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A Mole's Destiny [CLOSED]
SpyroKing Diamond Sparx Gems: 8677
#1 Posted: 22:35:08 07/11/2008 | Topic Creator
Chapter 1: The Great Escape
"Good-bye Spyro!" said Mole-Yair. He started kissing him on the cheek. "Maybe someday our paths will cross again." he said as the ship containing him and the rest of the Manwersmalls began to sail away from the burning ship. "Be safe!" spyro called just as a huge cannonball sailed in front of the ship. "WHOA! MOVE!" Mole-yair screamed. He just about wet his pants. It began to sail away toward supposed freedom...
Edited 1 time - Last edited at 01:23:09 28/11/2008 by SpyroKing
Cynder09 Diamond Sparx Gems: 9866
#2 Posted: 22:50:58 07/11/2008
cool! i was wondering what happened to them!
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep.
Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land.
SpyroKing Diamond Sparx Gems: 8677
#3 Posted: 23:20:19 07/11/2008 | Topic Creator
Thanx!!! I may do Chapter 2 tonight, or i may wait until tomorrow. Gotta think of ideas!
Cynder09 Diamond Sparx Gems: 9866
#4 Posted: 23:24:33 07/11/2008
your welcome! i like it! write more soon!
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep.
Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land.
xxCynderxx Blue Sparx Gems: 642
#5 Posted: 15:10:19 08/11/2008
Cool more pls more.
Cant wait.
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sorry lost my pass and I made new acount
SpyroKing Diamond Sparx Gems: 8677
#6 Posted: 15:12:34 08/11/2008 | Topic Creator
I will do more...I'm waiting for someone to reply to me to see if she'll let me use one of her characters in the story. I will do Chapter 2 today though! Already have it planned out in my head.
SpyroKing Diamond Sparx Gems: 8677
#7 Posted: 16:57:19 08/11/2008 | Topic Creator
Alright, here it is! Enjoy!

Chapter 2: A New Ally
Mole-Yair and the Manwersmalls had been sailing for over an hour, and they still hadn't found a way out of the fleet of ships. "I'm bored," said Exhumor. "Just deal with it, brother," Mole-Yair told him for the hundredth time. Suddenly, a cannonball hit their small floating ship. "Crap. What was that?" said Exhumor. They were out of control. They crashed into a large ship. "Everybody jump!" Mole-Yair screamed. He jumped off onto the large ship. "Come on everybody!" he was yelling. But it was too late. The small ship fell to the hard, unforgiving ground far below. "NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! EXHUMOR!" Mole-Yair screamed his head off. He sat down and cried. An hour later, he decided to get up and look around. He turned around and-
"Hi there!" It was a large, aqua-blue dragon. "Who are you?" the dragon asked. "I'm Mole-Yair. Who are you?" he asked. "I'm Icies. Nice to meet you." Suddenly, they heard voices. It sounded like, "Blah, blab, blabber, blab!" "We gotta get outta here." said Icies. "That's Skabb, commander of this ship. Jump on my back!" Mole-Yair got on, and they took off into the dangerous, uncharted skies.

