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darkSpyro - Spyro and Skylanders Forum > Stuff and Nonsense > i put an orginal story on the internet,my fate is sealed
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#1 Posted: 00:56:46 05/04/2016 | Topic Creator
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Edited 1 time - Last edited at 01:15:18 05/04/2016 by ZapNorris
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#2 Posted: 01:31:53 05/04/2016
Not my kind of story. I thought it would be Divergent related.
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#3 Posted: 03:27:16 05/04/2016
Not enough hot sex for my tastes.
Actually it was pretty good.
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#4 Posted: 03:48:31 05/04/2016 | Topic Creator
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#5 Posted: 16:51:41 05/04/2016
Left you some feedback on there (it's more fun to have comments directly on your stories). I have a feeling this was inspired by Zootopia
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#6 Posted: 16:54:47 05/04/2016
I was gonna write a short story some time this week but I haven't got round to it yet.
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#7 Posted: 18:45:20 05/04/2016 | Topic Creator
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#8 Posted: 18:50:45 05/04/2016
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#9 Posted: 19:21:57 05/04/2016 | Topic Creator
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Edited 1 time - Last edited at 23:03:23 05/04/2016 by ZapNorris
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#10 Posted: 01:19:08 06/04/2016 | Topic Creator
OH SWEET JAYSUS IT'S GOOD
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#11 Posted: 11:58:28 06/04/2016
Quote: ZapNorris
oh **** is there an anthro peacock i thought these were all humans the names made it sound like some sort of sci-fi epic
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#12 Posted: 14:15:01 06/04/2016 | Topic Creator
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#13 Posted: 15:04:42 06/04/2016
Quote: ZapNorris
only one of those characters sounds mildly interesting P.S. I've started my short story. The boy woke up, and looked around. The first thing he noticed was that he was in some sort of corridor, but when he looked behind himself, all he could see was a wall. The bricks were showing, and they looked old and dusty, like they had been here for, what, 200 years? 300? Longer? The boy did not know. All that mattered, if anything mattered, was that they were old. Maybe he could kick the wall down? No, the wall would be too strong. But he could try it anyway. He ran up fo the wall, and kicked it as hard as he could. The impact of the kick made the boy fall over, and as he got back up, he noticed that the wall was still completely intact. He decided to walk the other way and see if there was another way out.
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Edited 1 time - Last edited at 15:24:30 06/04/2016 by Qcumber
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#14 Posted: 15:30:20 06/04/2016
nobody read qcumbers story, it is inappropriate
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#15 Posted: 15:32:58 06/04/2016
Quote: Big Green
hey just because there are seven dicks in it doesn't make it NSFW
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#16 Posted: 16:16:19 06/04/2016 | Topic Creator
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#17 Posted: 16:29:32 06/04/2016
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#18 Posted: 16:30:47 06/04/2016 | Topic Creator
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#19 Posted: 16:33:09 06/04/2016
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#20 Posted: 16:34:23 06/04/2016 | Topic Creator
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SuperSpyroFan55 Gold Sparx Gems: 2265 |
#21 Posted: 18:00:22 06/04/2016
Ghetto Popo sounds pretty interesting though
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#22 Posted: 18:03:00 06/04/2016
here's a tip:
if there is a hot anime tsundere who never wears anything in your story, %420 more weaboos will read it and you will get more profit
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#23 Posted: 23:58:32 06/04/2016 | Topic Creator
Quote: Qcumber
*takes notes* |
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