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My first video game review [CLOSED]
skylandersspyro Emerald Sparx Gems: 3872
#1 Posted: 02:45:48 10/09/2015 | Topic Creator
Meh.I tried
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Uh Uh Uh! You didn't say the magic word!
AvatariDragon Platinum Sparx Gems: 6085
#2 Posted: 02:48:49 10/09/2015
That's a nice video smilie
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♥ May 23, 2011 ♥
somePerson Diamond Sparx Gems: 8470
#3 Posted: 03:03:05 10/09/2015
I'll see you on RAR. :)
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Star Wars didn't happen, but it's a rad movie.
StriderSwag Gold Sparx Gems: 2769
#4 Posted: 03:31:53 10/09/2015
**** you i loved spongebob heropants
parisruelz12 Diamond Sparx Gems: 7569
#5 Posted: 07:10:23 10/09/2015
The inconsistency of wings is making my OCD go off. Buuuut, here are just a couple of constructive comments:
I would practice your script a lot, this way you don't sound like you're reading off of a page. If you sound like this, then viewers are most likely going to get bored. Try adding a few bells and whistles, but not too many of course. You don't need to go over the top with them. The next thing you can do is work on getting more footage, this way, especially one's that prove your point more. Also, work on fluency, for example instead of saying what you said in the video. Try making smoother transitions, "The game's graphics look like a PS2, which might be because of the consoles it was released on. Speaking of which, it was released PS Vita, Xbox 360 and 3DS." and then follow through with your joke. "What is this? 2012?" Again, work on the consistency. of your character, I noticed there were a few slides where he had wings and a few where he didn't. That makes your character look hastily done. Follow this, and you should improve. But don't feel like you have to follow this to T. Remember it's still your video and you are in charge of it. :^)

Good job so far, keep it up!
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looks like ive got some things to do...
TTD Hunter Gems: 6222
#6 Posted: 07:27:40 10/09/2015
Quote: somePerson
I'll see you on RAR. smilie

I've already been on it, well technically (WTH). Won worst reviewer 2014 and well, got a few compliments this year.
Big Green Platinum Sparx Gems: 6345
#7 Posted: 11:03:29 10/09/2015
Hi Sam, did you and Noah happen to pack Jackson's & Nyah's Wii controls when you were here in July? They used them the last time you cousins played together at Ammi & Poppa's house? Let me know. Love you and miss you. Hope school is awesome.
skylandersspyro Emerald Sparx Gems: 3872
#8 Posted: 14:31:57 10/09/2015 | Topic Creator
Quote: Big Green
Hi Sam, did you and Noah happen to pack Jackson's & Nyah's Wii controls when you were here in July? They used them the last time you cousins played together at Ammi & Poppa's house? Let me know. Love you and miss you. Hope school is awesome.



**** my grandma
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Uh Uh Uh! You didn't say the magic word!
Big Green Platinum Sparx Gems: 6345
#9 Posted: 19:23:40 10/09/2015
Quote: skylandersspyro
Quote: Big Green
Hi Sam, did you and Noah happen to pack Jackson's & Nyah's Wii controls when you were here in July? They used them the last time you cousins played together at Ammi & Poppa's house? Let me know. Love you and miss you. Hope school is awesome.



**** my grandma


ooh, i'm telling
spyrothe111 Ripto Gems: 3702
#10 Posted: 21:40:03 11/09/2015
Nice review!

Battle For Bikini Bottom and Movie game FTW!
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