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A Mole's Destiny [CLOSED]
SpyroKing Diamond Sparx Gems: 8677
#151 Posted: 16:27:16 16/11/2008 | Topic Creator
Alright. For everyone here, here's a sneak preview of the characters:
Gridion (Pronounced grid-E-on) My own special dragon! He's red, likes writing, and has a slight head problem. It's always lolled to the side.
Gwendolen: A dragon from the book "The Fire Within" by Chris D'Lacey. Actually, all dragons here, besides Gridion, are from that book. She's always fierce.
Gadzooks: Someone else's special dragon. Is green, and also likes writing.
Guinivere (Pronounced Gwen-I-veer) Kind, gentle. Always thinks of problems.

Tell me what you think!
cynder21 Gold Sparx Gems: 2214
#152 Posted: 16:28:28 16/11/2008
sounds good!!!! when are you going to start???? and is your writers block over yet????
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Cynder09 Diamond Sparx Gems: 9866
#153 Posted: 16:29:19 16/11/2008
wow! really cool! i've read those books! i love it! the dragons are really cool!
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep.
Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land.
SpyroKing Diamond Sparx Gems: 8677
#154 Posted: 16:29:21 16/11/2008 | Topic Creator
Well, i'm kind of starting this to get rid of it. I haven't forgotten mole-yair, i just need some time off.
cynder21 Gold Sparx Gems: 2214
#155 Posted: 16:30:45 16/11/2008
a writers vacation????maybe i should do that too.........
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Cynder09 Diamond Sparx Gems: 9866
#156 Posted: 16:32:31 16/11/2008
writer's vacation! i like it! but, i don't need it! i like writing! i'll write more of mine, if i have time! lol! that rhymed!
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep.
Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land.
SpyroKing Diamond Sparx Gems: 8677
#157 Posted: 16:34:48 16/11/2008 | Topic Creator
Not really a vacation. I'm still doing the new one. I need a plot and a title.
Cynder09 Diamond Sparx Gems: 9866
#158 Posted: 16:46:11 16/11/2008
i could think of one! but, i'm busy with my own story at the moment!
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep.
Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land.
SpyroKing Diamond Sparx Gems: 8677
#159 Posted: 16:46:53 16/11/2008 | Topic Creator
Sure! When you're free, i could use some help.
Cynder09 Diamond Sparx Gems: 9866
#160 Posted: 16:48:40 16/11/2008
well, i already have ideas for mine! i could easily help you think of something!
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep.
Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land.
SpyroKing Diamond Sparx Gems: 8677
#161 Posted: 16:49:09 16/11/2008 | Topic Creator
Perfect! Thanx!
Cynder09 Diamond Sparx Gems: 9866
#162 Posted: 16:51:23 16/11/2008
your welcome! so, you can pm me, to tell more about it, then i can help you think of something!
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep.
Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land.
SpyroKing Diamond Sparx Gems: 8677
#163 Posted: 16:53:34 16/11/2008 | Topic Creator
That's just it. I don't know ANYTHING about it. Besides the characters.
Gridion: You don't know anything about my story?
Me: Oh, hi Gridion. He's sitting right here next to me. Don't worry buddy, we'll think of something.
Gridion: Ok.
Dark Lord Platinum Sparx Gems: 7365
#164 Posted: 17:07:02 16/11/2008
I made chapter 3,chapter 4 will be coming soon in a few minutes.
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Like fallen snow, I lay on the ground and wait for my turn to fade away, no matter how unique I seem. It's my gift to you... A true sacrifice...
SpyroKing Diamond Sparx Gems: 8677
#165 Posted: 17:07:44 16/11/2008 | Topic Creator
I read it, very good. You guys are natural.
Cynder09 Diamond Sparx Gems: 9866
#166 Posted: 17:15:07 16/11/2008
i'm great at thinking up ideas! do you not have anything in mind at all?!
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep.
Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land.
SpyroKing Diamond Sparx Gems: 8677
#167 Posted: 21:18:38 17/11/2008 | Topic Creator
Alright! This is it, the next chapter. And so we go.

