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Shadow of your wings (A Max Ride fan fiction) [CLOSED]
icedragonmacey2 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1432
#1 Posted: 16:40:44 07/07/2011 | Topic Creator
A warm smell wafted through the house, and I pushed back the covers. Blinking sleep out of my eyes, I got dressed in my good skinny jeans and my favorite sweatshirt. My mom had finally washed the bloodstains out...long story. I walked into the kitchen to see my mom making pancakes. Every time I saw my mother, it made me smile. Not knowing who gave birth to you for most of your life has that affect on people. Another long story, I'll explain later.
"Morning, sunshine." She grinned. "Ella is in her room, getting dressed. The others are in the living room, still sleeping."
"Okay. I'll be outside." I said.
"Be back soon! Don't go too far." She told me. I nodded.
Two minutes later, I was flying high above the ground. Yes, flying. Oh yeah, I forgot a minor detail. I have wings...
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Pinkdesi101 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1276
#2 Posted: 01:54:09 14/07/2011
A maximum ride fanfic, i'm guessing? smilie
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#3 Posted: 23:30:48 14/07/2011 | Topic Creator
Yeah. I am completely worried about the ending of Fang! I can't wait to read Angel...
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#4 Posted: 20:16:42 16/07/2011
I've already read Angel. It's good, although there's one thing i don't really like about it...
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icedragonmacey2 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1432
#5 Posted: 19:55:48 19/07/2011 | Topic Creator
dont spoil it... this was before i read fang, anyway. so fang is in it. I was a little worried when I read the part where he supposedly
died...

i will have more soon!
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#6 Posted: 20:09:41 19/07/2011
Wonderful story! I want to read more!
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#7 Posted: 20:25:57 19/07/2011 | Topic Creator
Thanks. Alright, more now!

Flying is freeedom. Unless, you know, you're being chased by crazed scientists. But now, with nobody chasing me, no bullets whizzing past me, it was amazing. It's even better with Fang, alone. Well, as long as I knew the rest of my family was safe with my mom. My mom...the nicest person I've ever met. I smiled as I remebered when I first met my mom. I didn't even know she was my mom. Anyway, back to the point...
Flying was definately way better than anything. But in the distance, I saw something with my raptor vision. And that something made my blood run cold. That something was a person, looking straight at me. And that person had a gun pointed straight at me.
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#8 Posted: 20:28:06 19/07/2011
NUUUU! STUPID CLIFFHANGERS! DX
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#9 Posted: 20:33:10 19/07/2011 | Topic Creator
haha. yep. why does max always get shot?
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#10 Posted: 20:43:10 19/07/2011
i dunno. she just has really bad luck. smilie
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#11 Posted: 02:13:34 20/07/2011 | Topic Creator
Growing up in a lab might have that effect on people...
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#12 Posted: 08:38:07 21/07/2011
This story is sounding really good! Write more!
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#13 Posted: 23:28:43 21/07/2011 | Topic Creator
okay, more...NOT
sorry, out of insperation...
NEED...
MORE...
INSPERATION...
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#14 Posted: 00:08:33 22/07/2011
*hands over a box* it's got inspiration in it. :3 (lol smilie)
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#15 Posted: 00:35:59 22/07/2011 | Topic Creator
*opens box* wheres the inspiration? this box is empty...smilie
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#16 Posted: 00:54:28 22/07/2011
uh...*looks at giant pile of boxes* it should be in one of these...*sweatdrop*
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#17 Posted: 01:04:26 22/07/2011 | Topic Creator
*looks at giant pile of boxes* Now that's inspiration...Okay! Thought of something, don't hate me if you dun like it.

I dropped closer to the ground, but got scared to look down and see how high I was off the ground, still. That's weird...I have never been afraid of the height before... I thought. I tried to swerve around to make it a hard target, but I don't think it helped much. When I no longer saw the man or his gun, I turned and tried to race home. But suddenly, I was aware that I was falling, and everything went black. I had been shot.
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#18 Posted: 01:23:01 22/07/2011
yay! You found the right box! smilie
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#19 Posted: 01:44:19 22/07/2011 | Topic Creator
haha. it was a guess. and maybe the big INSPIRATION label on the outside.
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#20 Posted: 02:30:37 22/07/2011
yeah, that could be it...although i used up most of those boxes for my stories...now i need to get more money so i can buy more, I think that was the last one...
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#21 Posted: 02:49:06 22/07/2011 | Topic Creator
Yeah. WAIT-HERE'S ONE!
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#22 Posted: 05:45:26 22/07/2011
*random angels singing*
WE FOUND ANOTHER BOX!!!
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#23 Posted: 15:26:44 22/07/2011
Well,after reading it,I HAD TO POST!I love love LOOOOVE Maximum Ride!smilie I never knew this was a Maximum Ride fanfic,so I didn't bother to look at it.Then,I finally did!Maybe you should change the title,y'know?I think it would help.
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#24 Posted: 15:37:22 22/07/2011 | Topic Creator
@cynder2000smilieh, yeah. that would help. I love max ride too! Its my fav book series. I'll change it later. Too lazy now. smilie
@pinkdesi101: Where did the angels come from?? Oh, and I have a secret stash of boxes...hahaha *evil smile*
@everyone who bothered to read this: More coming later today!
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#25 Posted: 15:39:20 22/07/2011
Oh,yay!It's my fav book series too!Warriors got too stupid and sad.I can't wait for the last one of MR!It's comin' Febuary next year!
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icedragonmacey2 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1432
#26 Posted: 15:42:45 22/07/2011 | Topic Creator
um...it already came out...february THIS year...
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#27 Posted: 17:07:03 22/07/2011
Great story!!
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#28 Posted: 17:20:39 22/07/2011 | Topic Creator
thanks
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#29 Posted: 17:21:57 22/07/2011
What?But in Angel,it said that it's coming Febuary next year...Oh,what liers!smilie
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icedragonmacey2 Yellow Sparx Gems: 1432
#30 Posted: 17:24:26 22/07/2011 | Topic Creator
this year...smilie
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#31 Posted: 18:40:37 22/07/2011
i have no clue where they came from.
yes! we will not run out of inspiration for a long time!
i'm confused now. smilie *goes on amazon to check*
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#32 Posted: 18:53:22 22/07/2011 | Topic Creator
haha...MOREZ NOW!