Thank you to Cynder16, who let me use Icies in my story. Plz read her story of Icies.Icies: Daughter of Cyril.
SpyroKing Diamond Sparx Gems: 8677
#8 Posted: 21:33:03 08/11/2008 | Topic Creator
Chapter 3: First Flight
"Wow, it's so beautiful up here," said Mole-Yair. It felt good with his soul. He had just lost his brother and friends. "Yeah. You get used to it, though." said Icies. They had finally gotten away from the fleet of pirate ships. "So...where are you taking me?" Mole-Yair asked. "I don't know. Anywhere but there," Icies replied. "Good enough for me. If you don't mind, i have a question. Since you're a dragon, do you know...Spyro the dragon?" Mole-Yair questioned. "Who?" Icies asked. "Never mind." said Mole-Yair. Icies looked up. "Uh-oh..." "What's wrong?" Mole-Yair asked. "Look," she replied. There were big thunderheads beginning to form. "Look! Down there!" said Mole-Yair. He had found a cave to take shelter in. They started to fly down, when suddenly....
SpyroKing Diamond Sparx Gems: 8677
#9 Posted: 00:04:28 09/11/2008 | Topic Creator
Srry everybody *yawns* Need to rest my brain for ideas for Chapter 4. See everyone tomorrow! I should write Chapter 4 tomorrow.
DarkSpyro_101 Blue Sparx Gems: 610
#10 Posted: 01:31:08 09/11/2008
Aww!!!ok!!Love your story!lol.smilie
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"I've missed you so much, even though I don't show it around. I dream of you and I see you in my mind. I hope that one day you'll be back..."
Cynder16 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1857
#11 Posted: 01:47:46 09/11/2008
Nice! I like it!
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"Aim high in life, but watch out for flying boxes."
SpyroKing Diamond Sparx Gems: 8677
#12 Posted: 15:23:20 09/11/2008 | Topic Creator
OK. I have returned. Have the basics for Chapter 4. Still need a little thinking though. Check here later today for the next chapter.
Cynder16 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1857
#13 Posted: 15:32:02 09/11/2008
Okay.
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"Aim high in life, but watch out for flying boxes."
SpyroKing Diamond Sparx Gems: 8677
#14 Posted: 15:43:11 09/11/2008 | Topic Creator
Wow, the thoughts came to me faster than i thought so...here you go!

Chapter 4: A Dark and Stormy Fight
It had begun to rain. Thunder boomed all around as Icies tried to keep Mole-Yair from falling. They were heading for the cave when they were intercepted by a pair of Dreadwings. "Uh...WHAT ARE THOSE THINGS!?" Mole-Yair screamed. "Dreadwings!" Icies informed him. "They could shred you to bits in a minute!" This made Mole-Yair jumpy. He suddenly wished he had a weapon to fight with. This dragon he had known for less than an hour was fighting for his life. Mole-Yair felt something in his hand. He looked down and saw...a weird stick thingy like Kane has. "Where did this come from?" he wondered. He had an idea. He jumped off of Icies and landed on one of the Dreadwings. He started to beat it senseless until it started falling. Then Icies swooped in and Mole-Yair jumped on her back. They headed for Dreadwing #2, but it had been smart and flew away. They decided to be smart too, and headed for the nice, dry cave.
SpyroKing Diamond Sparx Gems: 8677
#15 Posted: 15:46:51 09/11/2008 | Topic Creator
What can i say? Mole-Yair's gotta be brave for what i have planned for him in this story.
Cynder16 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1857
#16 Posted: 15:50:41 09/11/2008
Cool!smilie He was a Brave mole
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"Aim high in life, but watch out for flying boxes."
SpyroKing Diamond Sparx Gems: 8677
#17 Posted: 15:52:32 09/11/2008 | Topic Creator
Brave moles are awesome. Y'know, they should've put Mole-Yair in DotD. I was really expecting him in there.
Cynder16 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1857
#18 Posted: 15:58:48 09/11/2008
Yeah me 2. It would be better. And Im wondering what happened 2 Mole-Yair after he escaped. (Like in the Programmers Minds)
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"Aim high in life, but watch out for flying boxes."
SpyroKing Diamond Sparx Gems: 8677
#19 Posted: 15:59:39 09/11/2008 | Topic Creator
I doubt they even thought about it. Well, now you guys will all know.
Cynder16 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1857
#20 Posted: 16:31:51 09/11/2008
From a Mind.smilie Better then the programmers.smilie
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"Aim high in life, but watch out for flying boxes."
SpyroKing Diamond Sparx Gems: 8677
#21 Posted: 16:32:30 09/11/2008 | Topic Creator
Which is...NOTHING! (in the Programmer's minds)
Cynder16 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1857
#22 Posted: 16:35:03 09/11/2008
Yepsmilie When u gonna write more?
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"Aim high in life, but watch out for flying boxes."
SpyroKing Diamond Sparx Gems: 8677
#23 Posted: 16:36:20 09/11/2008 | Topic Creator
Well...maybe today. I, uh, well, *in a small voice* have no ideas. But don't worry! I'll be thinking!
Cynder16 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1857
#24 Posted: 16:48:14 09/11/2008
THINK
What happens in the cave? Do they met Cynder or Spyro?
I don't know. It's ur story.
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"Aim high in life, but watch out for flying boxes."
SpyroKing Diamond Sparx Gems: 8677
#25 Posted: 16:51:32 09/11/2008 | Topic Creator
Uh, uh, uh, uh....Brain overload! smilie Just kidding. Maybe. That's an interesting thought.
Cynder16 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1857
#26 Posted: 16:58:36 09/11/2008
I mean,
Spyro could have wondered where they were, and went to find them and was in the cave.
And again, I don't know.
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"Aim high in life, but watch out for flying boxes."
SpyroKing Diamond Sparx Gems: 8677
#27 Posted: 17:00:44 09/11/2008 | Topic Creator
No, i just remembered. This is happening while spyro is fighting Gaul. Remember? This happens during The Eternal Night.
Cynder16 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1857
#28 Posted: 17:02:44 09/11/2008
OH. What about
The Guardians? The Chronicler?
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"Aim high in life, but watch out for flying boxes."
SpyroKing Diamond Sparx Gems: 8677
#29 Posted: 17:04:36 09/11/2008 | Topic Creator
I was thinking
More danger. I know, i'm like that. It's interesting. Maybe the elders can save them. But Mole-Yair has a secret.
Cynder16 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1857
#30 Posted: 17:05:23 09/11/2008
Cool! DO IT DO IT DO IT!!!!!!*keeps chanting*
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"Aim high in life, but watch out for flying boxes."
SpyroKing Diamond Sparx Gems: 8677
#31 Posted: 17:07:53 09/11/2008 | Topic Creator
Do what? The chapter?
Cynder16 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1857
#32 Posted: 17:09:46 09/11/2008
YES And the Idea!
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"Aim high in life, but watch out for flying boxes."
SpyroKing Diamond Sparx Gems: 8677
#33 Posted: 17:19:05 09/11/2008 | Topic Creator
Alright. Here goes.

