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My Story:) [CLOSED]
Cynder Phox Ripto Gems: 125
#1 Posted: 03:06:36 20/11/2009 | Topic Creator
Ok i don't know if you will like it or not but here is the first chapter of my story.

The Legend Of Cynder Phox~Shimmer

As the moon shined bright over the dew on the small blades of grass a fire roared across the land like a thunder storm at midnight.Cynder Phox came running fast away from the fire but was not able to outrun it she started slowing down and got between to large trees.The fire came closer and closer. She whimpered,But her small whimper was but of a small screach that knowone could hear.Exept a small fox known as the cloak of the night. They did not know the mystical fox's real name for she was a wander not staying in one place for very long.As the fox came running down to help Cynder Phox the fire got too close so she jumped and made a very loud screach that tore a path through the walls of fire.The fox softly told Cynder Phox to get out of this place.For it was forbidden by the ancent gods of the forest and anyone that was to tread its path was to be dead in the next hour if not retreted by a clan of ancent foxes like the mystical fox standing right infront of Cynder Phox.As the fox told her she got out of that place as soon as her little legs could carry her.She soon found a village of native foxes she was so tired she couldn't stand and the foxes soon found her outsid the village out cold.So they took her in to be one of their own....
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The next chapter is comming soonsmilie i hope you liked itsmilie
DarkCynder_543 Platinum Sparx Gems: 5210
#2 Posted: 10:43:19 20/11/2009
Wrong place.... Should be in Fan fiction...

It's great BTW.
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a true saiyan always sprinkles when he tinkles
Cynder Phox Ripto Gems: 125
#3 Posted: 12:12:14 20/11/2009 | Topic Creator
oh sorry and thank you im still working on the sceond chapter thoughsmilie
cynder 9999 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1285
#4 Posted: 17:31:52 20/11/2009
hey! cool story, have you seen my story!
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Leaving, For good..
Cynder Phox Ripto Gems: 125
#5 Posted: 20:51:58 20/11/2009 | Topic Creator
no but i would like toosmilie
xx chloebabez Yellow Sparx Gems: 1087
#6 Posted: 20:54:55 20/11/2009
Put your story in this section, it gets more attention smilie

Click here...
Edited 1 time - Last edited at 20:55:21 20/11/2009 by xx chloebabez
Cynder Phox Ripto Gems: 125
#7 Posted: 18:31:52 22/11/2009 | Topic Creator
yeah it doessmilie
cynder 9999 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1285
#8 Posted: 10:28:33 28/11/2009
your story is good!! (mind if i call you phox?)
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Leaving, For good..
Cynder Phox Ripto Gems: 125
#9 Posted: 22:48:04 28/11/2009 | Topic Creator
sure^i am so close to being done with chapter twosmilie
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