snarl before another wave of pain shot through my side. Where the **** is zarath!!!!? I screeched in my mind. The arena's lights shot back on,unexpectedly, blinding the both of us. I blinked several times,sending a high pitched,high frequency sound waves at Seth. NOT a smart decison. I fell over in pain,watching seth being slammed out of the arena. I heard his body hit the floor with a sickening crunch. That had to hurt big time......ouch. I thought,grimmacing in pain. The annoucers called the fight,and they had several of the infirmary people in to get me. Once they got me on the stretcher, I blacked out.....

In the ICU, I started to wake up. Groaning, I tried to sit up, but there was somebody pushing me down,"Maxi, Rest." It was zarath's voice,"Good job.... You didn't even use your claws!" Zarath smiled at me. I shot him a glare,"Shut it, please......" I said quietly.
(Gotta write in the third person point of view.)


The beeps of electrocardiogram got fainter. Zarath shot a glance at it,"No.....Maxi.....don't......" He stopped in the middle of his sentence,watching the cardiogram go from several slow heartbeats to a flat line. Zarath looked down at Maxi's unmoving chest,tears rolling down his face. The doctors looked at the two,"Get him out of here,I need to test the black haired boy." Dr. Amines said, turning to leave towards his locker. Two of the gaurds walked over to Zarath,"Get up,you're going back to your cell." Their voices were cold and unforgiving. Zarath looked up at them, a hard gaze on his face. He got up,and followed them.

Back at their cell, Zarath looked at Kara,"Where's Maxi?" She asked innocently. Zarath sat on a bunk with a heavy tone in his sigh,"Kara.....Maxi......he died in the ICU...." he mumbled. Kara looked at him,"No....No....He can't be dead!" She shouted,tears welling up in her eyes. Zarath looked up at her,"Kara! I watched him die! The electrocardiogram went from be
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"The cowboy has always been a dying breed
But he takes his dying slowly, perched upon his steed."
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#118 Posted: 22:02:02 13/04/2011
Went from be?Well,good chapter!smilie
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#119 Posted: 22:08:12 13/04/2011 | Topic Creator
I had to post really fast
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"The cowboy has always been a dying breed
But he takes his dying slowly, perched upon his steed."
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#120 Posted: 23:06:50 15/04/2011 | Topic Creator
NO COMMENTS?!
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But he takes his dying slowly, perched upon his steed."
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#121 Posted: 02:42:44 17/04/2011
Awesomest story along with a few others!How that?smilie
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#122 Posted: 02:10:08 18/04/2011 | Topic Creator
Yes, yes it is. smilie
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#123 Posted: 21:05:02 20/04/2011
Now...I NEED MOAR!
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#124 Posted: 21:44:36 20/04/2011 | Topic Creator
I lost my train of thought!
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#125 Posted: 00:59:01 29/04/2011
Unfair!
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#126 Posted: 01:05:20 29/04/2011 | Topic Creator
I'm sorry, school has been kicking my ass,
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#127 Posted: 19:03:12 30/04/2011
Same here...I have to type up something.My English teacher is going to kill me if I don't...
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#128 Posted: 21:48:11 04/05/2011 | Topic Creator
Yeah....... SHATATIKE
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#129 Posted: 23:27:16 04/05/2011
I think he already has killed me...
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#130 Posted: 22:14:34 05/05/2011 | Topic Creator
Ehh...i hate my geography class
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#131 Posted: 14:01:28 08/05/2011
smilie Well,I hate my English class!
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#132 Posted: 13:14:11 14/05/2011
Hello?
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I'm batman!! Shh...
Ezio Hunter Gems: 7178
#133 Posted: 22:53:24 16/05/2011 | Topic Creator
OH SH**. I FORGOT. FRIDAY AFTER SCHOOL I'LL WRITE STORY. last day of school!!! smilie
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#134 Posted: 00:06:33 17/05/2011
WRITE THA STORYYYY!!!!!!!!!!I miss stories.I was gone for two days straight.Never happens,not even when I get grounded.I sneak onto the computer at two in the morning if that happens...smilie
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#135 Posted: 20:48:01 10/06/2011 | Topic Creator
Uh..

"-ep!" Zarath shouted angerly. Kara had disbelief written all over her face,"It's Maxi though! He can't be dead.... he is one of those people who won't...won't..." She shook her head. Zarath sighed quietly,"I know he is...I don't know...he just went..." Zarath made a slicing noice and imitating slicing his neck. Kara made a face,"That's not freaking helpful." She growled,slapping him on the arm. "OWWWW!" He whined,rubbing his arm. Kara crossed her arms and nodded,"You deserved it." She retorted.

Meanwhile....