Chapter 5: Mole-Yair's Secret
Icies and Mole-Yair landed inside the cave. First thing they did was start a fire. Then, they sat down and started to talk. "So...where did you get that stick?" Icies asked. "I..." Mole-Yair sighed. "I never wanted anyone to know. But, when i was born i had a special power. I could wish for anything i wanted and it would appear," "Like with those Dreadwings back there?" Icies inquired. "Yeah. The reason i didn't want anyone to know was because i was scared they would kidnap me and make me use my power for evil," he finished. "Oh...wow," said Icies. They suddenly heard a growl. "Wh...What was that?" Mole-Yair asked. Suddenly, a huge Grublin General came flying out of the back of the cave. "Hold on, young ones!" came a voice from behind them. They turned to see a large, red dragon hovering at the cave entrance. "Get behind me!" said the mysterious dragon. Mole-Yair and Icies did as they were told, and the dragon unleashed a powerful fire fury, that turned that Grublin to a crisp. "Well...dinner's done," said the dragon. "Oh, please excuse my rudeness. My name is Ignitus." "Hi. My name is Mole-Yair, and this is my friend Icies. Thank you for saving us from that....that THING!" "You're quite welcome," said Ignitus cheerfully. "Now, let's sit down for dinner, shall we?"
Cynder16 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1857
#34 Posted: 20:13:04 09/11/2008
Can I say Something: Icies Knows Ignitus! And the other Guardians (Most Importantly CYRIL) Im not trying 2 b mean. It's just, she knows them.
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"Aim high in life, but watch out for flying boxes."
SpyroKing Diamond Sparx Gems: 8677
#35 Posted: 22:08:13 09/11/2008 | Topic Creator
Well...let's say this is before they met.
Cynder16 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1857
#36 Posted: 22:12:03 09/11/2008
Uh....
Icies, Is Cyril's Daughter....