I woke up in a strange place. It was pitch black and there was no noise that I was aware of. A sharp pain in my wing made me realize that I had been captured. It seemed like there were people surrounding me, but like I said, it was pitch black, so even I couldn't see me. I thought about my mom, and my family, and Dylan. Dylan had been with us since Fang had left us. I still couldn't trust him completely, but I had a feeling he wasn't out to hurt us. I thought about Angel, who had been the whole reason Fang left. She had told us that Fang would be the first to die, but we couldn't believe it. I thought about Gazzy, who was brave, yet smelly, and Angel's blood-related brother. I thought about Nudge, who was a fashion expert. And lastly I thought about Iggy, who was blind, but has the best hearing. What would I do if I never saw them again? I have been captured for the, let's see, millionth time? What if I never made it out of here? What would my flock do without me?
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#33 Posted: 19:17:13 22/07/2011
yay!

aww. i feel sorry for Max.
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#34 Posted: 19:21:59 22/07/2011 | Topic Creator
why? She isn't dead yet...
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#35 Posted: 20:01:54 22/07/2011
Cool..smilie
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#36 Posted: 20:27:45 22/07/2011 | Topic Creator
thanks!
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#37 Posted: 23:48:52 22/07/2011
i dunno. she's freaked out that she won't see the flock again?
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#38 Posted: 03:05:31 23/07/2011
Oh,you said "yet"!That sounds scary!And great job!smilie
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#39 Posted: 16:10:19 10/08/2011 | Topic Creator
Yeah. Thanks, more coming soon.
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#40 Posted: 16:55:12 10/08/2011
YAAAAAYZ!smilie
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#41 Posted: 20:14:09 10/08/2011
*happy dance* smilie
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#42 Posted: 14:40:35 11/08/2011 | Topic Creator
"Where's Max?" Gazzy said, rubbing his eyes as he came into the kitchen.
"She went out for some flight practice before breakfast. She'll be back soon." Dr.Martinez replyed, handing him a plate full of waffles.
Fang silently snuck up on Gazzy, waited for the right moment, then yelled, "BOO!" The waffle that Gazzy was eating flew up and hit the ceiling.
"Guys, quit playing. Fang, will you go and get Max for me?"
"Sure, I'll be right back." Fang went into the front yard and took off...

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"Who are you?" I said, struggling from the ropes that held me in place. The girl with the black hair spun around. My eyes widened in complete horror.I couldn't believe this... "D-Dr. Martinez? Mom?" Her lips curled into a nasty smile.
"Yes?"
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"I couldn't find her anywhere. Do you think she's hurt?" Fang said as he came in from his search.
"Oh, no...what will happen if we can't find her? Who captured her? Can we go find her? Why-" Nudge was interrupted by Angel.
" Can we go and find her, now? We can't wait."
Dr. Martinez shrugged. "I don't know. But first, finish your breakfast."
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#43 Posted: 14:47:27 11/08/2011
CLIFFHANGER!smilie NOOOO!
That was awesome,though!smilie
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#44 Posted: 15:23:18 11/08/2011 | Topic Creator
thanks. more coming later. you know, it seems that only a certain variety of people read my stories. if SOMEBODY could get other people to post on it...maybe i would write more sooner...
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#45 Posted: 15:25:17 11/08/2011
I don't much care who posts on my stories.They motivate me and it's fun to write.
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#46 Posted: 15:27:37 11/08/2011 | Topic Creator
yeah, but it's nice to know that more than a few people like your stories, or other people say what i can fix and what they don't like about it...
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#47 Posted: 15:28:59 11/08/2011
That's true...
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#48 Posted: 15:30:58 11/08/2011 | Topic Creator
now that we're talking about it, is there anything that you want me to fix or that you don't like?
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#49 Posted: 16:07:36 11/08/2011
Ummmm...Well,maybe you shouldn't leave the story hanging.But that makes it more suspenseful,sooo...Ummmmm...Er....
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#50 Posted: 16:37:09 11/08/2011 | Topic Creator
Yeah...so, i shall write more! later
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