Chapter 11: Tale of a long lost friend
The party followed Exhumor into his room. It was furnished well, with a bed, a couch, and 2 big bean bag chairs. "Please, sit," said Exhumor graciously. Icies and Ignitus chose the couch, while Mole-Yair sat in one of the big beany chairs. "So, my brother, what happened after you fell? Are the others alive?" Mole-Yair asked. "No. They all died. I thought i was going to die too, but someone saved me," Exhumor replied. "Who?" Icies asked. "All in good time. Let me start after i fell. We were falling, and yes, i thought i was dead. I had fallen unconscious. When i woke up, there was a cheetah staring at me. He said his name was Hunter. I asked him where my friends were. He looked at me sadly and said they were dead. So i sat down and cried. Hunter let me. A while later, he told me we needed to get to a safe spot. So he allowed me on his back, and he took off, fast as a rocket, to this place. Warfang. Nothing much happened while we traveled. And so we arrived at this place. I've been thinking of you ever since," Exhumor recounted. The two brothers hugged each other. "So...this is it? The start of our new life," Mole-Yair said. "Yes. Your two friends may live with us too, if they so wish," Exhumor said. "We'd love to," Ignitus and Icies said simulataneously. And so they all started a new life in the lovely city of Warfang....for the next 3 years.
END OF PART 1.
cynder21 Gold Sparx Gems: 2214
#168 Posted: 21:27:07 17/11/2008
ginally the writer's block is over! and yeah i can't wait till part two!!!!!!!!!
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SpyroKing Diamond Sparx Gems: 8677
#169 Posted: 21:28:02 17/11/2008 | Topic Creator
Part 2 will be the best. Trust me, i'm back in the zone.
Cynder09 Diamond Sparx Gems: 9866
#170 Posted: 22:05:21 17/11/2008
great story! write more!
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep.
Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land.
SpyroKing Diamond Sparx Gems: 8677
#171 Posted: 22:11:30 17/11/2008 | Topic Creator
People! People! Settle down! Chapter 12, or the beginning of part 2, will be coming to your home computers on November 18th. It's free, but you must bring your own snacks!
cynder21 Gold Sparx Gems: 2214
#172 Posted: 22:13:21 17/11/2008
i have my snack! * pionts to cream soda float*
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SpyroKing Diamond Sparx Gems: 8677
#173 Posted: 22:50:21 17/11/2008 | Topic Creator
Good! Remember, you can't make cream soda floats without cream soda. Why i said that? I have no idea.
Cynder09 Diamond Sparx Gems: 9866
#174 Posted: 23:05:21 17/11/2008
ok, i'll calm down and wait for more!
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep.
Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land.
DarkSpyro_101 Blue Sparx Gems: 610
#175 Posted: 23:48:19 17/11/2008
Awsome!!!Can't wait for the next part!!
Dawn:I'll get my snacks!smilie
Pablo: Please don't be...
Dawn:SUGAR!!!!smilie
Me & Pablo: Oh-No!!!smilie
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"I've missed you so much, even though I don't show it around. I dream of you and I see you in my mind. I hope that one day you'll be back..."
Edited 1 time - Last edited at 23:48:33 17/11/2008 by DarkSpyro_101
Cynder09 Diamond Sparx Gems: 9866
#176 Posted: 23:49:53 17/11/2008
Fireflight: lol! anyway, more of my story has been written!
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep.
Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land.
SpyroKing Diamond Sparx Gems: 8677
#177 Posted: 21:20:08 18/11/2008 | Topic Creator
Here we go! Beginning of Part 2:

Chapter 12: To the Ramparts
3 years. 3 years they had been living at the Dragon City, Warfang. They worked as farmers, and they were good at it. One rainy day there was a knock to Mole-Yair's door. He opened it and Exhumor was standing there. "Brother , come quick! They are invading our city!" he said hurriedly. Mole-Yair followed Exhumor outside, where a crowd had gathered. The mayor of the city, Arkatoo, was telling the city to go to the ramparts if they wish to fight. Everyone else was to go belowground and find shelter. "What does he want us to do?" Mole-Yair whispered. "We....we must fight," Exhumor said. "Well....i think i'll go get Ignitus and Icies. They would be a real asset in this fight," Mole-Yair said before he took off. He ran to their apartment and told Ignitus and Icies they were needed to battle. "So...this is it?" Icies asked. "No...you will live. I will see you later," Mole-Yair said before he took off for the ramparts to fight for his city.
Dark Lord Platinum Sparx Gems: 7365
#178 Posted: 21:30:07 18/11/2008
We made a new chapter,but the story we made doesn't tell everything about ZarineNas's life,witch is important.But Everythinng of Dark Lord's Unknown's and ZarineNas's life,i'll make Dark Lord's Unknown will make well Unknown's and ZarineNas will make ZarineNas's.Oh,and cool story!
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Like fallen snow, I lay on the ground and wait for my turn to fade away, no matter how unique I seem. It's my gift to you... A true sacrifice...
Edited 1 time - Last edited at 21:30:31 18/11/2008 by Dark Lord
SpyroKing Diamond Sparx Gems: 8677
#179 Posted: 21:31:00 18/11/2008 | Topic Creator
Yes, i read it.
Cynder1 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1801
#180 Posted: 22:01:33 19/11/2008
smilie this is asom!!
Deanna:.......it dosnt have vary many dragons
it dosnt alwas have to have dragons!!
Deanna:smilie
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Yeet
SpyroKing Diamond Sparx Gems: 8677
#181 Posted: 21:13:08 20/11/2008 | Topic Creator
If you've played DotD this should seem sort of familiar.