So it's sorta impossible for her NOT to know him....
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"Aim high in life, but watch out for flying boxes."
SpyroKing Diamond Sparx Gems: 8677
#37 Posted: 22:13:06 09/11/2008 | Topic Creator
Oh yeah. Srry, i'm not thinking clearly.
Cynder16 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1857
#38 Posted: 22:14:08 09/11/2008
Join the clubsmilie
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"Aim high in life, but watch out for flying boxes."
SpyroKing Diamond Sparx Gems: 8677
#39 Posted: 22:15:28 09/11/2008 | Topic Creator
Is it the annoying pest club? smilie
Cynder16 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1857
#40 Posted: 01:03:22 10/11/2008
smilieThe NOT THINKING CLEARLY CLUBsmilie
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"Aim high in life, but watch out for flying boxes."
Cynder_fan Gold Sparx Gems: 2683
#41 Posted: 01:49:56 10/11/2008
how'd you get away with most of the letters CAPITLES
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Local technician who comes up with rediculous ideas
Cynder16 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1857
#42 Posted: 02:19:01 10/11/2008
I don't know....It never warned me......
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"Aim high in life, but watch out for flying boxes."
Unknown1 Blue Sparx Gems: 520
#43 Posted: 05:16:04 10/11/2008
Cool story.
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"Don't let me go." ♥ZarineNas♥
SpyroKing Diamond Sparx Gems: 8677
#44 Posted: 21:01:58 10/11/2008 | Topic Creator
Thank you. I take pride in being a writer. I love everyone's comments.
Cynder09 Diamond Sparx Gems: 9866
#45 Posted: 23:32:43 10/11/2008
hey! love your story! write more!
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I live my life inside a dream, only waking when I sleep.
Yeah, I've been living in the state of dreaming, living in a make-believe land.
SpyroKing Diamond Sparx Gems: 8677
#46 Posted: 23:48:42 10/11/2008 | Topic Creator
Quote: Cynder16
smilieThe NOT THINKING CLEARLY CLUBsmilie


Srry. I didn't mean it like that, it was just something sparx said from A new Beginning. I couldn't help it.
Cynder16 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1857
#47 Posted: 23:54:16 10/11/2008
I know. It's fine.
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"Aim high in life, but watch out for flying boxes."
SpyroKing Diamond Sparx Gems: 8677
#48 Posted: 23:57:04 10/11/2008 | Topic Creator
Alright. I'm kind of winging it here, but...here goes!

Chapter 6: Questions and Answers
"So...what exactly WAS that thing?" Mole-Yair asked Ignitus. They were sitting on the cold cave floor around the fire and eating the burned Grublin. Better than nothing, eh? "Ah, see, it's called a Grublin. You two had the misfortune of meeting a General. They are monstrous behemoths. Summoned by Malefor himself," Ignitus answered. A flashback began. "As you know, we are at war. The Dark Master has been getting impatient with his ape minions. They kept on screwing up their orders. Worst of all, they couldn't capture Spyro. So he decided to banish them from this world. They are now doomed to roam about the darkest places of the world. He replaced them with Grublins." The flashback ended. "Well...now what?" Icies asked. "Ah, it would now be best if we found our way to the Dragon City." Ignitus said. "You mean...WARFANG!?" Mole-Yair said incredulously. "Yes. We will leave at first light tomorrow. Now, you two younglings should get some sleep." So they laid down on the hard stone floor, and soon, they fell into a deep sleep.
SpyroKing Diamond Sparx Gems: 8677
#49 Posted: 00:00:33 11/11/2008 | Topic Creator
Well...what'd ya think? Like i said, i was going on absolutely no ideas at all, so if you think it's bad, i don't blame you.
DarkSpyro_101 Blue Sparx Gems: 610
#50 Posted: 00:08:49 11/11/2008
Quote: SpyroKing
Well...what'd ya think? Like i said, i was going on absolutely no ideas at all, so if you think it's bad, i don't blame you.


It wasn't bad,it was great!!!Your a good writer!smiliesmiliesmiliesmilie
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"I've missed you so much, even though I don't show it around. I dream of you and I see you in my mind. I hope that one day you'll be back..."
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