Dr. Amines drawed out some of Maxi's blood,"Black as the starless night.....not what I expected." He murmered to himself,quickly scribbling down some notes. "Shoot his heart full of adrinline.. AFTER I shoot him with another vile of this." he said,raising a vile of dark green liquid. By shooting this into him, he'll no longer be to make sonic sound waves..and he'll be able to control anything to do with electrokensis.... he thought,extracting the green liquid into a syringe. Dr.Amines looked at the pictures of the boy's circultory system,"Aha....the jugular." he mumbled,shooting the liquid into the boy's neck. Maxi's body convulsed several times,making it strain against the restraints. His right eye opened,and the iris was a green. "Let me go." Maxi said. His expression looked angery and darker than his normal. Amines stared in complete and utter shock. Maxi growled,"I said LET ME GO!" He shouted,the electricity in the room surged,and a few little lightning bolts came off of Maxi's arms,frying the restraints.
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"The cowboy has always been a dying breed
But he takes his dying slowly, perched upon his steed."
cynder2000 Gold Sparx Gems: 2277
#136 Posted: 21:08:38 10/06/2011
Woohoo!Thank Arceus!I needed some of that story.HE LIVES!MAXI LIVES!So THAT'S where I got the name!smilie Oy,I don't have a good memory.
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#137 Posted: 17:49:55 11/06/2011 | Topic Creator
Lol....what are you talking about?
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But he takes his dying slowly, perched upon his steed."
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#138 Posted: 21:30:42 11/06/2011 | Topic Creator
Okay, last time writing chaptar 7,PT 3. And this is the LAST time writing in 3rd person. Lol. I just noticed something,Maxi's powers now are based off of Cole's in 'inFAMOUS'. xD

Ch.7,part 3. Final Part.


Maxi looked at Amines, electricity cracklying of of his arms,"What'd you do to me,damnit?!" He shouted,overriding the electrocardiogram. Amines backed away,"Calm down! You'll end up blowing up this part of the lab!" The doctor exclaimed,grasping for a certain thing.

Maxi's pupils were catlike,"That's what I'm aiming for..." he growled,frying a computer's hard drive. Amines blocked his eyes from the intensity of the explosion,temporarily blind. He could roughly see the fuzzy outline of Maxi. Three snake-like gaurds ran into the rooms,shouting. "Doctor! Where are you at?!" One of them shouted,coughing violently. The other two looked around for Maxi,"Where'd he go,Xenir?!"

"I don't ****ing know,Keisser!" Xenir growled,looking. The room was covered in a dark smoke,and Maxi clung to the walls,heading towards the door.

He sneakily walked out of the door,and ran down the corridor, to his,Zarath's,and Kara's cell. Zarath looked up in shock,"But you-It's not possible!!" he shouted,looking at Maxi. Maxi shrugged,andused a bit of lightning to open the lock. Kara made a squealing noise and looked up at Maxi,"But Zarath said you had died!"

"Yes and No," Maxi said,getting in the cell,"I made it seem like I died,to trick Amines. Sorry Zarath." Maxi shrugged again,"He shot me up with another vile of stuff." He explained,looking down. Kara gently pulled his chin up to make him look at her,"Maxi....you're eyes..... they're green and catlike." She said.
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But he takes his dying slowly, perched upon his steed."
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#139 Posted: 23:53:12 11/06/2011
Okay,then.Well,I'm in this stray dogs rp,and I used the name Maxi for a dog who wanted to capture my character.Long story about that.
Oh,and woohoo!This is very awesome!smilie
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#140 Posted: 17:01:44 12/06/2011 | Topic Creator
OLOL. smilie

Thanks.
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#141 Posted: 21:04:32 16/06/2011
You're welcome!I guess it is a little funny,but Idk.
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#142 Posted: 21:13:22 16/06/2011 | Topic Creator
OLOL.....Thanks again. Hey read my other story
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#143 Posted: 16:33:57 20/06/2011
What's your other story?
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#144 Posted: 21:14:28 20/06/2011 | Topic Creator
The Final Battle. It's a Final Fantasy 7 fanfic
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#145 Posted: 17:13:54 21/06/2011
Ah,okay.I'm not much of a Final Fantasy fan,but I could read it.
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#146 Posted: 20:36:18 21/06/2011 | Topic Creator
Thanks.
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#147 Posted: 20:38:28 21/06/2011
You're welcome.
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#148 Posted: 20:44:12 21/06/2011 | Topic Creator
smilie lol...
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But he takes his dying slowly, perched upon his steed."
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#149 Posted: 21:01:51 21/06/2011
I can't read it right now,but I'll try at night.smilie I'm going to have two hours,since I don't want to be tired for the carnival at school.But,it passes by fast.Oy.I really will try,though.
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#150 Posted: 21:16:53 21/06/2011 | Topic Creator
okay then..
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