Chapter 13: The Battle of Warfang
Looks like the dragons had arrived to the ramparts just in time. The city walls were being attacked by Siege Towers. Grublins were at the city gates, trying to break in. "Mole-Yair!" shouted his general. "Take one of the catapaults!" Mole-Yair jumped in while Icies and Ignitus took off to the skies to battle from above. Mole-Yair began shooting at the seemingly endless teems of soldiers. Each 10 he shot was replaced by 20 more. After a half hour of shooting at enemies, Mole-Yair caught something purple out of the corner of his eye. It was spyro, and that black dragon, what was her name....Cynder. They were protecting another catapault from flying grublins who were smart enough to fly over the walls. All of a sudden, they started retreating. "WE WON!!!" everyone began chanting....just before a giant Golem came out of the volcano. Mole-Yair could tell, this was it. This was the battle that would decide the fate of Warfang. The dragons vs. the Golem. Good vs. evil. Mole-Yair voted for good.
DarkSpyro_101 Blue Sparx Gems: 610
#182 Posted: 21:28:54 20/11/2008
Awsome!I love it!smilie
Dawn:Write more,write more!!smiliesmiliesmilie
Pablo:It's War time!!smiliesmilie
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"I've missed you so much, even though I don't show it around. I dream of you and I see you in my mind. I hope that one day you'll be back..."
SpyroKing Diamond Sparx Gems: 8677
#183 Posted: 21:30:42 20/11/2008 | Topic Creator
I won't write more Mole-Yair today...but i may write more Gridion and the Dragons of Darkness.
DarkSpyro_101 Blue Sparx Gems: 610
#184 Posted: 21:34:07 20/11/2008
Ok!Well,I'll wait!
Dawn:That reminds me,write my story!smilie
Ok,I will!smiliesmiliesmiliesmilie
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"I've missed you so much, even though I don't show it around. I dream of you and I see you in my mind. I hope that one day you'll be back..."
SpyroKing Diamond Sparx Gems: 8677
#185 Posted: 21:35:36 20/11/2008 | Topic Creator
OK. i will wait for it.
Cynder1 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1801
#186 Posted: 21:39:29 20/11/2008
Deanna:............HI MOLY THING!
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Yeet
cynder21 Gold Sparx Gems: 2214
#187 Posted: 21:41:00 20/11/2008
nice job! good thing the writer's block is gone! go mole-yair!
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SpyroKing Diamond Sparx Gems: 8677
#188 Posted: 21:51:52 20/11/2008 | Topic Creator
I'm getting close to the ending and the final confrontation...
Cynder09 Diamond Sparx Gems: 9866
#189 Posted: 22:02:21 20/11/2008
wow! this is great! i love it!
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep.
Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land.
cynder21 Gold Sparx Gems: 2214
#190 Posted: 22:46:06 20/11/2008
yeah!!! * drinks cream soda float*
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SpyroKing Diamond Sparx Gems: 8677
#191 Posted: 22:47:31 20/11/2008 | Topic Creator
Can anyone guess who the final battle will be between?
cynder21 Gold Sparx Gems: 2214
#192 Posted: 22:49:10 20/11/2008
CSFA and the haters??? naw jk!!!! idk!!!???
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SpyroKing Diamond Sparx Gems: 8677
#193 Posted: 22:50:37 20/11/2008 | Topic Creator
CSFA rulez!
Anyway, any other guesses? OK, it is...

Mole-Yair & Icies (later) vs. Malefor


Well...was that predictable or not?
Cynder1 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1801
#194 Posted: 21:15:23 21/11/2008
Deanna:........nopesmilie
smilie
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Yeet
cynder21 Gold Sparx Gems: 2214
#195 Posted: 22:23:51 21/11/2008
no....
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DarkSpyro_101 Blue Sparx Gems: 610
#196 Posted: 02:08:09 22/11/2008
I'm still thinking!*thinks to much,she explodes*
"I go BOOM"smilie
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"I've missed you so much, even though I don't show it around. I dream of you and I see you in my mind. I hope that one day you'll be back..."
Cynder1 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1801
#197 Posted: 04:37:55 22/11/2008
Deanna: i whounder what it whould be like to have me in the story
DONT DO IT!!!!!!!DONT DO IT!!!!SHELL MESS EVRYTING UP!!!!DONT DO IT!!!!smilie
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Yeet
SpyroKing Diamond Sparx Gems: 8677
#198 Posted: 05:54:52 22/11/2008 | Topic Creator
Sorry Deanna. Won't happen.
Cynder1 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1801
#199 Posted: 14:43:22 22/11/2008
Deanna:awwwww
YESSSSSSSSSSSSSS!
Deanna:>->
.............what
Deanna: i forgot now smilie
smilie
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Yeet
cynder21 Gold Sparx Gems: 2214
#200 Posted: 16:30:46 22/11/2008
* gets up and gets float* what happens next?
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